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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
part 6
nice update
hehe maan ka mahi mahi suru ho gaya!!!!!
loved it
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part 5
awesome...
wow Maan is so possessive and J now itself...
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part 6
OMG what was she about to do...
thank God Maan came at the right time...
pagal ladki...
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Part – 7

Once Geet apne naani ke paas chale jaathi during holidays….

Maan misses her very much….Geet hothi toh usska mazak udakke timepass kartha tha aur usske adaoon kein Maan fida hojaatha tha…..

Ye Geet ko bhi abhi apne naani ke yahan jaan hai kya?

Mere school jaane ke badh jaathi….

Lekhin tab toh Geet ka bhi school shuru ho jaatha, haina?

Sam ko bhi akhele ghar mein beitkke bore ho jaatha….

She wants to get out of the house…..

Ranno asked her to go with Geet, but Sam is not used to it……

She just likes it here, she doesn't want to go there…..

Aanie kehthi hai ki Amritsar mein koi circus chal raha hai…..

Sam wants to see it…..

Mr.Handa aur Ranno Sam aur Annie ko circus lekhe jaathe….

Maan ko ye bachon ka show mein interest nahi hai….

He stays back…….

Ranno kehrahi thi ki aaj Geet wapas aa rahi hai….

Toh Maan kaise bahar jaa saktha…..

He is waiting for his mishty…..

Geet comes back ……

When she finds everyone missing she is disappointed….

Dadi kehthi hai ki woh log circus dekhne chale gaye….

Geet Annie ko doondhke Maan ke ghar aathi…..

Patha chaltha ki Annie bhi gayi hai toh Geet aur upset hojaathji….

Sab mujhe chodke chale gaye?

She starts crying….

Rajinder tries to console her….

Maan comes…..Maan is very happy to see her…

Par ye toh rorahi hai….kya baat hai?

Maan didn't expect this….

He was waiting to make her cry…but she is already crying…..

Maan has to console her now……

Ye toh shuru hi hai Maan, aage jaakke tujhe hi har modh pe Geet ko sambalna hoga, toh aaj se hi apne practice shuru karlo……

Maan: maa, ye kyun ro rahi hai?

Rajinder: ussko bhi circus jaana tha

Maan: haan haan ye bhi bachi haina?

Maan teases her…..

Geet aur zor se rothi hai…..

Rajinder: hare hum kal jaayenge, Maan ke papa humme lekhe jayenge

Geet ek corner mein bietkke rothi hi rehthi….

Maan: kyun ro rahi ho?

Geet looks at him….

Maan tries to scare her….

Maan: chup…bikul chup

Geet chup ho jaanewali nahi hai…

Maan ka damki kaam nahi kartha, Maan ko kuch aur rastha doondhna padega….

Maan thinks for a while, MSK hain, kaise bhi Geet ko samblega, haina babaji?

Maan: mujhe magic karna aatha hai, dekhoge?

Geet: joot

Maan: sach mein

Geet: magic wagic kuch nahi hotha, sab cheating hai

Maan: tumme yakheen nahi hotha?

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh teek hai, ab mujhe iss kamre ke andar lock kardho, 5 minute mein mein bahar aajaoonga

Geet: aaise nahi ho saktha

Maan: aaise hi hoga

Geet: woh kaise?

Maan: dekhna chahogi?

Geet: haan

Maan: mein 5 minute mein wahan se nikhal jaatha toh tu kya karogi?

Geet: mein kya karoongi?

Maan: har gayi toh tumme mujhe ek pappi dena padega, teek hai

Geet: kya?

Geet ko lagtha hai ki ye isska koi naya chaal hai….

Geet looks at Maan in confusion…..

She knows that he is kidding, how can anyone come out of a locked room?

Aur ye KC bhi nahi jo Maan babu ek laat markke darwaze ko thodein…

Yahan aaisa kuch kartha toh Khuranaji se mar khane padega….

Aur ye modern lock nahi jo andar se khukega jab Maan ke pass dusre chabhi hotho

Ye toh purane zamanne ki wooden door hai kisske aage ek bahut bada iron latch hotha….

