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Posted: 11 years ago
part 66
awesome dear...
excellent...
yaar i want Maan Geet and Ved scenes and masti...
lovely part...
now only they are getting time to spend with each other...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 67

Maan tells Geet about his plans...

Geet is worried that Maan won't have time for everything...

Abhi bhi sab kuch achcha hi chal raha haina?

Phir ab naye unit ki kya zaroorat?

Ye toh part of business hai, agar aaise risks nahi lethe toh business kaise badega?

Humme bhi sab ke samne shir utakke jeena haina?

Tum nahi chchathi ki tummara pathi sabse aage rahe?

Maan kitna bhi koshish kare Geet ko convince nahi kar patha...

Geet paison ke liye apne kushi ko khona nahi chahathi, apne pyaar ko khona nahi chahthi, khaas karkke apne Maan ko khona nahi chahathi...

Par Maan ne ek bar decide karliya hai toh koi ussko rokh nahi saktha, haina?

Maan carries on with his plans...

Geet bhi ab free hai toh asaani se donno unit ko sambal sakthe...

Maan has already imported new equipments and began constructions of the 2nd unit...

This would be the first such unit in the country...

This involves top end technology and would be the highest quality prints...

But it needs a huge capital and they are already in debt, housing loan, and now this too needs a loan...

Arjun is ready to finance this new venture and so Maan has no problem getting the money...

Geet is worried that it's always not as easy as Maan thinks...

Maybe Maan is a little ov r confident this time and maybe this is a mistake...

But Maan is very stubborn and no one could stop him...

Geet tries to warn him but Maan gets angry that she is very pessimistic...

Geet apne bakwhaas bathon se Maan ko kamzoor kar rahi hai...

Maan is not the one to give up anything like that...

And he hates failures...he is here to succeed and that is for sure...

Maan keeps roamimg places to get this project started...

This technology is still under the testing stage and it's a novel idea that no one had practiced before...

And you may not get the desired results in the beginning ...

Maan risked everything and is ready for the launch...

Geet feels lonely with Maan staying away from home most of the time...

Meantime she gets a letter from Ved...

Dear Mom and Dad,

How are you? I'm not fine here. I was happy with you, I don't like it here. Pls come and take me home. I love you both and miss you. I want to stay with you. You are my world. I like it more at home than here.see, I'm crying while writing.If you love your son you won't send him like this. If you truly love your son pls come immediately. This letter will tell you about your son's feelings. If you ever care about me you will know how sad I'm. you want me to be happy or not. Here no one takes care of me. Have do all my work alone. This pavan bite my hand and it is swollen and red. Sir didn't scold him at all. He is partial, ask papa to come and scold him, I'm MSK's son, how dare he does this to me? Papa, aap aarahe haina? Issko achche se daanto.My happiness is with you only. Pls maa, papa se kaho mujhe yahan se lekhe jaaye.

Your not so happy son

When Geet saw this letter she starts crying non-stop.Maan rushed home. When he saw the letter he also felt bad but he didn't show it off. He consoles Geet that this is normal and he would get used to it in a few days.but Geet is not convinced, she wants to go and see him.Maan tells her that he too felt like that in the beginning and there's nothing to worry. If they go and meet him now he will insist that they take him with them and that would spoil his studies. All this is b'coz of Geet's pampering and that she should stop this right now. He is big enough to take care of himself, he doesn't need her now, he is in high school now.

Par maa ke liye toh kabhi apna bachcha bada bahi hotha, haina?

Geet is still worried.

Maan promises to take her to Dehradun that weekend.

But Maan went to Lucknow and didn't return that weekend.

Though Maan had a lot of work he was also worried about Ved.

So he himself drove to see him.

Maan is surprised to see him playing with his friends happily.

He had even forgot about that bite...

He introduces Pranav as his friend...

Maan is happy that he has settled down comfortably...

Ved wanted to see Geet and asked Maan about her...

