Saath Nibhana Sathiya MG FF note pg3 pt7 pg5 14/4 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!u r going to continue dis ...👏👏
waiting fr d update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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glad ur starting it again...
loved all the parts...
waiting fr the next part soon...
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superb!
i loved all the parts!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do cont soon i am waiting for its updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE :-

Sorry guyz...but story main thoda change hai...
actually story main nhi Geet k character main..& geet n manvi k age..ok...

Geet is 19 years old...and manvi 18
and geet is not graduated but only 12th pass in Science Medical Stream with highest marks...and she dont want to do mba but m.b.b.s

and khuranas dont have any problem with 12th pass bahu...

Geet Handa (19) :(soon to be khurana)

Younger daughter of Handa family...always wear suits...no jeans and skirts allowed in her home..very sweet never raise her voice against anyone..only 12th pass...want to do M.B.B.S...even she cleared her entrance test...with highest marks...but her family never allowed...and only her last hope is her soon to be husband will he allow and her in laws allow her to do M.B.B.S...also believe in old tradition and values just like her family.


Edited by -kitty- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb storty
loved all updates
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome back dear...missed u sooo much...nw plz give d updates...haan...he he he...😉 😃 😆 😊

dis story is awesome...

loving it tooo much...

d chemistry b/w maan n geet is really amazing...m happy ki geet got maan who is sooo much understanding...i wish ki geet k haar wish poori hojaye...maan uske saath humesha de...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Dear good to read it once again jaldi agla updayte dedo

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6

Its been a 2 months since maaneet's marriage...and lot of thing happens in their life...they got to know about anjali's pregnancy..Anjali and Brij clear up their differences...the reason of brih's behavior is that he's afraid of relationships and attachment...confused...ok brij lost his parents in very small age he's around 6 ...and then he saw the cruelty of this world which makes him hard and rude...he's afraid of relationships coz he have a fear...that he may loose the realtionship which destiny makes...but anjali's love and care...he open up himself...and anjali assure him that she will not leave him...

Manvi and Virat also started liking each other at the tym they saw each other in maaneet engagement 'they started dating each other after one week of maaneet wedding'and after one month of dating'they fall in love

Maaneet also went for their little honeymoon...after the project completion maaneet went to many places in shimla...but they avoid intimacy coz they want to know eachother more and more...but who will stop themselve after seeing their hot,sexy and seducing partners...so they endup themself in making love...

they first tym intimate on their honeymoon when they was returning from the success party...their car got jammed...and there's raining in shimla...to their good luck...their cottage is near by...so they left the car...and walk towards the cottage...all the tym in party maan was just controlling himself after seeing her beautiful wife in red and black sarre...and now she's totally wet and her sarre is clinged to her body make his desires out of control...they reached cottage maan lift her in his arms...and walk towards their room...geet knows what is coming next...and she have a option to denied...but she cant coz she herself want this...she fell blessed with his every touch...she feels that she's the beautiful women by his touch...she cant explain much how she feels with his touch...but his touch his like heaven for her...

they reach the room..maan placed her on the bed...come over herself...and they make love all night...cottage is fulled with their moans and gasp...

They also confessed their love at there honey moon...want to know how...?

Maan was in office coz of urgent meeting landup...and geet was in cottage...and watching T.V...After sometym...a news flash on T.V about Landslide in shimla...after seeing this...she get scared...coz that happens on the same way of cottage to office.

Geet dials office number...Mrs Pintoo picks up the phone coz she's ner the reception...she is a very kind lady...and Manager of shimla branch...she also comes at the kriyansh's wedding in mumbai...

Mrs. Pintoo :Hello...

Geet:May I plz Speak to Mr.Khurana..?

Mrs. Pintoo :and who r u young lady...?

Geet : His wife..Mrs Geet Khurana...

Mrs. Pintoo :oh geet dikra...main pintoo aunty...

Geet :hello aunty aunty ye kaha par kai...

Mrs. Pintoo :Dikra maan sir toh office se bohot tym pehle hi nikal chuke...aur ab tak toh wo cottage pohoch bhi gye honge...

geet:aunty wo abhi tak nhi aaye...mujhe bohot dar lag rha hai...aur landslide...

Mrs. Pintoo :dikra ghabrao mat maan sir ko kuch nhi hoga...god pe believe rakho...

