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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think their family is going to engage them in the party...

that is why they were send alone and others went before them...

awesome update...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet secard from height waiting 4 next
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awesome update...
loved it...
geet's love at 1st sight...
lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story. awesome update. update the next part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow .! lovely part Prachi .. Thank god Maan saved Geet .. Will be waiting for more .! Update sn ..!
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He looked at me as I m alien n asked "what happened n y u don't want to go there"

How can I say my new fond fear that I m hell scared from height'..i just said " no ... I won't"

"Huh! U stubborn girl , just come wid me...everyone must be waiting" he grabbed my hand n took me up there n 1st tym m not feeling to defend also..so I was walking wid him but all the way I was walking wid eyes closed ...we reached their n it was beautiful place...one side river'..one side trees'.one side a big lawn of a beautiful place...It was a breath taking place ... "indeeded beautiful" I muttered but still I was scary soo I was holding his wrist this tym that too so tight...

"I knew it u will like it" said smiling wid a smrik...

"Hmm shall we"...we forwarded toward the palace...i got a shock ..it was also his property''.graved beautifully "JAANAT" then PREM SIGNH KHURNA his grandfather name'..which I had I heard soo many times from my grandparents n parents'.

We went inside it was more breath taking ...beautifully decorated...with red n white roses everywhere'with lots of lightning but not more just giving the look of real jaanat like moonlight showing 'there was a beautiful fountain in middle '.which was too decorated with flowers...n then swing...omg I just looking everything in awe...then the music...i didn't noticed how they all are romantic songs'.. that too of all my fav singers...I will again faint now too see the arrangement's...

Guests were waiting for us along with our parents...my mom n matma aunty come running toward us started their questioning sessions..but I was too lost to answer them'MR.PERFECT is answering then I was too lost in the beautiful dreamland...but my mom shook me n asked

"Y ur saree is changed beta,u was wearing red n white na," after this question again I went in all things happened ...n how maan got a new saree for me

"Wohh...wohh" I was not getting what to answer...n as always my MR,PERFECT was there to resue me

"Mom , actually our car broke in between ...n while correcting it...her saree got torn ...woh actually I closed the bonnet n her pallu remained inside soo it got torn n some grece too sticked..."

"Ooh, it's ok beta ...actually geet u r looking more beautiful in this one beta" mamta aunty said n put a black tika behind my ear saying "kisi ki nazar na lage"

Mom n mee moved futhered but MR.PERFECT n mamta aunty was still there talking something...while maan is smiling ear to ear ...n mamta aunty hold his ear playfully

Raj uncle n mamta aunty introduced me with some guest ...while he is missing 'my eyes were searching for him...don't know MR.KADUS is where...after sometym I excused myself n was roaming in palace n seeing each n every corner'..then hear a voice which I didn't recognized but the musice is also from my one of fav song''

Here came MR.PERFECT holding mike n was singing...i m getting mini heart attack from today morning...I didn't accept he can sing that too soo beautifully...i m memorized'

link--http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sI7ylqksFNE

Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

All the couples joined near fountain to dance ...lolz my bhai too got someone...i was standing alone ...n hearing his voice while eyeing toward him'.i was just getting lost in him ...his everything is different...yet beautiful...he is really a perfect man for any girl I can say now


Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

He started coming near me...my heart is beating soo fast...i was unable to take his gaze on me...i just turned back...n tried to calm down '..n make my uneven breath...calm...but I think it is impossible today'..he came near me n forwarded his hand in gentleman style for dance...i was too lost to say anything or think too...I just forwarded my hand'...no I

didn't my heart said it too do...he took me near the fountain ... n hold my waist'...the disgust feeling which I had since that boy touched me was smoothing now...his one hand was in my hand n my another hand was rested on his shoulder...''we started dancing n he stared singing...without breaking the eye lock...N now m not fearing...if he will see my soul though my eyes or not...now I wanted him to see


Chaahne jab lage dil kisi ki khushi
Dillagi ye nahin ye hai dil ki lagi
Aandhiyon ko dabaane se kya fayda
Pyaar dil mein chhupaane se kya fayda
Jaan se pyaara jab dildaar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