Maan had no time to go and pick her up...

Maan ghar jaakke Geet ko sb kuch bathatha...

Geet bahut naraaz ho jaathi...

Ye Maan mujhe chodke kaise jaa sakthe...

Maan bahut badal ggaye hai...

Aap Ved ke mamle mein hi mujhko ignore karthe toh mera kya hoga?

Ab mein kissi kaam ki layak nahi hoon, Maan ko ab meri zaroorat nahi hai...

Ab Maan ko meri chintha nahi hai...

Ab Maan ko meri yaad nahi hai...babaji, mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai...

Kahin ye dhooriyan itna badh jaye ki hum ek dusre ko bhool jaye...

Nahi, chahe Maan mujhse itne dhoor bhi bhaag jaye, mujhe yakheen hai ki mere pyaar hamesha unko mere paas keeche layegi, aur ye dor itna kamzoor nahi hai,haina?

Geet felt very bad, but is happy to hear that her son is happy now...

Ab Geet ko lagtha hai ki usska ladla bada ho gaya hai...

Maan tries to manofy his wifey...he knows that he shoud have taken her with him...

Par kya karein, kabhi kabhi aaise galthiyan ho jaathe haina?

Maan: Geet, ab kya hai? Ved toh ab bahut kush hai wahan

Geet: par mein kush nahi hoon

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap mujhse pehle ki tarah baat bhi nahi karthe ho

Maan: Geet, tum kab se aaise chinthamani ho gayi?

Geet: Maan, aap ko meri yaad hi nahi aayi? Aap kudh chale gaye aaise hi mere barein mein mat sochkar

Maan: aaise kuch nahi hai Geet, tum jaanthe haina ki mein kitna occupied hoon, aur ye hummare liye bahut bada katam hai, ek choti si galthi bhi bahut bari lag sakthi

Geet: meinne pehle hi kaha par aap toh sunthe hi nahi

Ab Maan bhi thoda pareshaan hotha...

Maan keeps thinking about it that night...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 66
awesome dear...
excellent...
yaar i want Maan Geet and Ved scenes and masti...
lovely part...
now only they are getting time to spend with each other...
cont soon dear...

Ved part coming later dear...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
ved letter was cute, but now he is happy there
geet again narazz from maan!!!!!!
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Part - 68

Maan's confidence is shaken, Geet's words make him to think again...

Shayad ye achcha faisla nahi hai?

Ab Maan akhela nahi hai, Geet hai, ved hai, ab Maan ke galthi inko talkeef de saktha...

Geet ki dream house, Ved ki future, ab sab kuch iss project ke success se depend kartha...

Moreover Geet has immense faith in him...

She blindly believes that he can't go wrong...

Maan kabhi galat nahi ho sakthe...

She fought against all odds to marry him...

And now she is so proud of him...

He can't fail her now...

He must set everything straight...

Galthi karne ki baat hi nahi aathi...

Geet looks sad and keeps thnking all day...

Maan is not happy to see Geet like that...

That' why he didn't want to tell her about the risks...

But Geet is not a fool, she knows everything...

Maan had kept her informed and she knows the business as much as Maan knows...

She knows every risk involved...

Maan tries to cheer her up...

Geet is his strength and also weakness...

He draws strength from her smiles and her words of encouragement but her worried face kills his confidence, he struggles to hide his fears and tries hard to put up a smi;e before her...

He doesn't want her to keep worrying like this...

Maan: Geet, tum kyun chintha karthe ho? Mein sab sambal saktha

Geet: mujhe patha hai, par aap apne aap ko itna takleef kyun dethe ho? Ye toh hum dhere dhere bhi kar sakthe the, itna bhi kya jaldhi thi?

