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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow it was a beautiful & lovely part 😃
& Maan's surprise to Geet was awesome now Geet won't miss her family on her wedding & loved the way Maan gifted her the things it was really lovely 😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



bye babie...

not feeling well too...

gud nite



lakshu what happened? why not feeling well ?😕😲😲
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Posted: 12 years ago


👏👏👏

both edits are of Goshi Gul.. my gud frnd 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaj kaha ho sab

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Posted: 12 years ago

Mona , Lakshu, Lilly
&Sona...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Bada uchal rahi ho...hmmm..pata hai...
Tumhari Summer Vacation start ho gai hai...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago



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Part 82

The dim dark atmosphere of room was doing nothing for her already deepened thoughts. The thought of how Maan had been making her wearing ornaments before, touched within her heart, gave it tickles.

She closed eyes auguring with mind but could not persist for any longer and made it open again. The feel of him, when she imagined, could not let her stay in position in which she had been and anticipation took over her heart with extreme. She knew he will not come until she closed her eyes and no matter what happens, she would not do it.

"Ohh Babaji, what I do!!'

She whispered.

"Nothing much Geet, just close your eyes'

She hears Maan voice and nervousness started growing in full speed within her veins. She shook head with hesitations.

"To fir thik hai.. I also would not face you until you close your eyes'

"Maan why do you tease me so much'' she said innocently, failing, pouted her lips. In darkness she tried to find him.

She hears his chuckle. Her pout turned into anger.

"Maan now if you don't come I will never talk to you"

"You will''

"I won't'' She turned face angering.

"Then fine!! Be ready for the punishment Geet!' And all lights went off.

Geet feared. "Pu-unishment?'' stammered.

"Hm!! Because you failed and I won this game Geet' she hears his whisper coming nearer. One side of her was happy that he was there. Darkness was the biggest foe of her but on other hand, his presence made her die in anxiety more.

And then she felt his breathing sound from behind. Automatically her eyes became closed and she gasped. His hand touched her shoulder and made her tug to him and she let him do. She was losing her sense. She was losing her everything which was holding her down away from him.

Maan kissed her ear and came below. He kissed her neck then shoulder and then she realized her Duppata was no more on place and suddenly the string of her Kurti had been unbound with a single stroke.

It was much for her to be handled, she moved out from his hold involuntarily. She crossed her arms around chest feeling exotic and became busy in managing down her irregular heartbeats.

Maan came near and breathed in her hairs. His controlled emotions were now going insane, uncontrolled and he did not have any wish to make them back in rule. He was happy with this happening. Seemed, his long lasted hidden wish were becoming real. His arms took her entirely in embrace from back. He tugged her closer would not let her response even against his act.

The exposed skin of her was enchanting him. Her being so numb and senseless was driving him crazy in his own passion. He gave her trail of kisses on cheeks and neck. He entrapped her shoulder letting her Kurti slips little down from arms and made the place uncovered to him and gave there touch of his lips.

Geet was breathing so fast. She could hear her own breathing sound and was feeling like chocking in lack of air in between. Everything seemed so special yet so fast that at last it became unbearable and she moaned his name in semi-consciousness and it made Maan paused in his way.

He observed her state and felt satisfaction. He found her still lost. He corrected her dress, made her turn and letting face to him and smiled when found her with closed eyes and breathing rapidly. He cupped her face lovingly and waited till she became normal and when she opens her eyes, found him staring her profoundly.

"Geet if I want something today, will you give me?"

She nodded, held his hands over her cheeks.

"Geet I want to adorn you with my love, myself. Will you let me do this?"

Geet hold over his lessened down , it slips down hearing his wish. It was unintentionally but for Maan, her act told what her answer was.

''It's okay Geet I won't force you." He kissed her forehead. " You don't need to feel sorry Jaan !!"

His face did not show the disappointment he was feeling at the time but she understood it. She felt pang in her heart. Though she was not fully comfortable with what he had wished for yet a part of her knew she was his already and no matter what she had said earlier but she was his wife. The understanding she saw in his eyes, took out every fear from her inside and she felt gratified.

The kiss he was giving her made her smile with joy and she said

"Haan!!"

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People says that darkness does not adopt any beauty but this time, the darkness of room, the blackness was the most beautiful thing, two souls were loving in.

Geet slips down her hands from his hold, smiled shying and runs near window, stood there looking out the beauty of blue night. Emphasize of Moon light was the only thing to enjoy the moment of their nearness.

He comes from behind, stood silently, staring her, letting her flying curls touch his face and it made him smile and gave Goosebumps. His heart was not on normal. It was beating with the pace of hers and his senses were all alone roaming in infinity, leaving him lost in his demands.

He started to slips down the clothes she was wearing; covering down those properties of her which she had no right of herself anymore. Her body was burning on fire and she felt lacking of air but his scent was filling up this empty space keenly but a time came when she could not bear the intensity of her heart.

"Maan!!' she moaned in strange fear..

"You don't need to be scare Geet!!'

He took her in arms, hugged her, and made her calm. It was enough for him that she had accepted his wish and wanted to fulfill it. His heart was dancing in joy. It was like she had been passed in her life exam and his love was her reward.

Precap: Will she able to complete his wish.. 😳 😳

And A grand Occasion is to happen... 😃 😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
res.. yipee first to comment😊
Edited by smile1000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVED MAAN'S HIDE AND SEEK AND THE HUNT
WHAT IS THE PLAN NOW😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊



Oyee-hoyeee.. Munda to full romantic mood me hai...
They suffered a lot ..So.. itna to banta hai na...
Love Maaneet moments...
Waiting eagerly...wish abhi baaki hai...😉
raat abhi baaki hai...😉
Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago

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