THE LOCKET(3), MG FF, thread 4 link pg1, COMPLETED

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Abhi ke liye inse kaam chala...

Just for you... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: Onir
Abhi ke liye inse kaam chala...

Just for you... 😊

Yeh nahi

Hafoos chahiye...

mmm... mumbai ki yaadein...😊

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Ye le...

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: Onir
Ye le...

Awesome!!!

mast hai re!

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Thank you...

Enjoy this for now... 😃

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Sweety aur Mayyo kahan hai???

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Posted: 12 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: Onir
Sweety aur Mayyo kahan hai???

pm kar ke bula le...

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: sweetkj
aae haeee!!

mango.!! <3

Tu bhi le le us mein se ek peice... Avi would love to share... 😊

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Dolly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#359

was really an awesome update...:)

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#360

sorry for reading ur story so late... i had bookmarked it and wished to start the new story when am lil bit free...

first of all the name of the ff make me so curious to know more about the story ...

the way u started off the story is just fab... so different... the initial parts was just introducing each characters in detail... and in this process u were making me more and more eager to know who the other person is...in the initial parts u made so worried as to who dev is behind... though our maaneet will always remain together but phir bhi risk rehtha haina...

after reading nearly 4 chapters i left a sigh of releif...maan feeling sad on seeing a gal in devs arms and ur later description of devs love made me worried whether she is geet or what... but though the lady in devs arms was geet he was a brotherly figure to her... i had a grin on my face after i realised it...

i also loved taras intro... when i used to be in college and had to face those kind of jerks in the bus my weapon used to be a safety pin!!!

maaneets dream dance on raatkali... it was so dreamy... there r many times when i skip the dance desription scene but this was till now the best i read...the way u described the twirl so that she misses him and later his smirk on her hold all left me dreaming...

i loved devs character a lot... i really think is it me who is saying this... i hate even that name to the core but for ur ff exception chaltha hai...but i really loved his easy go nature yet serious in his work...

the way u r portraying 2 love stories which are completely diffeent in nature is just commendable... though i enjoy devs naughtiness but the way u describe maaneet blown me ... the way he escorts her to the hostel and he rejoices just by seeing geet watching him was so beautiful...

geet not turning up for the farewell party ... was this the reason of maans sadness? or is there more?

i even loved south and north lovestory and i respect the feelings of pinkys brother too...

the songs u included in each and every update have increased their feel... loved almost all the songs u chose...

sorry for the extra lamba comment... couldnt help it... and after seeing its length didnt know what to cut... so i thought to let u read and bore...neend achi aayegi shayad...

see u from tom in ur thread with my bugging waiting messages...😉