Pyaar Kiya Toh Darna Kya? - last part updated on pg 65 - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

304

Views

110.7k

Users

29

Likes

2.9k

Frequent Posters

ghsp2fan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Part – 55

Everyone is eagerly waiting for them…specially Annie……

Annie ko patha chaltha ki Geet aagayi hai…..

She comes to see her…..

Geet apne kamre mein hai….

Ussko patha nahi ki aaj raat ko kya pehne?

Sam se pooch sakthi, lekhin didi toh mujhse bhi zyada busy hai…..

Geet is looking at her wardrobe…

Annie comes in….

Annie: Geet, ek problem ho gayi hai

Geet: kya? Tujhe kya problem hai?

Annie: ab mein tere kamre ko sajaoon ya bhai ke kamre ko?

Maan just comes ….

Maan: Annie, ye kaise sawaal hai? obviously mere kamre ko

Geet: nahi nahi, Annie tum mere kamre ko sajao

Maan: aaise kaise Geet?

Geet: Annie ke shadhi ke din toh humne usske kamre ko hi sajaya tha aur didi ka bhi aaise hi hua tha, toh aaj tum mere kamre ko hi sajao

Maan gets closer to Geet….

Maan: hare Geet, aaj mere kamre mein toh kal tere kamre mein, hummra toh double damakka hoga

Annie: bhai, mein yahi hoon

Geet: tu chal…..Geet sharmathi

Maan: haan Annie, tumme kitna kaam hoga? Tu mere hi kamre ko sajao, teek se

Annie leaves…..

Maan gets naughty….

Geet: mujhe pareshaan mat karo, mein already confused hoon

Maan: tum kyun tension lethi ho? mein hoona? Mein sab sambaloonga

Maan hugs her from the back….

Geet: hare, mujhe toh ye bhi patha nahi ki mein ab kya pehnoon?

Maan: kuch bhi nahi

Maan looks at Geet as if he is serious……

Geet: Maaan

Maan: chalo mein hi choose kartha hoon
Maan chooses….
Geet: par ye toh bahut bhari hai

Maan: meinne kaha na, tum yahi pehno

Maan also chooses her jewels….

Geet: Maan, do din se ye sab pehenkke mein bahut tak gayi hoon, ab mujhse nahi hoga

Maan: woh toh sab ke liye tha, iss bar mere liye pehenlo Geet, please

Geet: teek hai

Maan keeps looking at her….

Geet: ab jao toh sahi, mujhe change karna hai

Maan: toh karlo, meinne kahan rokha?

Geet pushes him out and closes the door….

Maan ka kamra….

Geet ko andar bhejkke Annie darwaza band karthi……

Geet knocks…

Aniie: kya hai Geet?

Geet: hare, tere bhai andar nahi hai, tum darwaza kyun band karthi ho?

Annie: kya? Bhai kahan chale gaye?

Sam: Annie, tum wahan kya kar rahi ho? neeche aao

Annie: didi, bhai kamre mein nahi hai

Sam: kya?

They look out for Maan….

Maan just comes….

Sam: hare Maan, itne dher kahan the? Geet kab se tera intrezaar kar rahi hai

Maan: kya? Geet? Aur mera intrezaar? Mazak mat karo, teri behen toh ab tak ya toh sogayi hogi ya phir apne koi kaam mein busy hogi

Sam: sambalkke Maan, Geet bahut nadhaan hai

Maan: pehle teri behen ko samjao, aadhi raat ko chilathi toh mein kya kar saktha?

Sam: don't worry man, aaisa kuch nahi hoga, woh itna bhi nasamaj nahi hai

Maan: I hope so….

Maan bhi thoda nervous hai……

Jahan tak Maan Geet ko jaantha Geet kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar sakthi, haina babaji?

Maan looks a little worried……Vicky comes in search of his biwi, Sam…..

Vicky: tummare gyaan ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, haina Maan?

Maan just smiles…..

Vicky: ab tum chalo Sam, tummari tuition ka time ho gaya, ye teri behen ki shadhi ke chakkar mein hummare classes cut ho gaye hai

Sam: what?

Vicky: come on Maan, ab hum innko apna kamaal dikhathe hai, all the best

Vicky leaves with Sam…..

Geet is very nervous, ye Maan ab tak kya kar rahe hai?

She eyes the wedding gifts lyimg in one corner…. Eureka….she has got an idea…..

Geet ab innkko ek ek karkke kholthi toh kam se kaam do ganta lagega….

That way she could buy some time to settle….ab bahut tension ho rahi haina?

Maan coems closing the door behind him….

Geet hears him coming but just keeps on unwraping the gifts….

Lekhin ussko kya patha ki Maan ka saalon ka intrezaar aaj katam ho gaya aur Maan ab ek minute bhi rukh nahi saktha……..

Maan looks at the bed….Geet is not there…

Maan: ye Geet kahan chali gayi? Geeet

Geet: Maan, aap aagaye?

Maan: hare Geet, wahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: dekho ye kitna cute haina?

She shows a dancing doll……

Maan: babaji, iss ladhki ko kya ho gaya? Geet, ye sab aaj hi karna hai kya?

Geet: patha hai, aaj kholke dekhne ka maza kal nahi hoga

Maan: tumne sahi kaha Geet, tum apna gift kholo aur mein apna gift koltha hoon

Geet: ye kya hai? tera mera? Sab hummara hi haina?

