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uff... aaj kal sab late lateef ban aye hai!!!!
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uff... aaj kal sab late lateef ban aye hai!!!!

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Hi, ...

How r u all my sweetie pies...???




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This FF I am updating daily so please don't wait for my PM because its very hard me to send daily pm for this. please Bookmark or check yourself for update. It's my sincere request to all



Part 78


"Leave me .. let me go!!!!'

"Geet!!!!' And he raised hand to slap her but it could not touch her face but been stopped in mid air. A pair of red eyes glared Brij with that intensity that in no time he could have been killed with the sharp blaze of it, If could be possible.

Brij face dropped its color when he saw who the owner of those pair of eyes was and a corner of his mind alerted him.

"Maan!!' He spoke in shock!!

Maan every bit of body was eager to burn him alive. His face was red and nostrils were fluttering in anger. He glared Brij raised hand and then without warning, twisted it with such force that Brij could not cringed for a while and then been beaten back by Maan forcefully that jumped down hitting his head on wall and it started bleeding.

Geet drew back with this violence. Her eyes went wide and she looked Maan with teary eyes which had happiness and strange fear, both were travelling in.

"Geet are you okay!' Getting chance Maan asked her cupping her face on which she nodded smiling. With his intense gaze Maan observed her entirely and got satisfied that she was alright.

Till then Brij had got his sense back and now he was all set to show his strength. He stood up and runs to Maan abruptly but Maan was all ready for this stroke and stopped him clutching his neck with his one hand while other was twisting his hand on back and he dragged him back to the wall.

"Geet go out and call uncle!' Maan stated giving his cell. He knew that she could not be able to see this fight which was to occur now.

Geet go out from here!!'

He pressed Brij neck tighter which started to race Geet heartbeat in unknown fear yet she denied to go. She did not want to leave Maan and she refused "No!!'

Here Brij was hell bent on to come out from his grip, was struggling in full energy that compelled Maan to increase his pressure. It made Brij bleed from mouth and that was much for Geet to handle. She turned her face and closed eyes but did not go.

"Geet just get out from here!!!!!''

Maan had to shout which startled Geet. She sensed the depth of his voice and unwilled runs away, out from there crying. Maan was now free to show his anger, his hatred, his long hidden wish to see Brij dead. He released Brij and moved back showing his audacity in this situation. Brij coughed.

Maan waited till he becomes normal and then Brij glared him.

So you are yet alive???''

Did you really think I can die without making you dead Brij ''

Maan clutched his collar and pulled. "What did you have think Brij that you can get the touch of my Geet with your filthy hand and I will dead peacefully!!!!! No Way.. No Way and now are you so dead!!!!!'

He clutched Brij hair tight and threw his head on wall made him cry in pain but Maan heart did not melt. He repeated this again and again and every time his heart was becoming more unsatisfied with this punishment of his. He made Brij face him and knocked his stomach with knees and that made Brij half dead. After giving his side of knocking he threw him forcefully on floor and started to hit with his shoes. Maan had become wild. Every suffer, every tear of Geet started to hunt him and he did not see how much dead Brij was turning into.

"How dare you to touch my Geet!!!!!' in between he was shouting..

Thought Brij tried to battle back but Maan was covering over him with his continuous beatings. And then he found a big stone. His mind wanted to see this man deceased. He roared and was to crush his face with that stone when Geet screamed and runs to him, stopped him to do this.

"Maan leave him!!!' She yelled but her voice dropped on deaf ears. Maan had lost to ability to understand anything in his fury but somehow Geet made him release Brij. She dragged him out from there when found Brij almost dead laying there.

"Maan what were you doing!!!'

She complained wiping his face with Dupatta. Maan was still not normal but he was staring away. Something was making him burn in guilt, for something he was not able to forgive him self.

"Maan look at me'

She cupped his face and made him look her then he stared her eyes which had worry for him only.

"I'm sorry Geet!!'

He hugged her tight suddenly crying. "I'm sorry please!!' his heart was not able to accept how he could send his jaan in this danger.

Maan you don't be sorry you didn't do anything!!'

But he was about to hit you Geet I can't forgive me!!!'

Geet caressed his back hugging him tight. She tried to console him but Maan was completely drowned in his remorse. Maan snuggled her more in him, not even want to imagine that what could have happened if he wouldn't have reached on exact time. The mere thought made him feel disgust for himself.

"Maan everything is alright!' She caressed his face,

In their conversation they didn't realize that Brij was trying to escape away from their back. Maan looked him and he runs to catch him and when brij stopped him showing his hand.

"Stop there Maan otherwise I'll kill myself. I-I have gun''

He threatened in weakness and trembled back. Maan stopped in way. He wanted him to be alive not dead, to receive his share of punishment for entire life. Brij moved back fearing from Maan and Maan walked to him in same pace. Brij in fear raised his pant-sleeve little up to get hold of gun which he always used to keep there, tying on knee but got shock when did not find it there.

"What are you trying to find Veerji?'

Maan and Brij heard Geet voice with a winning smirk on face.

"Your gun is here'

She opened the knot of her Dupatta and take out a small gun which was of Brij. Even Maan did not get how did she get of it from Brij and When?

"Do you remember Veerji when you were dragging me away from Maan and I was screaming not to do this, this was the time when I got out this gun from you. Don't be shock Veerji.. I am your sister did you forget it!!!! At least this little secret of yours I knew very well that where you love to hide your gun!!'

Maan smirked looking Brij and Brij knew, he had no escape now. Till the time Madhav with police also reached on place and Brij had been arrested.



Precap: Every hidden will be disclosed &

"Maan aapko kahi lagi toh nahi na'' Geet asked sincerely

Hmm it hurt Geet.. ' He comes closer ..



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24



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How r u all my sweetie pies...???




hi babes
kya karing??

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Perfect punishment for brij loved the update
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wow awesome geet hide brij gum wowow brave girl awesome

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