Ussko toh bahar se hi khol sakthe haina?

Maan: toh tum dargayi? Haina?

Geet thode dher sochthi, ye zaroor joot bhol raha hai, aaise koi bahar aasaktha hai kya?

Geet ko apne hoshiari mein bahut barosa hai, woh toh school topper haina?

Ye uss din ka mazbhur thala hai, bahar se lock karthe aur bahar se hi khol bhi sakthe…..andar se kuch nahi kar sakthe, aur ye ek hi rastha hai, aur koi rastha bhi nahi hai….kidkki bhi bahut strong hai……….

She knows very well that it's impossible……

Geet: nahi, mein tayaar hoon

Maan: achcha aao mere saath

Maan gets inside the store room….

Maan: kya dekh rahi ho, bahar se thala lagao

Geet locks the door…..

Maan: ab dekho, time kya hai?

Geet looks at the clock…….Maan starts shouting…….

Maan: maaa….maaa

Maan zor zor se chilatha…..

Rajinder aathi hai….

Rajinder: kya baat hai? Kyun chilathe ho?

Maan: maa, ye Geet ko dekho kaise mujhe andar rakhkke darwaza band kardhi, kholo jaldhi

Rajinder ko lagtha Geet gusse mein ye sab karthi hai…..

She opens the door….

Maan comes out….

He has a big smile on his face…..

Maan: toh mein jeet gaya

Geet: ye toh cheating hai

So saying she runs…..

Maan chases her….

He cathches her……

Maan: kahan bhaagthi ho?

Geet: par door toh buaji ne kola, aapne nahi

Maan: meinne kab kaha mein door kholoonga, meinne kaha 5 minute mein mein bahar nikhalkke dikhaoonga, aur meinne kardhiya, ab teri bari

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, mein tayaar hoon

He gets closer….

Geet gets back…..

Maan: hare kade kade kya dekh rahi ho? jaldhi karo

Geet blinks…..

Geet: mein nahi kar sakthi

Maan: nahi kar sakthi?

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh teek hai mein hi detha hoon

So saying he kisses her on her cheeks….

Geet wahan se bhaag jaathi….

She rubs off her cheeks as she runs…..

Maan looks at her & smiles…..

Kahan jaayegi?

Wapas yahi aana padega, haina?

Geet ko ye sab pasand nahi hai……

This is very bad in her dictionary…..

Ek ladhka ladhki ko kiss nahi kar saktha, haina babaji?

Geet toh aaise sochkke pareshaan ho jaathi hai……

Par Maan is not at all worried, ye toh usska haq hai, haina?

Geet ko kiss karna koi galthi toh nahi ho saktha,

Waise ye meri hai, toh mein kuch bhi kar saktha…..

Donno ke soch mein thoda farak hai, lekhin pyaar toh same haina?

Maybe as a boy Maan has decided what's next in his life, shadhi toh ek na ek din karna hi padega, jab itne pyaari dulhan paas hai toh kissi aur ko kyun dhoonde?

Geet can't decide on her own, it's always been the parents who decide for the girl, kaun hoga usska jeevan saathi? Haina?

That thought keeps her in check whenever she thinks of Maan……

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awesome ff dear
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Part – 8

One day….

Mr.Khurana sab ke liye cake lekhe aathe hai…..

Geet kahin bahar gayi toh Rajinder ussskeliye ek piece reserve karke rakthi…..

When Geet comes she asks Annie to call geet….

Annie Geet ko bhulane jaathi….

Maan comes after his match….

He is very hungry….

He looks at the cake lying on the table….

He washes his hands & comes….

Geet bhi aajaathi…..

Maan is just having a bite….

It's chocolate cake….

Geet ko bahut pasand hai….

Annie: maa, bhai ko dekho, Geet ka cake ko bhi kha rahe hai

Rajinder: Maan, woh Geet ke liye hai, ussko dedo

Maan gives it to Geet…….