Maan: humme sabse aage hona chahiye Geet

Geet: apne pariwaar ko peeche chodkke aap kabhi aage nahi jaasakthe

Maan: Geet, ab aaise meinne kya kardhiya ki tum itne naraaz ho gayi, meinne jaan boochkke toh tumme chodkke nahi gaya na? mere paas aur koi rashtha nahi tha, aur waqt bhi nahi tha

Geet: aap kabhi mere barein mein nahi sochthe

Maan: tumme aaisa lagtha toh mein kuch nahi kar saktha, galthi teri soch mein hhi hai, mere paas nahi

Geet: yahi ego aapko ek din nuksaan pohunch sakthi, aap bhi galthi karthe ho par aap kabhi nahi maanthe ki aap galat ho

Maan: Geeet

Maan wahan se chale jaatha...

Adi calls...

Geet takes the call...

Adi: geet, Maan bhai kahan hai?

Geet: Adi baiya, Maan upar hai

Adi: unse kaho ki meinne flight ki tickets book kardhi aur Mr.scindia se baat bhi kardhi, Maan bhai ko kal subha hi niklna padega

Geet: teek hai bahiya

Ye Maan achanak kahan jaraha hai?

Aur Geet se isske barein mein kuch bhi nahi bathaya tha

kyun bathayega? Ab toh mein unkki koi nahi lagthi haina?

Maan hears his phone ringing and comes out...

Maan: geet, kisska phone tha?

Geet: Adi bhaiya ka

Maan: Adi ka phone

Maan snatches the mobile from her and calls Adi...

He gets the news from Adi...

Geet gussa hokke andar chale jaathi...

Maan: Geet, ab kya hai?

Geet: kuch nahi hai, aap apna kaam kijiye

Maan: Geet, tum aaise upset hogi toh mera kaam hi nahi chalega

Geet: aapko meri fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai

Maan: Geet, kam se kam aaj toh aaise mat karo

Geet: kyun? Kal aap chale jaooge, phir mein kisse jagdah karoon?

Maan: toh Adi ne badadhiya?

Geet: Adi bhaiya phone nahi karthe toh mujhe parson hi patha chaltha, aap yahi chhathe the na?

Maan: mein bathane hi wala tha, par tum pehle hi mujhse itna naraaz thi toh

Geet: mein kaun hothi hoon aapse naraaz honewali?

Maan: Geet tum toh samajdar ho, tum aaise nahi kar sakthi

Geet: aaise hi mujhe ulla banthe ho

Maan: Geet, bas do hafte ka kaam hai

Geet: do hafthe?

Maan: do hafthe toh yuhi chale jayega

Geet: woh aapko yuhi chale jayega, par aapke bina mujhe har ek pal kitna mushkil se guzartha

Maan: tum aaise hi ghar beitkke sochthe rahi toh aaisa hi hoga

Geet: kya karoon? Mere kismat hi karab hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: ab mein akhele ho gayi hoon

Maan: akhele kahan ho tum? Office jaathi toh sab ke saath hi hothi

Geet: Maan, mujhe aaise chodke mat jao

Maan: Geet, yahan tum akhele nahi ho, Adi hai, Pinky hai, ya phir Sam ya Annie ko bhulalo

Geet: sab hai, par aap nahi honge na?

Maan ko bhi Geet ko aaise dekhkke bahut bhura lagtha...

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: yahan dekho

Maan lifts her chin...

Geet is in tears...

Maan: tum toh pagal ho Geet, itni si baat ko lekhe rothi ho?

Geet: Maan

Maam wipes off her tears and holds her hand...

Maan: hare Geet, tum abhi bhi rothi rahogi toh Ved bhi tummara mazak udayega

Geet: ab woh bhi yahan nahi hai

Maan: mujhe patha hai geet

Maan pulls her closer and hugs her...

Maan: ab toh Ved bhi bada ho gay hai, lekhin tum toh abhi bhi bachi ho Geet

Geet: mein bachi mahi hoon

Maan: achcha? Toh ab ye rona dona katam karo aur chalo hum aaaj kahin bahar jaathe hai

Geet: nahi, aap waise bhi kal se bahar hi khayenge, aaj toh mere haath ka khana khao

Maan: teek hai, agar tum mujhe saza dena hi chahathe ho toh mein kaise bach saktha?