Geet :aunty main abhi rakhti hoon...agar inke baare main koi phone aaye toh plz mujhe inform kariyega...

Mrs. Pintoo :ok dikra...

Geet (to herself) :aap kaha hoo...

(she came outside the cottage call the driver and goes towards the way of office...car stips coz of jam...she come out the car...and ran and finds him everywhere but no where he's seen...after lots of running she stops and started crying...and then a old lady comes...)

Old Lady :ro mat beti tumhare pati ko kuch nhi hoga...mata rani par vishwas rakho...wo dekho madir...(she saw the mandir and now she realize that she's near the mandir)

Old Lady :waha koi bhi sache man se hattho par kappooe jalye aur goddo(knees) k bal mandir ki sidiya chadta hai...toh mata rani uski manokamana jaroor puri karti...jao beti...mata rani tumhare pati ko kuch nhi hone degi...

She dont think twice and ran towards the mandir...she buys kappor from nearbut stall...she burns the kappoor and place on her palms...and start climbimg the stairs...she's not alsone...lots of people are doing the same thing...

Other Side

Maan reach the cottage...he was stuck in traffic due to landslide...he enter the cottage and found it empty...he searched in every room...but geet was no where...he come outside the cottage...and then the car stopped...and driver came out from the car...(the same driver )...

Maan :raajjuu madam kaha hai...

Raju :Sir madam aapko hi dhundne k liye gyi thi...(then maan takes the car and drive off...and then he stops the car near the temple and his eyes wide opened after what he saw...kria is climbing stairs with knees and kappoor is burning on her hands...he ran towards her...

he removed the kappoor from her hands lift her in his hands...and came towards the car...the things happened so fastly...that she did not register any thing in her mind...when maan put her on her feets...then she realized maan is here fit and fine...and then she throw herself in his arms...and cry bitterly...but man was super angry on her...he pull her out from hug...and rain also started

Maan:PAGAL HO GYI HO YE KYA KAR THI...(after listening his words she gets angry)

Geet :HA PAGAL HO GYI HOON...KAHA THE AAP...EK PHONE NHI KAR SAKTE THE...PATA HAI KITNA DHUNDA AAPKO...OFFICE PHONE KIYA WAHA PINTOO AUNTY NE BOLA AAP OFFICE SE BOHOT PEHLE NIKAL CHIKE HAI...PATA HAI KYA HALAT HO RHI THI MERI...EK PHONE KAR KE BATA NHI SAKTE THE AAP THIK HAI...MAIN PHONE KAR RHI THI TOH AAP PHONE NHI UTHA RHE THE...PATA HAI YE EK GHANTA MAINE MAUT SE BHI BHATAR JIYA HAI...PAR AAPKO KYA FARAK PADTA HAI...MAIN HOON HI KON AAPKI...

maan :KOn ho ye mujhe batana padega...DHARAM PATNI HON TUM MERI...AUR MUJHE KYA FARAK PADTA HAI...MUJHE FARAK PADTA HAI...PYAAR KARTA HOON TUMSE...SUNNA TUMNE PYAAR KARTA HOON TUMSE...I LOVE U...SAMJHI TUM...

(geet hugs him tightly and crying...and also saying I love u too b/w her cries...)

At night tym

In Maaneet's bedroom...maan puts ointment on her hands and kneess...and when he's going to get up...she hold his hand

Geet :(innocently) kaha ja rhe hai...

Maan :kitchen se paani lene ja rha hoon

Geet :plz mat jaiye main aapke bina nhi reh sakti...(and then maan sat near her and hold her fance in his hands)

Maan :Geet main tumhe chod k kahi nhi ja rha...

Geet :plz mujhe dar lag rha hai...aap kahi mat jaiye...

Maan :ok kahi nhi jaata fyn...ab plz tum ye rona band karo...mujhe meri mishti ki aankhon main aansoon bilkul ache nhi lagte...(but she's nowhere to stop she started crying)

Geet:plz plz love me...plz mujhe pyaar kijiye aisa jaisa kabhi aapne nhi kiya hoon...meri andar k dar ko mita dijiye...main main ye dar k saath nhi jisakti..plz...

(And then they made love all night...)

Teaser

Teri bidiya re'aaye haaye teri bindya re

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Meri bindiya le legi teri nindiya

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Aaye haaye teri bindiya re

Edited by -kitty- - 12 years ago
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awesome amzing update

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