Geet: ye toh toota hai

Maan: nahi chahiye?

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh teek hai….

He walks off with the cake…..

Geet looks at it disappointed……

Annie: bhai mere saath bhi hamesha aaisa hi karthe

Rajinder donno ko garmagaram samose lakhe dethi…..

Geet is still thinking of the chocolate cake…..

Woh mera tha? She is not at all happy…..

Next day she goes to her naani's place….

Maan wants her to stay back….

But how can he stop her….it's her wish…..

MaybeAnnie can stop her……Maan asks Annieto ask Geet to stay back…..

But Annie kehthi hai ki Geet nahi rukhegi, woh pehle hi Geet ko rokhne ki koshish kar chuki hai…..Geet apne mausi aur usske beti Pinky se milne jaarahi hai…..

Pinky Geet ki best friend hai…..Geet se choti hai aur hamesha Geet didi Geet didi kehkke Geet ke peeche hi goomthi…..she looks up to Geet as an elder sister just as Geet looks up to Sam…..

Geet ki mausi bhi Geet ko bahut pyaar karthi hai…..

Geet aur Naani har vacation mausi ke ghar chale jaathe hai…..

Ab Geet Hoshairpur aagayi toh usskke paas yahi waqt hai sabse milne ka…..

She was just waiting for the holidays and there she is ready to go….

Maan just stares her till she leaves his sight…..

After a week Geet comes back…….

She would be waiting at the bus stop….

Ranno asks Handaji to pick her up from the bus stop….

Lekhin Handaji rashthey mein unkki pinnewala dhost ko milthe hai aur usskke saath chale jaathe hai…..

Geet gets down at the bus stop and looks around for her father…..

He is not there……Geet is worried….

Ab kya karegi? She had to walk to her house, it's about a couple of kms…

Maan ab scooter chalana seekh jaatha aur Khuranaji ke scooter ko lekhe pure Hoshairpur goomthe rehtha….

Geet starts walking …..she hears someone blowing the horn loud….

She gets annoyed by the repeated horn and she moves to the side….

Still she hears the horn and turns back to see who that idiot is?

It's Maan, he had blowed the horn to stop her…..

Maan is happy to see her back…..

Maan: Geet, tum wapas aagayi?

Geet doesn't respond…she keeps walking……

Maan stops the scooter in front of her and blocks her way…..

Geet: hat jao, mujhe dher ho rahi hai, maa doondhthi hogi

Maan: hare, mere saath aao, mein bhi ghar hi jaa raha hoon

Geet: nahi, papaji mujhe lene aayenge

Maan: hare. Uncleji ne hi mujhe bheja hai

Geet doesn't believe….actually Maan is lieing ……..

Maan: hare, uncleji ko kuch zaroori kaam aagaya, warna ab tak tujhe lene aathe honge, haina?

Geet thinks for a while….maybe he is teling the truth…..

Geet stops and looks at the scooter….

Maan: aao, beito

Geet decides to go with him……

Maan is very happy…..he just flies as if he is racing….

Geet ko bahut dar lagtha…..

Geet teek se scooter ko pakad nahi payi….

Maan ko bhi pakad nahi sakthi….

She struggles to hold on to the scooter….

But Maan just keeps increasing the speed…..

Geet looses her hold and she falls off…..

Maan looses the balance and he too falls with the scooter…..

Geet is hurt and she starts crying…..

Maan: chup…..builkul chup

But Geet starts crying louder…..

Maan gets scared……he leaves that place leaving Geet alone with the scooter….

Maan ne chori chori khuranaji ke pocket se chabhi lekhe aaya hai….

Khuranaji is already searching him……

Poor Geet! She is too afraid to go home….

How could she leave the scooter there and leave….it's heavy for her to lift it…..

She stands there crying…..

Luckily Ramu kakka her neighbor comes that way….

He thinksthat Geet was riding and she had fallen…..

Ramu: Geet, ye tumne kya kiya hai?