Maan starts to unwrap his Mishty…..he starts with the jewels…

Geet freezes…

Geet: toh yahi hai aapka gift?

Maan: sshhh mujhe disturb mat karo

Maan continues……he lifts her & takes her to the bed….

Geet: Maaan

Maan: ssshhh

Geet: kam se kam light toh band karo, mujhe sharam aathi hai

Maan: Geet mujhe kitne bar yaad dilana padega ki ab humaari shadhi ho gayi hai

Geet: toh?

Maan: hare, lights off karoge toh mein apna gift ko kaise dekh saktha?

Geet: chup

Geet switches off the lights….

Maan: Geet, andhere mein kaise hoga? Mere liye toh ye pehli bar hai, koi experience bhi nahi hai

Geet: toh kya mein ek saal ki experience lekhe aayi hoon?

Maan: ab toh tum kuch zyada hi bolthi ho

Geet: achcha, bolna mera haq hai, mein chahoon toh raat bar bolthi rahoongi, aap kya karoge?

Maan: ab dekhtha hoon ki tum kaise bolthi ho

Maan shuts her mouth with his….Maan jumps into action……mahi……….

Donnaa thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
part 41-55
again m late not late super late...
grrr mera net...
loved the updates...
finally maaneet ki shadi ho gayi...
awesome...
priya111111 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
jitna dikhti hai utna bholi nahi hai geet😉😆
IshitaIrani thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
she is the most unique bride opening gifts on her sr
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
part 55
awesome...
lovely...
oh she didnt create problems for him...
cont soon dear...
ghsp2fan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Part – 56

Next day…shadhi ke rituals continue….

Shaam tak sab bahut tak gaye hai….guests bhi chale gaye….

Geet apne kamre mein hai….she is waiting for Maan……..

Aaj Sam bhi jaldhi sogayi hai…..jijaji wapas chale gaye toh Sam free ho gayi….

Aaj toh Geet thoda excited ho gayi hai….apne jadah pe haina…..

Maan is a little hesitant to go to her house…..

Itne saal toh chaltha raha lekhin patha nahi aaj kuch ajeeb sa lagtha….

This is the first time he is going to stay overnight at the Handa residence ……

Maan is about to enter the gate…..

He finds Handaji trying to walk, but not able to stand….

He is fully drunk….Handaji toh aaj pura nashe mein hai….

Who Maan ko rokhthe aur baat karthe rehthe hai….

Ahdaji: hale, mella sheerl , aao

Maan ko patha nahi kya karein?

Handaji keeps on blabbering something or the other….

Geet becomes restless….

Geet: hare babaji, galthi se aaj apne kamre mein jaakke sogaye hai kay?

Nahi nahi, Maan aaisa nahi karenge, haina?

Par ye Handaji rukhthe hi nahi….

Shuker hai babaji ki, Geet ka dua ko babaji ne sunliya hoga…..

Ranno comes out in search of Mr.Handa…..

She finds him holding back Maan from getting inside….

Ranno: hare aap aaj bhi?

Ranno bahut pareshaan hojathi….

Maan: koi baat nah

Ranno: hare Maan, Geet ko bhula lethe

Maan: woh…Geet kamakaam pareshaan ho jayegi

Ranno: tum andar jao, mein innkko sambalthi hoon

Maan: mein madat kartha hoon

This is not new for him, Maan helps her take him to their room….

Geet bahut tension mein hai….

Geet: babaji, ye sab ek jaise hi hothe hai, hare ye mard, haina? Shadhi ke pehle toh peeche hi goomthe, aur shadhi ho jaathi toh, sab kuch ulta, aane do unnkko

Maan comes….Geet keeps quiet…she is very angry….

Maan: Geet?

Geet: hare, itne jaldhi aagaye ho?

Maan: mujhse naraaz ho?

Geet: nahi toh, mein toh bahut kush hoon

Maan: woh Geet, mein ek zaroori kaam mein fusgaya tha

Maan Geet ko Handaji ke barein mein bathakke pareshaan nahi karna chahatha…..

Geet: achcha, aap jaake apna kaam karo, mujhe bhi packing karna hai

Geet gusse se apna trolley nikhalthi….she almost hits Maan……

Maan gets closer……

Geet: kya dekhthe ho? meri madat karo

She thrusts the bag in his hands…..

Maan throws it away…..

Geet: ooohhh aapki itni himmat?

Geet tries to get back the bag….

Maan catches hold of her hands and stops her…..

He looks into her eyes…..Maneet eyelock….mahi…..

Maan: pehle tum meri madat karo

Geet: kya?

Maan: yahan aao, mere paas

Geet comes near…

Maan hugs her tight….after a while Geet ka gussa gayab ho jaatha…..

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: ab teek ho?

Geet: hmm

Maan: patha hai Geet? Jab tum aaise mujhse gusse karthi toh aur bhi hot lagthi ho

Geet: achcha? aur kitne joot bologe?

Maan: nahi Geet, sachi

Geet: aapko maska marne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai

Maan: kya?

Geet smiles and tries to get away….

Maan catches her…..

Maan: Geet, mujhse bachkke kahan jaoge? Aaj tujhe patha chalega ki alsi MSK kaun hai?

Maan pushes her on the bed….

Geet: toh itne din mein aapki nakal se pyaar karthi thi? Toh shadhi kisskke saath kiya tha meinne? Aap se ya aapke nakal se?

