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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH
MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Gurmeet Choudhary as MSK25 yrs , MD of KHURANA GROUP OF INDUSTRIES ,hot dashing business tycoon of india, smile and msk was something like inversely proportional to each other but now one can see his teeth often yes for his beloved wife geet ...

GEET SINGH KHURANA
Drashti Dhami aka Geet in white sari
22 yrs, sweet bubbly girl, wife of great msk ,but lost her smile for some reason...
MANNAN SINGH KHURANA
Abhinav Shukla
25 yrs serving as docter,famous cardiologist, hot but benovelent, twin of msk but 4minutes younger...
MAHATVA HANDA

well her name means importance but was declared typical to be pronounce so geet awarded new name mannu, 16 yrs , geet' s sis ,smart yet cute , love his jiju & dee ...
SAVITRI KHURANA
Drashti Dhami ,Gurmeet Choudhary & Anju Mahendroo
Maan and mannan's daadi , elegant lady ,kind at heart
actually i was so ignorant about its update and now it has been closed so iam posting it again to continue it ...
if you like it dont forget to comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rang means color but here it means different colors of life, it sometime present our favourite color but sometime out of our choice and sometime it is white without colors and sometime even blank and dark...
PROLOUGE
Maan seeing condition of his wife hold her hand and made her sit on his lap, asked '' what happened geetu you look tensed " and cupped her adorable face of his wife and she to gather his warmth cocooned in him and between her sobs she told '' maan , iam pregnant '' with this most soothing news of his life, maan felt like dancing,he kissed her whole face leaving no space after and to be a part of his happiness his heart beart ran in zeal full lub dub could be heardbut he somehow manage to say," pagal yeh rone ki nahi khush hone ki baat hai''. Seeing his happiness new trail of tears formed in her eye with sore throat she somehow she tried to put in word '' i cant keep this child'' hearing those word his all hopes shattered and earth is shaking beneath him , why geetu u love kids a lot'', geet swollen puffed eye speaking more than it usually do , she gave words to it '' for mannu ,MAAN... for her'' to suppress his inner turmoil he closed his eye , carefully lay her on bed '' dont cry geetu hum next time mummy papa ban jayege, u take rest v ill see docter tomorrow''
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Looking forward to read ur ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congratulations for new ff.

Nice concept. N intresting prolouge.

Y doesn't Geet want a baby ??'
N has Maan agreed for abortion
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Posted: 12 years ago
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seems to be interesting

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

Khurana Mansion had never crooned such a melody which can be heard now after geet had stepped in KM, the volume of happiness it has ,it was reflecting in its each corner and geet had not only painted maan in her colour but to mannan and daadi too and adding to her mischeive mannu was not less but geet was alway superior.

Waiting this long at breakfast was no longer persist in Daadi's memory by 8 at morning had become a routine to the family,but today atmosphere of house , manu was first to arrive still no sign of twins and geet but after somemore time maan reached to the table his eyes still lingered to direction of his room

so all these was enough for daadi got worried '' maan , bete app akele geet abhi tak aayi nahi,unki tabiyat toh theek hai na"

"yeah, daadi maa , kal raat ko , she was not feeling well but isliye shayad abhi tak sorahi hai maine docter se appointment le hai"

daadi: where is manan, isn't he home that u seek some other Dr.

maan : wo actually daadi maa there was an urgent cal from hospital at night he should b here by now .

forcefully indulge himself to sallow what ever his hand grasped seeing his plight daadi being a bit merciful, "maan bete , you don't need not to pretend u can have ur breakfast with geet hum nakal se nasta beja dete hai".

sudden rush of blood to his cheeks left it hot and red, to rescue any further embrassment maan slowly slipped from dinning table straight to his room,as he entered the room he found geet still sleeping which was not like even if fell ill she would always found one or other way to roam around with mannu and both of them always in a competition who is laughing this was some secret between the sibling which khuranas never tried to nudge but today its mysterious ,"geetu , is the headach still bothering you"which she half consciously answered ''baas thoda headache thodi der mein theek ho jayega, u dont worry".

