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Part – 3

Back to school…….

After the long holidays it's school time……

Geet is very happy, she is free from Maan's constant nagging….

She happily gets ready for school and is very excited…

Naya class hai aur naye masterji bhi aaye hai…..

Geet has passed out with flying colors and all the masters like her…

She is an outstanding student and is very obrdient and polite…

She actively takes part in all the competitions and exhibitions…

She is eager to learn anything new and interesting…..

So she is the teachers' pet…..

At School she is the leader and she commands everyone……

Teachers ask the students to follow her….

She helps the others to learn…..but there is a small problem….

Geet ko English thoda mushkil lagtha…..

Itne din Hindi mein seekh rahi thi na?

Lekhin Geet extra efforts lagakke seekhne ki koshish karthi…

Masterji bhi madat karte hai….

Sameera hothi toh shayad madat karthi…

Geet waits for the hoilidays….

Sameera & Maan come home…..

Iss bar Sam aur Maan koi assignment mein busy hai….

It's a combined project…..SaM always escapes from all this…….

Maan ko ye scientific models banana mein bahut interest hai….

Sam just helps him a little….

Jaise she collects everything needed and keeps them ready for Maan to come and start working, she just sits along with him and watches him doing it…..

Sam toh pehle hi Ranno se bachne ke liye drama karthi….

Ab Maan bhi saath mein notes likhthe rehtha toh Ranno ko lagtha ye koi zaroori kaam kar rahe hai….Geet ko bhi warn karthi ki Sam ko disturb mat karein…

Geet tries to clear her doubts from Sam…..

Har waqt Maan bhi saath rehtha toh Geet bhi chup hi rehthi….

Geet Maan ke samne kaise kahegi ki ussko English mein problem hai….

Masterji ne ek grammer book dekhe workout karne ke liye kaha hai….

Geet struggles a bit….

Sam toh notice hi nahi karthi….

Woh apne kaam mein busy hai ya phir books padthi rehthi hai…

One day Maan comes to meet Sameera……..

Actually Geet Annie(Maan) se milne nahi aathi toh Maan hi aagaya usse milne…

Geet apne HW kar rahi hai….

Maan is surprised to see her with the books….

Ye ab ghar bhi nahi aathi………Itna busy kaise ho gayi?

Annie toh hamesha ki tarah masthi karthi rehthi hai…

Ye Annie ke saath khelne bhi nahi jaathi….

Kuch toh baat hai……..

Maan wants to know what's wrong?

Annie se hi pooch saktha tha……

ab yahan tak aagaye toh Geet se hi poochtha…

Maan: tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: ye mera assighment hai

Maan: par Annie toh koi assignment nahi kar rahi hai

Geet: ye sirf mujhe karna hai

Maan: ooohh toh tum weak student ho?

Geet: nahi toh

Maan: dikhao kya hai?

Geet: nahi, mein kar sakthi hoon

Maan snatches her notebook….

Maan: hare grammer pad rahi ho?

She has done some mistakes….

Maan: toh tumme grammer nahi aatha?

Maan laughs…..

Geet feels insulted…

Sam bhi aagayi….

Geet tries to get back her notebook….

Maan: hare mein madat kartha hoon

Geet: aapki madat ki koi zaroorat nahi

Maan: Geet, sach mein mujhe ye sab patha hai

Geet: aap jaakke Annie ko sikhao, mujhe meri Didi sikhayegi, haina didi?

Sameera: kya baat hai? Geet itne pareshaan kyun hai?

Geet: didi, ye Maan ko dekho

Sameera: kyun? Ye phir se tumme tang kar raha hai kya?

Maan: hare mein bas tummari behen ko madat karna chahatha tha

Sameera: tumme takleef karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, mein hoona?

Geet: haan, aap jao

Maan starts to laugh….

Maan: Sam. Ye grammer pad rahi hai, aur mein jaantha hoon ki tummara grammer kitna achcha hai?

Ab Sam apni behen ke saamne apna beizzathi nahi hona chahathi….

Sam: Geet tum Maan se hi seekhlo, mujhe kitchen mein thoda kaam hai

Gaat: didi?

Ye kab se kitchen ka kaam karne lagi?

Maan: ab kya karogi?

Geet gives him the book….

Maan teaches her….

Actually Geet is also happy with that….

She needed these lessons very badly….

Ab Maan Geet ka tutor ban gaya….