Maan: mera mazak udathi ho?

Maan stares……

Geet: hare, mein toh dar gayi

Geet laughs…….she knows very well that Maan ki damkis yahan kaam nahi aayenge….

Maan: Geeet

Ab donno ki masthi shuru…….

Next morning….

Ranno Geet ko kal raat ke barein mein bathathi…

Geet goes to find Maan….

Maan apne kamre mein hai…..

Geet comes….she just runs and hugs him….

Maan: Geet, kya hua?

Geet: woh kal raat…..

Maan: toh teri maa se baat ho gayi?

Geet: hmm

Geet is quiet…she doesn't have words…..

She goes near the window and looks at her house….

Agar Maan ke jagah koi aur hotha toh kya hotha?

Geet wonders…..Vicky just hates this misbehavior of Handaji….

He has stopped talking with him……

He even suggested that Sam too stop talking to him so that he would realize his mistake and give up drinking….

But whatever it is, he is their father, they can't ignore him…..

Maan tries to cheer her up….

He goes and hugs her from behind…..

He is about to kiss her nape….

Geeet……….

Annie comes….

Maan steps back….

Ab toh ye Geet ka kamra ho gaya haina? Jab chahe Annie aaram se aa sakthi…haina?

Darwaza khula tha toh Annie aagayi…

Annie: Geet, jaldhi aao

Maan: Annie, tum jao, Geet ko thoda kaam hai

Annie looks worried….

Geet: Annie, kya hua? Tum itna udhaas kyun ho?

Ha ha ha …Geet ko apni nanad ki kitna parwa hai? Maan ko bhi apne behen ki itna parwa nahi hai……ye Geet toh kuch bhi nahi samajthi….Maan ko laga shadhi ke badh sab kuch badal jayega, lekhin yahan toh kuch nahi badalnewala….

Maan: Geet, abhi nahi...Annie tum jao, Geet badh mein aayegi

Geet: Maan, Annie bahut pareshaan hai

Maan: mere pareshaani ka kya hai Geet?

Geet: aap ki pareshaani thoda intrezaar kar sakthi…. Annie tu bathao, kya baat hai?

Annie: Geet, meri nayi salwar haina, woh lalwala, kahin nahi mil rahi hai, tumne kahin dekha hai kya?

Geet: hare mein toh tujhe bathana hi bhool gayi, woh tailor ne mere salwar ke saath bhej dhi

Annie: kya? Toh teri measurement ki hogi kya?

Geet: chal, jaakke dekhthe hai

Maan: Geet, kahan jaa rahi ho? rukho

Geet: mein abhi aathi hoon

Maan: Annie, mein ek kaam kartha hoon, Geet ko tere saath tere ghar hi bhej detha hoon, Geet aaise hi teri seva karthi rahegi

Geet: hare, bas 5 min, aap yahi rukho, mein abhi aathi hoon

Par Geet toh wapas nahi aanewali….

Maan ko bhi patha hai….ye toh aaise hi hai…..

ghsp2fan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Part – 57

Next week….

Everyone is getting ready to go to Delhi…

Sam toh pehle hi chali gayi…

Geet, Maan, Annie aur Ranno chalthe hai…

Maan has rented a house….

Ab toh Annie ke ghar mein nahi reh sakthe haina?

Ranno Geet ki madat karne aarahi hai….

Kitna kaam hai, sare saman khareedhna hai….

Sab ko apne apne jagah set karna hai….

Maan ko ye sab karne ki samay nahi hai…waise ye toh gahrwali ka kaam haina?

Maan ko ye sab patha nahi…woh toh Geet pe hi chodtha….

Sam also comes to help her…. Annie bhi aathi….

They keep shopping……arranging and rearranging things….

Aaise hi do chaar din chaltha…

Pehle din toh Maan ghar pe hi tha…lekhin ussko yahan koi kaam nahi hai…

Maan ne socha apne nayi nayi dulhan ke saath akhele rahega aur kuch toh masthi karega, shadhi ho gayi toh mahi mahi bantha haina?

Par ye ghar toh Hoshiarpur ka koi mela lagtha….

Ye log toh batein zyada aur kaam kam karthe hai….

Next day he gets back to work…

After a week….everything is settled…

Geet is still not satisfied….

But Maan says that she can do it later….Maan will help her….

Ranno too leaves….Handaji ko Dadi zyada din nahi sambal pathi….

Next day….Geet wakes up…..

Maan is missing…..

Geet: Maan…Maaan

Geet washroom mein check karthi…Maan wahan nahi hai…..

Geet: itne subhe subhe kya kaam hoga? Agar office jaan hi hai toh mujhse kehkke chalthe….babaji apne kaise pathi diya hai mujhko?

Maan: Geet, subhe subhe babaji ki shikayat kyun karthi ho? mujhe toh tumne hi chuna than a? babaji kya karenge?

Geet: Maan, aap subhe subhe kahan chale gaye?

Maan gives her the coffe he was hiding…..

Maan: ye lo

Geet: hmmm, coffee? Aap coffe bhi banathe ho?

Maan: haan, har subha mujhe jaldhi office jaan pagtha toh mein Annie ko kaise disturb kar saktha? Toh roz mein hi coffee banatha hoon

Geet takes a sip….: hare, ye toh abhut achcha hai

Maan: mujhe bhi aaisa hi coffe pasand hai

Geet: lagtha hai ki aapko kitchen se dhoor hi rakhna padega

Maan: kyun Geet? Coffee itni bhuri hai kya?

