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dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

As for your dear friend whose comment made you post this...🤗

Friendship makes everything worthwhile.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: dqno1
As for your dear friend whose comment made you post this...🤗
Friendship makes everything worthwhile.

It does🤗
It is the only property you don't inherit but earn yourself and carry till your death bed and even after...
Okay ignore me I just woke up so I tend to get philosophical😆

Me lubs you DQ ji. And please don't bow to me, gimme a hug, that's what I need from you🤗

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

It does🤗
It is the only property you don't inherit but earn yourself and carry till your death bed and even after...
Okay ignore me I just woke up so I tend to get philosophical😆

Me lubs you DQ ji. And please don't bow to me, gimme a hug, that's what I need from you🤗

🤗 me lubs you too! Thanks for posting this. Waiting for more soon...😃

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

^Check blog today. I will be posting if it wasn't for the night😆

A certain someone wrote a poem for the story. And hence I am posting it Yay!

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dqno1

@dqno1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
^Check blog today. I will be posting if it wasn't for the night😆

A certain someone wrote a poem for the story. And hence I am posting it Yay!

Do pm me the certain someone, if it is someone I want to know😉 that is...

yay! Can't wait to re-read. Don't forget to PM Sweety or else between the punching and kicking I will not know who is beating whom...😆 She was waiting to read it too.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

^Yes it is someone you'd love to know about. PMed already😆

Rofl of course i don't have a death wish so i will PM sweety 😆

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

i wanna read the poem too *pouting*

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

^Blog link PM karu ya sirf poem?

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

i have your blog link... poem chahiye :D

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Your writing in this hot summer

acts like a pleasant wind of November

and I personally like this os idea where in only few paras the writer conveys his or her idea

as usual it was a great one dear

and for all ur HE AND SHE I imagine only maan and geet

so when I read chotu

even I said to myself a nick name like chotu for maan😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

but chotu's daadi was amazing

what a lady

and her beliefs

😛

l liked dadi line

I know my history...

too good yaar

but at last our chotu outwitted his dadi

😃😃😃😃😃

and then comes she

the way our he was observing she

was superb

though I know u wont agree but I have to repeat dear shikha that u write wonderfully

I have read the works of many English writers who were legends in their own way

but I must say ur work is not less than those writers

this is no exaggeration dear shikha

the way u describe simple moments with fine details is brilliant

and I have read some of ur comments where u write for ur writing as crap or shit or anything

which I don't like at all

though in ur eyes ur writing may not be so good

as u may have higher standards for ur self

that is good

but don't u think calling ur own work by all such names seems like a mother not loving her own baby

surely do take ur writing where u urself feet it's superb or the way u expect it to be

but pls don't call it crap or otherthings

some whrere it felt u r disregarding the appreciation or the taste of ur readers

Just a request dear

don't take it otherwise

coming back to ur work

loved that he wished for her wish to be fulfilled so that HOPE remains alive

though he did not believ in Jupiter and moon philosophy

but for the sake of hope he did this

that was truly fantastic

and this os reminded me of another os by u

a moving train

where also HE hold on to hope to give life another try

this one was also brilliant

a short story but with a great message

do keep writing such wonderful works dear

👏👏👏👏👏👏

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