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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Absolutely, beautifully written.

Extremely nostalgic for me, bringing back a mixed bag of emotions.

The closet beach to Panaji is "Miramar Beach."

My college was right off the beach.

It is crowded with thousands and thousand of people on New years' eve.

"She, who had always been a cynic and rolled her eyes at the concept of falling in love at the first place ended up falling and fell hard."

I hope this turns out to be a self fulfilling prophecy for the author of this story.

Tathastu.😆

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I hate hate hate hate you, you you cat woman! I don't even want to take your name, you know who you are, you're sitting on the top of my head right now 😆
Frankly, Di I hate you for such blessing which is nothing less than a curse. Eww. I hate you again.

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
I hate hate hate hate you, you you cat woman! I don't even want to take your name, you know who you are, you're sitting on the top of my head right now 😆
Frankly, Di I hate you for such blessing which is nothing less than a curse. Eww. I hate you again.

Brat! Brat! Brat!.

Drama Queen!Drama Queen!Drama Queen!

I love you , love you, love you.😆

Did you know, all the years of my college I never once stepped once onto the sand of the beach.

We would go otherwise on the beach on holidays, but never on holidays.

I remember when i was very young, during school vacations I , my sister, the neighboring kids all used to take our bikes and ride to the beach lead by my baba, we used to ride up to the Miramar beach. I never rode the bike though. I always sat on baba's bike holding on to his tummy pulling with shirt with all my might. 😆

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Ah I hate you again, I love beach and the sea. Got to go to beach only twice!!
You know my Papa wants me to learn Bike. Not scooty and all but real bike 😆
My bhai doesn't want me to obviously. I am going to sneak out with Papa someday to learn it I tell you 😆

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Ah I hate you again, I love beach and the sea. Got to go to beach only twice!!
You know my Papa wants me to learn Bike. Not scooty and all but real bike 😆
My bhai doesn't want me to obviously. I am going to sneak out with Papa someday to learn it I tell you 😆

Cycle chalani nahi aati tujhe😲

Shame on you😛😆

What bike are you planning to learn?

Enfield Bullet, Yamaha, BMW😃

Don't know what bikes are available in India now.

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Arrey you meant cycle? Woh mujhe aati hain, I am talking about motor cycles. I want to learn Royal enfield or bullet😆
Mujhe car driving aati hain, cycle bhi, beech mein bike nahi aati

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Arrey you meant cycle? Woh mujhe aati hain, I am talking about motor cycles. I want to learn Royal enfield or bullet😆
Mujhe car driving aati hain, cycle bhi, beech mein bike nahi aati

I was just pulling your leg😆

I knew you rode bicycles, tabhi toh Scooty ke baare mein baat kar rahi ti na? Isiliye bikes ke naam bhi puche?

Waise, have you ever been to Goa?

You'll love it, if you love the beach and sea, but you should definitely go there during off season. Peak tourist season is a crazy time in Goa.

Can you write more of the story if i post some pics. It's upto you. I am very curious about Maan, Was he in the military, what was he? How did the story end up in Goa.

I totally loved what you have written, but i feel like I want to know more.

Let me post some pics I took on my trips over the years, whenever I go back home.

I miss Goa very much.😭

Pics post karu?

Feeling sleepy🥱

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Yes yes hell yes post the pics but after you waking up. I wrote this piece ages back but my sister threatened/ bugged/ and did all sorts of things to make me write a story on it. She didn't want it to be just a one shot. She wanted me to write a full fledged story on these characters. I am writing it, but since I was bored yesterday I thought to post this older version just like that...😆

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

a sweet os dear shikha

but why did u not have courage to post it here?

loved the title

loved the way she was heading towards the beach

and loved it that maan came at the right moment

and their love won

u can write more on this os

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Yes yes hell yes post the pics but after you waking up. I wrote this piece ages back but my sister threatened/ bugged/ and did all sorts of things to make me write a story on it. She didn't want it to be just a one shot. She wanted me to write a full fledged story on these characters. I am writing it, but since I was bored yesterday I thought to post this older version just like that...😆

I would love, love love to read this story. I can give you all sorts of info on Goa, if that is where you are basing the story.😃

I was wondering about that too? How did you end up choosing Goa.😳

When I had first started BT, I had actually written it in Goa, but then I changed the setting and made it good ole Delhi.😃

Off to bed, will post pics tomorrow.

Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago