Maaneet OS: Interrupted! - Page 4

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Thanks so much for the dedication Madhu! 🤗

come on Mayyam stop being so formal.. 😳

Let me confess first that I've read a few of your OSs before but never commented. I loved all of those of course! 😳

haha... i am glad to hear that. it is always nice to have amazing writers like you appreciate my work. 😊

This one was just great! Very aptly titled! 😆

All through it, I kept remembering all the moments when Maaneet were interrupted during their romance in the show. I got that exact feeling reading this one; as in, right when the blushing moments are at peak, a needle pops the whole momentum! 😳

lol... i never really intended to bring back those lovely Maaneet moments but i am so glad everyone is remembering them! ah those precious moments when we sat on the seat edges only to fall the next second with some interruption!

The family love you showed here, the love between siblings, the love between in-laws, the love of a husband for his wife and vice versa, all of it was so well-executed. I felt a lot of respect for Riya especially. Elder sisters are second-to-mothers, aren't they? They care for their younger siblings like a mother does. No wonder Maan started calling her 'Riya Maa'! 😊

although i have no siblings or any older cousins i must second you and say of course elder sisters are indeed second to mothers. for Maan in this story it has always been Riya for a mother. i know i never mentioned the ages but Riya was supposed to be at least 12-15 years older to him. so she was his mother in many terms. 😊

The teasing was so much fun to read. I opened to read it while I was sitting with my family and then I had to close it for fear of bursting out laughing and being asked the reason for it. 😆 Even though the unveiling of a bet surprised me, I think it was the most natural thing to expect considering the fun-poking family that this is! Pari was so cute with her 'Em squad'! I was like 'aww'!

haha... i must give a fair warning... never read my works in the midst of people 🤣

Overall Madhu, I'll sum it up in three words: I loved it! Thanks for it! 😊

more than my story all you people have written lovelier comments. i am overwhelmed with the love and response from you people. i know its always worth bringing my plate of Maaneet stories to you peeps for no matter how bad it may be i'll always know how much loved i am with your comments 😃

I'm hoping to catch up with all your works soon. Will always be willing to read anything you write!

i must say its the same for me 😳i have crossed the point where apologizing will now really look stupid. 😆 take your time Mariyum... i'll always be waiting 🤗

Originally posted by: -memorable-

this M squared reminded me of D's f-squared from Reel *sigh*

anyways the bet part was total surprise 👍🏼👍🏼

please do continue to give us such sweet surprise every now & then

i ❤️ surprises