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phew hey peeps!
i am here with the next gutter wala OS well not too much gutter wala but relatively... lol well this was my punishment so here i am jhelifying it like a good girl.
this OS is dedicated to my darling Sweety (sweetkj) and my pretty lady Avi. Sweety here is the punishment story... and Avi for ganging up against me and becoming a dazzler... uff how much do you talk 🤣
and of course this wouldnt have been possible without every single member of my lovely paltan gang. love you my jaani Nauri (koolsmile) and my dear meanie kamini Aashu (Loquacious_Aashu), the two APs Sheen darling and Sona, my fellow neuroscientist Onirji, my secret lover Shiku (.Maggie.), my sweet and funny Nishaji, Mayyam babe, the gal who always stands by me, Heytu (Heytal), uff who else am i forgetting 🤢 and all the present SOL wasis and future paltan members... lub you all... and hope you like what i have weaved... 😃



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too lazy and hungry to edit the whole thing... please forgive my mistakes and hope this story makes sense to u 🤣 here it is...

Early morning rays of the sun streamed through the slight cracks between the heavy silk draperies. Millions of tiny dust particles were suspended in mid air highlighting the path of light as it hit the white marble floor before traveling to reflect the pearl white walls. Cracks of sunrays rushed to brighten the room's lush interior dcor. A huge king size bed perched on an intricately carved bed stand was set in the center while two small similar looking side tables stood on each side of the bed. Elaborately designed chaise was diagonally positioned near the sliding doors that led to balcony. A huge dressing table mirror stood directly facing the bed housing all different types of cosmetics as well as a variety of colognes and perfumes were neatly lined on the dressing table. Life-size canvas marriage photo of a couple hung high above the bed stand covered the major chunk of wall. Both man and wife stood dressed heavily in their marriage attire while posing for the photo. The serene smile emanating from him not only warmed onlooker's heart but also brightened up the room. On the other hand her dimpled smile gave a whole new meaning to definition of beauty.
Faint music of birds chirping away, happily singing songs of joy hit her ears. She stirred slightly clutching her quilt only to snuggle further deep into her pillow. A small smile played on her lips while her eyes remained shut. "Main kal aajaunga Geet." Her smile widened while she recalled him saying last night as she sat amongst many pillows and cushions with her mobile glued to her ear. Finally! She thought with a deep sigh before turning to lay on her back. Shielding her eyes from sudden bright morning light, she fluttered her eyes open. "Maan aaj aajayenge!" she exclaimed to herself gleefully before turning around to look at his photo by the bed side-table. She pushed away her blanket and hopped out of the bed grabbing a sharpie marker on the table end. She came to stand in front of a calendar hung on the wall and cross-marked the last available square in it. Giggling like a schoolgirl, she replaced the cap and ran to the bathroom to freshen up.
"Ayiye Geet madam, ek call karti main aapke liye bed coffee leke aati." Geet heard a lady's sarcastic remark as she walked down the stairs before entering the kitchen.
"Main call karti magar there is a correction darling, main chai peeti hoon coffee nahi," Geet replied coolly folding her hands on her chest.
"Shuru ho gayi dono," another woman standing beside the first lady said shaking her head. "Kyun uss bechari ko tang kar rahi ho Meera?"
"Haan Meera didi aap kyun mujhe tang kar rahi ho?" Geet asked stressing on 'didi' while giving her a challenging look.
"Naina di," Meera whined slumping her shoulders in defeat.
"You called for it darling," Naina said shrugging her shoulders before resuming to stir the contents of the stockpot.
"Geet ki bacchi. Tujhe na main dekh lungi. Let Maan come back babe," she threatened pointing the knife she was using to cut red pepper.
"Voh bechara karega kya? One look from Geet and he runs behind her like a hypnotized puppy," Naina giggled looking up to wink at Geet.
"Haan di. Pata nahi yeh Geet ne kya chaal chalayi hai, humara chota bhai bechara phas gaya," Meera added shaking her head ruefully.
Geet's eyes widened in embarrassment at Naina's comment and she hurriedly looked away to escape from her teasing gaze. Before she could completely recover she heard Meera's disapproval bringing her back to her fiery mode. Stomping her foot in anger she dashed across the kitchen to catch hold of Meera.
This had come to become a regular routine since the day Geet had stepped into Khurana Mansion as Maan's bride.
Geet Handa was the freshly appointed neuroscience lecturer at Jai Hind University appointed by the Dean for her brilliance and intelligence in her field in spite of her young age. Geet had recently finished her Masters in neurobiology and had begun her PhD research when she was offered the job. She really had no need to provide bread and butter to her family, which ran multi-national textile industry, but her passion to teach what she loved allured her to take up the job. Although she had the potential to teach, she was still quite new to the profession. She was struggling with balancing lectures and her PhD research when she met Meera Khurana-Kapoor, senior lecturer in the same department. Meera had graciously taken her into her wings and helped her efficiently manage both research and lecturing. Geet came to respect and admire her professionally while their friendship grew immensely on a personal level. Meera had never considered Geet as her junior and came to become quite peeved when Geet addressed and treated her like a senior. Their friendship on personal front grew very close with Geet being considered as part of Khurana family and before anyone knew it Geet officially became a Khurana family member.
Family functions, get-togethers, parties were a mere excuse for Geet to visit Meera and her family and same applied for Meera. Geet was the only child of Vijay and Kiran Handa and had mostly grown up alone with just her parents so the lively Khurana family had been more than welcoming for her.
