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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
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Superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: drashtimeetu

Superb update
Flashback moment was sooo cute
Loved it
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thanks dear..am so glad u liked it:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful update...

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thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

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excellent update dear😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm nn superb update! Wonderfully written...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part3
He had never thought that he would meet her again! But he was pleasently surprised when he saw her, during the prayers, in the school ground and was even more surprised at the co-incidence, when he got to know that she was in the same class as his, that she was his classmate!
In the classroom..which was full with so many unknown faces..she was the only one whom he knew! Though he hadnt talked to her or knew her in proper sense..still she felt familiar..she was not a stranger to him, like rest of the class!

Pal-pal soch me aana naa..
Hulchal dil me machaana naa..
Dekho meri neende udaana naa..
Dheere dheere sapno me aana naa..



He had told his brother that the girl from that day.. was in his class! His brother had said, "great! fir toh..tumhe class me kabhi bor nahi hoga! There will be many entertaining incidence..in ur class..hai na.." and had winked at him reminding him of the other day..which made them both to laugh again!
"but be careful han..dont ever mess with her..warna..pata haina.." his brother had teased.
"ohh..dont worry.. i know how to balance my self..aur mujhe toh warning ki bhi zarurat nahi..i would be prepared already!" he replied winking back.


He was adjusting in his knew school..even had made few friends.. But never talked to her. He got to know that she was the topper of the class as well as school! To be honest..incially he thought that she was snobish types... He didnt had any valid reason for thinking like that about her... But he just felt like that.. As thats the normal case with class topper's generally..and May be cause he used to notice her oftenly while she never paid attention to him!
But his thinking and opinion about her had changed completely..when he for the first time, had asked her for her notes! Not only had She given him her notes.. but had helped him also with assignments & all.
And then they become friends! He always felt comfertable with her. She was different from others and they clicked instantly. They used to fight on small small things..and he used to love arguing with her. He used to do the exactly opposite of her saying...just to irritated her..to get her angery...coz she looked more cute with that angery face!
She used to get so annoyed from his teasing.. that used to stop talking to him.. And then he used to curse himself for upseting her.. He used to irritate her even more to get her to talk to him.. And eventually, one way or other he used to melt her anger and then they would be back.. like before!

He never realised when they become best friends! When they got so close that he never needed anyone else..just her! They had become a team and used to enjoy alot! He had many times shared their fun tales with his brother. He used to tell him..that how they did some prank on their other friends & all. He used to talk about her so much that his brother had asked playfully.. "teri class me bas wahi ek ladki padti hai kya..? "
he had ignored his brothers question..with thinking much or taking in the hidden meaning in it.. and continued telling him about them..about her!
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago

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