MG OS - MR.PERFECT epilouge3 pg26 (31/10) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is really superb story... i enjoyed a looot reading this!!!
MAAN's confession was simply awesome... every word !!! 😉
u involved everything in short story like love, pain, anger, fight, ego, time spending together everything...which made story more interesting...

n yeah... need EPILOGUE for sure...
n pls keep writing more os!! like this sweet n lovely 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
nice os
i like it very much
simple and sweet story
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
part 3
awesome part dear...
so lovely...
beautiful...
cute one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
wow
such a beautiful os❤️

u r such a good writter👏
ur way of writing n everything is just perfect🤗

congratulations for d last part n keep writing😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
lovleyyy superb awesome os dear...all part are to fabulas...like it very much ...wrtie more os like this sweet and cute one ...not the rona dona one ...thank you for cute os dear ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
hi thanks 4 da pm 4 part 2 n 3..read 2 n commented already! Js read part 3 nw! Fab update! Ahh Maan is indeed perfect! Sings beautifully! Geet mesmerised! n her propose n dey confess! So emotional! Dey get engaged! Wonderfully written..pls post epilogue! Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
m late for comment...
nice ending...
maan proposed...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Lovely os 😉
Waiting for the epilogue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

small lovely teaser



Here's to Mr. Perfect.

I love how you always make me smile…

Even when I think I can't.

I love how you always know the right thing to say.

I love how you hold me close…

So close that I can hear your heartbeat.

I love how you make me feel so perfect…

When I know I'm not.

I love how you don't care if I wear make up…

Or have my hair done.

How you whisper sweet things in my ear…

As we dance.

How your hands fit so perfectly in mine.

How when all those girls throw themselves at you…

And you simply walk to me.

How you look me in the eyes…

And I get such a warm feeling in my whole body.

Lastly…

How when you look me in the eyes…

Saying that you love me…

Bringing a smile to my lips…

Making all my worries go away.

You make me whole.

Becoz u r my MR. PERFECT



Its Saturday nite soo no office nothing just romance in air what my MR.PERFECT used to say always on Saturday nites, it's his nite ...n m not allowed to do any disasters...as all disasters surprises are given by him only on Saturday nite.

Now u must be wondering y on only Saturday nite, becoz after 6 days of working like machine...it's our tym...from Saturday evening to Monday morning...full of his romance...but is only when we are in delhi...as no parents no one to disturb our lovely dovely moment...n in ambala only nites ...which too we enjoy after our marriage



don't get mad on me now...these days m not feeling to write... but will write from tomm. morning, two days m free bird mom dad are going outside, so will write n will update tomm.itself, be happy n enjoy teaser 😉 becoz update gonna to be thori si romantic n full of maaneet😃😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

LOVED IT CONT SOON

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