Savitri Devi Khurana headed the family followed by her only son Adinarayan Singh Khurana. She had bravely taken Khurana Industries started by her husband after his sudden demise before giving it away to her son. Along with his wife Shreya Adi Khurana, he brought their company to new heights. He was blessed with four children, three girls and one boy. But soon fate had taken them away due to an uncalled for accident.
Riya Khurana was the oldest of the brood followed by Naina and Meera. And finally the most pampered them of all was the youngest child, Maan Singh Khurana. Riya along with her little brother Maan came to assist Daadima in the family business along with Riya's husband Raj, whom she had met in office. Naina on the other hand pursued her dream of becoming a doctor and married a fellow cardiologist Arvind. And Meera's love for teaching fully blossomed when she chose to become college lecturer. Of all the four children only Meera had an arranged marriage with Yash Kapoor. While Riya and Naina had fallen in love in their respective work places, Meera had never taken interest in men or marriage. Daadima had encouraged her to find a match for herself, but Meera had asked her find a guy for her. Thus, she had an arranged marriage with Yash but that didn't stop her from falling in love with him after marriage.
While Riya and Naina had a much easier time marrying their love Maan had a much tougher time writing his own love saga. Being the youngest, he was always spoilt and pampered by his sisters. His childhood was filled with naughty pranks and a lot of spankings from his Daadima. Yet that didn't stop him from growing into a promising and bright young adult shining in both sports and studies. Like his maa, Riya, he wanted to help his Daadima's family business. Completing his MBA in London along with a degree in architecture, he came back to assist his Daadima and sister.
Surrounded by the best women, he never felt the need to marry until he met Geet. He had seen her frequently visit his home along with Meera and acknowledged her presence during family functions and get-togethers. But one particular incident had him seeing her under new light. His Daadima had a sudden heart attack putting the whole Khurana household under pressure and frenzy. Along with his family, Geet too had accompanied him caring and helping his Daadima recover back her health. In spite of being born with a silver spoon, she came personally every day after college to take care of Daadima like she was her own family. Other than his family, he had never seen anybody go out of their way to help and take care of his loved ones voluntarily. Her humility along with her selflessness had led Maan to become a prisoner of love. But the only problem was his fear of rejection and reluctance to spoil her relation with his family. He always kept away from her but the longing in his eyes had caught the attention of his sisters.
Meera was the first to notice his sudden withdrawal and the distant looks he constantly had when Geet was around. She had immediately confronted him but he was reluctant to confess anything shrugging it off as her mere imagination. But Meera knew the right person to get him talking was Riya. Since he was a child he always preferred to open up with his eldest sister, Riya, whom he fondly addressed as Riya maa. Be it sharing his achievements in school or his darkest fears in life he always ran to Riya. She was his friend, philosopher, guide, and a motherly figure. Nobody could get him to stop playing pranks or get him to agree to something other than her. And even this time too he spilled the beans about his love for Geet when Riya came to talk to him realizing something wrong with her baby brother's behavior.
From then on there was no stopping. All the family members were informed of Maan finally falling in love. Rejoicing that finally Maan had agreed to settle down, elders of the family went to talk about alliance with the Handas. On the other hand, Naina and Meera helped their baby brother confess his love to Geet who accepted she did grow fond of him recently. Both families were extremely happy for the new ties that had brought them closer and immediately had their kids married.
Affection and care had multiplied towards Geet with her entry into Khurana mansion as Maan's wife. All three sisters, in spite of being married, couldn't stay apart from their family and thus had come to live in penthouses built right beside the mansion. But most of the day everyone lived in the mansion and returned to their respective homes just to retire for the night. And like any other day Naina and Meera had come to Khurana mansion. But today was very special because their baby brother was to arrive soon after his first official independent and successful project in London.
"Riya di! Dekho Geet is trying to kill me!" Meera screamed dramatically before hiding behind her sister who had just walked into the kitchen. Geet stood defeated with her hands on her hips panting heavily due to all the running.
"Nahi maa, I wasn't' I didn't' voh," Geet blabbered shaking her head furiously in denial. Of the three sisters, Geet held utmost respect and a hint of fear towards Riya. Of course she did love her but she always maintained a formal relationship with her. Just like Maan, she always looked forward for Riya's approval and advices. Geet always saw a motherly figure in calm and serene Riya and thus always made sure Geet was in control in her presence, afraid that Riya might feel disappointed with her.
Seeing Geet falter, Riya smiled indulgently, "Idhar aao," she motioned forwarding her hands. Geet walked hesitatingly taking calculated steps towards Riya before coming to stand in front of her with her head hung low. Riya took one step towards her and engulfed her in a hug causing Meera to lose hope.
"Didi, et tu Brute?" Meera asked slumping her shoulders.
"Kyun meri bacchi ko tang kar rahi ho?" Riya chided jocularly, stepping out of the hug and placing a kiss on Geet's forehead.
"Yeh kiss angle se bacchi lag rahi hai didi?" Meera asked squinting her eyes.
"Tu iski baat pe dhyaan mat do Geet," Riya assured with a smile. "Let's go see if everything is ready for Maan's arrival," she added taking Geet along to the kitchen.