Geet: nahi nahi, ye toh bahut achcha hai,aap har kaam itne achche kaise karthe ho? agar aap khana pakana bhi shuru karthe toh mera khana kaise pasand aayega?

Maan: tum fikar mat karo, mein bas coffe banatha hoon

Geet: kya? Toh mere liye breakfast kaun banayega?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: mein mazak kar rahi thi, kal se mein jaldhi utkke coffee banathi hoon. Waise aap itne jaldhi kaise utthe ho?

Geet is used to waking up late, but Maan wakes up early and works out….

He needs his coffee that time…..

Maan: tum fikar mat karo, mein coffee bana saktha hoon, tum itne jaldhi utkke kya karogi? Tum so jao

Geet: nahi nahi, kal se dekho, mein kitne jaldhi utjaathi

Par agla din bhi Geet sojaathi….

Maan has switched off her alarm….

Geet wakes up and finds that she is late as usual...
she knows that Maan has switched off the alarm...
she goes and finds Maan at the garden...jogging...
Maan: Geet, tum utgayi?
Geet: aapne alarm ko kyun band kiya?
maan: meinne? nahi toh
Geet: joot mat bolo, shadhi hothe hi aap mujhse joot bolne lage?
Geet shows nakli anger...
Maan: teek hai, sorry, meinne hi kiya tha, ab tum itne subhe utkke kya koroge?
Geet: mein bhi aapkke saath walk karoongi, kitna maza aayega? aap toh har waqt office mein rehthe ho, yahi waqt hai aap ke saath hone ki, haina?
Maan: toh aaise baat hai
geet: haan
Maan: toh teek hai, aaj office ki chutti aur pura din M'am ke seva mein, teek hai
geet: sach?
Maan: haan
Next week…..

Maan: Geet

Maan: haan Maan

Maan: yahan aao, aur ye dekho

He shows her a pamphlet…

Manali ki kissi hotel ka hai…..

Geet takes a look……it's a beautiful location……

Geet: ye humne print kiya haina?

Maan: haan

Geet: bahut achcha hai, aapka designer bahut creative lagtha hai

Maan: aur Manali kaisa hai?

Geet: woh toh aur sundar hai

Maan: toh chalein?

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, woh client haina? Ussne humme ek hafte ka coplimentry stay promise kiya hai

Geet: achcha? hum kab jaa rahe hai?

Maan: Friday ko jaa sakthe hai

Geet: toh mein aaj hi packing shuru karthi hoon

Maan: nahi nahi Geet, pehle shopping

Geet: lekhin mere paas toh kitne achche achche salwars hai, woh bhi naye naye

Maan: wahan bhi salwar pehnogi?

Geet: kyun? Achcha nhai hai kya?

Geet looks at her salwar and adjusts her duppatta…

Maan catches her hand and pulls her closer…..

Maan: tum toh har kapde mein sundar lagthi ho Geet, lekhin

Geet: lekhin kya?

Maan: tumme jeans aur top nahi pehenna hai?

Geet: wow, mujhe ye strike kyun nahi hua?

Maan: kyunki tum Geet Handa ho

Geet: nahi Mr. Khurana mein Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khurana hoon

Maan: naam badal ne se koi mere jaise smart nahi ban saktha

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, Mrs.Khurana, toh shamko tayaar raho, mein jaldhi aatha hoon

Geet: teek hai Maan

That evening….

Maan: Geet, woh jeans aur t-shirts lekhe aao

Geet: hare, kitne bar dekhoge?

Maan: Geet, tumne toh trial room ke andar aane hi nahi diya tha aur bahar aane mein ke liye bhi sharam karthi, ab yahan toh koi nahi hai, chalo jaldhi mujhe pehenkke dikhao

Geet: hare, Manali mein pehenthi hoona, tab dekh sakthe ho

Maan: Gee tab tum pehenkke aathi ho ya mein tujhe pehenaoon

Maan gets closer and snatches her duppatta….

Geet: Maan, rukho, mein hi change karkke aathi hoon

Geet jeans and top pehenkke aathi….

This is the first time she is wearing them….she is a little shy….

Maan: Geet, tum toh iss dress mein bahut hot lagthi ho

Geet: kya? Apne biwi ko hot kehthe ho? aapko sharam nahi aathi?

Maan: hare, sach bolne mein kya sharam?

Maan gets closer….

Geet ko kuch kadbad lagtha….

Geet: isskke pehle aap shuru ho jaaye mein change karkke aathi hooon

Maan: hare, rukho Geet

Geet: Maaan, chodo mujhe, mujhe change karna hai

Maan: mein tummara madat kartha hoon, tum bas aaise hi kadhi raho, hilna mat

Maan starts playing with her….

Geet: Geet, apna haath upar karo

Geet: ye kya hai? aap ke haath pe gun thodi na hai?

Maan: sshhh, chup…..bilkul chup

Geet: mmm Maaan

Maan starts his mission….pehle t-shirt….

Geet paas hai toh Manali ki kya zaroorat….mahi toh kahin bhi shuru ho jathi….

Aaisa hi Manali mein bhi Maan ki shararat continue hotha….

At times Geet too gets a little naughty…

Itne din Maan ke saath toh woh bhi abhut kuch seekh gayi….