Geet: Maaan

Maan leaves the next morning...
Geet is still sleeping...
Maan feels bad to leave her alone...but he has got himself into this trouble and he had to come out of it for his family's sake...
he leaves with a heavy heart...
Geet phir se bahut akhele mehsoos karthi...

She waits eagerly for Maan to come home ...

But even after comimg back Maan is too busy ...

Geet Maan ke peeche bhaag Bhaag ke tak jaathi

She now remains within the house...

She stops pestering Maan...

Maan even didn't have time to have dinner with her...

Lunch lekhe jaathi toh bahar kissi client ke saath khake aatha...

Kahin bar khatha hi nahi...

This new machine is giving a lot of trouble...

And they have to wait for days for the technicians to come from abroad...

Maan is frustrated...

He can't do anything but wait for them to come and fix this...

He is angry with himself...

He stops talking with everyone...

he keeps thinking about what went wrong...

He has to find a solution soon...

Geet is scared to talk about it with him...

He is already in a lot of trouble, Geet doesn't want to create more problems for him...

Let him take his time...

But Geet feels empty...no one to share her feelings...

Annie se batha sakthi, par Arjun ne Maan pe barosa rakhkke paise dala haina?

Aur Sam ki baat alag hai, uskke sasuraal mein sab Maan ki bahut izzat karthe hai...

Geet Sam se bhi khulke baat nahi kar pathi...

And Geet's b'day comes...

Maan itne tension mein b'day ko bhool jaatha...

Adi, Pinky, annie, Sam aur Sam ke gharwale sab ne Geet ko wish kiya tha...

Sam ke rishtedar ki shadhi tha uss din...

Maan nahi aa patha...

Geet Sam ke ghar chale jaathi, unkke saath shadhi attend karne ki...

Sam Geet ko wish karthi toh sab ko patha chaltha ki Geet ka janam dim hai...

Shadhi ke badh sab Sam ke ghar aathe aur Geet apna ghar jaane ki tayaari mein hai...

Tabhi Yash ek badiya chocolate cake lekhe aatha...

Geet is surprised...

It's been years since she celebrated her b'day like this...

Isske pehle Maan shadhi ke agla saal Geet ko Manali lekhe gaya tha, aur 12 o'clock aaise hi surprise cake laya tha...

Wahan toh sirf Geet aur Man the, kitna kush thi Geet...

Aaj itne log hothe hue bhi Geet bahut akhele hi mehsoos karthi...

Yash tried to call Maan, but Maan ka kuch patha nahi chaltha...

Geet kehthi hai ki Maan bhi kuch aaisa hi surprise plan kar raha hoga...

Aur wahan se turanth chale jaathi...

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
maan busy in his work forget geet's birthday too
geet is upset with all this!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 67
awesome...
oh ho Maan listen to Geet...
a woman, wife and a mother knows everything...
she would always want to play safely and securely...
nice...
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Part - 69

Geet expected Maan to be at home waiting for her...

Maybe he has planned a surprise for her...

Ye mann toh abhi bhi maantha hai ki Maan Geet ke b'day ko bhool nahi saktha...

But Maan has not yet returned...

Geet is disappointed...

Shayad koi zaroori kaam mein pasgaye honge...

Warna itne dher nahi kartha...

Subhe se intrezaar karke udaas nahi hui, abhi bhi umeed karthi hai ki Maan apne liye gift lekhe aayega...

she tries calling him but his line is busy...
Sam had presented her a wrist watch...

Geet usko table pe rakhkke bhool jaathi...

She keeps waiting for Maan...

Maan bahut dher ke badh hi aatha...

Geet ne kuch banaya bhi nahi hai...

Shayad she expected Maan to take her out for dinner...