Geet felt overwhelmed by Riya's gesture and amazed even Riya considered her like her own child. Thanking her Babaji for bestowing upon her such a lovely and warm family she proceeded to walk with her to the kitchen. But just before she could leave she turned to stick her tongue out at Meera taunting her at her loss before running to catch up with Riya. Meera huffed in anger and promised to get back at her later.
"Sab ready haina Naina?" Riya asked walking in.
"Haan didi, some Indian dishes for us and lasagna along with eggplant rollatini and some spaghetti in case he doesn't like lasagna. Aur of course Maan's favorite mango souffl," she finished.
"Perfect Naina," Riya smiled satisfactorily. "Abhi Raj called. He said flight has landed and Maan is out of customs. So I think they all shall be back soon."
"Naina di aap mujhe utha sakti thi na. Main bhi help karti," Geet whined feeling guilty for letting her sister-in-laws do all the cooking while she happily slept.
"Well my dear bahurani, Maan has given us specific instructions not to let you anywhere near the kitchen except to get food. Aur ab tumse kaam karwake hume marwaaoge kya?" Naina questioned incredulously.
"Di," Geet whined, "Mujhe pata hai I don't even know the C of cooking magar I need to learn na?"
"When we are all here tumhe takleef uthane ki kya zaroorat?" Riya asked cupping her cheek.
"Par Maa," Geet began trying to convince.
"Come on now, Maan should be here soon. Go and ask Nakul if the aarti thaali is ready," Riya urged.
"Ji," she replied half-heartedly and went to find Nakul kaka.
***
Tires screeching into the driveway alerted everyone in the house of Maan's arrival. Geet along with her little nieces and nephews rushed to the main entrance before calling out for Riya, Naina, and Meera. The kids crowded near the entrance jumping in excitement for their mama's arrival while Geet craned her neck to catch a glimpse of him after one whole month. She saw Raj along with Yash get down from front seats while the back door opened allowing Arvind step out. Finally Maan stepped out from the same side as Arvind. With the three men blocking her view as they walked forth towards her, she couldn't get a glimpse of her Maan. Disappointed she stood on her toes and craned her neck side to side.
Riya rushed along with Meera and Naina with aarti thaal in hand and stood waiting at the door. Three men stepped aside once they reached the entrance to give way for Maan to stand in the center.
Maan came to stand in the center with his laptop bag hanging on his shoulder. Geet noticed his black jacket was slightly crumpled owing to the long journey. His eyes looked a bit tired yet he stood beaming with a huge smile on his face as he saw his family especially Riya welcoming him with a proud smile.
Riya performed Maan's aarti evading any evil eye that may have befallen her baby and placed a small red dot on his forehead. She was giving the plate to Naina when she felt him bend to take her blessing. She instantly stopped him midway and brought him in for a hug. Maan tightly hugged her back content that he was finally back to his family. Slightly breaking off the she went to kiss his forehead, "Aaj maa aur pappa hotein toh they would have been really proud of you baby," she said addressing him fondly.
"Aap haina maa," he stated firmly. Maan had lost his parents even before he could properly walk. As far as he could remember only his Riya maa had taken care of his every need since he was a child. He knew of no mother other than her and had always looked up to her as one. "Are you not proud of me?" he asked sincerely looking into her eyes.
"I am always proud of you baby." Riya's eyes glistened with unshed tears at his immediate reply. Others looked on proudly at Riya and Maan's love for each other. After their parent's sudden demise Riya had to shoulder the responsibility of the whole family for even Daadima was aging. She certainly had matured before her age taking care of her little sisters and her baby brother. Maan had been just a six-moth old baby when a plane crash had suddenly taken away their parents and since then she had tended to him like her own child. She of course never intended to take their mother's place in his heart but he had always kept her so.
"Oh ho maa, abhi abhi aaya hoon aur aap sabhaashi dene ke bajai ro rahi hain?" Maan joked hoping to clear the thick air of emotions. "Aur yeh kya mujhe door step mein hi khade kar rahe ho sab."
Everyone including Riya chuckled at his attempt to lighten the situation. Only Maan had the ability to change their foul moods into a smile with his presence. He had always brought a smile to everyone around him with his charm and sense of humor.
"Chalo Maan, if you don't force your way through this crowd here, you'll never make it in," Raj added jocularly, causing everyone to move in allowing the men outside to come in.
All the tiny tots hugged Maan's legs and squealed in delight; happy their mama had finally arrived. Equally enthusiastic Maan bent down to pick up his nephew Rohan and perching him above his shoulders while carrying his niece Pari in his hand. He hugged his other sisters, Naina and Meera, before chattering away with them.
"Vaise where is Daadima?" Maan wondered seeing her missing.
"She has gone on a teerth yatra Maan, she'll be back tomorrow," Naina said shifting her little boy from right to left hand.
Geet, who had been watching the spectacle unfold before her, stood in awe at the love and care the whole family possessed. Feeling pride and honor for coming into such a lovely family she saw him walk around to greet his sisters, nephews, and nieces. Wiping off her own tears, she excused herself to get something to drink for everyone. She walked into the kitchen alone and set up a glasses on a tray. She opened the fridge and bent down to get the juice box when she felt someone slide their fingers around her waist and forcefully pulling her back. She shrieked shuddering at the sudden grip and was about to scream for help when she felt the person shut her mouth. The feel of the person's hand did feel familiar but her panic-stricken mind refused to acknowledge fearing the worst. She struggled against the person's strong hold as she was being lifted off the ground and carried to a hidden corner in the kitchen. Before she knew it the person placed her feet on the ground and pressed his huge frame onto her back, squeezing her tiny frame.
"Main vahaan taras raha hoon, and you darling have come here to eat. You food monster!" he chided his voice husky with desire. "Now do I need to teach you how to welcome your husband?"
