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Posted: 11 years ago
only one word i wud say dis story is just d truth & straight 4m d heart truly... seriously i'm attached to it such a simple story with d true meaning of love,friendship,trust,PAIN & much more things...reallly felt d pain within myself wen i read dis it is really deepest meaningful story abt love & pain ive read i knw der may b other ff's but truly dis one just touched d heart...
sumwer saying even i'm very much similar only in d thinking abt love like geet d difference is watever may happen i knw hw to just grave it but but really u gave a diff meaning & sense to my thoughts... though i knw wud never b in favour of love or wud like to fall in love buttt i no one can escape over it...
ive read many stories & i wud not much prefer those which don't hav Maan or Geet or both but 4 change not even a bit i minded any dev samira scenes or any other frnds part...
everyone is such a darling almost everyone even samira i wud say in dis story & can't say much abt maan's family as hardly der was anything abt dem though i can judge 4m maan's behaviour dat sum wer responsible 4 watever maan is today...
i wud say only 1 thing dat loved dis silence 4m d heart & felt d depth of dis silence to day i got knw a new meaning of silence which holds love & pain... & i'm really really surprised to knw dat ur r new in dis writing feild if u wud nt hav said dis no one wud hav realised it ur every word,line,emotion,philosphy abt love,life,pain,frndship just made think once again abt d philosophy ive made 4 myself...
i wud really like to mention dat alll d parts 4m d very start wer my fav but really 14 is my fav among alll & i guess all d parts which r associated with it... i wish i cud hav dis story much earlier but never d late i'm happie nw dat got dis nw...
& d parts 4m 18 i guess i cried & cried & cried felt d whole feeling which is portraed hatsss offf to u...
love everyone dev samira yash meera riddhima armaan adi pinky & last but nt d least MAANEET...
& d 19a part was reallly painful... & i knw sumwer in dis real world dese kind of emotions do exist i beleive...
all i can say is i laughed,cried,frowned,felt pain... felt evey emotion with in myself... sum wer i can say ive felt all dese in real... wud really eagerlllyyy waiting 4 d updates...
thanku u so much 4 penning down ur thoughts so nicely & thank u so much 4 sharing... & i wud say d usp r h icing on d cake of dis ss r MAANEET & der silent love & pain 4 each other...
falling in love... 😳
update soon... 😆
🤗4 u & ur writings... really 4m d heart...
Edited by shruthiruchs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
For me it was the last part that takes the cake away maan is definitely hurt with geet't cold reaction towards him looks like this new geet will make maan fight for his love and bring his old geet back.
I have a feeling that maan had earlier misunderstood geet and hence those words his father must have had a role in that misunderstanding when maan realised his fault his must not have let him meet geet. This is the only reason that I can think of for maan being rude to her as if he can be this rude to his father distance himself from his family then this might be the only reason for that rudeness. Lets see whats there is in store for maneet.
Wating for a strong geet and yes maan deserves every bit of it he might have some XYZ reasons but those words were really hurtful they have broken geet beyond repair and to see geet this way is maan's biggest punishment. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome part
Waiting for 19 b
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love the setting of a wedding for this part...
so many promises made, vows taken and in the midst of this, two hearts which feel so much still..

His hiding from her to ease, she stiffening up at the beach

the beach with its vastness, a witness to everything in their life

Lovely part Aditi.

Can't wait for more.

Thanks for updating
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting yaar..pls update...😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART-19-B

Pain was the only emotion Maan felt as Geet left him. He thought it will be fine and he can bear the indifference she would show. Yet he had underestimated the depth of her emotions. Her slight stiffening told him that she still had feelings for him no matter how unworthy he is of them. He wished he could turn the clock back to time eons ago and could change their destiny. But maybe they were just destined to be each other's memories.

A hand touched maan as he heard clear voice stating, "So she is the one."

Maan turned back to find a grim Adi staring at him as if piercing his soul.

"What are you talking about Adi?"

"Maan Singh Khurana!! I know you for a lifetime. Don't dare try and lie to me. I am the first person to read your silence got it."

"I don't deserve her Adi."

"Let her decide that Maan."

"What do you mean?"

"The least you can do for your love is respecting her enough to let her decide on something so important. Fight for your love Maan or else you have never really loved her."

"The last line was copied from my long lecture before you proposed Pinky."

"Yet it wasn't yours."

"How do you know?"

"Give me some credit Mr. Khurana. I am your best friend. I know you in and out. You can never fight for your happiness. Now also you will fight only if you realize that your and her happiness are intertwined together."

"You don't know what I have done? You would hate me."

"How can I hate you knowing you have suffered as well?"

Maan could just hug Adi. Words were not really needed as they had been friends for too long to understand the silence of each other.

Geet just went and stood near the window staring at the dark sky. She did not know when her tears started falling and then she said more to herself complaining," Why? Why does that man have so much power over me to still make me feel? Why do I still want you? Why can't I let go?Even after all the pain why do I still want to have that future with you I had dreamt of once? Why?"

She dropped down on her knees trying to contain the pain in her heart. Yet one man who had been observing her could feel her every emotion. Maan had been taking a stroll in the garden knowing any effort to sleep will be fruitless. He mumbled, "Sorry Geetu!! I am truly sorry!!"