Geet: meinne kuch nahi kiya

Ramu: aao mere saath, tumme ghar chodtha hoon

He takes the scooter and Geet back home……

Ranno is waiting for Handaji and Geet….

She finds Geet blleding and comes running….

Ranno: Geet, kya hua?

Rajinder aur Mr.Khuranaji bhi aajaathe….

Geet explains her what happened….

Mr.Khuran is really mad at Maaan…..

Raji: hare, iss ladhke ko kya akerin? Dekho bechari ko kaise ghiradhi usne

Khuranaji: aur toh aur Geet ko akhele chodkke bhaag gaya, bewakhoof

Ranno: ussko kyun daandhthe ho? ye toh Handaji ki galthi hai, hamesha ki tarah pinne chale gaye

Raji: lekhin Geet toh ladhki hai, kahin haath pher toot jaatha toh kya karenge? Aur muh pe koi chot lagjaatha toh kya kar sakthe?

Khuara: aane do tera ladla ko, tumne toh apne pyaar se ussko bigadkke rakha hai

Raji: haanji, aaj mein aapko rokhnewali nahi hai, aap kuch bhi karkke ussko teek kardhi

Khuranaji waits for Maan….

Maan comes home late in the evening…..

Khuranaji ussko pakadthe hai ….

Maan tries to escape, but Khuranaji gives him left and right….

Handaji comes to rescue him…..

Handaji: hare khurana, pagal ho gaya kya? Kyun mere sher ko marthe ho?

Khrana: tum hat jao, aaj toh mein issko chodnewala nahi

Handa: Maan, aao mere saath

Handaji Maan ko wahan se lekhe jaathe……

Handaji: Ranno

Ranno comes out…..Geet bhi bahar aathi…..

Maan is also hurt his legs……his knees are bruised….

Ranno medicine lekhe aathi…….

Maan is still scared….

He looks at Geet….

Geet ko bhi waise hi elbows aur knees pe chot lag gaya tha….

Nothing serious……

Handaji: tum daro mat, jab meinne cycle chalana seekha tha, aaisa hi ghir gaya tha, ye toh sabkke saath hotha hai

Ranno: haan, tum fikar mat karo, tummare papaji ka gussa bhi dhere dhere tanda ho jayega, tum aao kuch khalo

Ranno takes him in……

Rajinder comes and takes him home…….

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part 7 n 8
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Part – 9

Childhood days are over…….

Ab Geet bhi badi ho jaathi…..

Ab Geet pehle se bhi bahut sharmili ho gayi….

You know the teen age years…..aur uss waqt ka changes bhi nazar aatha hai…

Iss waqt hummare andar ke chemistry bhi kaam karna shuru kartha haina?

Maan bhi ab bahut lamba ho gaya hai…..

Aur usska voice bhi break ho gaya hai….he is turning into a man….

He too has started trimming his facial hair…..

Now she stays away from Maan…..

Maybe kuch kuch hotha hai…….

Next week Mr.Khurana gets them cake Maan takes two pieces & runs….

Annie:maa, bhai do do cake lekhe jaa rahe hai

Rajinder: jaane do, tum apna cake kalo

Maan goes to see Geet….

Maan: Geet…Geet

Ranno: Maan?

Maan: woh maa ne Geet ko ye denne ko kaha tha

Ranno: Geet andar hi hai

Maan goes in…..

Geet nahake aayi hai….

Bhaal sukha rahi hai……

Maan comes…..

Geet is taken aback….

Ye yahan kya kar rahe hai?

Geet: aap?

Maan doesn't answer….

He is just looking at her…..

He couldn't take his eyes off her….

Geet: didi bahar gayi hai

Maan: mein tumse milne hi aaya hoon

Geet: kyun?

Geet is scared….

Maan: ye lo

Geet looks at the cake…..wahi chocolate cake……

Geet : mere liye hai

Maan: haan

Geet is very happy…..

She takes one & enjoys it….

Maan just admires her….

Geet katam karthi…..

Maan: achaha hai?

Geet: bahut achcha

Maan: toh ye bhi khalo

Geet: aap ke liye?