As Geet is interested in learning English she takes it seriously….

Par Maan itna achcha teacher bhi nahi hai….he is very strict…

Maan ko Geet ko darane ka mokha mil gaya….

He thoroughly enjoys it……

Bechari Geet…fusjaathi……..

Maan: teek se likho

Geet: aap pehle teek se sikhao

Maan: meinne abhi abhi kaha "an" nahi "a"

Geet: aapko sahi jawab patha bhi hai ya nahi?

Maan: kya?

Maan stares…..mujhpe shak karthi?

Geet: ye dekho vowels ke samne "an" aatha

Maan: buddu….ye dekho ye sab exceptions hai

Geet notices her mistake….

She looks at him…..yeah…he is right….

Maan: kya dekh rahi ho? Likho

Geet continues…..

Ye holidays bhi Maan ke tuition classes ke saath bahut achche(?) nikhal gaye….

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part 1
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Part – 4

Geet is now slowly getting used to her new residence…..

Hoshiarpur mein rehna hai toh innkke saath hi rehna hoga….

Issiliye Geet has decided to make friends with Maan too,

It's better to surrender than keep hiding from him, which seems impossilble……

Geet ki tarah Maan ko bhi padayi mein interest hai……

She can ask him for any help reagrdig her studies and Maan is always happy to help her……

Sam is more interested in her dressing and looks and her novels ……….

She keeps telling Geet how to take care of herself….

Geet is not interested in all that……

Annie is very much interesred in that, she always comes to Sam and Sam helps her in her make-up and tries her hand at different hair styles……

Annie is like a model for her for all her experiments…….

She tries a new look everyday….

Unlike Geet who doesn't have the patience to sit infront of the mirror for a long time Annie never complains and readily sits there for hours until Sam comes to a conclusion what suits her the most……

It's festival time at Hoshiarpur….

Sab ne apne apne rishteydaron ko bhulaya hai…….

Maan aur sam bhi aaye hai…..

Ranno aur Rajinder bahut busy hai…..

Mehmaan nawazi karna haina?

Mr.Handa bhi bahut kush hai……

Ab unkke peene ke buddies bhi aaye hiana?

Sab ke saath peethe toh Ranno control hi nahi kar pathi…..

Mr.Handa ko peene ki aadat hai….

Innko sambalne ke liye hi itne din Ranno ne Geet ko bhi dhoor rakha tha….

Ab Ranno bhi tak gayi….

Kitne din unkke peeche hi padi rahegi?

Ab betiyan bhi badi ho gayi hai….

Ye Handaji ka koi bhi fikar nahi hai….

Ranno haina, sabko sambalnewali?

He is a free bird….

Dadi ne bhi ussko samjane ki bahut koshish ki….

Ab woh apne bahu ko sare zameedari soopdhi….

Dadi ko pura barosa hai ki apne bte se achcha Ranno iss parivaar ko sambalegi…

Sameera apne papa ke ye aadat se bahut sharmindha hai….

Geet ko toh ye roz ki kahaani ho gayi hai…..

Ranno Geet ko insab se dhoor hi rakhthi….

Woh abhi bachi haina?

Annie is very excited about the festive sesons….

She gets to eat all her favourite sweets and savouries…..

Ranno aur Rajinder khul milkke donno pariwaar ke liye mitaai aur namkeen banathe hai……

Geet ko besan ke ladu bahut pasand hai jo Rajinder banathi hai….

Aur Annie ko toh Ranno ke haath se banaye sara sweets pasand hai…..

She used to keep sitting right in front of the stove and relish the dishes as and when they are made…..

She likes them pipping hot…..

Ranno is also happy as Annie is the first to appreciate her efforts ….

It's always nice to hear someone praise your work even if it's a small child…..

Ranno always complains that Sam and Geet never encourage her like Annie……

Kitna mehnat karkke kya faida? Ye toh apna muh kholkke ye bhi nahi bathathe ki ye achcha hai ya bhura……

Annie ko dekho kaise kushi kushi kaathi hai aur tareef bhi karthi hai….

She even compares it with the ones she made last season and says that these are even more tastier…she asks Ranno to make them like this hereafter…..

Ranno toh itna kush ho jaathi ki woh raat ka kahna bhi banana bhool jaathi…..

She is too busy making Annie's favourite jalebis…..

Rajinder prepares dinner for everyone…..…..