Aur Geet ka mann bhi nahi tha kuch khane ki ya pakhane ki...

Maan is very tired...

He goes to sleep straight away...

Geet ko bahut bhura lagtha...

But she knows that Maan ka haal bhi bahut bhuri hai...

He can't even remember the date...

He is constantly worried about his business...

He is feeling guilty that he made a mistake which could turn their life upside down...

They could be thrown into the streets if this problem is not fixed in time and production strarts...

Poor Geet, how would she know all this...

She prays to god that everything is fine...

" babaji, mere Maan ki problems jaldhi teek kardho"

Next morning...

Maan notices the watch and asks Geet about it...

Maan: Geet

Geet koi kaam mein busy thi...

When she heard Maan calling her she runs to him...

She is happy that finally he remembered her b'day and is calling her to apologise...

Geet: Maan

Maan: Geet, ye tumne kab kareedha? Aur mujhe bathaya bhi nahi?

Maan thinks that she got it when she went out with Sam...

Geet is disappointed...

Geet: aapke paas waqt kahan hai ye sab dekhne ki?

Maan: Geeet, abhi isski kya zaroorat thi? Mein yahan kitne mushkil mein hoon? Aur tumme toh usski fikar hi nahi

Geet: aapko bhi meri fikar hi nahi

Maan: haan, mein sirf apne liye hi ye sab kar raha hoon, haina?

Geet: toh kya meinne aapko ye sab karne ke liye kaha hai?

Maan: tum bar bar meri galthiyon ko hi dekhthi ho, kabhi apne galthi ko dekha?

Geet: meinne koi galthi nahi kiya hai, galthi toh aap hi karthe ho aur ussko chupane ke liye mere upar gussa karthe ho

Maan: haan mein hamesha gussa kartha hoon, ye tumme aaj hi patha chala?

Geet: aur aapko ye baat abhi patha chala?

Maan: tujhe pehle hi patha tha toh mujhse shadhi kyun ki?

Geet: wahi toh mein bhi soch rahi hoon?

Maan: Geeet

Maan gets angry and leaves without even having his breakfast...

Geet is also angry...

She is not going to talk to him now...

Let him realize his mistake...

Aaise hi chaltha toh Maan would take her for granted...

Shyad Maan ko lagtha ki chahe kuch bhi ho Geet Maan ko chodkke nahi jayegi...

Usko koi aur sahara nahi hai...

Geet gusse mein ulta seedha sochne lagi...

Upar se ye tanhayi Geet ko bahut pareshaan karthi hai...

She is very scared that she has no one ...

No one needs her now...

Ved is also happy without her and Maan too doesn't like her company...

Geet ko lagtha hai ki Maan ko ab Geet ki zaroorat hi nahi...

Shayad Geet ke bina Maan bahut kush hoga, haina?

Maan too is upset that Geet doesn't understand his problems...

Aaise waqt pe Geet ko Maan ke saath dene chahiye thi...

Maan ki himmat badane chahiye thi...

Maan ko moral support ki zaroorat hai ab...

Lekhin Geet Maan ke pareshaniyon ko bada kar rahi hai...

Agar Maan Geet ko apne pareshaani ko khulkke bathatha toh Geet bhi koi upaay bathayegi...

Par Maan ko dar hai ki Geet ye sab jaankke bahut darjayegi...

Maan Geet ko kamakaam pareshaan nahi karna chahatha...

Aur apne pareshaaniyon ko ussko batha bhi nahi patha...

Pehle hi Geet ko Arjun se paise lena pasand nahi hai...

Geet maanthi hai ki rishton ke beech paise aatha toh rishte kamzoor hojaathe...

Kya hoga agar Maan paise sahi time pe wapas nahi detha?

Aur Annie musibat mein padjayegi...

Magar Maan ko apne upar itna barosa hai ki woh zaroor ek koshish karna chahatha...

Koshish karne se hi hum zindagi mein jeet hazil kar sakthe haina?

