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part 46
awesome...
both the moms are competing...
lovely...
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part 47
awesome...
the lovely banter is so nice...
cute moments...
no hurt, anger or disappointment...
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part 48
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haye lover boy is here...
and their fights are so cute...
loved it so much dear...
cont soon dear...
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Part – 49

Next day…..

Maan goes to see Geet……

Ranno: hare Maan, tum kab aaye ho?

Handaji: Maan toh kal raat hi aagaya? Tum bhool gayi ho kya?

Ranno: aap toh nashe mein kuch bhi bolthe rehthe ho, thode dher chup raho

Maan: Geet kahan hai?

Ranno: Geet

Geet kitchen se bahar aathi……

Maan catches her hand and takes her up to her room……

Handaji: hare Maan

Ranno: kya Maan Maan kar rahe ho? aap Maan ko pehle bar dekh rahe ho kya?

Handaji: lekhin Ranno, Maan ?

Handaji is surprised…ye Ranno ko kya ho gaya?

Ranno: kya dekh rahe ho? aap kitne bar chup chupkke mujhse milne aaye the? Maan ko dekho kaise hummare samne hi haq se apne honnewali ko lekhe jaaraha hai

Handaji: babaji itne saal ke badh bhi mein issko samaj nahi paya? Ab mera nasha bilkul uthar gaya, mein chaltha hoon

Geet: Maan, ye kya kar rahe ho? chodo mere haath

Maan: Geet, tum kya kar rahi ho? raat ko milne aatha toh bahar nikhaaalthi ho, aur ab din mein sabke samne milne aatha toh bhi problem hai? ab mein kya karoon?

Geet: kuch nahi, bas dus din intrezaar nahi kar sakthe?

Maan: kaise kartha? Tum kahin dhoor rehthi toh shayad kar saktha, lekhin tum toh mere samne hi ho

Geet: toh teek hai, kal se mein kahin dhoor chale jaathi

Maan pulls her close and hugs her….

Maan: ab tum mujhse bachkke kahin nahi jaa sakthi

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan

Geet: Maan, Ye kya hai?

Geet looks at the cover…..

Maan: ye tere liye hai

Geet opens and finds a beautiful sadhi….

Geet: Maan, bahut sundar hai, kahan se lekhe aaye ho?

Maan: ye maa ne tere liye bheja hai, ussne kaha ki mein tujhe kahoon ki ye meinne laya hai kaas apne honnewali biwi ke liye

Geet: toh aapne aaise kyun nahi bathaya?

Maan: kyunkke mein tumse kabhi joot nahi bol saktha

Geet hugs him and kisses his cheeks……

Maan: yahan nahi, yahan

Maan shows his lips….

Geet: aaise chote chote baathon se hi aap mujhe aapki deewani banathe ho

Maan: aur tum apne chori chori aankhon se mere dil ko churathi ho Geet

Maneet eyelock……mahi…….

Maan: aur ek baat Geet

Geet: mein buaji ko kuch nahi bhathaoongi

Maan: ab toh tum bina koi lafz ke mere mann ki baat ko samajthi ho Geet seva ek baat ki

Maan looks at her with lust……

Geet: aaise kyun dekhthe ho?

Maan: mein aaise nahi toh kaise dekhtha?

Geet: hare aaise mat dekho, mujhe kuch kuch hotha hai

Maan: aur tum aaise sharmathi toh mujhe bahut kuch hotha hai Geet

Geet closes his eyes with her hand……

Maan traces her beauty with his fingers….

Ye toh aur bhi katarnaak hai….

Geet: ab aap jao, warna sab kya sochenge?

Maan: Geet?

Geet: jao jao, shadhi ka kitna kaam shir ke upar pada hai?

Maan: aur ye kaam ?

Geet: ye toh shadhi ke baat kar sakthe ho

Geet pushes him out and locks the door…….

