MG OS- Pal-pal soch me aana na.. Last Part-pg71/ Next OS LINK-pg83 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

lovely update

like is not working..

its ok..thanks:)
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Loved it
plzz update the ff where maan is having a son aru who asks cute ques
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part4
He had found a special friend in her..with whom he can share anything & everything. The bonding with her was exceptional! He loved spending time with her..at school, in lunch break..sharing food with her, then at tutions! He would be always with her only! Though he had other friends also..but none was that close to him.
He had spent the best time of his life with her..doing all the masti & having great fun!
She was special to him..thats the reason that he, himself had told her about his irritating "nicknames" which he never liked to tell anyone! She had teased him... But he didnt mind her teasing.. Had it been someone else, he would have shown that person, the consiquences of messing with him. But like he said earlier..she was the exceptional case! She was the only one, who was allowed to tease him, irritate him, shout at him, scold him..etc.

Tujhe..
Meri..
Kasam..
Tujhe..
Meri..
Kasam..


He knew she was special to him..but never thought why?? He couldnt stay without talking to her. He always felt that he can show his right on her. He never asked nor needed her permission to share her things! He even used to tell her..whom she should talk and whom to ignor.. "as he was her best friend..so he knew what was good for his friend!" ..thats what he used to tell himself! While in the reality..it wasnt the only reason.
All the while, he was thinking..that its just friendship! Everything that they share..his liking towards her..their unique bonding..their fights..their teasing..their spending so much time together..everything..everything was just part of their beautiful & unbreakable friendship.
He had never gave it a thought that it could be something else..something deep..something more than just friendship!

Once, like usual he was telling his brother about his day at school. And as usual, everything started with mentioning of her and even ended with her name only! He never realised it as he was very much ingrossed in telling all the interesting stuff.. But his brother had noticed it! "kahin..tum dono ka koi..scene toh nahi hai na..hmm?" ..his brother had asked with a teasing smile.
And like usual..maan had laughed hearing that.. "u should thank god..that she is not here, to hear ur talks..warna toh..she would have teached u a very good lesson for even thinking anything like that..let alone saying it..."..he had replied..admist his laughter. He really had a hard time controlling his laugh..imagining geet's reaction if she would have listented to his brothers talks! He was sure that she would have gotten really mad..as she didnt like these kinds of talks.. She is very sobber girl!

Never had he thought that things could be different.. That there could be more to their friendship.
But then things started changing. He started experiencing some new emotions & feelings...which he had never felt before. And However hard he may tried..he couldnt ignore or supress them. Insted they kept increasing each passing day..against his constant efforts of getting rid of them!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

Loved it
plzz update the ff where maan is having a son aru who asks cute ques

am working on that one dear..will update soon as possible..:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Wow he was also falling for her...just like her...hw he would realize...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
awsome update
he wass falling in love with her

update babies wali story also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
hi thanks 4 da pm n sweet update! HE was fallling 4 her! update soon! well written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi haya hai tujhko toh pyar maan babu...karle tu inkar maan babu...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update
Maan geet ke liye pyaar feel karne laga hai par vo use pahechnta nahi hai
Dhire dhire samjne lagega
Maaneet ki friendship kabile tarif hai

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