Maan ki pasand na pasand sab…..

Khane phine ka toh Geet pehle hi jaanthi hai….

Maan is very happy….finally Geet Maan ki Geet ho hi gayi…….

Beech mein thoda takraar hotha hai…

Maan kabhi kabhi gusse mein Geet ko hurt kartha…

Phir woh hi aakke Geet ko manatha…

Geet ko pathan hai ki wohn kitna bhi gussa kyun na karein, Maan Geet ko bahut pyaar kartha hai aur Geet ke bina ek din bhi nahi reh saktha….

Kya karein? Maan ki harkathon ko dekhkke kabhi kabhi Geet naraz hokhe Maan se dhoor rehne ki koshish karthi, par Maan ki ek hug se Geet sab kuch bhool jaathi….

ghsp2fan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Part – 58

A couple of months later….

One day Maan comes home very late….

Har din aaise hi hotha hai….

Lekhin aaj toh kuch zyzda hi late ho jaathi….

Geet toh sogayi….

Maan doesn't want to disturb her….

He tries to sneek in without waking her….

But Geet wakes up….

Geet: hare, aap aagaye?

Maan: mmm, tum sojao

Geet: aapne khana khaya?

Maan: Geet, mujhe bhook nahi hai

Geet: aaise kaise?

Maan: Geet, it's 2 am

Geet: toh? Bhookke phet nahi soothe

Maan: Geet, sach mein mujhe bhook nahi hai

Geet: teek hai, mein dhoodh lekhe aathi hoon, haldhiwala

Maan: kya? Geet, mujhe nahi chahiye

Geet: toh, milk shake chalega?

Maan: haan

Geet gets him his favourite chocolate milkshake….

Maan: achcha, ab tum sojao, kal tumme bhi office aana padega

Geet: kya?

Maan: woh, meinne bhi socha tha ki abhi nahi., tum apni shadhi shuda zindagi ko kuch din enjoy karo, lekhin kya karein? Hummara designer Mahan haina? Usska accident ho gaya aur usska haath mein fracture ho gaya

Geet: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai

Maan: Geet, woh bechara kitna dard mein hoga?

Geet: woh baat nahiu, aap toh har waqt office mein hi rehthe ho, mein yahan akhele beitkke bore hojaathi, ab toh mein bhi aapke saath kaam karoongi

Maan: wahi toh problem hai

Geet: kyun? Mein aapke designer se bhi achcha kaam kar sakthi hoon, ek bar mere kaam ko dekho

Maan: mein kaam ki baat nahi kar raha hoon Geet

Geet: phir? Kay problem hai?

Maan pulls her……Geet falls on his lap….

Maan: itni sexy ladhki samne hothi toh koi kaam kaise kar saktha?

Geet: achcha?

Maan: hmm

Geet: lagtha hai mere liye alag kamre ki zaroorat padegi

Maan: haan, mahi mahi ke liye ek kamra tayaar karna padega

Geet: Maan, chodo mujhe, aapko neendh nahi aathi?

Maan: Geet, ab mein kaise so saktha?

Geet: par Maan, kal subha jaldhi jaana haina? Mujhe toh samaj mein nahi aatha kya karoon

Maan: mein bathatha hoon

Maan pushes her down …..

Geet: Maaan

Maan: chup…bilkul chup

Ab Maan ko koi rokh nahi saktha….Geet bhi rokhna nahi chahathi…..
Mahiii……………
Next day Geet jaldhi tayaar hothi….

Maan Geet ko office lekhe jaatha…..

Sab Geet ko dekhkke kush hojaathe…..

They know Geet is not like Maan, she is much like one amomg them…..

Adi is the manager…..

Adi is a cousin of Maan from hoshiarpur too……

Maan called him to manage KC……

Adi: welcome Geet

Geet: Adi bhaiya, gud morning

Adi: mein toh bahut kush hoon ki tum bhi humne join kardhi

Staff: mor m'am

Geet is very proud of Maan….itne jaldhi itna kuch haasil karna toh bahut mushkil hai….

Maan being a workaholic has managed to achieve this easily….

Geet starts working ….

Maneet ki romance wahan bhi continue hothi….aur lagayi bhi ...

Magar kaam mein koi kammi nahi honna chahiye warna maan DD banjayega,
Geet ko bhi nahi chodega, issiliye pehla kaam phir masthi, aaise hi chaltha….

Kabhi kabhi sab ke jaane ke badh bhi donno kaam karthe….

Maan ke saath reh rehkke Geet ko bhi usski aadat lag gayi….

She also takes her work seriously…..

Maan ko toh bas bahar kaam hotha, yahan office mein toh Geet ko hi designing ka kaam hotha…

Geet hamesha kaam jaldhi katam karkke ghar jaana chahathi, Maan ko bhi aaram karna haina?

Geet chahe to do din chutti bhi le sakthi, Maan aaisa nahi kar saktha….

One night….Geet aaisa hi busy rehthi….

Aaj ye kaam katam ho gaya toh agle do din woh ghar pe aaram kar sakthi….

Lekhin Maan chahatha hai ki Geet kal bhi office aaye….

Geet samne hothi toh Maan ka energy double hotha…..

Maan tries to distract her…..

Maan: hare Geet, kitne kaam karogi? Chalo kal aakke karthe hai

Geet: nahi nahi, kal meri chutti hai

Maan: hare, dekho raat bahut ho gayi, mujhe bhi aaram karna haina?