This is not fair…

Maan toh kitne umeed lekhe aaya tha…

Geet ke saath miss hogayi sagaayi ko compensate karna chahatha tha…

Ye kuch din Geet ke saath bithana chahatha tha….

Lekhin ye ladkhi toh ussko koi dushman ki tarah dekhhti hai….

Ussko choona toh bahut dhoor ki baat hai, paas jaana hi ab mushkil ho gaya….

Aaise nahi chalega Geet, ab Maan tumme nahi chodega….

Next morning, Maan as usual heads to Geet's room….

Ab yahan Geet akheli kahan rehthi….

She has to share the room with Pinky, her mausi's daughter….…..

Pinky has come for the sagaayi itself and will stay with Geet till shadhi…..

Geet naharahi hai aur Pinky abhi bhi sorahi hai….

Maan knocks….Pinky comes to open the door….

She is half asleep….

Maan ko lagtha hai ki Geet hai…..

He holds her hand and drags her out….

Maan: Geet, tum ab tak sorahi ho?

Pinky: jijaji

Maan is shocked. Ye laun hai, nayi saali?

Pinky used to call him Maan bhai till now…..

Maan: tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Pinky hasthi hai…..

Maan stares…….Pinky dar jaathi……

Pinky: woh jijaji, aap? Yahan? Iss waqt?

Maan: haan. Kyun? Mein kabhi bhi apni honnewali biwi se milsaktha hoon, haina?

Pinky: haan jijaji

Maan gets irritated…..

Maan: ye kya? jijaji, jijaji kyun bhulathi ho?

Pinky: ab aap Geet didi se shadhi karnewale haina?

Maan ko abhi samaj mein aatha ki ye sahi kehrahi hai….

He is not used to this new relationship, ab Maan jijaji ban gaya

Kal Sam ka beta bhi Maan ko chachu kehkke bhula raha tha

Geet chachi hai toh Maan chachu hi haina?

Maan: teek hai, ab tum jao, mujhe Geet se milna hai

Pinky: kya? Par jijaji

Maan stares her….Pinky leaves…..

Maan andhar jaakke darwaza band kartha aur chup chap bisthar mein Pinky ki tarah leit jaatha….

Geet comes out and finds Pinky still sleeping…..

Geet: Pinky, utjao

Maan pretends to sleep….

Geet: Pinky, Hare Pinky

Geet sprinkles water on her …..

Maan suddenly catches hold of her and pulls her….

Geet loses her balance and falls on him…..

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Part – 50

Geet is shocked to see Maan there…..

Geet tries to get up….but Maan won't leave her….

Geet: aap yahan kaise? Koi aayega toh?

Maan: koi nahi aayega, tum itna kyun darthi ho? ab tum meri ho gayi ho, tumme darne ki koi jaroorat nahi

Geet: ha ha ha, Mr.Khurana ab din mein sapna dekhna band karo aur jao, mujhe bahut sara kaam hai, aaj parlour jaana hai

Maan: Geet, tumme wahan jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi, waise meri mishty toh hamesha sundar lagthi, aur ab toh abhi abhi khilthe hue phool ki tarah aur bhi sundar lagthi hai

Maan pulls her closer…….

Geet: chodo mujhe

Maan: nahi chodoonga

Geet: mein chilaaoongi

Maan closes her mouth…..

Maan: chup… bilkul chup

Maneet eyelock…..mahi……

Maan: Geet, jaldhi tayaar ho jao, humme bahar jaana hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tum aur mein aaj bahar jaa rahe hai

Geet: aap ke saath akhele?

Maan: haan

Geet: nahi nahi, maa mujhe jaane nahi degi

Maan: meinne sab se baat karli, ab tum jaldhi karo, humme dher ho rahi hai

Geet: mazak mat karo

Maan: mazak nahi hai, jaldhi, aur ek baat, tum apne sagayiwale kapde apne saath lekhe aao

Geet: kyun? Hum masterji ke paas jaarahe hai kya? Shadhi ke kapde toh mein already silwane dechuki hoon

Maan: kya?