This happens everytime when Ranno makes sweets…..

Rajinder comes to see Ranno…..

Raji: ab tak tera kaam katan nahi hui kya?

Ranno: bas katam honne hi wali hai, tum chak ke dekho, kaisa hai

Rajinder finds Annie still eating…….

Raji: ye aaise hi khathe rehthi toh kissi ko chakne ka bhi kuch nahi bachega

Ranno: kyun bachi pe nazar rakhthi ho, issne toh bas ek do jalebiyan hi kaya hoga

Raji: tum isse aaisa hi khilathe rahoge toh ye moti ho jayegi aur phir issko kaun shadhi karega?

Ranno: mera ek beta hotha toh mein Annie ko apne bahu banathi, kissi aur ke ghar jaane hi nahi dethi….

Mr. Handa just arrives….

Handa: meinne kitne bar kaha ki ek beta hojaye, lekhin tum toh hamesha kehthi thi " hum do hummara do", ab sochkke kya faida?

Raji: bhaisab, achcha hua aapko itne achche betiyan milli hai, iss ladhkhon ko sambalna toh bahut mushkil hai

Handa: hare, hummra Maan jaisa beta milna toh bahut mushkil hai, aap nahi jaanthe beton ka kamaal

Raji: aap zara ghar aakke dekho, aapka kamaal ka beta Maan apne papaji se kaise roz ladthe rehtha hai

Handa: Maan aaisa nahi karega? Zaroor aapne hi kuch kiya hoga

Raji: usko abhi scooter chahiye

Handa: toh Maan bhi bada ho gaya haina?

Raji: haan, ye ladhka ab aage kya kya maangega?

Handa: hare ladhka toh bas ek motor gadhi se kush ho jaayega, lekhin tum log toh kitne maangthe ho, kabhi sadhi, kabhi paayal, kabhi kangan, kabhi chumka aur motor gadhi ko bhi nahi chodthe ho, aapka list toh kabhi katam hi nahi hotha

Ranno stares him…..

Handaji stops there itself…….

Raji: abhi se itna zidd kartha toh patha nahi bade hokke issko kaise sambalein?

Ranno: tum kyun fikar karthi ho? tab toh ussko sambalne usske gharwali aajayegi, ye toh bas hummare samne sher banthe hai, aage dekho kaise ye bhi sher se chua banjaatha

Handa: jaise tumne iss sher ko chua banakke pinchde mein band karkke rakha hai

Raji laugh……

Raji: ye toh bilkul sahi kaha aapne, bhaisab aaj raat ka khana hummare ghar mein hoga, Ranno meinne Geet ke pasand ke gol gappe banaya hai, woh kahan hai?

Ranno: Annie, tumne Geet ko dekha?

Annie: Geet bahar khel rahi hai

Rajinder goes to call Geet……

Raji: Geet….Geeet

Maan comes……..

Raji: Maan, tumne Geet ko dekha?

Maan: nahi toh

Maan just remembers locking her up in her room….

Earlier……

Geet was reading her favourite magazine ……..

She was reading her favourite column….

Tabhi Maan aatha…..

Maan: Geet, yahan kya kar rahi ho? neeche aao, sabkke saath khelo

Geet: mujhe nahi khelna

Maan: hare, Annie tumme dhoondh rahi hai

Actually Maan wanted to play carom with her….

Geet is not interested……

Maan gets angry…..

He snatches the magazine….

Geet too gets angry….

Geet: woh mera hai, wapas dedo

Maan: tum pehle hummare saath khelo, phir padlo, neeche sab wait kar rahe hai

Geet: meinne kaha na, mujhe nahi khelna

Maan: tum hummare saath nahi kehloge? Toh teek hai, yahi raho

So saying Maan takes the magazine with him and locks her up in her room…..

Everyone was busy toh sab Geet ko bhool hi gaye, Maan bhi…

He just runs up to see her…..

Maan unlocks the door…..

Geet kuch dher chilakke phir sogayi hai….

Maan looks at her….she looks beautiful…..

She is growing fast….

Maan can see visible changes in her ….

Maan can't help but keep staring her……

Ranno: Geeet

Ranno calls Geet….Maan tries to wake her up…..

Maan: Geet, utto, khana nahi khana hai kya?

Geet wakes up….

She gets mad seeing Maan…

She starts hitting him……

Maan catches hold of her hands and stops her…..

