New SS: A Destiny Of Love, Part 20/Page 54 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Me hate that creature dev thanks fr updating loved it


me also hate him for his intentions...😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




hain twist kahan hai...😕

poora ek saal beet gaya...iss beech Maaneet ne koi romance nahin kiya...😲

so all are getting ready for prom night...

waiting for Daadi-Geet meeting...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...




Twist are coming soon...
Plz keep patience ...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx for the comment...
keep commenting...
love u..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx for the comment...😊



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

dekha agaya na kabab mein haddi...magar haddi k bina kabab khane mein hi maaja hai...

beauti
ful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


Next part is coming dear...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
than who like the story and comment on it...
plz keep liking and commenting...
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Posted: 12 years ago



Part 10


Geet looked at him awkwardly. Now a days she felt weird around him.So she walked fast from that place.She can feel that Dev is still there staring at her..

Geet want to tell Maan about her awkwardness around Dev. But she shrugged the thought.She does not want Maan to get tension unnecessary.

Geet went to maan and hug him Maan also hug her back he felt that geet is not in her usual self.

"Misty, What's wrong?"

Geet never replied but hug him more tight as if she left him someone will snatch him from her

Maan was so confused. To sooth her he kissed her on the forehead and whispered "I Love You"

Geet smiled weekly and said "Love You Too Maan."

Maan knocked on his house door.He held Geet's hand to reduce her nervousness. She is going to meet his Dadi who is so special to him.Geet Looked up and make a prayer to her Babaji.

"Babaji , Dadi mujhe karegi na,Please help me na Babaji."

Dadi answered the door and saw Maan then Geet she smiled.

"Andar aayiye beta." Dadi let them come inside.

Geet bend down and touched her feet.Dadi overwhelmed by her gesture..

"Jeeti rahiye beta." She blessed he whole heartedly.

Maan took geet in to the living room sat her on the couch..

"I'll be right back" ,He went to his room to get ready.

"So, you Geet? Maan been talking about you so much, He really loves you."

Geet began to blush and feel embarrassed..😳

"And I love him too Da", Geet did not know how to call her.

"Kye main upko Dadi keh sakti hu"

"Ha beta.."

"Thank you Dadi, Up to kitne sweet ho,I love you"

Geet and laughed and talked together like they know from ages..

"What are you gossiping ladies?" Maan said when he came to living room after freshen up..

He saw them laughing and talking he admired them together…


"Tumhari janne ki koi baat nehi,its between Dadi and me."

"Acha ji to tumne aake hi Dadi ko apne team me leli? "

"Yup" Geet hugged dadi. Maan also cums and side hugs her.

"we are going for shopping to buy girly girly stuffs" winks at her😉

hearing this Geet's mouth open to touch the ground..



"Babaji dekhana main kya srif apne liye shopping karne ja rahi hu?? Dusht Danav Kahike"

Geet glares at him

Dadi : "why u teasing my Geet..."

"Thanku Dadi. " and show him her tongue 😛.Maan smiled at her antics.

" ok go now you have to go or it will be late"

Maan and Geet left for shopping after wishing Dadi Bye...


Precap : Shopping


So how was it. My fingers crossed for the story. As m first time writing something here.

Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

Love you all😊😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...but still don't like dev's part...i think geet should tell maan abt dev...do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part

geet should tell maan about dev

dadi maaneet conversation was awesome

waiting for their shopping
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sweet part loved the whole convo

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