Maan: mujhe toh sirf dekhna hai ki tum kaise khaathi ho

Geet: kya?

Maan: kuch nahi, mein kha chukka hoon

Geet dusra cake bhi khaalethi….

Maan is now satisfied…..

Geet is also double happy…..

Maan suddenly remembers her wounds…..

He looks at her elbows….they are fine…..just a small scar…….

He lifts her skirt and looks at her knees…

Geet didn't expect that…..

She just gets nervous and is scared…..

Maan looks at her wound….

It's a little deeper and is still brown…..

Maan: bahut dard hua hoga, haina Geet?

Maan looks at her…..she has gone pale….she is so scared…..

Geet: nahi, ab teek ho gaya

She hurriedly covers her legs…..

Maan moves back…….Geet runs away…….

Aaisa hi Maan ko ab lagne laga hai ki Geet usski hai…..

Ye kaisa ehsaas hai? ab ye log toh pyaar ka matlab bhi nahi jaanthe?

Phir bhi donno ke beech mein ek naya bandan shuru ho jaatha hai….

Waqt ke saath saath ye bandan bhi bahut masbhoot hothe jaatha hai…..

Par ye baat ko donno hi pehle nahi maanthe…..

They keep telling themselves that ye galat hai, aaisa nahi ho saktha….

Maan dhere dhere jaanne laga ki ye ehsaas ko dabana bahut mushkil hai….

Aur Geet ko patha chalega ki woh aaise Geet ke barein mein sochtha toh Geet ko bahut bhura lagega aur woh Maan se baat karna bhi band karegi, hiana?

Issiliye Maan apne feelings ko apne paas hi chupakke rakhtha…..

Maan ka hi ye haal hai toh Geet kya kar sakthi?…..

Geet toh ab Maan ke samne aane se bhi darthi……

Kahin apne andar ki raaz ussko patha chale jaatha toh…..

Maan Geet ke barein mein bahut uuncha sochtha, ye dusron ki tarah nahi hai….

Ye bahut achchi ladkhi hai, padaye ke alawa kuch bhi nahi jaanthi?…..

Ye bahut nadhaan hai, boli bali hai, aaisa hi image hai Geet ki…..

Ab Geet ko bhi apne image ko maintain karna padega haina?

Sabko kaise patha hoga ki Geet ke andar kya kya badlaav ho raha hai…..

It's all the harmones working, she is blooming……

Ye pyaar vyaar toh achche bachen nahi karthe, haina babaji?

Maan is also busy preparing for his board exams….

Winter holidays mein aaya hai….

Maan ko bhi Geet ki bade hone ki kabar miljaatha….

Ab Geet Maan ko dekhte hi bhaag jaathi…..

Teek se baat bhi nahi karthi…..

Baat kya, Maan se ladna bhi band karthi….

Samne aathi toh ladayi shuru hogi….

She keeps hiding from Maan…….

Annie se milnne bhi nahi aathi….

Annie hi Geet ko milne jaathi…..

Maan bhi Geet ko dekhne ki koshish kartha….

Ye ladhki ko kya ho gaya?

Ye itna ajeeb kyun behave kar rahi hai?..….

School mein bhi kitne ladhkiyaan saath padthi hai….

Woh toh aaise nahi hai….

Sam ko bhi dekhlo….

Issko dekhkke ladhkon bhi darte hai….

She is so bold & shrewd….

Maan is puzzled by the sudden change……..

Annie bhi ab thoda chup ho gayi….

Shayad iss umar mein aaisa hi hotha?

During that holidays Maan falls sick…….

He has got chicken pox…..

Year end haina? Bahut sare record work pending hai….

Sam is also very busy completing her work…..

Ab Maan ka records bhi complete karna haina?

Sam takes them with her…

She has to help him know?

But she has got a lot of work herself….

She asks Geet to help her finish Maan's records….

Geet ye sab bahut achche se karthi….

She draws & writes neatly…..

Geet: tummara friend haina? Tum hi karo

Sam: par mera kaam kaun karega?