Geet, who had her eyes shut tightly, jerked her eyes open instantly recognizing his voice. It was Maan! Her mind screamed. But what was the need to scare her like that? She pouted for unnecessarily putting her through tension and on top of that he even blamed her for selfishly coming to get food. "Maan," she whined, "main aap logon ke liye juice leke aa rahi thi."
"Oh playing the good host huh?" he shot back sarcastically. "Pehle pati seva karo then samaj seva," he ordered winding his hands around her petite waist. His hot breath fell on her nape making her shiver while he bent down to kiss her earlobe. She inhaled sharply at the sudden feel of his cold lips on her sensitive spot causing her to completely leaning her whole weight on him. He sensuously slipped his long and slender fingers into her kurti and drew random patterns around her belly button. Unable to take his sensual torture she threw her head back, her eyes partially closed.
"Maan," her voice came out as a mere whisper. "Koi aajayega," she managed to say in spite of her highly aroused state.
"See if I care my love," he replied nonchalantly nipping her ear earning a sharp gasp from her. Pulling her back against his chest, he kissed her neck before travelling down to place a firm kiss on her shoulder. Each kiss of his aroused a new point of pleasure. Encouraged by her response he nipped her earlobe earning a deep sigh from her. He turned her around in one quick motion and pressed himself onto her making her aware of his need. He caught her arms and pinned them above her head and was about to capture her luscious lips when he heard someone cough loudly. He loosened his grip and stepped away hurriedly fearing he it could be his Maa.
"There is something called as room for all your hanky panky stuff, my dear baby brother," Meera teased stifling a laugh. She wanted to check on Geet to see if she needed help bringing juice and lo she found Maan busily hovering over his wife.
Maan groaned rubbing his temple seeing Meera. He could manage anyone in the house but Meera. Now that he had been caught, she would not leave a chance to tease him in front of everyone. "Ugh Meera couldn't you spare me a minute alone with my wife?" he barked. "And let me remind you I am not your baby," he stated sternly, annoyed that she addressed him like his Riya Maa.
"Tsk tsk tsk. Gussa is not good for health Maan," she said faking concern.
"Accha?" he shot back. "But spanking is good for you," he said lunging to catch hold of her. Meera slipped away just in time and ran away with Maan hot in pursuit. She reached the hall and ran around the couch throwing a few love seats on him. He deftly dodged them while warning her to surrender.
The men shook their heads at the usual scene while Naina and Riya called them to settle their scores peacefully.
"Dekho bacche log are peacefully playing, aur yeh dono are running around and behaving worse than little kids," Yash commented slapping his forehead seeing his wife's immaturity.
Feeling tired from being chased all over the living room, Meera stopped and leaned on one of the couch's armrest panting for air. Maan soon caught up with her and was about to smack her when she managed to call truce asking to be forgiven. Having no choice he let her go and warned to not repeat it again.
Nobody bothered to ask the reason for their cat and mouse chase for it always turned out to be silly. Riya breathed a sigh of relief seeing they didn't kill each other and asked Maan to freshen up as lunch would be served shortly. Just then Geet walked in with the juice tray in hand. Although her eyes still reflected her frazzled state, she seemed to have gotten herself together after the little preview of what was waiting for her tonight. She saw him leave hurriedly towards their room. She placed the tray asking Meera to serve juice to everyone while she went to check if Maan needed anything.
Geet rushed past the huge marble hallways knowing he always needed her around to help him. Right from setting his clothes to getting his towel as soon as he showered, she needed to keep tab of his every activity. He was worse than a little kid when it came to getting ready. He would literally take the whole house by storm if he things didn't run accordingly. She entered the room and was about to call him when she felt herself being forcefully pulled into their room.
Maan heard her hurry behind him and smirked at his next set of action. He stood waiting behind the door wanting to take her by surprise. He heard her tingling anklets grow louder as she walked into the room. He instantly caught her wrist and hurled her into his embrace while his legs shut the door. Locking her securely in his embrace, he locked the door to be sure of non-disturbance. He then turned her around so she faced him.
"Maan, what was that?" Geet cried confused at his sudden action.
"Chup!" Maan ordered placing his slender index finger on her lips. "Bilkul chup." He studied her face once again imprinting each of her beautiful features. "You have any idea how much I missed you my love?" His voice was heavy with longing and emotion. He deftly pulled her chin up before he captured her soft lips for a kiss.
It was a hungry kiss, one that showed how much he missed her in these four weeks. Although the suddenness of the kiss froze her movements temporarily, it wasn't long before she responded actively. While their lips communicated their exploding needs, their hands relayed similar messages. His hands tugged her kurti finding a way to caress her bare waist. He pressed her body closer to him while her hands urgently ran over his taut muscles under the thin material of his t-shirt before moving up to grasp his thick hair and pulling him further down.
They broke apart gasping for air yet their eyes clearly reflected fiery passion. "Oh Geet, I love you so much," he moaned lowering to place a kiss on her now swollen lips.
"And I love you more," she rasped. "Only I know how I rocked myself to sleep on this empty bed every night," she said reaching up to rub her thumb over his slightly overgrown stubble. Her smile deepened accentuating her dimple, "Oh Maan it feels so wonderful to finally have you back," she finished placing a noisy kiss on his lips.
"If you were to miss me so much, why did you even send me in the first place?" he pouted placing his hands over her shoulders.