Geet: Maan, bas ada gante mein kaam ho jayega

Maan: toh chalo, mein bhi madat kartha hoon

Madat karne ki bahane Maan Geet ko yahan wahan choothe rehtha….

Itne raat ko Maan Geet ko kaise chain se kaam karne dega…

Maan apna kaam shuru kartha, Geet ko patha hai ki ab woh kuch nahi kar sakthi seva Maan ki madat ki….haina babaji?

Lekhin aaj toh Geet ye kaam katam karkke hi jayegi…chahe kuch bhi ho, aaj koi mujhe nahi rokh saktha…Maan bhi nahi…….
Patha hai ki Geet kya karthi?

Woh apna duppatta se Maan ke haath bandhthi, just like a handcuff….

Ab dekhthe hai ki Maan kya kartha?

Hummare tarah Geet bhi wait kar rahi hai….

Par Geet sirf haath bandhne se kya faida?

Geet ko lagtha hai ki ab Geet aaram se kaam kar sakthi?

Maan keeps looking at her…..

Geet ko bhi patha hai ki ab woh bhi koi kaam waam nahi kar sakthi…

Maan sochne laga….

Maan signals her to come near….

Geet: thode dher chup nahi reh sakthe ho

Maan: hare Geet, mera phone

Geet: koi bahana nahi chalega Mr.Khurana

Maan: Geeet

Maan gets angry and shouts….

Geet: hare, itna gussa

Geet thoda dar jaathi….

Maan: yahan aao, koi msg aaya hai, dekho

This is Maan's pager, ye pager ka jamana hai….

Kissi ko patha hai ki pager kya hotha?

Geet: I'm sorry

Geet goes and checks his pant pocket….

Maan: Geet, jaldhi

Geet: dekh rahi hoona

Maan raises his arma….

Maan: Geet, shirt pocket mein dekho

Geet gets closer and looks into his pocket….

Maan apne haath se Geet ko lock kartha…..

Jaise mala dalthe haina, waise….

Geet fusgayi….ab toh woh hil bhi nahi payi….

Maan: tujhe kya laga, tum aaise Maan Singh khurana ke haath bandhke ussko arrest karthi toh woh kuch nahi kar saktha?

Geet puts her arms around his neck….

Geet: mujhe toh aapki aankh bandhne chahiye, chiii…kaise dekhthe ho?

Maan: woh game toh hum kal try karenge

Geet: kya?

Maan: ab kya karoge?

Maan lifts her & takes her to the couch…

Maan releases her and pushes her on the couch….

He jumps over and starts kissing her….

Maan shows his hands to Geet….

Geet quietly unties his hands, now he is let loose……

Geet toh aaj gayi….mahiii…………

Maneet ki masthi aaise hi chalthe rehtha…..

ghsp2fan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Part – 59

Maan ka business ab bada ho gaya….

Arjun ko bhi overtake kar gaya…

Shuru mein thoda takraar hothi….par ab koi problem nahi hai….

Maan sab ko sambal letha….woh Annie ko pareshaan kaise kar saktha?

Who bhi ab Annie pregnanat hai….

Geet is very proud of him, kitna achcha bhai hai?

Annie too gives birth to a boy….

Geet Annie ke paas hi rehthi….usski madat karthi….

Maan is always busy….

Aur teek se delhi mein nahi rehtha….

He is always on the move…..

He likes to learn new techniches and keep innovating….

Kabhi Shangai ki printing exhibition chale jaatha toh kabhi Mumbai mein workshop…

Par sare staff kush hai, he makes use of the latest facilities available….

Staffs ka kaam bhi bahut aasaan hojaatha…

They also try to give their best for their company….

Maan trusts them and they respect him…

They also respect their new boss, Geet, aajkal Geet hi MK media vision ko sambalthi haina?

Kabhi kabhi Ranno Geet ki madat karne aathi….

Ab toh jab bhi Ranno Delhi aathi Geet ke ghar pe hi rukhthi…..

Sam ka ghar bada hoga, lekhin ye toh apna ghar haina?

Ranno office ke staff se ghar ke kaam karwathi toh Maan bahut gussa kartha…

Pehle toh Geet ko bhi patha nahi ki kissko sambalein? Maan ko ya ranno ko?

Par ab Ranno bhi sab samajgayi….

Geet becomes pregnant..Maan is very very happy….

Ab toh bahar jaana thoda kam kartha…

Zyada se zyada Geet ke saath hi rehtha….

Delivery ka samay….doctor is a good friend of them…..

She handled Sam and Annie's delivery too….

They had normal delivery….

Doctor expects the same with Geet….

Geet gets the labour pain…

Maan is worried……doctor decides to wait….

But Maan couldn't see her in pain….

He asks the doctor to go for c-section….

But the doctor says that it's not necessary….

Sam also convinces him that this pain is very normal and that this suffering is just for a few hours but if they opt for surgery Geet will suffer for months….

Still Maan is not satisfied…..

He stays by her side all the time….

They take her to the labour room…

Maan & Sam are also with her….

Geet is suffering too much….

Delivery mein complications ho jaathe….

Doctor didn't expect this….Maan is very upset….

He just wants all this to end fast and his Geet to get out of this pain….

He wants his Geet back….

After much struggle Geet gives birth to a cute boy…

But the babay hasn't got enough oxygen and he needs special care….

