Maaneet OS: Interrupted! - Page 2

Originally posted by: Onir

😊

Lovely OS... 😳

The title & its interpretation in the story was too good. It reminded me of all GHSP Scenes when such scenes were exclusively shown & special efforts taken & all mehant to interrupt them thus making us audience bang our head. 🤣 😆

lol... after u mentioning i totally agree! 😆 grr all those blobs and then people coming in between... 😡 this OS was a product of all my crazy ideas crushed into one story 😆

The bonding Maan has with his sisters & the whole family was very well put together through all the minute detailing you did initially as well as throughout the course of the Story. Especially the binding, love & respect towards Riya ... the motherly bond & emotions he relates to & the manner in which it has got rightfully rubbed off & imbibed even in his better Half Geet was beautiful. 👏

lol if you thought Avi talks a lot... beware of my detailing and extra fittings in my works... i sometimes go into minute detailing forgetting its just an OS 🤣 but i am glad u liked it 😳

All the interruptions were 😆 Bechare desperate souls longing for some private moments & 😳 Lekin koi nahi... mast tha atleast for us readers... 😉 And Geet did that mischief ... 😆 Quiet a fire brand Maan has for a wife... jodi khoob mast hai... Miya biwi saath toh bahut saare fireworks... 😳😆

the bet idea didnt come until last night. i had started penning the story for quite a while now (the day since Sweety asked) but i couldnt find the right ending until yesterday 😆

Pari wala M Squared for her Mammu *Em squad* Made me go aww so sweet... Adorable... !!! ❤️

😳 gracias!

Neurology studies... 😉😆 Use lecturer banna diya ... 🤓 Arey waah apne dil ke armaan yahan pura kar rahi thi kya ??? Me curious to know... 😉

haha... i never imagined myself in teaching line. my bestie makes fun of the intense note taking and reviews i create for exams but i dont think i would fit it 😆

All in all beautifully written, just loved it for all the thikki spicy , meethi mishty & Hot chupke chupke scenes... 😳☺️

Agar sweety ke dhamki se aisa hota hai toh I request you to keep making galti for which Sweety keeps asking you such Compensations... 😉😆

haila 😲

Sweety kya mast compensation maanga tumne... 👏 Maan gaye tumko aur tumhare effects ko *Take a bow girl* Yes & even Madhu "ji" 😡 (For calling me "Ji" in your note ) You too can take a graceful bow & pat your shoulders on my behalf for this OS... dil khush kar diya hum sab ka... 😛 ❤️

No calling me 'ji' again... 😡 & Yes thank you for the paltan dedication... 🤗

my my Onir... if Avi makes me cry with her lovely comments you make me all mushy ☺️ thanks sooo much for such a beautiful comment. i think this was even better than the OS 😉

give me a huggie 🤗 and know that i lub u too much ❤️ lol i wanted to rile u up a little so put the "ji" 😆 i do that to Nisha also 😉

Next Kab hai... 😆😃

next? what next

hmm maybe i can have a sequel of what really happens after. magar its going to take a lot of persuasion from you people as well as time from my side. 😉😆 hehe DQ sangat ka asar hai yeh... 😆 jk 😛

Originally posted by: Onir

😊

Lovely OS... 😳

The title & its interpretation in the story was too good. It reminded me of all GHSP Scenes when such scenes were exclusively shown & special efforts taken & all mehant to interrupt them thus making us audience bang our head. 🤣 😆

The bonding Maan has with his sisters & the whole family was very well put together through all the minute detailing you did initially as well as throughout the course of the Story. Especially the binding, love & respect towards Riya ... the motherly bond & emotions he relates to & the manner in which it has got rightfully rubbed off & imbibed even in his better Half Geet was beautiful. 👏

All the interruptions were 😆 Bechare desperate souls longing for some private moments & 😳 Lekin koi nahi... mast tha atleast for us readers... 😉 And Geet did that mischief ... 😆 Quiet a fire brand Maan has for a wife... jodi khoob mast hai... Miya biwi saath toh bahut saare fireworks... 😳😆

Pari wala M Squared for her Mammu *Em squad* Made me go aww so sweet... Adorable... !!! ❤️

Neurology studies... 😉😆 Use lecturer banna diya ... 🤓 Arey waah apne dil ke armaan yahan pura kar rahi thi kya ??? Me curious to know... 😉

All in all beautifully written, just loved it for all the thikki spicy , meethi mishty & Hot chupke chupke scenes... 😳☺️

Agar sweety ke dhamki se aisa hota hai toh I request you to keep making galti for which Sweety keeps asking you such Compensations... 😉😆

galtiyaa toh hum karwa denge. 😈

Sweety kya mast compensation maanga tumne... 👏 Maan gaye tumko aur tumhare effects ko *Take a bow girl* Yes & even Madhu "ji" 😡 (For calling me "Ji" in your note ) You too can take a graceful bow & pat your shoulders on my behalf for this OS... dil khush kar diya hum sab ka... 😛 ❤️

*pats my back* 😎

No calling me 'ji' again... 😡 & Yes thank you for the paltan dedication... 🤗

Next Kab hai... 😆😃

Originally posted by: sweetkj

madhu-u-u-u-u 🤗

Sweety oh my sweety!!!! 🤗

thankyou so much for the dedication.. and above that taking your time out... ❤️ and writing this OS for us.!! (though i guess you had no other option )

ooo on a whole this OS had me ☺️... perfect name for the OS.

haila now i am speechless... 😲

🤗 ❤️*ciraaks* (is that how you spell it... hehe)

anything for you peeps re... yeh punishment sirf bahana hai aap logon ko entertainment karne ke liye 😉

and these interruptions are so characteristic of GHSP. lol.

those countless (we can say.. though i am sure we can count 😉) almost pappi... hayee. 😳

i never really had GHSP interrupted moments in mind while writing this OS. i had this concept in mind for very long and it just came out that way. but i am glad this has brought those lovely moments back ❤️ 😃

what a sweet but strong family... bet thingy had me. 😆

lol it was something that struck me only last night. remember i was telling you the ending is coming to me magar its hazy and then suddenly it stuck me 😆

m sqaured.. maan mama.!! xD

naice.. huh.! 😳

all in all.!! i am toh flat... madhu.!!

i am sooo glad u like it re. i was really scared if i would disappoint u after it was dedicated to u. concept wasnt extraordinary nor was my writing so i was a bit nervous to post it 😆

par main kahani toh iske aage hai.!! geet ke arrangements toh dikha hume.!! 😉

sequel toh banta hai boss.!!

lemme see if i can concoct something but it wont come soon. bits and pieces of ideas are flying but nothing concrete is striking... also i need to catch up on KOL updates because my bank updates are slowly depleting plus work is catching up on me. 😳 so yeh sab ke baad if u people really want a sequel i'll whip something because all i need is a little love from u people and ur support 😉😃

love you madhu.

🤗❤️

lub u more Sweety! 😳🤗

Originally posted by: sweetkj

Originally posted by: dqno1

Res for now

Thanks a million

For the dedication

Away from home Will update comment soon