Geet: hare, hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan: woh photographer chahatha hai ki hum kahin outdoor mein kuch photos lethe toh achcha hoga

Geet: kya? Ye toh shadhi ke badh bhi kar sakthe haina?

Maan: shadhi ke badh toh hum Delhi chale jayenge

Geet: mujhe toh ye teek nahi lagtha

Maan: meinne sabko kehdhiya hai, tumme fikar karne ki zaroori nahi

Geet: aap itna zidd kyun karthe ho? ye photos shadhi ke badh lesakthe hai, aap abhi iss photo shoot ko cancel kardo, mujhe aur bhi kitna kaam hai

Maan: nahi nahi, aaise nahi ho saktha, meinne pehle hi sagaayi ko miss kardhiya hai aur issko bhi miss nahi kar saktha

Geet: aapko sagaaye se zyada iss photo shoot mein itna interest kyun hai?

Maan: ab dekho meinne sagaayi ko miss kardhi

Geet: Toh?

Maan: issi baat ko lekhe tum hummare pothon se bhi ek din shikaayat karegi ki aapke dadaji ne sagaayi ke din bhi mujhe akhela chod dhiya tha, woh bahut bade Dhust danav hai

Geet: haan, bilkul aaisa hi karoongi

Maan: ab aaisa nahi kar sakthi

Geet: kyun?

Maan: mein ye photos dikhakke unko keh doonga ki meinne koi sagaayi miss nahi kiya hai, aapki Dadi jooti hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan

Geet: aapka kurtha toh tayaar haina?

Maan: haan haan, sagaayi ka kurtha toh tayaar hai, woh mein aaj pehennewala hoon, aur shadhi ka toh meinne socha hi nahi

Geet: kya? Aap kya kehrahe ho? sagaayi toh ho gayi hai, Issko ab shadhi mein pehenlo

Maan: nahi nahi, ye sagaayi ka hai toh mein issko shadhi mein kaise pehen saktha?

Geet: toh shadhi mein kya pehnoge?

Maan: Geet, abhi bhi dus din haina?

Geet: aap itna laparwa kaise ho sakthe? Meinne socha aap Delhi se hi lekhe aayenge, ab aapki kapde toh aap ko choose karna haina? Meinne socha mere kapde bhi aap select karenge, lekhin aap toh …….babaji mujhe pehle hi patha tha, aaisa hi hoga

Maan: Geet, kyun gabrathi ho? shadhi ke liye dulha kaafi hai, kapde ki kya zaroorat

Geet: kya?

Maan: mujhe apne dulhan ki chintha hai lekhin ussko toh meri kapde ki chintha hai

Geet: toh kya aap bina kapde ki mandap mein beitoge?

Maan: tum kaho toh hum adam aur eve ke avatar mein hi shadhi kar sakthe, sirf mein aur tum koi jungle mein, kitna maza ayega, haina?

Geet: babaji, innko shadhi karthi toh mujhe koi jungle ki tent mein hi apna ghar basanna padega, haina?

Geet apne cupboard se ek naya kurtha nikhaalthi hai….

Maan: ye kya hai?

Geet: Mr.Khurana, yahi hai aapka shadhi ka kurtha hai

Maan: wow Geet, tumne toh sare intrezaam karliya hai, ab mujhe bas tayaar hokke mandap mein jana hoga, thanks Geet

Geet: mujhe laga aap shadhi ke din hi aaoge, issiliye meinne pehle hi sare tayaari karli

Maan: aur kya kya tayaari kiya hai tumne?

Maan peeche se jaakke Geet ko hug kartha……

Someone knocks…… it's Pinky……

Geet : hare babaji, ab innko kaise sambaloongi?

Geet pushes him…..she opens the door….

Pinky: jijaji, ye lo coffee

Maan: tumne sabko bathadhi ki mein yahan hoon?

Pinky: haan, aap ko sabne dekhliya hai

Geet ko bahut sharam aathi…..