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Edited by Maaneet099 - 12 years ago
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"Kyunki I wanted the world to know how good Maan Singh Khurana is. Hum sab ko pata hai you are brilliant but the world needs to know na," she said proudly while tousling his hair fondly.
"Mujhe world ko kuch prove-vroove nahi karna." He shook his head, furrowing his brows in annoyance. She chuckled in response before cuddling to hug him tightly. "And now that I am back, main kahin nahi ja raha hoon." His voice reflected finality and stubbornness. "Vaise bhi I need to extract all my dues of the past," he added sensually pinching her waist.
"Maan," she moaned throwing her head back.
"This is exactly the way you shall be shouting out my name," he said dipping his head to nip her sensitive spot below her ear before placing a wet kiss.
She squeezed his shoulders unable to take his torturous touch while instinctively arching her neck to give him better access. "Magar… khaana… neeche… sab," she spluttered randomly as her mind reeled in pleasure and her body responded eagerly.
"Food is not going to satisfy my need," he said urgently picking her up and heading towards their bed. He gently placed her on the bed and was about to join her when he heard a knock on the door. Ignoring it he continued with his work when the knock grew louder.
Geet fluttered her eyes open with the first knock. Seeing the knock grow louder while Maan made no move to open the door, she held his hand bringing his attention. "Maan someone's at the door," she whispered her breath labored with his recent activities.
He groaned in discontent. "I swear Geet yeh log hume kabhi akele nahi chodenge," he grunted like a child being denied his favorite toy. He got off the bed and stomped to the door. He swung the door open and put his head out; anger clearly written all over his face.
"Whoa hold the anger my dear brother-in-law. Your sisters were getting worried you guys haven't arrived for lunch yet," Arvind said trying to justify his interruption.
Maan cleared his throat a little embarrassed he had been caught so plainly. "Hmm, we shall be there jijaji," he said closing the door behind him.
Geet giggled watching him walk back with his head hung low; a cute pout adorning his lips. She did feel bad for him but there was nothing really she could do except sympathize with him. She too badly wanted to spend some lone time with her husband. But she knew family came first and there would always be interruptions. That's the reason she had reserved a special welcome for him for tonight when everybody would be asleep. She bit her bottom lip and eyed him teasingly. "Tsk tsk tsk, mela baby naraaz hai?"
"Hmph!" he huffed looking away.
"Chaliye maa must be waiting for you," she said kissing his cheek before setting his tousled hair straight.
"Abhi ke liye ja raha hoon magar nobody can save you later," he whispered with a dangerous glint in his eyes.
"Who said I want to be saved?" she shot back to his surprise before pushing him out of their room so that she could set herself straight before going down.
Lunch was as usual eventful with kids running around while the fathers ran behind them trying to feed them. His sisters pampered and stuffed him with food while he tried his best to eat everything his sisters lovingly fed him surrounded Maan. Geet sat two seats away giggling away while watching him being fed continuously. She knew he hated being stuffed with so much food yet he could never say no to his sisters.
Finally satisfying each of their tummies with food, everyone sat lazily on the couches conversing with each other and enquiring Maan about his trip and the deal he had finalized. Pari, Meera's daughter, insisted to open up the gifts Maan had got for everyone. Maan distributed each of the gift packets to their rightful owners came to sit beside Riya and plopped his head on her lap having missed such moments while he was away. In return Riya combed her fingers through his hair soothing him.
***
"Let me get coffee for everyone," Geet announced seeing it was past six already. Maan jerked his eyes open at her sudden statement. His evil mind began concocting plans to get some lone time with his wife. But much to his chagrin, Naina insisted Geet to stay back. Disappointed he eyed Yash, his partner in crime, to get them alone. Yash assured with a nod that he would take care and cleared his throat to get everyone's attention.
"So Maan yeh sab okay magar you never said how was your stay there?" Yash asked with a hint of mischief.
"It was good jiju," Maan replied casually unaware of his underlying meaning.
"Aur night life kaisi thi?" he asked causing everyone's ears to perk up.
"Mast jiju," he said without second thought. "And the club you suggested," he began, sitting up only to pause seeing everyone stare at him. Men eyed him with amusement while the women stared at him open mouthed. Realizing the topic was too risqu, he cleared his throat, "I mean kya? What night life jiju?" he gulped acting innocent.
Raj and Arvind chuckled at Maan's attempt to change the topic while Yash sniggered at his failed attempt. Maan saw Naina and Meera eye him suspiciously while Geet fumed silently. Mentally chiding himself for falling for Yash's trap, he pleaded innocence with his eyes to Geet only to see her twist her lips and hurry away.