I matched his each n every step...1st tym in my life m feeling spl. The way he make me by his unsaid words but still I want to hear things...today m thanking mom dad for making this trip...i was the one who made face n tantrums but m the only one feeling spl. Now if mom dad has choosed him for me '.i don't think now I will take sec to say yes...how can I losse a gem ...which is made for me'the "chaltii phirti disaster" I have heard him saying this ..today morning for me...lolz m really mad I got in love wid a man in 2 day only...i think this is only y said ...LOVE IS NOT PLANNNED..IT JUST HAPPEN'ANYWHERE...ANYTIME..WID ANYONE...his wisper broke my thought n made me embarrassed too " U R LOOKING SOO BEAUTIFUL N GORGEOUS...LIKE A ANGEL" I was unable to meet his gaze now ...the compliment which I was waiting since I got ...my heart was doing bhangra now'.n my cheeks were buring... N I think it is turning in red''gosh!!! M blushing ..that too hard...i saw him smiling contentedly this tym...I just whispered back "U TOO LOKING TOO HANDSOME N"...He narrowed his eyes lyk asking more what..."hmm HOT" I😉 wishpered in his ear n ran from there in garden ...to calm myself


Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

It was soo beautiful feeling...to be in love wid someone...so spl. But I really don't know how to express ..'n not getting is he too loved me or not 'but in his eyes I saw soo much love n care ,'that too for me...I was standing nearing the almost end of hill...n I was not fearing 'n watching continuous flow of river...he came...from back ward n held me through my waist ...n now I didn't need to turn n see whose this 'his cologne smell is coming...it is enough for me to feel him...n more the way he is holding me soo softly n delicately like m a flower


Uski khushboo agar apni saanson mein ho
Uska sapna agar apni aankhon mein ho
Jab na dil ke behelne ki soorat lage
Jab koi zindagi ki zaroorat lage
Aur jeena bhi dushwaar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage hone lage

"Hmm, soo u thinks m hot, haan" he asked huskily

"Hmm, n u think m beautiful, haan" I mummered

He made me face him...but I was soo musc embarrassed to look into his eyes'..n next I found MR.PERFECT on his one knee'..n holding a beautiful pendat...I m again memorized with his acts...he every sweetly asked

(igonre earing)😆

WILL U MARRY ME GEET...WILL U BE MINE FOREVER..WILL U EXCEPT ME AS UR HUSBAND?

I m not getting a word to say how I m feeling...'there are some tears in my eyes...

This can't actually be happening that too wid me. All this only happens in the movies. I wish I could hold on to that moment forever.

"Geet"

I was smiling when he again said my name ...I said "YES" how in this world I can say no to my MR.PERFECT...

He got up from his knee...n made me wear that locket..when he was making me wear that locket his fingeres were giving unkown shiver inside me. He huges me tightly on a bone crushing hug. I can hear his heartbeats n his breath on my ears as he says "I liked u when Mom showed me ur picture...''' and I liked u even more when u fell from train."

"Then I should fall every time" I laughed

"I wanted u ri8 there while watching that movie" I m now turned more red with his this statement '.. n then he wispers in my ears "I LOVE YOU! BE MINE. BE MY WIFE. BE MY SOULMATE.😳

He didn't wait for my reply too. He comes close to my lips...''n then softly kissed on it😳

"I LOVE U TOOO" I responed

Then again took my lips n this tym passionately ...'n one kiss turned into another.. 'don't know till when we kissed each other...'..he left me as I was breathless...'n in shyness I buried my face in his chest


Jab kisiki taraf dil jhukne lage
Baat aakar zubaan tak rukne lage
Aankhon aankhon mein ikraar hone lage
Bol do agar tumhein pyaar hone lage
Hone lage pyaar hone lage

We were still hugging each other ...'.then he asked softly stroking my hairs

"Hmm tomm. Nite what u was trying to say, but u didn't completed"

"Hmm MR.PERFECT" I answered abruptly😃😳

He smilied n asked "Y,soo!!"

"Hmm becoz u r'...'n now don't ask more, u speak a lot" I said winking at him😉

"Hmm maan"

"Haan geet"

"This is ur property na,"

"Hmm, dadaji has gifted me this when I was 18, u liked it"

"Ooh , yaa I loved this''n decoration too '..red is my fav. Colour"

"I know '...'red is ur fav. Colour that's y decoration is wid red n white"

"Soo white is ur fav. Colour, n how u got to know about my fav. Songs that is playing inside n one that u sing, must say u sing soo beautifully. I was lost in ur voice. Loved it more than original."

"Hmm'...its soo easy to know, Geet ur bhai tej helped me, n u know the reason behind today party"

"Noo, Mom didn't told me, actually I didn't asked too"

"I know, u didn't know'... this is for our engagement... '."