The morning was not bright enough for the two souls lost in grief, pain and guilt. Mr. and Mrs. Manchanda had called everyone for breakfast but Maan was missing. He knew he can't hide forever but he can at least try his best.

Pinky's mom and pinky were having a heated discussion over shopping.

"Mom!!! I want to have he dress changed. We still have time. Let me go."

"Not my mistake that you choose to come a week before your engagement."

"Tell my khaus Boss that."

The argument would have continued had not geet intervened asking what the matter was.

"Arey beta! Your dearest friend did not like the dress she will be wearing tonight. So she wants to get it changed. You only tell, How can that be possible...?"

"Oh Aunty you sound exactly like mumma .Don't worry, i can go and get it for her. After all, what are friends for?"

Most people liked the suggestion except one frowning soul who had remembered their first meet suddenly. He texted Adi who gulped nervously before saying," Geet, don't you think it is rather bad idea? I mean we all know how choosy pinky is ?"

Even while speaking, Adi knew he might be the first groom to be rejected on the day of his engagement. Pinky glared at him and said,
"Fine Mom! We all go and you Mr. won't accompany. "

"Who will drive then?"

"Yash can do the honours."

Geet laughed out saying,"God pinky!! You are so adorable!! But you don't wanna risk your life before getting engaged so spare us yash's driving."

Yash whined,"Geetu!!!"

"What Geetu? You know I don't trust your driving. You almost got us killed that day."

Maan closed his fist in pure rage hearing that his geet's life was in danger. But he could do nothing but listen quietly standing by the door to the dining hall.

"Come on geetu!! That was a pure accident."

"But I don't want to die!!"

Geet laughed high fiving meer while the guilty heart found little solace as maan watched her pure, unadulterated laughter echo the dining hall making everybody smile.

Finally it was decided that everyone will go for shopping. When geet asked pinky where the shop is pinky replied non-chalantly, "Near Jagadamba complex."

Geet was hit by a bolt of memories of her and Maan. There first meet, there numerous shopping trips everything came to her mind and Geet wore her mask of indifference and said,"Let's go. After all, tonight is the big event."

Everyone watched her transformed image yet nobody really understood.

Man just left the place thinking, "Forget me Geet. I am not worth even your memories."

The evening was approaching near and Maan stood anxiously as he waited. The moment has come for him to truly face Geet yet he was hoping for an excuse to stall time a bit more.

Geet was wearing a beautiful purple lehenga. She was looking beautiful yet something was missing. Maan watched her as he saw her working round trying to check the last minute things before they start for the venue. Man watched her when a deep voice said," Don't let her go Maan. Ii don't know about others but you won't survive that."

Maan watched Adi and smiled sadly stating," I am here so she can punish me Adi."

"And here I thought you are here for my marriage."

"Of course I am. Stop being nautanki!!"

Adi laughed and hugged him .Geet turned back to find maan's back facing her. She could only see the back of the man hugging Adi yet he felt familiar like she had known that person. Geet shook his head saying," This place is really messing up with my thoughts. I better go and see if pinky is ready or not."

Everybody reached the venue booked for the occasion. Maan and Adi came by Adi's car while others travelled together in Mr. Manchanda's car.

Geet took pinky in with her. When she reached she stood rooted finding Maan standing beside Adi. She stopped walking and slowly started taking her steps back while shaking her head trying to shake the reality. She stared at him finally as her eyes filled up. Maan too watched her unblinkingly. His eyes also started watering. Geet could finally break the stare as he gathered herself before moving forward and taking her place beside her friend. She was here as a friend and she would not allow the lover in her to ruin the moment for her friend.

Adi and pinky exchanged the rings soon. The way they looked at each othe with utmost love and respect told that sometimes two ordinary person can together make a perfect relationship.

Geet was chatting with Pinky in hushed voice when a familiar voice spoke ,"Am sorry Adi. I missed the ceremony. But I really am not at fault as my flight was delayed.."

"It is absolutely okay Sam. At least you made it though I know you are here for someone else."

Geet was amazed as she witnessed a blushing Sam. Gone was the arrogant girl. The girl in front of her was a different Sam altogether, a more matured and a lot more humble...



I know this is short but I promise another update tomorrow...Part 19-B was supposed to be short and updated soon only my manager thought it was great to make me work extra and also eat my brains off...Only if he was a different man...Like MSK of GHSP!! But aisi kismat sabki kaha!!!!Forgive my mistakes as I did not get time to proof it

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow superb dear
sam too arived there
she might hv arrived for dev only😉
hope she take initiaitve to unite maneet
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Posted: 11 years ago
I admire Geet for sticking it out for Pinky's sake.
Sam is here too. Will she be able to watch Maan's pain?
Dev bhi aa raha hai...
interesting...
small update but important moments.
Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
kutch khatta kutch mitha update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahh..That Part Really Made Me Happy...
Sam Is Here..And Dev Must Be On His Way... I Hope Its That Way..
Waiting For The MU's To Clear.!! Cant See Maaneet In Pain.. I wonder what's eating up Maan.!! 😭 Waiting..Update Soon... 😊

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