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Posted: 12 years ago
hi mona ,apna gang kanha hein??
kya masat likhtee ho yaar mja aa gya
bt precap scary hein
yeh dev fir se aa gaya iskiii to...
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Posted: 12 years ago




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Part 67


"I have to talk Maan but what would I say!' she wondered and walked up to the stairs. "How can I say I want this marriage to be happened earlier, Babaji!! What would he think of me! But Geet you have earlier also said that you want to marry him, haina!! .. Haan but that time situation was different. But now when Maan already have decided a date how can I make him understand why I want this marriage to be happened before of it!! What he will think of me!! '' She was not sure how to make him agree on that earlier date.

"But I have not any other option than to talk him!! " With a determined decision she knocked his room and walked in just to witness he was getting ready for office.

" Maan what's this???' She was shocked all of sudden

Maan who was unaware of her presence jumped back with her sudden shock. He turned and found her worried.

"Don't worry Geet I'll be back in couples of hours' he smiled and resumed tying his tie.

"No you can't go!! You are not fine yet I ' I cant let you go office and take work loads at this condition!!! Maan you..'

Geet I am fine and had discussed with doctor also. I wont have any issue if visit for few hours, you just don't need to take any tension'

Why can't you understand Maan!! You just can't go like this' Geet was becoming weird. One his health and then marriage matter were making her behaves like abnormal. She just wanted to change marriage date as soon as possible before everything get started in process.

Maan tried to make her understand but she was not ready to listen.

"Maan you don't listen me, never!! How can you decide marriage date alone, without even asking me!!! ?' In frustration she uttered which hurt him. But before she could do something to regress her words Maan had left, without saying a word. She clutched mouth in this abruptly change of matter

"Oh Babaji, what I said' her heart started chided her when she remember his eyes, his expression while hearing her words and she felt like cry.

"Maan suniye!!!! '

She runs behind him, followed to the gate but his car had gone off. She returned back feeling so mush regret when met Dadi on way to hall. She had come out hearing Maan car sound. Geet was in her griff did not see her, when SD stopped her.

"Geet, did anyone come here? '

Geet did not want to make SD feel worried about their fight so she said smiling Maan had gone to office. SD also got surprised that how can suddenly Maan leave for office but when Geet said he had got permission from doctors, SD felt quite relief but she had another worry beyond this one.

She was worried what if Maan ask anyone in office about Dev. She was sure that now everything was going to be veiling up. Her mind started to find any solution but when got tired thinking. At last she called Madhav and told everything.

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"Babaji please forgive me what I said. He always does everything for me, for keeping me happy. He never refused my any of wish then how could I say those words to him'

She was walking when her eyes caught a big portrait of Maan and Dev in hall and her eyes fell on Dev. Her every nerve started boiling in anger. She felt like to break frame in dirt- pieces that not a single mark of Dev could be saved out but how could she when her Maans presence was also there.

"But Geet, you can't ignore Maan's happiness just because of Dev's ill-deeds. I can't snatch out his happiness because of what his brother did with me. If he has decided anything for marriage, I must let him do. It should be his choice only, not of mine. When our marriage happened not a single wish of him could have been fulfilled but now, everything will be only on his wish and that's my promise to myself!!!

A slight smile of self-satisfaction covered on her lips and she runs in kitchen.

"Maan without eating anything left for office. Now I will take breakfast for him and will do everything to make him happy' she decided and started preparation in full dedication.

After packing his lunchbox she decided to do everything as Maan likes. She worn beautiful saree and did little makeup just like Maan used to like in her. After checking herself out for many times she comes out taking his lunch.

"Dadima I am going office' she spoke loud and dashed in car told driver to take her office. Before Dadi could reply she had reached much far already. Car stopped below of KC building and she come out, took lift and reached on his floor and then she started fearing if she should have informed him about her coming! " kahi wo fir se naraz ho gaye toh!!'

Then she brushed off thinking 'he is already angry, what much can do!!'

She chuckled on her thought and walked in his cabin but it was empty. She stayed inside for about twenty minutes then came out and asked to one guy about Maan. He said Maan had come for five minutes but then left somewhere.

"Kahi chale gaye!!? But where?' she was not sure what to do next as it was time of his medicines and in no cost she would let him miss it!

She got Maan called from the reception and came to know that he was somewhere at construction site. She immediately left for there without informing Maan or anyone else.

Precap: Geet- "Whom are you calling Maan'

Maan- Dev'

He dials his number and hears rings back from inside Mansion itself..



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Edited by MonaSWrites - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Today no one came .. me also going
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
ohhh geet what have u said in tension dear
but like geet make up her maind n go behind maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hai deara. Me. On phone. Mera lappy kharab ho gaya ... hope kal teek ho jaayega...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rread the part...awesome...mera maanu naraaz ho gaya...hamesha tho geet naaraz hoti hai ...kuch change ho chahiye na... let's us see what geet does now... pray karo ki mera lappy kal teek ho jaaye plz... warna mera kyA hoga... I don't like using phone...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one...but maan babu toh bura maan gaye...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another superb update. Beautifully written as usual. Looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet frustration mein maan ko hurt kar di...dont worry geet...everything ll b fine...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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