Geet: mujhe bhi padna haina?

Sam: Geet dekho woh kitna suffer kar raha hai, ye chota sa help bhi nahi karogi?

Geet had to do it……..

She is happy to help him….

She sits with Sam & completes the records…..

Maan comes to know this…..

He is also happy…….

He is better now…..

He is getting ready to go back to school…..

He looks at his records….

Even Maan wouldn't have done such a good work….

He likes to thank Geet….

Aaise hi Geet se ek bar mil bhi jaayega….

Warna ye ladhki toh ghar se bahar hi nahi nikalthi…..

Maan goes to see her….

Geet pad rahi hai….

Maan: tu toh ab 10th exams ke liye bhi tayaar ho gayi, haina?

Geet: kya?

Maan: hare mere kaam bhi tumne hi kardhi

Geet bahut nervous hai….

Ye yahan kyun aaya hai? Ab kya karega?

Geet: woh didi ne kaha toh mujhe karna pada

Maan: toh ye tummare didi ke liye hi kiya hai tumne?

Geet: haan

Maan : mere liye nahi?

Geet: nahi…..

Maan looks into her eyes….

Geet ko kuch kuch hotha hai….

Maan: sach sach bathao? Ye tumne mere liye hi kiya haina?'

Geet ab joot nahi bol sakthi…

Geet: haan

Maan: kyun?

Geet: woh, aap bimar the

Maan: issiliye?

Geet: haan

Man: aur kuch nahi?

Geet: nahi

Maan gets closer….

Ranno: Geet

Geet : maa bhula rahi hai….

Geet bhaag jaathi…..

Maan smiles & leaves…. Ye ladhki sach mein pagal ho gayi….haina babaji?

Mujhe dekhkke aaise kyun bhaagthi? Shayad mein ab thoda bada ho gaya hoon? toh mujhe dekkke dar jaathi?...

She controls her feelings and tries to suppress any unexpected thoughts, she tries hard to keep her mind clear of such unwanted stuff, but it gets tougher with Maan hanging around, when he is away from town then it's a little easier for her to keep him away from her mind, Geet feels guilty that she is turning into a bad girl, that's what she thinks for sure……

This is the time for her to study and not get distracted like this, but this Maan doesn't know about her troubles and keeps getting closer and closer everyday….

He is excited about the new feelings he had discovered and wants to explore more…… so Geet starts avoiding him…..maybe that will help her overcome this problem….

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Part – 10

Sam aur Maan ke jaane ke badh Geet unkko thoda miss karthi….

Ab Geet chahe toh bhi kisse ladegi? Sam bhi nahi aur Maan bhi nahi hai….

Ek Annie hai…aur usskke saath ladkke kya faida?

Phir Geet hi akhela ho jayegi…..

Annie aur Geet ki toh itna achcha chemistry hai ki donno ki soch aur pasand hamesha mil jaathi…..

Donno Maan se takraar karthe rehte hai…..

Lekhin phir bhi donno Maan ka har kaam karthe hai….

Par kitna bhi kaam karlo Maan apne kamre ke andar kissi ko bhi aane nahi detha……Annie ko bhi nahi…..

Aur usskke koi bhi cheez ko Annie haath nahi laga sakthi….

Annie Rajinder aur apne papa se hamesha complain karthe rehthi…….

Maan ke jaane ke badh Maan ka kamra band hi rehtha…..

It's lodhi time.…..

Rajinder bhi ghar saaf karthi hai…..

Maan ka kamra bhi saaf karna haina?

She opens it….

Annie is curious to know what's behind those doors……

She quietly creeps in…..

Geet bhi aajaathi……

Geet: buaji…..

Mr.Khurana: hare Geet, aao, Annie aur tere buaji upar hai

Geet: teek hai, mein jaakke dekhthi hoon

Geet: Annie

Geet is surprised…..ye toh Maan ka kamra hai…….

Ye Annie yahan kya kar rahi hai?

Annie: ssshhh chup

Geet is very excited to know what's in there, ye Maan ka room haina?