He is shifted to a multi-speciality hospital….

Geet is still unconscious….Sam stays with her….

Maan is with the babay….baby needs blood and Maan gives him blood…

He is all the time thinking of Geet….

What if she asks about the baby? Baby is in the incubator….

He is better now….

Maan leaves Annie and ranno with the babay and goes to see Geet….

Geet has gained conscious….

Sam had told her that the babay is a little underweight and so is in the incubator…

Maan comes….

Geet asks him about the baby…

Maan tells her that he has just now seen the baby and he is fine….

He just needs to stay in the incubator for a while….

Now Geet is convinced that the babay is fine…..

Agar Maan kehtha toh sab teek hi hoga, haina?

Maan never lies to her….so she believes him….

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmmm

Maan: ab kaise ho? zyada dard toh nahi hotah, haina?

Geet: nahi, ab thoda behthar hai

Maan: tum kuch khaoogi?

Geet: nahi, abhi abhi Sam didi ne juice philaya tha

Maan: tumme aur kuch chahiye?

Geet: haan, ye dekho, mere hoton ko

She has bit her lips during delivery…..

Geet: thoda dard hotha hai, mere liye lip guard lekhe aao

Maan: achcha tum aaram karo, mein lekhe aatha hoon

Maan gets her that….

Baby is recovering well….

But the doctors are doubtful about his mental health..

Sometimes if the brain doesn't get enough oxygen then it hinders the baby's mental growth…

This can be determined only as he grows…they need to check him constantly…

But the baby is safe and sound….

Jo bhi Geet ko dekhne aatha hai baby ke barein mein kuch nahi poochtha…

They come to see her either after seeing the babay or they would visit the baby next….they all know that Geet is not aware of the baby's condition….

Geet ko shak hotha….

She keeps asking a lot of questions to Maan….

Maan tries hard to answer her, he somehow makes her believe that everything is fine with the babay…..

Finally babay is back with the mother….

Geet baby ko dekhthe hi sab kuch bhool jaathi….

Ab Geet bahut kush hai, they go home….

Ranno keeps an eye on the baby all the time….

She keeps on telling Geet to be careful, don't do this, don't do that….

Geet ko lagtha hai ki Ranno is over concerned….

But when they take the baby for the check-ups she is puzzled to see so many tests taken….

Now she is really worried….

Ab Maan Geet ko sambal nahi patha, he tells her about the baby…..

Maan: Geet, tum fikar mat karo, ye MSK ka beta hai, mein ussko kuch nahi honne dunga

Ab tak toh baby teek hai….they would keep monitoring….

Geet thoda pareshaan hai, par Maan saath hai toh Geet zyada tension nahi lethi, jo bhi ho? Maan haina? Sabko sambalnewala, aaj tak Geet ko sambalkke aaya hai toh aaj se baby ko bhi sambalega, haina babaji?

They name him Vedanth…..

He is growing very fast……

Pinky comes to Delhi to help Geet, she has finished her graduation….

Vedanth toh kuch zyada hi smart hai….kamakaam sab pareshaan the….

Par Geet ko ek hi shikayat hai, kehthe hai ki ladhkiyan papa ke pet hothe aur ladhke mama's pet hothe….

Par yahan toh sab kuch ulta hai….

Ye toh apne papa ka ladla hai….

Whenever Maan is around he always stays with Maan…..

Donno ko Geet ki parva hi nahi….donno hi khelthe hai….

Geet unkko dekthe hi rehthi….

Maan asks her to join them, Vedanth refuses to play with her….

Maan: hare, bechari ko dekho, kitna sad hai? chalo Geet, tum bhi aao

Vedanth: teek hai, lekhin mein papa ka team mein hoon, aap opponent hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: Geet, ab toh manjao, warna tumme khelne nahi dega

Geet: Maan, aap bhi ussko hi support karthe ho, mujhe aapkke saath nahi khelna

Hamesha aaisa hi hotha….

It's Vedanth's 5st b'day….

Vedanth ki b'day ko sab saath mein celebrate karthe hai….

Ranno ko apne bachon ka bachpan yaad aatha…..

Geet ka beta, Annie ka beta aur sam ka beta, sab ko saath mein dekhkke aaisa hi lagtha jaise woh phir se Geet, Sam aur Annie ko hi dekhthi….

Bas ek farak hai….ye toh sare ladhkke hai….

Issiliye Ranno bahut kush hai….

next part will be the last part ...so don't miss...

ghsp2fan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Part ' 60

Geet ke mausi Geet ko dekhne Delhi aathi hai'..

Pinky bhi saath mein aathi hai, she just loves Vedanth'..

Vedanth ko Geet se zyzda Pinky ne hi pala hai'.

She was with him 24*7'..

Issiliye Maneet ki mahiii bhi continue hothi'.

Geet ki mausi Pinky ki shadhi ko lekhe bahut pareshaan hai'.

She keeps complaining about her husband'..

Geet wants to help her'..

She tells Maan about Pinky's wedding and asks him to find a suitable var'.

Maan thinks of Adi'.Adi is a cousin of Maan and he is now looking after their new office at noida''''.

Geet is also happy, Adi is the right choice for Pinky'..

Ranno too feels that it's the right decision'.

They fix Adi- pinky's shadhi''

This responsibility naturally falls on Maneet'.

Bahut din ke badh Geet Maan ke saath kuch din bithayegi'.