" kal bhi tum ne yeh kah ke tal diya tha , ab chalo dr k paas"actually she was receiving some indication was going within her but didn't wann to accept it ,realizing he is not going to let it go she instantly cooked up an excuse " wo kya hai kal thoda mushroom pizza kha liya ,'and in no time he reverse back to his dusht danav avtar yet a caring husband, his eyes spitting fire he was ready brustout but before he took a deep breath counted to 10 to calm and his nerve a bit, composed himself ' how could u be this careless geet, apnee bare main nahi to kam se hamare bare mein soch liya karo you know n a last time we had to admit u in hospital mere bare mein nahi toh manu ke bare mein toh socha karo while trying to sit she assured him ,'' iam fine maan'' but he furiously turned his face which in mere seconds cupped by geet , ''ok Mr, khurana i'll b careful about U, daadi ,mannan ,manu and me lekin maan apne appointment kyun lee, hamare family dr kaha hai "

"hospital mein kisi ko dawa de rahe aur apna bhi ilaz karwa rahe hai"

"matlab"

matlab jaise ki tum mera ilaz ....while he leaned over her and kissed her forehead and slowly decending down but to his bad luck she sat up suddenly" maan, mera shirdard bilkul theek, ab apke... she paused a little then continued... ilaz ki koi jarurat nahi and almost ran to washroom but thought of manu halted her feet,maan manu theek hai?


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Edited by swarnakanak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey!!! all its very late update but if you could still connect with...i'll be obliged to update ...

so here it goes...

Maan ...daadi called him massaging his scalp , his daadi's finger knew for sure some sorcery . It not only relieve his aching head but bring in the needed calmness and solace.

"hmm...", he hummed still under the smoothing spell of oil.

"Is something troubling you bete"...yes he was troubled and daadi knew it well, even if he pretend to be happiest man on earth. She was the one by their side when their parent died in an accident. That's the reason savitri devi was not only daadi but their daadimaa. She struggled all her life, having lost her husband and toddler to took care of. The lady managed all by herself .following demise of only son and daughter in law whom left behind them the two toddler .Thats the reason, all maan wants for daadimaa only happiness. Not even diminutive of misery. He shallowed the forming lump and managed his husk baritone "no daadi its nothing like that its just a headache".

Since the day maan and geet tied the knot , khurana mansion was so vibrant and jovile. She resuscitated the ambience as if she was bestowed with some magical wand to brighten their dull life and to bring out their inner self, which they weren't aware of if it existed, its wee existence after demise of their parent. Be it twin, maan and manan or daadi and even nakul's kaka. Now where ever you find him, kishore classical hits could be heard from his vibrating string of wizened vocal ,definitely not melodious . Again credit goes to geet her 24*7 ornated adulation and encouragement left the mansion with a rising star .

To add the missing flavor to their plain life, mannu was desi Tadka ,indeed replica of geet. Their blunderous recipe or horrible paintings or inventing Nai Dhun (new music) on their heirloom harmonium was mundane.

"In 8 months of your marriage its the first time you are having headache and you came to me instead of geet" daadi replied showing disapproval to his previous explaination...

"no daadimaa its nothing like that geet is bit tired today", mention of geet tiredness reminded daadi of her visit to doctor .

"Is everything fine beta what did the doctor said."daadi asked worriedly considering geet absence in morning too.

"Daadimaa manu fever is not down yet even after the medication and its taking toll on geet iam worried for both of them "he wanted to dodge the situation but he blurtted out trying to hold the forming tears.


"Daadimaa , are you free..." ,voice came followed by manan with oil in his hand"need a massage"manan intervention provided maan the needed space to compose himself.

"of course I'll give you one , but first you see manu her fever is not yet down ,troubling your bro alot"

Bro you still cry like baby",he bantered with smack on his shoulder staring at his adam apple which was screaming of his weeping, earned manan tough look "I had already medicated her and fever would be down in an hour" viewing the situation really serious.

"maan why don't you give him massage while iam doing your, its long time since...",even before dadi could complete maan was massaging his twin head . manan wasn't identical to maan but some neuron strings could still sense the stupendous emotion from far away.

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Knock !!! knock!!! Manan mocked while tapping the open door of geet room .as the sound reached her lobes she quickly wiped the tears and turned to his side.

"here it comes,he produced the medical reports what he had been hiding behind "naina asked me to hand this to you", grinning like an idiot he added , "and I didn't disclose this to anyyy one he stressed the last word." all rights are reserved to you"

He slightly pressed his hand to her cheek "it's the remedies to your now a days incessant tears"

She looked at him unsure of his riddles.he smiled uniting his arms as if holding a baby and smiling he left, the to be mother to feel life forming inside her.


avoid the mistakes...

critisim are welcome...but no scathing



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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update...⭐️...So Geet is pegnant...😳...but y she doesn't wants to keep the baby...😕...loved dadimaa and Maan's bonding......loved it...❤️...eagerly waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update.

Awesome

Maan tensed abt Geet. Seeking solace from Dadima. Manan also joining them. Manan know Geet is pregnant. But y Geet is not happy???

Continue soon.

N can u pls writer the part no. in the title wen u update. So we can know Wen u update.

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