"Jiju aap mere hero nahi villain hain!" he remarked quickly getting off the couch to follow Geet. He took two steps at a time up the stairs and reached their room only for him to see Geet was about to bang the door shut on him. "Geet listen to me babe," he said catching hold of the door and forcing his way through. Unable to oppose his strength, she gave up and stood with her back facing him. Closing the door behind him, he went around to face her only to see her turn away from him again. He slowly placed his hand on her shoulder as though he was testing waters. She forcefully pushed it away. Undaunted he placed his other hand on the other shoulder only for it to be treated similarly. Irritated she wasn't even ready to listen to his explanation, he forcefully caught hold of her shoulders and jerked her around. She struggled under his tight grip and wiggled to get away from him only for him to tighten his hold. Peeved at his dominance, she jerked her head away, her face contorting in annoyance. "Meri taraf dekho Geet," he ordered his jaws tightening at her rebuff. He locked his arms around her waist and pulled her closer encaging her.
"Bas, sirf order dena aata hai aapko," she frowned. "Lekin voh sab mujhpe nahi chalenge. Aap yahaan time waste kyun kar rahe ho. Jayiye phir vapas London, shayad vahaan koi chikni gori aapka intezaar kar rahi hogi," she retorted angrily.
"Magar main gaya toh tu kya karegi?" he asked with a smug.
"Main mayka ja rahi hoon," she spat back irate at his nonchalance.
"Now? Magar uske liye abhi time hai," he replied with a delicious smirk.
"Kya?" she asked momentarily pausing her resistance.
"Haan abhi tum pregnant bhi nahi ho. When you carry my baby you can go to your mayka temporarily," he added with a chuckle.
"Maan," she cried incredulously, "aapko har waqt mazaak hi sujta hai!"
"Geet," he smiled his heart swelling with love. "When I boarded the flight and realized in a few hours I would be in your arms, you have no idea what went through me. Nothing made me so happy but the thought of returning to you," he said putting his fingers under her chin. "Don't you trust me Geet?" he asked tenderly, lifting her chin to make her see him.
"Haan, but not those good for nothing chits ready to fall on my handsome husband," she said her nose flaring in anger.
"And you think I have the guts to see them when I know my hot and sexy wife is waiting for me at home?" he retorted with a smile.
"Baatein banana koi aapse seekhe Maan," she sighed shaking her head.
"Aur mera mood banana koi tumse seekhe," he said nuzzling her cheek.
"Maan!" She smacked his chest, "koi aur kyun seekhe?"
"Ouch babe, it was just a phrase," he said trying to salvage his mistake before bending to place full mouth kisses down her jaw.
His series of kisses were creating havoc inside her. As if on cue, her hands sought his shoulder before running below to encircle his waist. She spread her palms of her hands over his perfectly chiseled abdomen incurring a groan of despairing surrender from him. He grasped her waist with caressing urgency and hoisted her upward causing her to wind her legs around his waist. With their hips locked together, his fingers glided under her kurti stroking and caressing every juncture on the way before deftly snapping the hooks open.
"Oh Maan," she groaned softly before cupping his cheeks as her lips sought his. It was a deep probing kiss causing a disgruntled moan to escape his throat. His hold tightened while one hand smoothed down to span her hips as if he wanted to imprint the memory of her tender curves upon his body.
He slowly let her slide down while continuing to kiss her senseless. Her fingers stripped him off his shirt and slipped her hands inside to feel his broad hardness of his muscles. Momentarily leaving her lips, he wiggled himself off the shirt and took off his black vest. Blindly chucking it away he once again grabbed her and pressed her close to him. With a quick kiss on her lips, he trailed down to trace a warm and wet path of kisses. Whispering her name in between kisses he reached the hollow of her neck.
She strained against him sliding her hands over his padded expanse of his waist and up through his hard and broadened chest before clasping it around the strong column of his neck. And when he placed a sensual kiss in the hollow of her neck, a soft murmur of moan escaped her throat.
"Em squad!" the tiny voice screamed banging the door once again. "Open the door em squad!"
"Not again," he sighed with his eyes closed and touching her forehead with his.
"It wasn't a good idea to be doing this in broad daylight Maan," she reminded re-snapping her hooks back in place. She found his black vest strewn across the room and went to fetch it while he stood with his shoulder slumped down. She hurriedly shoved it on his chest and straightened her hair and dress to evade any curious questions. She ran to open the door before the little one brought the whole house down.
The sudden opening of the door had startled the kid but nonetheless she looked up to see her maami. "Kya hua Pari baby ko?" Geet questioned kneeling down to the baby girl's eye level.
Pari's lips quivered while her eyes threatened to drop precious pearls. And before Geet could help it, Pari burst forth crying hugging Geet tightly around her neck. Maan rushed to kneel beside Geet buttoning up the reminder of his shirt.
"Pari, baby, dekho rona mat," Maan tried to calm the wailing child smoothing her hairs. "Tumhara M-squared sab kuch teekh kar dega. Batao kya hua baby," he said rubbing her back.
Assured her M-squared will always set things right, Pari unlatched herself from Geet. Sniffing back fresh tears and slightly hiccupping due to continuous crying, she turned to look at Maan with her large and beautiful eyes. "Em squad," she began, her voice still slightly trembling. Maan picked her up and kissed her forehead worried what might have happened. She placed her head on the crook of his neck and cuddled further. "Ohan oke Pali's toy," she said fresh tears spilling down her cheeks.
"Rohan broke Pari baby's toy?" Maan asked confirming her complaint before continuing, "toh koi baat nahi tumhara Maan mamu will get you a bigger and better one."
"Nahi em squad," Pari jerked her head up and shook her head vigorously causing her curls to dance around. "Then you have to pilse go London," she said with a serious look.
