Pyaar Kiya Toh Darna Kya? - last part updated on pg 65 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
part 7
lovely...
so Maan is sure of his feelings?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
part 8
nice part...
arey hes an idiot...
he left her like that with the bike?
stupid...
good he got some beatings from his dad...
poor Geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
part 9
awesome...
poor Maan...
so Geet helped him in his work...
Geet too feels something for Maan?
arey waah...
nice...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
part 10
awesome...
so finally Geet gotta see Maan's room...
yesh hope Maan doesnt have any bad habits...
he always scares Geet off...
good hope hes like what he said to Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
PLZ UPDATE SOON DEAR WAITING
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: KasiKasi

PLZ UPDATE SOON DEAR WAITING

I normally update on weekdays only...
will be updating tomorrow...
if u are not aware of my previous FFs pls take a look...
Kismat connection...
Geet - hui Maan Ki pyaari...
Maan Ki Geet...
Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
love all the parts finished all in one go
it is really cute :) and sweet story

please keep updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part - 11

Geet ab holidays ke liye wait karthi rehthi…..

Kab Maan ayega?

She kind of likes his attitude….

Likes his bossy funda….

After seeing Ranno take charge of the family alone, Geet likes to play the second fiddle, she wants to have someone woh would lead her in life….ek saathi jo har waqt saath detha ho…..

Ye Maan thoda akdu hai….lekhin chalega…

Ye koi nayi baat nahi hai, Geet toh kab se Maan ko jaanthi…….

She is used to his short tempered nature…..gussa bhi kartha aur jitna gussa kartha utna hi pyaar bhi kartha…haina?

Maan being the man of the house he teaches Annie how to ride a bike……

He has got a new two wheeler…….scooty hi hai….

Abhi toh issi se kaam chalana hoga…..ye bhi kitne mushkil se milla hai…..

Saath saath Sam aur Geet ko bhi sikaatha…..

Sam has already tried riding her friend's scooty….

She is quite comfortable riding this….

Geet thoda struggle karthi….

Ussko extra classes detha….

He likes to spend time with her alone….

Riding sikhaane ke bahane mein Maan Geet ko har din ek nayi jagah lekhe jaatha….

Geet itne din Hoshiarpur mein hi thi lekhin woh itne places ko jaanth bhi nahii…

Geet ko bhi mazaa aatha……

Kabhi kabhi Maan thoda kareeb jaane ki koshish kartha toh dar jaathi….

Then Maan realizes that she is not comfortable & keeps away….

Ab Geet bachchi nahi haina?

Maan Geet se thoda dhoor hi rehtha….

He too feels the same way…..

Iss ladhki mein kuch toh baat hai jo doosron mein nahi…

He doesn't feel the same with the other girls…..

Not that he doesn't like girls …….he is so popular among girls at school…..

He hangs out with them quiet comfortably….other boys are even jealous……..

Patha nahi Geet ke saath hi ye kyun hotha?

Geet bhi riding seekh gayi….

Maan ke wapas jaane ke badh Annie aur Geet hi usski bike ko use karthe hai….

Sam ka bhi kudh ka scooty chahiye thi….

Mr.Handa gets her one…..

Sam is very happy…..

Holidays mein riding hi karthe rehte…..

Geet ko toh Maan ka bike hi zyada pasand hai….

Patha nahi kyun?

Geet apna ye feelings ko apne dil mein hi chupakke rakhthi….

Maan se toh bahut kam batein karthi…

Woh bhi jab Sam aur Annie saath mein ho tab….

Koi general batein hi karthi….

Lekhin Maneet toh apne pyaar apne aankhon se hi karthe haina?

Maan ko bhi ye patha hai….Maan toh hamesha Geet ki mann ki baat usske aankhon se hi jaanletha……Geet ki aankhen hi itne din se Maan se pyaar ki batein karthe rahe aur aage bhi aaisa hi chalega…..

Issme baathon ki koi zaroorat hi nahi padi……

Aaisa hi ek din Geet Annie ko milne jathi ….

Geet: Annie…Annie

Rajinder: aao Geet

Geet: Annie kahan hai?