Geet could not get off his hold…he has become so strong…..

Maan: mujhe maaf kardo, mein toh bhool hi gaya

Geet doesn't reply….she is still angry….

Maan lets her go……

Everyone have their dinner at the khurana house……

All are happy, specially Maan. Geet ke saath aaj dinner kar raha haina, Geet hi Maan ko serve karthi……actually sabko paratha serve karthi aur saath mein Maan ko bhi….par Maan ko yahi bahut achcha lagtha……patha nahi kyun?

Geet toh abhi bhi bahut naraaz hai, lekhin sabkke samne toh acting karna padtha haina?

Maan enjoys her antics…..

Geet Maan ke plate mein jaanpoochkke pani girathi……

Annie: maa, bhai ne phir se pani giradhi

Raji: ye ladhka kabhi nahi sudhrega, Maan kam se kam aaj toh tummare nautangi band rakhtha, chalo ab tum hi saaf karo, mujhe bahut kaam hai

Geet has a big smile on her face……she has successfully punished him……

Maan stares her…..but he had to do the cleaning……

Jab bhi aaisa celebrations hotha hai Annie asks Sam to apply mehendhi for her…….

She asks her mother to prepare the mehendhi and takes it to Sam ……..

She asks Geet also to join them but Geet is not interested……

Sam zidd karkke Geet ko bhi mehendhi lagathi….

Maan Geet ke haath ko hi dekh raha tha…..

Sam: kyun Maan? Tumme bhi mehendhi lagana hai kya?

Maan: nahi nahi, mein bas yahi dekh raha tha ki tum kitne achche mehendhi lagathi ho? ab tum exams fail bhi ho jaathi toh tere paas ek achcha kaam hai kamane ka

Sam gets angry……

Sam: ye ladhkiyon ka kaam hai, tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? nikhal jaao

Maan leaves still admiring his mishty……..

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part 1
nice part...
so Geet is adjusting here...
Maan is too much...
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part 2
nice part...
Maan control urself...
Geet is scared of him...
and Sam is too haughty...
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part 3
awesome...
chalo he taught her something...
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MAAN'S FEELINGS ARE CHANGING FOR GEET
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Part – 5

Next day…..it's the festival day……everyone is happy……

Annie aur Geet naye kapde pehenkke kushi se khel rahe hai…..

Gaav ko ek bar goomkke aagaye hai….

They have all those shops with all those colorfull clothes and bangles…

And also the chaats amd ice creams…..

Annie toh mele se bahar aathi hi nahi….Geet jabardasthi ussko ghar lekhe aathi hai…..warna bahut dher hojaathi toh Ranno kamakaam pareshaan hojayegi aur Geet ko agle bar bahar nahi jaane degi….

Abhi bhi Sam badhi hogayi hai toh ussko ghar se bahar jaane ki permission nahi milthi…..aaj ghaav mein itne log honge toh ladhkiyon ko thoda protect karkke rakhthe hai……

Geet aur Annie bhi ghar lautthe hai…..after having their favourite chaats….

Ab ghar mein hi khelna hoga….

Geet ko milnne usski nani aayi hai….

Geet unkko dekhke bahut kush ho gayi….

Naani ko apne naye friend Annie se milathi….

Apna naye kapde dikhaathi….

Jo bhi ho, naani ne hi bachpan mein usska dhekpal kiya haina?

Dadi feels a little jealous…..par sam toh Dadi ke paas hi thi….

Geet sare waqt apne naani ke saath hi rehthi…

Sare bachchen apne naye dosthon ke saath khel rahe hai….

Naani ke gaav se Geet ke friends bhi aaye hai….

Gurvinder aur usski choti behen rajji….

Geet ke wahan ka bachpan ke dhost….

Geet Annie ko introduce karthi…..

They all play together…..

Maan is getting ready to go to the ground & play cricket…

He comes out & finds Annie & party playing….

Maan ka nazar Geet pe hi hai….

Aur ye kaun hai?

Woh chor-police khel rahe hai…..

Gurvinder Geet ko chase kar raha hai….

Finally he catches her….

Gur: pakadliya

Geet bhi bahut kushi se khel rahi hai….

Par Maan utna kush nahi hai….

Geet ko isske saath akhele chodke jaana teek nahi lagtha…

Maan can't stay back…..his friends have come to take him…

He thinks of a plan….