Geet: ye aapne kya kiya hai? ab sab mere barein mein kya sochenge?

Pinky: hare didi, aaisa moka bar bar nahi miltha, enjoy

Pinky leaves closing the door behind…..

Maan: teri behen toh tujhse bhi samajdar hai

Geet: aap pehle jao

Maan: hare, coffee toh peene do

Geet: woh mujhe do, aap apne ghar jaakke pilo

Geet snatches the coffee….

Maan: Geet koi apne pathi ko aaisa treat kartha hai kya?

Geet: aapki nautangi ab nahi chalegi, jao jao

Maan: teek hai, mein jaakke tayaar hotha hoon, tum bhi tayaar raho

Maan leaves…..

Geet gets ready……Pinky bhi tayaar hai…..

Maan: Geet, chalo

Pinky: haan jijaji, chaliye

Maan: tum? Tum kahan aarahi ho?

Geet: ye bhi mere saath aayegi, mujhe make-up karne mein madat karegi

Maan: kya? Meinne kaha haina, tumme make- up ki koi zaroorat nahi, aur isski bhi koi zaroorat nahi

Pinky: jijaji, Geet didi akhele kaise tayaar hogi?

Maan: mein hoona? Mein apni biwi ki madat kar saktha hoon, tum yahi raho

Maan Geet ke haath pakadkke ussko lekhe jaatha…

Geet: hare Maan, Pinky….Pinky

Maan: chup chap beito, mein tujhe kuch nahi karoonga, samji

Geet: kya? Kuch karneka sochna bhi mat, ye dekho

Geet shows him a pen knife…..

Maan laughs…..

Geet: kyun hasthe ho? aap ne kuch shararat ki toh mein aapko kuch bhi kar sakthi, samje?

Maan: teek hai, mein toh bahut dargaya

They drive to a neighbour's farm house……

Maan has arranged a photo shoot there…..

Photographer tayaar hai…..

Pehle casual snaps lethe hai…..

Then photographer asks Geet to change the dress….

Geet change karne andar jaathi….

Maan follows her….

Geet: aap kahan aarahe ho?

Maan: hare, mujhe bhi toh change karna haina?

Geet: pehle mein change karkke aathi hoon, phir aap kar sakthe

Maan: hare, dekho hummare paas zyada waqt nahi hai, jaldhi karna padega, haina

Geet: koi bahana nahi Mr, aap wait karo

Geet change karkke aathi…..

Maan bhi change karkke aatha….

they take some snaps...

Maan ki thodi masti ke saath...
Geet also enjoys a lot...
Maan has somehow made up for his sagaayi absence...
p.boy: sir, aapki thadi………

Maan: kya hai?

Geet looks at Maan's face….he has not trimmed his thadi properly…

Geet: Maan, Aapki stuble teek karkke aao

Maan: lekhin Geet, mere paas trimmer nahi hai

p.boy paaswali dukhaan se razer lekhe aatha…..

Maan washroom ke andar jaatha aur bahut dher hothi hai phir bhi bahar nahi aatha

P.boy knock kartha…..: sir…sir, sab teek haina?

Geet also comes and knocks…..

Geet: Maan, bahar aao

Maan opens the door and pulls her in and closes the door….

Geet: Maaan

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congrats dear for 50th part
nice update so maan doesnt want his grandchildrens think that he didnt attend his own engagement cermony😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 49
awesome...
ufff Maan gets irritated soon...
but Pinky was funny...
wont he be Mausa and Geet Mausi to Sam's kid?
nice one...
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part 50
awesome...
i was fearing u might end this FF in this part but u didnt...
yippee...
make it to 100 this time...
Maan is so naughty...
compensating it all for his absence...
cont soon dear...
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@bindu,hari12, maunacuty,sam1111
thanks ...😆
@deepa
sorry...I missed it...
thaks for the correction...😳
me too thinking of ending it here...
but got another 10 parts...
you can't escape that easy...😉
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