"London? Voh kyun?" Maan asked confused at Pari's reply.
"Toy angel lives in London na," Pari said looking bewildered Maan didn't even know this piece of information.
Maan and Geet chuckled at her innocent declaration. Maan slightly pinched her nose, "don't worry baby toy angel will come here too if I call her," he said playing along.
"Abhi call kaloge?" she asked eagerly, her eyes twinkling in joy.
"Nahi. Aaj raat when you sleep I'll call the angel and tell her to bring the same toy. Aur two days later you can have it," he smiled kissing her chubby cheek.
"Two days kyun?" she asked scrunching her eyebrows.
"Angel has to go back and find the best one for my little baby na?" Maan countered seriously making Pari grin.
"Yay!" she rejoiced pumping her fists up. "You are the best em squad!" she said kissing his cheek.
"Now let's go and have dinner. Tabhi you can become strong," he paused waiting for her to finish.
"Like my em squad!" she completed her cheeks accentuating a perfect dimple.
Maan and Geet walked with Pari in Maan's hands down the stairs towards kitchen. The servants had set up everything while all the members of the family once again assembled for the final meal of the day. Maan took a seat and made Pari comfortably sit on his lap. Geet got up to server everyone when Riya came and forcefully made her sit down beside Maan saying she would serve everyone today.
The dinner was going well with few talks in between. Having fed Pari, he allowed her to go play for a while before her bedtime. He was taken a bite of paratha when he heard Meera.
"Geet today you promised to have a sleepover with me. It's been so long since we had girl time together," she said looking serious.
"What!" Maan cried splattering pieces of paratha on his plate.
"Manners baby brother," Meera taunted shaking her head her eyes twinkling with mischief.
"Sorry," he mumbled before drinking water to clear his mouth of food particles. Placing the glass back he look at his sister incredulously. "What were you saying?" he repeated with his eyes widened in shock.
"Girly time sleepover," Meera replied coolly, taking a spoon of dal and rice.
"She's not coming," he declared firmly.
"Let her speak for herself," Meera countered scrunching her brows.
Maan turned to look at Geet, his eyes pleading to agree with him while Meera turned to eye Geet with a smirk plastered on her face. Geet on the other hand looked at Maan and then at Meera unable to decide anything. Either of the option would definitely hurt the other. Ugh! Why did Meera have to complicate things?
"Erm… voh," Geet began trying to find the right words to please both Maan and Meera.
"See, she said it, she is not coming," Maan interjected trying to sound convinced.
"Maan she didn't even speak," Meera said cocking her eyebrow.
"Well you seem to have hearing problems," he spat, irritation coursing through his veins. "She is sitting beside me so I heard her."
"Kya ho raha hai?" Naina intervened not wanting the next world war.
"Dekho na Naina di, Maan isn't allowing me to have a sleepover with Geet," she whined.
Maan looked alarmed at the drama unfolding in front of him. Once Naina di would get involved, it wouldn't be far before his whole family will gang up against him and spoil his night with his wife. Before things went out of hand he wanted to whisk her away to a place far away from these people. "Okay that's it!" he snarled wiping his mouth with the cloth and standing up with a jerk. "Geet utho!" he ordered scaring her slightly. She too got up from her seat, still unsure where things were heading.
"Maan, yeh kya pagalpan hai? She is still eating," Meera tried to reason.
"Hum baad mein khaa lenge," he said picking her up in one swift motion and gathering her close to him. She instinctively coiled her hands around his neck while looking around embarrassed at his sudden action.
"Kya hua Maan?" Riya asked startled and worried at the sudden turn of events.
"Kuch nahi maa," he said turning around to face Riya with a smile still holding Geet in bridal style. "Aap pooch rahi thi na aapko junior Maan chahiye, usikeliye practice karne ja rahein hum," he winked while grinning widely. "If we stay here any longer, is janam aap nahi dekh sakogi," turning around swiftly taking strides towards exit.
"Wohoo!" Men cheered while women giggled at his bold move.
"Way to go bro!" Yash hollered clapping. "And we won the bet!"
Maan's ears perked up with the word bet. What was going on in his house behind his back? He turned around and slowly lowered her on her feet. "Kya? What bet?" he asked eyeing everyone curiously.
"That it wont take more than two interruptions before you whisk your wife away!" Yash laughed shrugging his shoulders.
"Two interruptions? Kya?" Maan mumbled loudly scratching his head.
"Zyaada soch mat beta," Raj assured with a teasing smile. "Your wife will do the honors of telling you later."
Maan turned to watch a crimson Geet trying to hide her embarrassment by staring at the floor.
"Here you go," Arvind said throwing car key bunch towards Maan who caught it deftly. "Destination teri biwi se pooch lo," he added with a wink.
"Aur haan, kal fursat mili toh humara paisa dena from Geet's side for she was the one who lost the bet," Naina said biting her lower lips trying to stifle her laughter.
"Geet, tum mere peet peeche gambling kar rahi thi?" he asked his tone sounding quite serious. "Aur voh bhi meri love life ke saath?"
Miserable that she had upset him she stared at him like a scared deer stuck in front of a speeding car. "Nahi Maan I…" she began nervously.
"Don't worry maine punishment bhi soch liya," he whispered dangerously. "I'll make sure you wont even be able to move a muscle by tomorrow morning!" he declared instantly grabbing her hips and slumping her over his shoulder and hurrying away before he once again got interrupted!