Agar koshish hi nahi karthe toh kaise aage badenge?

Agar Maan ne koshish nahi kit oh aaj itna bada business kaise hotha?

Aaise hi donno ek dusre ko galat samajthe hai...

Maan jab wapas aatha Geet se baat hi nahi kartha...

Geet ko bahut bhura lagtha...

Kam se kaam Geet ko daanttha toh bhi Geet kush hogi, magar aaise chup rehtha toh Geet toot jaathi...

Meine aaise kya kiya hai Maan?

Ab aapko mujhse batein karna bhi pasand nahi hai?

Geet ko ye kamoshi bilkul achchi nahi lagthi...

Geet bahut darjaathi, Maan ke kamoshi Maan ke daant se bhi zyada takleef dethi...

Maan ne kabhi aaise nahi kiya...

Naraaz hotha toh bhi Geet ussi waqt daantthe aur bhool jaatha...

Geet hi baat karthi...

She can't bear this silence anymore...

Geet: Maan, khana tayaar hai

Maan: hmmm

Maan comes to eat...

Geet has made his favourite pasta...

Maan chup chap khakke chale jaatha...

Kuch bhi nahi kehtha...

Geet Maan ko hi dekhthe rahi...

Maan ke peeche hi jaahti...

Geet: Maan, ye watch

Maan: Geet, mujhe isske barein mein koi baat nahi karna hai

Geet: lekhin Maan

Maan: Gud night Geet, mujhe chain se sone toh do

Geet: gud night

Both of them try to sleep but couldn't...

Agar Maan Geet se teek se baat nahi kartha toh Geet kaise soyegi?

Geet ko lagtha hai ki aaise naraaz hone se koi faida nahi, pehle Maan ko batha toh de ki Geet kyun naraaz ho gayi thi

Geet turns around and finds Maan awake...

Geet: Maan

Maan: Gee tab nahi

Geet: nahi, mujhe abhi baat karna hai

Maan ko bhi lagtha hai ki abhi Geet se baat karna hai...

Maan: bolo Geet

Geet: Maan, ye watch didi ne diya hai

Maan: Sam ne?

Geet: kal meri b'day tha

Maan ko abhi apni galthi patha chala

Maan: tumne pehle kyun nahi bathaya?

Geet: aap ko yaad hi nahi thi

Maan: Geet, agar mein bhool gaya toh tum mujhe yaad dilathi

Geet: ab aapko meri b'day bhi yaad nahi rehthi, haina Maan?

Geet looks disappointed...

Maan: Geet, ab toh mujhe apne b'day bhi yaad nahi rehthi

Geet: phir bhi aap kaise bhool sakthe? Aapko meri kadar hi nahi

Maan: haaan, mujhe sirf apne kadar hai, mein swaarthi hoon

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: tum yahi kehna chahathi haina?

Geet ab Maan se aur behas nahi karna chahathi...

Geet: chodo, ab bhool gaye toh kya hua?

Maan: phir tumne ab usske barein mein kyun bathaya?

Geet: mujhse galthi ho gayi, mujhe maaf kardo

Maan: tum kya kehna chahathi ho? Galthi meri hai?

Maan wahan se chale jaatha...

Geet: Maaan?

Geet tries to stop him, but he leaves ...

He needs a break or else he would really turn mad at Geet and hurt her more...

But for Geet his untimely exit from the house is even more scary...

She feels terrible...

Why would he leave at this time?

Would he return or not?

Unwanted thoughts come to her mind and she is in the clutches of an unfamiliar fear...

She had never felt like this earlier...

Suddenly she feels that her Maan had left her forever...

She may not see him again...

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Part - 70

Geet keeps thinking as she keeps looking at the empty bed without Maan...

This loneliness is too scary for her...

She had slept all alone many times before but today is different...

Maan left her alone and went out as he was angru with her...

This is something new for them...

They had never argued this much...

Maybe it's her fault? Why did she start this argument ?