Rajinder: woh apne papa ke saath bahar gayi hai

Geet: teek hai, mein badh mein aathi

Geet ghar se nikhalthi toh tabhi Maan andar aatha…..

Geet jaldhi jaane ki koshish karthi….

Maan: hare , kahan bhaag rahi ho?

Geet: woh, Annie bahar gayi hai

Maan: toh?

Geet: mein chalthi hoon

Maan: kyun? Sirf Annie se milna hai?

Geet: nahi

Maan: hum sabse milne nahi aayi?

Geet: nahi

Maan: kya?

Geet: mujhe jaana hai

Maan: hare itna jaldhi bhi kya hai?

Geet: mein chalthi hoon

Maan: rukho

Maan Geet ke haath pakadtha….

Geet looks scared…..

Maan haath chodtha….

Maan: mere saath aao

Geet: nahi

Maan: hare, sam ke exam papers mere paas hai, aao mein tumme detha hoon, tum ussko dedo

Aao mere saath

Maan ussko upar lekhe jaatha….

Maan kuch doondhne ki natak kartha….,

Maan: tujhe patha hai ki teri didi do subjects mein fail ho gayi

Geet gets angry, meri didi aaise nahi hai, she is smart, ye mazak kar raha hai…

Geet: toh kya aap sare subjects mein fail ho gaye ho?

Maan: toh tumme yakheen nahi hotha, ye dekho

Maan shows her the paper…..

Geet looks at them….

Maan keeps admiring her……he steps closer….

Geet nervous ho jaathi….usske dil ki dhadkan tez ho jaathe….

Maan could feel her heart beat…he is so close to her…..nearly touching her….

Geet steps back and starts to run….

Maan: Geet, ye papers

Geet: aap hi dedo

Maan suddenly closes the door and hold her back….

Geet looks scared…….

Maan: mein kya koi jungli janwar dikhtha hoon?

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh mujhe dekhke itna kyun darthi ho?

Geet stands there blinking….

Maan toh Geet ko hi gurkke rehtha….….

Maan: beito

Geet: nahi

Maan: meine kaha beito

Geet sits……she takes a look around……

Maan ka photo table mein hai….

Geet usko hi dekhke rehthi….

Maan: usko kya dekh rahi ho? Mein yahan hoon, mujhe hi dekhlo

Geet blushes……

Maan: achcha lagtha hoona?

Geet ko patha nahi kya kahe?

Maan: kuch toh bolo

Geet: achcha photo hai

Maan: toh photo achcha hai?

Geet: nahi

Maan: mein achcha hoon?

Geet: mujhe jaana hai

Geet runs away….

Maan: hare jawab toh dekhe jao, ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardegi, kuch bolthi bhi nahi aur kuch sunthi bhi nahi

Aaisa hi Geet ke aankhon padkke Maan usska mann ki baat ko jaanne ki koshish kartha…

Kahin Geet Maan ke barein mein aaisa nahi sochthi jaisa Maan Geet ke barein mein sochtha, toh? It's always safe to confirm it, haina?

Dusron ke barein mein Maan fikar nahi kartha, woh kya sochthe ya kya chahathe?

Bas Geet ki dil ki baat ko jaanna hai, Maan ko ab shak honne laga hai ki Geet bhi aaisa hi apne feelings ko hide karne ki koshish karthi rehthi hai…..

Geet shayad jitna bhi koshish karthi phir bhi Maan ko dekhthe hi usska chehra lal ho jaatha aur usske dil ki baat chere mein saaf saaf nazar aatha……upar se usske dil ki dhadkan bhi tez honne lagtha hai, yahi kaafi haina?

Maan ye sab dekhkke Geet ke feelings ko pehchaantha….aur ab Maan ne confirm kar hi lya hai ki Geet hi usske zindagi ka pyaar hai…….

Abhi toh shuruwaat hai, ab dhere dhere Geet bhi ye baat ko chupa nahi sakthi ki Geet Maan ko chahathi hai……

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Posted: 12 years ago
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love the update :) please keep updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 11
awesome...
this ankhon me samjhna is getting better and better...
cont soon dear...

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