"What"

"Hmm I know that u had already fallen in love wid me soo '.it's our engagement today"

"Sacchiii"

"Muchii, let's go inside all must be waiting for us to know, did I proposed u"

"Oohh soo everyone know that today u was about to propose me"

"Hmm come"

We went inside all were waiting for us but before they can ask anything seeing the locket in my neck n 1000 volt smile they got, actually he proposed me n I said yes'...''now I wonder that's y he didn't proposed me wid ring 'becoz today he going to make me wear in front of everyone''...

My MOM hugged me soo dearly'.. n said " m happy for u"

Then mamta aunty n dadi maa too hugged me n gave their bleeshing'..

We were made to seat in the beautiful swing...'then pandit g chanted some mantra's n most awaited moment come of my life'... my prince charming'...my hottie ...'.my MR.PERFECT will be mine ..i know full not but "GEET Name ki stamp se jur jarur jaega" :-D😃

I slowly forwarded my hand toward him 'n he slipped the beautiful diamond ring in my fingers'.

Then I slipped his ring in his fingers'...we both took the blessing of all family members...then guests greeted us ''...n all the while I was looking at him'...the way he is.

What can a girl think or need in his life partner

A BOY WHO MAKE HER FEEL SPECIAL

A BOY WHO CAN RESCUE HER

A BOY WHO HELP HER, RESPECT HER

A BOY HELP HER WHEN SHE IS UNABLE TO HANDEL ANYTHING

A BOY WHO LOVES HER MORE THAN ANY ONE

A BOY FOR WHOM HIS GIRL IS ANGEL, PRINCESS..ALL

A BOY WHO CAN MAKE HER SMILE

A BOY WHO CAN HANDEL HER IN BAD TEMPER

A BOY WHO CAN GUIDE HER

A BOY WHO'S ARMS NEVER GOT TIRED TO LIFT HER

A BOY WHO WILL COMPELETE HER

A BOY WHO CAN SEE THROUGH HER SOUL

A BOY U CAN RECOGNISE HER UNSAID WORDS, FEELING

A BOY WHOS IS ALWAYS HER BOY

Today geet got his dream boy it is not like always boys think of his dream girls but a girl too see dreams for a boy...n today geet's all dream come true...she got the best companion of her in maan...who is perfect in all sense for her ... He allowed her to join KC as a head desgnier... their marriage got fix after 2 months but geet don't have to wait till then too meet his MR.PERFECT as she got job she can see him everyday spend tym wid him. Know him, his taste his likes n dislike...in two months ..Where maan can also know her mishty ...a girl full of life... Lil. Arrogant, stubborn ... but too sweet...For him n respect his family n their thoughts ... Biut one thing that didn't changed was that maan ki chalti phirti disaster'.always end up by making herself in some prob. N as always her MR.PERFECT is always there to save her from her own disasters''..now they are gng to get married soon'..n from 2 souls changing into 1 forever'ever'till eternity'

(2282 words)


Wow I did it at last, this os is my fav. Os...while writing it I was feeling soo happy to write it ...as every gal I m too searching my hottie,,hope one day I too get my dreamy

Hope u all will like it...

Plzz don't forget to like n give ur comments...

If u all like then encourage me to give u sweet os like this...becoz I love writing sweet os ...ff are soo much for me to handel :P

Waiting for responce...desperately..n if u want epilouge then say i will try to write otherwise thanku for jheling me 😆


thanks alll who gave me sooo much love ,likes, comments...hugs to alll 🤗

Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww you know i love this os so much😊

you just describe everything beautifully😛

and maan parpose geet with pandet instead of ring i like it👏

and geet brother tej help him just love it so much😳

and as all family knew about maan plan 😆

i want epilogue with all maneet naughty moments after marriage

in whole ff all scenes are really good

keep it up

give us more os

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a fab os dear... soo cute... loved this cutie pie maan n geetu... finally geet got her MR.PERFECT... loved how cutely maan proposed geet... keep it up... keep writing such wonderful stories...
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Originally posted by: maaneetkisonali

that was a fab os dear... soo cute... loved this cutie pie maan n geetu... finally geet got her MR.PERFECT... loved how cutely maan proposed geet... keep it up... keep writing such wonderful stories...




thanks dear...n hope in future too u all will get cute os like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was marvellous work dear loved the whole story ur MR PERFECT was way too perfect

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