One Shot - The Tidal Sand Clock

Yeh Jazzerette!!!

Can I just hug you tight for such a beautiful writing ...🤗

You have a great talent dear. The emotion & feel of each word is so mesmerising. The holistic approach in each story of yours however small it may be just leaves me with a tingle to feel it & not knowing how to express it all...

The story here spoke of commitment, desperation, hope, love, freshness & trust. (the order is all jumbles as my thoughts are all over the place after redaing this one) How special a feeling it is to be in the embrace of your beloved after a long wait of a time period whether a small span of days , months or a bigger duration of years or your whole life span. The last few lines depicted it so well. There was this feeling throughout the update but the culmination of it all in the end left a sweet ache within. This is just cause I felt that the reality was all too cherishing in the face of all the longing & pain of days gone by. 👏

I loved all the symbolism... be it the loneliness of her room being detached from others ... showing she seeks him alone. Her walking on the lone streets when everyone else is in company & embrace of loved ones to begin afresh & welcome the new year, she seeks for her solace in the place which was visited by many leaving back their trails yet none of the trails giving her the way to her beloved. Her shawl showing the comfort that is left for her that seems to her to be worldly & bearing the society that typecasts one according to their heritage & family name. She detaching from it leaving it all for the implicit trust she has on me. The waves touching her gradually & she moving ahead to be able to wash off all the distrust others tried to put into her & all the fears & pain she felt in his absence. The anklets being not shackles but source of sweet calling & warmth of her loves presence.

Loved it. The update was not so much about Maan but Geet... Thanks for sharing it here...

Sorry for all the nonsense I keep blabbering half of which make no sense. But after reading I can't help but comment so as it would keep troubling me if I don't let it out.

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Please keep writing ... it soothes & brings hope to many 😳

Oh my , enya?? 😲😳 i love this instrumental 😊

but i have selected some other instrumental as BG

hmm coming to OS...

You nailed it Again!!! i never knew...that in a short OS...u can stir feelings for Fictional characters...never knew that one will feel for them..never knew my heart goes for them...

Love hurts...but its a Guilty pleasure, right?? One can enjoy this sweet separation ..but what i see here...though the separation hurts...but the Trust she have on the person she loved...whom she regarded more than anything else..will never betray her.

she can doubt herself..but not him. wowww 👏 ...truly amazing ...this single line ...im flattered!!! 😳

the beautiful description abt the tides and her anklets...

the faith she had on him...the hope...that her beloved will return for her...and lastly the love she Possess for her Maan......

awesome ...the promise, he had made to her...the hug, the celebration of love...everything is soo beautiful 😳

thanks for the pm😊

a beauuutiful one shot...short but well narrated😊

How did I feel so much for them in this small chota sa story... You wrote a lifestory here. Wonderful Shika.. I am so glad for my sake or our sakes you did not leave IF. I would have truly missed out on your exquisite writing.

Loved it is an understatement...

this is so so so beautiful... filled with emotions.. and hats off to you and your writing for making me feel so many emotions in such a short span..!!

wonderful..!!

but still i am very very very roothi hui.!!

and am not talking...

though we havent talked much.!! xD

but still.!!

mooh phering... huh.