He was so tired and wanted to rest very badly, but here she was all pumped up for this stupid bicker...

Maybe she shoukd have left him in peace...

But Maan is not someone who tries to escape, he always stands firm and fights till the end...

Aaise sab ko choke bhaagne wala nahi hai...

Aaj achanak kya hua hoga?

Geet ahcche se jaanthi hai ki aajkal Maan ki business bahut badi problem mein hai...

Par Maan aaise problem ko pehle bar nahi dekh raha haina?

Aur aaise waqt pe bahut samajdhari se kaam kartha aur sabko asaani se sambaltha...

Kahin aaise toh nahi ki Geet ke wajhe se Maan pareshaan hai...

Geet soch soch ke pagal ho rahi hai...

Ek minute toh aaisa lagtha ki sab kuch katam ho gaya ho...

Maan ko patha hi nahi kya kar raha hai...

Ussko bas yahi lagtha ki agar Maan wahan rukhtha toh baat bahut bigad jaatha...

Aur Maan apne gusse mein kuch aaisa kartha ki Geet kabhi usse maaf nahi kar pathi...

Shayad Geet ke liya bhi yahi achcha ho ki Maan usse dhoor rahe...

Maan climbs dow the stairs not knowing what to do...

He just reaches the parking and wanted to get out ...

Just get far far away from here, he would feel better after a long drive...

But he had not taken the keys with him...

So he decides to roam the garden instead...

Security comes running with his torch and is surprised to see Maan there...

" koi problem hai sir?"

Maan tells him that he has had a heavy dinner and needs a little walk...

Maan starts walking in the garden and keeps thinking about the recent happenings ...

How happy they were as a family?

And Maan had always wanted to spend his life with Geet...

It's not that they are strangers who met only at marriage...

They know each other from childhood...

Maan still remembers the first time he met her...

How she used to hide from him as she was so scared of him...

How he enjoyed threatening her and how she believed all those fake stories he created to blackmail her to do his work...

But never a day she complained about him to anyone, not even to her best friend Annie...

How she helped him always whenever he got into trouble...

And how they longed to see each other when they were away from each other...

But now they are always together and still they feel like strangers...

What went wrong in the middle?

Maan shared everything with Geet in the past...

He wanted to tell her everything, he wanted her to know evrery tiny matter...

He had shared his dreams with her and they have lived his dream together...

She too kept sharing her mind with him...

Relied on him always, whenever she got a problem she came to him for help, and she strongly believed that Maan has the solution for all her problems...

For her Maan was the backup support system and he never failed her expectations...

He was there for her anytime and so she never felt alone...

But as time passed and they got involved in their respective duties as a caring mother and a responsible father, somehow they lost their friendship, they have grown bigger than their friendship ...

They have become this huge indviduals at the cost of their love and affection that always prevailed supreme over their stupid egos all these days...

The problem is that Maan has ignored her totally...

He had started looking at her as a typical wife and mother and not as his good companion whom he relied upon all these days...

He realised his mistake and decides to rectify it...

He can remember those days when Geet had so much faith in him that she was least bothered when Ranno was dead against their relationship and Geet knew that with Maan by her side she could easily convince her mother...she always knew Maan was there for her, he does his best to keep her happy, and it has become an obsession for him to give the best for her, for there is always Sam and Annie to compare with and their hubbies are from wealthy families and have a strong background...

Even though Geet is never greedy and is so proud of their achievements Maan keeps trying harder and harder for he is not satisfied with himself and he knows he is capable of more and Geet deserves all the luxury that her sister has, Geet rejected all those luxury for a lif with Maan and Maan wants to reward her with his hardwork...

But what Maan failed to understand is that Geet is more than happy with what they have and for she only wanted her old loving Maan back...she wants that Maan who was madly in love with her and almost ready to take her away from her family at any cost...he won over her family with his undettered love her and his commitment to keep her happy forever...

After pondering over their mistakes Maan returns to his Geet...