Lekhin thoda dart oh hai, ussko patha chalega toh kya sochega?

Geet: yahan kya kar rahi ho? Tummare bhai ko patha chalega toh kya hoga?

Annie: ussko kaise patha chalega? Woh toh school mein hai

Rajinder: Geet, tum kab aayi?

Geet: maa aapko bula rahi hai, sadhiwala aaya hai

Rajinder: teek hai, tum donno ye saaf karlo,mein abhi aathi hoon..

Ab woh kab aayegi ye toh ye donno jaanthe hai….

Ab toh woh do ghante se pehle nahi aayegi…..

Annie: ho jaye?

Geet: haan

Geet ko ye koi treasure hunt lagtha? Patha nahi aaj kaunsi badi treasure milegi?

Donno jaldhi jaldhi check karthe ki aakhir yahan aaisa kya hai…..

Kuch nahi bas sports items hai….

Skipping rope……aur koi exercise karne ki cheez…..

Maan is a fitness freak hiana?

Aur kuch hostel ke snaps hai…..

Ussmme ladhkon ka kuch party lagtha…..

Aur ye kya? Unnka room?

Wahan kuch ladhke smoke kar rahe hai….

Peeche koi models ke tasveer chipaya hai…..

Geet ussko dekhke blush karthi….

Ye kaise photo hai?

Annie: Geet kya hai?

Geet ussko jaldhi kissi magazine ke andar chupathi…

She doesn't want to spoil big bro's image….

Geet: kuch nahi, tu chal, ab humme jaana hai

They leave….

Next day…….

Maan & Sam bhi festival ke liye aathe hai….

Maan is very angry that someone peeped into his room…..

He asks Rajinder….

She says that she was only cleaning the room…..

Geet keeps giggling on seeing Maan….

Maan ko shak hotha…..

As usual he takes her to the terrace….

Maan: ye kya ho raha hai?

Geet: kuch nahi

Maan: joot

Geet: sach mein

Maan: kissne mere kamre ke andar gussa?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan mein sab jaantha hoon, Annie ne sab bathadhi

It's just a lie….Maan wants to know what happened….

Geet: kya? Annie ne kya kaha?

Maan: pakadgayi…toh mere kamre mein tumlog kya kar rahe the?

Geet: woh bas buaji saaf kar rahi thi

Maan: tum kya kar rahi thi?

Geet: mein unnki madat kar rahi thi

Maan: aur?

Geet: aur ?

Maan: jaldhi bathao

Geet: aur wapas aagayi

Maan: joot

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh woh photos kissne chupaya?

Geet: meine nahi

Maan: phir se joot

Geet: nahi

Maan: Geet

Maan stares…..

Geet dar jaathji…..

Geet: woh meinne kuch nahi dekha

Maan is happy that she is scared………

Maan: aur Annie?

Geet: ussne toh koi bhi photo nahi dekha

Maan: toh tumne dekha?

Geet: nahi

Maan: dekha toh bhi koi problem nahi hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: tumne hi photos ko chupaya haina, ab mamla katam, samji?

Geet nods…..Maan warns her not to tell others…..

Geet: aap smoke karthe ho?

Maan: meinne kaha mamla katam toh katam, koi sawaal nahi

Geet: matlab aap bhi?

Maan: ye tummara problem nahi hai

Geet ye sunke wahan se nikalthi….

Maan catches hold of her…..

Maan: Geet

Geet: ab kya? Ye aapka problem haina?

Maan: mein woh sab nahi kartha

Geet: mujhe kyun batha rahe ho?

Maan: toh tumne kyun poocha?

Geet: woh bas aaise hi

Maan: achcha, toh tumne aur kya kya dekha?

Geet : kuch nahi

Maan: kuch nahi?

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh teek hai

Geet: woh kisska kamra hai?

Maan smiles….

Maan: kyun?

Geet: aapka hai?

Maan: nahi, ab kush?

Geet: haath chodo

Geet bhaag jaathi…….

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