so peeps how was it... hit the like button and let me know of your questions, comments, and concerns pweese 😳
Edited by Maaneet099 - 12 years ago
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madhu-u-u-u-u 🤗

thankyou so much for the dedication.. and above that taking your time out... ❤️ and writing this OS for us.!! (though i guess you had no other option )

ooo on a whole this OS had me ☺️... perfect name for the OS.

and these interruptions are so characteristic of GHSP. lol.

those countless (we can say.. though i am sure we can count 😉) almost pappi... hayee. 😳

what a sweet but strong family... bet thingy had me. 😆

m sqaured.. maan mama.!! xD

naice.. huh.! 😳

all in all.!! i am toh flat... madhu.!!

par main kahani toh iske aage hai.!! geet ke arrangements toh dikha hume.!! 😉

sequel toh banta hai boss.!!

love you madhu.

🤗❤️

Edited by sweetkj - 12 years ago
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wow wow...wow...I am speechless what an awesooome.. OS...loved it to d core...
Edited by Thesaurus - 12 years ago
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I was wondering...what's with Geet not knowing cooking in all OS I have ever read of yours except for the feast of love that is😆

I have read Shik dum se inspired OS and its sequel and when I was reading this now I was wondering where was Geet's culinary skills coming from? From horse' mouth eh?😆

Now I am interested to know about your gundu 😆

Before I thought it was a baby boy something but now ehm I have my doubts🤣
Anyway coming to the story it was beautiful with the eh interruptions😆
Me loved Pari. She is such a cutie pie. M squared eh? Maan Mamu? Aww. That was very very cute.
And I liked Yash more. For helping him in a ways Maan didn't expect him to😆

Why did Meera remind me of our very own Avi?😕 🤣

And the last twist came at the end. I thought may be the girls and guys had a bet but never thought Geet herself was involved in it.😆

Loved it Madhu. Write more🤗

Me lubs you
Edited by .Maggie. - 12 years ago
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😊
Lovely OS... 😳
The title & its interpretation in the story was too good. It reminded me of all GHSP Scenes when such scenes were exclusively shown & special efforts taken & all mehant to interrupt them thus making us audience bang our head. 🤣 😆
The bonding Maan has with his sisters & the whole family was very well put together through all the minute detailing you did initially as well as throughout the course of the Story. Especially the binding, love & respect towards Riya ... the motherly bond & emotions he relates to & the manner in which it has got rightfully rubbed off & imbibed even in his better Half Geet was beautiful. 👏
All the interruptions were 😆 Bechare desperate souls longing for some private moments & 😳 Lekin koi nahi... mast tha atleast for us readers... 😉 And Geet did that mischief ... 😆 Quiet a fire brand Maan has for a wife... jodi khoob mast hai... Miya biwi saath toh bahut saare fireworks... 😳😆
Pari wala M Squared for her Mammu *Em squad* Made me go aww so sweet... Adorable... !!! ❤️
Neurology studies... 😉😆 Use lecturer banna diya ... 🤓 Arey waah apne dil ke armaan yahan pura kar rahi thi kya ??? Me curious to know... 😉
All in all beautifully written, just loved it for all the thikki spicy , meethi mishty & Hot chupke chupke scenes... 😳☺️
Agar sweety ke dhamki se aisa hota hai toh I request you to keep making galti for which Sweety keeps asking you such Compensations... 😉😆
Sweety kya mast compensation maanga tumne... 👏 Maan gaye tumko aur tumhare effects ko *Take a bow girl* Yes & even Madhu "ji" 😡 (For calling me "Ji" in your note ) You too can take a graceful bow & pat your shoulders on my behalf for this OS... dil khush kar diya hum sab ka... 😛 ❤️
No calling me 'ji' again... 😡 & Yes thank you for the paltan dedication... 🤗
Next Kab hai... 😆😃
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Res for now

Thanks a million

For the dedication

Away from home Will update comment soon
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main part toh abhi baaki hai madhu! xD


more later😊
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shameless n over eager maan...

excellent n mindblowing os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os...

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