It's been a couple of hours since he left and Geet had been lying there crying like a baby lost from it's parents ...

As she hears the door open she tries to wipe her tears for she doesn't want Maan to feel bad and she pretends to be sleeping...

Maan comes and lies beside her...

He knows that she had been crying as always...

Ye Geet abhi bhi ek choti si bachi ki tarah rothi hai, babaji iskka bacha bhi bada ho gaya, najaane ye ladhki kab badhi hogi?

Magar Geet ab chahe Ved ki maa bhi banjaaye, ya phir kissi ki bua aur chahci, par Maan ke liye toh abhi bhi Geet waise hi hai jaise 30 saal pehle thi, boli bali har baat ko lekhe darnewali darfok Geet, ussko har katam pe Maan ke saath ki zarooart padthi hai, she is used to walking along with him holding his fingers for support, and never wanted to walk on her own...

Though Maan pushed her hard to stand on her own and get stronger as he wants her to be independent not always looking for his help Geet likes to be like this only, she is strong enough to stand up for herself when required but she likes Maan alongside her always...

It's always better to have someone behind you ready to support you when you stumble...haina?

And it's all Maan's fault for he had spolit her with all the love and care that she got used to it now...

Aur ab achnak Maan sab chodtha toh Geet kaise jiyegi?

Maan turns and looks at her...

She is facing the other side showing her back to him...

She didn't want him to see her crying...

Maan keeps staring her back...

His piercing look tear Geet apart and she knows that her Maan is also going thru the same feelings...

As much as Geet can't stay away from her Maan, maan too is not used to this distance...

Both know that this is a hard time for them and they should stay together against all odds...

Isske pehle kitne bhi pareshaaniyan aaye aur donno ne saath milkke unko yuhi dhoor kardhi, haina?

Lekhin ab toh ye donno hi saath nahi toh pareshaaniyan aur badhthe jaathe, haina?

Iss bar bhi donno ko saath milkke sab kuch sambalna hoga...

Geet waits for Maan to react...aleast he should shout at her madly, ger angry with her or she is even ready for a tappad...tappad se dar nehi lagtha Maan babu par aapke kamoshi se bahut dar lagtha hai...aaise kuch nahi kehtha toh Geet ussko chodne wali nahi...she decides to ask him where he was all this time? Aaise waqt pe koi ghar codkke jaatha hai kya? Mujhe jawaab chahiye, aap aaise apne mann mani karthe rahoge aur mein chup beittoon? Nahi Maan, apne mujhe aaise chup rehne nahi sikhaya haina? Aap apni sherni ko ladna sikaya haina? Chahe aap ke saath ho ya kissi aur ke saath, mein apne haq ke liye zaroor ladhoongi...

Lekhin Maan just couldn't stay silent...

Ussko bhi Geet se baat nahi karthe hue achcha nahi lagtha...

Maan: Geeet

Geet turns around in a jiffy and is about to say something...

But Maan closes her mouth with his fingers...

Maan: chup...bilkul chup...

Geet looks into his eyes...

They are also wet...

Tears run down her eyes ...

Maan wipes of her tears...

Maan: nahi Geet, aaise rothe nahi

Maan Geet ko apne paas bhulatha...

Geet gets a little closer and Maan puts his hands around her waist and pulls her closer...

He hugs her tight and kisses her forehead...

Geet looks at him and smiles...

Maan yahi muskurahat ko dekhna chahtha tha...

Ab Maan chain se so saktha...aur Geet bhi yahi chahathi thi,Maan ke bahon mein hamesha thoda jagah chahathi thi apbe liye, ab toh Geet ki sare pareshaaniyan dhoor bhaaggaye...

Maan: sojao Geet, tumme aaram karna hai, mujhe patha hai ki aajkal tum teek se sothi hi nahi

Geet makes herself comfortable under his clutches and closes her eyes...

Both of them forget what happened and fall asleep...

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