Jab tak shadhi nahi hotha Maan Delhi ke bahar nahi jayega'.

Aur toh aur har ek baat ko Geet se discuss karthe rehtha'.

Geet too goes out with him to fix the mandap and other arrangements'.

They spend a lot of time together'.

Beech beech mein Maan ki shararat bhi jaari rahi'.

Mr.Handa has taken the financial responsibilities'..

He will take care of the expenses''

Afterall, his daughters are well settled'.pinky is also like his daughter'.

Shadhi ke din'.

Geet looks pretty in her new sadhi'.

Kisska choice hai, MSK ka haina?

While everyone is busy attending the guests Maan is busy admiring his mishty'.

Kitne din hogaye Geet ko aaise dekhkke, itne din toh kaam ke peeche pada tha,
ab toh Geet ko bhi thoda samay dena padega? Haina?

Warna Maan ko mahi ko bhool jaana padega'..

Mahi ke bina Maan kaise jeesaktha?

Aaj toh Maan ne decide karliya hai, aaj Geet ke saath mahi toh bantha hai'.

After the wedding they send the couple to their new home''.

Hanadji aur Ranno Vedanth ko lekhe ghar chale jaathe hai'.

Geet bhi unkke saath jaana chahathi hai, lekhin Maan ussko rokhtha'.

Geet: Maan, mein bhi papaji ke saath jaathi hoon

Maan: kay? Nahi nahi, hum badh mein jaathe hai, tum rukh jao

Geet: lekhin Maan

Maan: hare, abhi toh caterers ka bill settle karna hai

Geet: par meinne kal hi sara bills settle kardhi

Maan: toh mein joot boltha hoon

Maan gets angry'..

Geet: nahi nahi, maa, aaplog jao, mujhe kuch kaam hai

They leave'..

Geet: ab bathao, aaj ka kya plan hai?

Maan: tumme kaise patha hai Geet?

Geet: MSK mein bhi Mrs.Geet Khurana hoon, aapko mujhse behthar koi nahi jaantha

Maan: toh bathayiye Mrs.Khuarana, aapko kya lagtha? Mr.Khurana ke mann mein kya hai?

Geet: ye toh mein nahi jaanthi, lekhin aaj toh Mr. Khurana bahut kush hai, issiliye mujhe lagtha hai ki hum aaj ghar nahi jaanewale

Maan: teek kaha tumne, hum aaj ghar nahi jaarahe hai

Geet: phir kahan jaane ka plan hai?

Maan: aur kahan? Apna office

Geet: kya? Maan, aap sach mein pagal ho gaye ho

Maan: Geet, tumme patha hai ki mein apne kaam ko kitna pyaar kartha hoon, tummare behen ki shadhi ke chakkar mein kitna kaam adhura reh gaya

Geet: Maan, aap mazak toh nahi kar rahe ho?

Maan: nahi Geet, chalo

Geet: abhi

Maan: haan, abhi

Maan takes her to their office'.

Yahan toh koi nahi hoga'..sirf Maneet''.

Geet is very angry''

Geet: Maan, mujhe ghar jaana hai

Maan closes her mouth with his hands''

Maan: chup'bilkul chup

Maan ke ankhon ko dekhkke Geet ko patha chalgaya ki Maan ab kyun yahan aaya
hai'..

Maan takes his hankey and closes her eyes''

Geet: Maan, ye kaisa khel hai?

Maan: sshhh

Maan lifts her and takes her to the couch cum bed'.

He slowly starts kissing her and gently removes her jewels'..

Geet: Maan, ab toh mere ankhen kholdo

Maan: Geet, tumme dekhne ki kya zaroori hai? bas iss pal ko mehsoos karo

Geet ko lagtha hai ki ye aur bhi bahut mazedar hai''

She can feel Maan even with closed eyes'..

Waise yahan toh ankhon ka koi kaam nahi hai''

Mahiii shuru hotha''''..

This continues and Maneet ka pyaar din bar din badthe jaatha''

Years pass by'.

Vedanth bhi bada ho gaya''.high school jaatha haina?

Geet as usual takes care of the office'..

Maan is still looking for new ventures'..

Their house is under construction'.

Their entry came 2nd at the national level competition for high quality innovative printing''they just received the award at Mumbai'.

Vedanth ko poocho ki usska role model kaun hai?

Bang comes the reply'."mere papa Maan Singh khuarana'."

Ab Geet ko isse badi kushi kya ho sakthi?

Toh ye tha Maneet ka pyaar bara safar'.

Kaisa tha?

Waiting for Ur responses'..

Maneet ka agla avatar toh bahut jaane pehchana hai'..

Haan, hummare apna GHSP ka yet another version ''

Wait for the next MG FF'''''

" Mere Brother Ki Dulhan"

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/87144172

Edited by ghsp2fan - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

7 years ago

KASAM tere pyaar ki/PT4/5/pg29/32/11 feb

Can anyone love to another person to this extent, he killed someone... Can anyone love to another person to this extent, he fall so low in

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

Tere Pyaar Mein Marjawa/pt16/17-pg29/31- 1 feb

previous thread - which get closed now you can read here - click here

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

thread #2 Kuch Rang pyaar ke ase bhi/pt21/22/23 -pg31/33/34- 28 may

Concept This is story about two strangers which tied in sacred bond and one partner fall in love with another at first sight. Two individuals...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".