Maaneet OS: Interrupted!- Page 30

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

hehehe...shall i comment here??😛

Originally posted by: .bloom.

Marvellous One Shot

God itni interruptions 🤣 ur Os reminded of Ghsp 😆

Excellent Job .. U write great .

Pls do Pm when u write something else if convinent 😊

Originally posted by: Susegad

It's 11:43 PM. Yane ki it's still today fro me. So I kept my promise😆 Here we go.

The so called sweet and funny Nishaji loved the dedication.

Sign seen hanging outside Maan & Geet Singh Khurana's Bedroom🤣

No admission without permission

What the hell is with all this interruption

Do not disturb me while I'm creating the next generation.

If anybody dares ignore this notice as a matter of omission

You are definitely going to regret this decision

Cause I, Maan Singh Khurana am going to put you out of commission.

Loved Riya maa and Maan's relationship. it brought a tear to my eye, when he comes back from London and the whole scenario with her.

Meera was a blast.

Loved her playful relationship with both Maan and Geet.

Naina the middle sister was truly the mediator.

Over all a chehelta pehelta lovely Khandan.

Loved how you took time to flesh out each character.😃

Geet and Maan moments were ☺️ inspite of the interruption.

Maan babu at the height of desperation and damn all these interruptions.😡😆

Best part was Pari's em squad. How adorable.😳

You had me with the bet though. Never expected that.

That was a great way to end this OS.

Overall a fantastic piece of writing Madhu that had everything a great story should have.

Absolutely loved it. Ekdam mast.😃

Edited: Whoops I just realized I had a reserved post that I completely forgot about and made a whole new comment post.😛