Geet toh meri hai, isske saath kya kar rahi hai?

Maan is very possessive when it comes to his Geet, haina?

Lekhin abhi toh Geet bahut choti hai, phir bhi Maan ki Geet hi haina?

Maan ye baat ko kaise bardhaast kar saktha ki Maan Singh Khurana ke seva koi aur Geet ke haath pakde? Woh bhi Maan ke samne?

He throws his bat & goes to his room….

He comes back with his shuttle rackets….

He calls Annie….

Maan: Annie

Annie: bhai hum khel rahe hai, humme kyun disturb karte ho?

Maan: Annie, yahan aao

Annie comes……

Annie: kya hai?

Maan: ye aaplog kya khel rahe hai?

Annie: kyun? Aap ko bhi khelna hai?

Maan: nahi, ye kya hai?

Geet: Annie, jaldhi aao

Maan: tum ek minute rukh nahi sakthi?

Maan stares Geet…..Maan bahut gusse mein hai…..

Annie: bhai ,mujhe khelna hai

Maan: Annie

Annie: bhai ye bachchon ka khel hai, aap nahi khel sakthe

Maan: mujhe koi faltu game nahi khelna, tum bhi ussko chodke koi aur game khelo

Annie: kyun?

Maan: kahin ghirjaathi toh patha haina maa kya karegi?

Annie: kya karegi?

Maan: bhool gayi, jab mein aaise ek bar ghir gaya toh maa ne mujhe store room mein band kardhi

Annie sochthi ki ye kab hua?…..

Hua toh hi ussko yaad rahega haiana?

Maan toh ussko dara raha hai…..

Annie:achcha, toh hum kya khelein?

Maan: ye lo, shuttle khelo

Annie is surprised….

Usually he won't let her touch his things….nor he shares his toys with her…

But now he has no other go….

Ye Gurvinder ko Geet se dhoor rakhna haina?

Shuttle khelenge toh woh Geet se itna kareeb nahi jayega, haina?

Maan ko abhi bhi thoda shak hai, lekhin ye toh safe lagtha hai…..haina babaji?

Annie is very happy….

She calls Geet…

Ab Maan befikar khelne jaatha…….

Maan shamko lautke aatha toh abhi bhi woh Gurvinder Geet ke saath hi khel raha hai….

Aaj toh ye jaanewala nahi hai….

Mein bhi dekh raha hoon, ye subhe se Geet ke peeche hi pada hai….

Patha nahi aur kitne din rukhega?..….

Maan is not comfortable with him roaming around Geet….

Ye toh bache hai….aaise mokhe mein aaisa hi khelthe rahenge….

Maan thoda bada ho gaya toh he is not able to accept this….

He has become very possessive…….

Maan is possessive about all his things, he never lets anyone touch his things, not even Annie, but Geet doesn't belong to him, she is his neighbor, that's all….

He doesn't have any right to control her……..

She has every right to play with anyone she likes……

Geet bhi Sam ki tarah hi hai…

Lekhin patha nahi ye feeling naya hai….

Maan is confused…..why does this bother him?

Gurvinder unka mehmaan hai…..

Maan doesn't even know him till today….

But why this hatred?...

Next day….

Sab jaane ki tayaari kar rahe hai…

Ye Gurvinder bhi chale jaayega….

Maan is happy…everything seemed to be fine until …..

Geet starts crying….

Maan apne ghar se dekh raha hai….

Sab bahar kade hai….

Geet apne maa se baat kar rahi hai aur ro bhi rahi hai….

Maan thoda pareshaan hai….

Geet uss nikambe ke saath khelke kahin ghir toh nahi gayi?..…

Maan is pissed off….

He would crush his bones if it's true…..

Lekhin aaise koi baat nahi hai….

Ranno Geet ko daant rahi hai…..

Geet apne naani ke haath pakadke nahi chod rahi hai…..

Maan: Annie

Annie : kya hai bhai?

Maan: ye teri friend kyun ro rahi hai?

Annie: Geet apne naani ke saath jaana chahathi, par Ranno buaji nahi chodenge

Maan: ye bhi teek hai…

Ab Maan ko gabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi….

Geet kahin nahi jaanewali hai….

Maan is happy….

Lekhin thode dher badh Geet apne naani ke saath chale jaathi….

Mr.Handa had let her go….

Itne din badh Naani ko dekhthi hai toh jaane dethe hai…

Geet kushi kushi apne naani ke haath pakadke chale jaathi…

Maan bas dekhte hi reh jaatha…

Ab woh kuch nahi kar saktha….

Maan is disappointed….

But he doesn't know why?

Ye Geet ke jaane se Maan ko itne takleef kyun hotha?

After a while Maan is geting ready to go & play cricket….

Annie comes…

Annie: bhai

Maan: kya?

Annie: mujhe bhi lekhe jao, mein bhi cricket kheloongi

Maan: ye bade bachon ka khel hai, tum nahi khel sakthi

Annie: teek hai. Mein shuttle kheloongi

So saying Annie runs to his room to take the rackets….

Maan usske peeche hi jaake rackets ko cheenkke chale jaatha….

He hides them in a safe place….

He comes back victorious…

Annie is crying….

Mr.Khurana ussko sambalthe…

Mr.Khurana: hare, kissne meri bachi ko rulaya?

Annie: Maan ne

Mr. Khurana: aane do usse, mein ussko sabak sikaatha hoon

Annie: papaji dekho wahan hai woh

Mr.Khurana tries to catch Maan….

But Maan is off in a flash…

Mr.Khurana: Annie, tum aao hum tere liye ice cream lekhe aathe hai

He takes Annie with him….

They stop at Geet's house…

Sam bahar khel rahi hai….

Mr.Khurana: Sam, tum bhi aao

Sam too joins them….

Donno parivaar aaise hi hai….

Woh sare bachchon ko apna hi samajthe….

after the celebrations it's school time….

It's time for Maan & Sam to leave….

Geet ab tak nahi aayi…..

Maan jaane se pehle Geet ko dekhna chahatha….

Kahin woh wahi settle toh nahi ho jayegi? Pehle ki tarah….

Maan: sam, tummare behen wapas chali gayi? tummare naani ke yahan

Sam: haan

Maan: ab yahan nahi aayegi?

Sam: mujhe kya patha?

Tabhi Ranno Mr.Handa se wapas aanne ke waqt Geet ko lekhe aane ko kehthi….

Ab Maan ki pareshaani dhoor ho gayi….

Geet wapas aajaayegi….

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Part – 6

Agla holidays……

Geet aur Annie bhi Amritasr jaathe hai…..

Maan aur sam ko lene……

Mr.Handa aur Ranno donno ko saath lekhe jaathe hai…

Ab unnki bhi chutti haina?

Maan aur sam ka school toh bahut bada hai…..

Yahan ke students bhi apne uniforms pehenkke bahut smart dikhte hai….

Annie aur Geet sabko dekhte hi rehthe….

Kitna bada school? Haina?

Ranno: tumlog bhi agle saal yahi aajao

Annie: nahi nahi, hummara school chodke nahi aayenge

Geet: haan, hum ghar chodke nahi aayenge

Ranno aur Rajinder bhi inko hostel nahi bhejenge…

Ghar mein ye bhi nahi honge toh kaise chalega?

Pehle hi Mr.Khurana ke compulsion mein hi Ranno ne Sam ko yahan bhejdhi…

Warna woh apne ladhki ko bahar nahi jaane dethi…

Maan ke saath hi jaathi haina? Issiliye Ranno ko koi pareshaani nahi hai….

Sab Golden temple jaathe hai….

Geet pehle bar aarahi hai….

Maan aur Sam toh kahin bar aachukke hai….

They are not interested…

They just want to head home…

Geet aur Annie bahut excited hai….

Sam aur Maan tease them…..

They are surprised to see people who are so different from the people they have seen, they wear different clothes, they speak fluent Englsh, they look like aliens to them…….with their new fashion gears and short hair……

Dekho kaise muh kholke dekh rahe hai….

Maan: Annie muh band karo

Jaise isske pehle logon ko dekha hi nahi?

Back to Hoshiarpur…..

Yahan bhi Geet aur Annie ko ye donno bahut pareshaan karthe hai….

Bade haina? waise behave karthe hai jaise wahi sab kuch jaanthe hai….

Geet aur Annie bahut upset hai…..

Jab tak ye school mein hothe ghar pe Annie aur Geet hi chaltha hai….

Jab ye log aathe hai, ek hi din mein sab kuch ulta ho jaatha hai….

Ranno kahegi ki sam badi hai aur Geet ko apne badhi behen ka izzat karna chahiye aur usskke baat ko maana chahiye…..

Rajinder toh ye kahegi ki Maan ladhka hai aur kuch bhi kar saktha…….

Geet aur Annie ko ye sab bilkul pasand nahi hai…..

They just want their rights back….

This is their house, Sam aur Maan toh yahan mehmaan ki tarah aathe hai aur chale jaathe hai….

Geet aur Annie hi har waqt apne parents ke saath hothe hai, lekhin phir bhi koi unkka kadhar nahi akrtha……

Ye log aathe toh sabka attention unpe hi hotha hai…..

Jaise unkka hi pasand ka khana banaya jaatha hai…..

Unkka hi pasand ka picture dekhthe hai….sab kuch unkke marzi se hi hotha hai….

Aaisa hi ek din Maan aur Sam hand ball khel rahe hai…..

Ye ball toh Geet ka hai….

Itne din Annie ke saath woh khel rahi thi….

Ab Geet bhi khelna chahathi…..

Geet: didi ye mera ball hai

Sam: toh kya hua? Ab mein aagayi na? ye mera ho gaya

Geet: kya?

Sam: tum donno koi aur khel khelo

Maan: Annie jao, humme disturb mat karo

Annie: humme bhi khelna hai

Maan: tum log badh mein khelo

Sam: Geet hum thode dher khelke dethe hai

Geet bhi intrezaar karthi rehthi…

Ye toh ball dene wale nahi hai….

Geet ko gussa aatha….

She couldn't control her anger…….

Annie ball cheenne ki koshish karthi…..

Maan ko gussa aatha…..

He scolds her….

Annie rokhe andar chale jaathi….

Now Geet tries to snatch the ball…..

They won't let her take it….

Geet yahan wahan bhaagthi rehthi….

They are enjoying it….

Geet is frustrated….

She just jumps over the ball & takes it inside…..

She switches on the gas stove & places it over it…..

The ball melts ,blows off the fire….

Geet is still angry……

Gas is leaking….

Maan rushes in….

Maan: hare , ye kya kar rahi ho? Hatto

Maan pushes her aside & switches off the gas….

Ranno ghar pe nahi hai…

Sam: Geet, ye kya hai?

Geet blinks……she is scared…..

Sam: maa ko aane do, aaj toh tum dekho maa kya karthi?

Geet ko patha nahi kya karein…..

Maan feels sad for her…

Ye uska bhi galthi hai….

Sam ke saath milkke Geet ka mazak udha raha tha….

Maan: hare Sam, choddho, ye toh pehle hi dargayi, ye aaisa phir kabhhi nahi karegi, haina?

Geet: haan

Maan: sorry bolo

Geet: sorry didi

Maan: tum jao, hum kissi se kuch nahi kahenge

Geet bhaag jaathi….

Do din bahut dar darke Sam ko hi follow karthi rehthi…..

Sam bhi Ranno se ye baat ko chupathi….

Geet usskke badh kuch bhi karne se pehle ek bar soch lethi….

Aaisa hi ek dossre ke saath dethe hai….

aur Geet bhi Sam ko kahin bar Ranno se bachaathi….

Lekhin Maan is not happy with what she did, ye ladhki ka akal itna kamzor kaise ho saktha?

Koi gas ke saath kheltha hai kya?

Agar kuch ho jaatha toh?

Geet also realizes her mistake…….

Maan takes her to their favourite meeting place …the terrace…..

Geet: hare, choda mujhe

Maan: aajkal tum bahut ziddi ho gayi ho

Geet: kya? Mein zidd karthi hoon?

Maan: kya zaroorat thi ball ko cheenke jaane ki, aur ye sab karne ki, tum itna laparwa kaise ho sakthi, agar tujhe kuch hojaatha toh

Maan is really worried…..

Geet looks at him….he is very serious….

Geet: woh….mujhe maaf kardo, maa ko nahi bathana

Maan: nahi bathaoonga, lekhin tum bhi mujhse wada karo ki agle bar aaisi bewakoofi nahi karogi

Geet: teek hai, nahi karoongi

Maan: pacca

Geet: haan, pacca

Annie comes in search of Geet….

Annie: Geet….Geeet

Geet wahan se bhaag jaathi……

Maan keeps staring at her…..abhi se Maan ka mahi shuru ho jaatha…..

Bas Geet ko thoda starting trouble hai….she needs some more time……

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