my IF love story-MG-last part pg 15

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Hey everyone,

Everyday many used to ask me about this particular SS and i was forced to re-post it thanks to your love and support

This is probably the best Anniversary gift i could give Maneetians

You don't have to thank me but instead i ought to thank you for showering love and support

I have not re-typed it but posting old chapters

New chapters will be up in couple of days

HAPPY ANNIVERSARY TO GEET-HUI SABSE PARAYI

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CHAPTER 1


Morning brings a new start but I m not happy ……………. U know the reason it's a Saturday and I need to go to college …………………. I have tried many ways to take off today but my mom is not ready to buy anything ……………….. at times she is stubborn and I hate it ……………… I got up uninterestedly and started to brush not before switching on my computer …………….. I know no one does that in the morning but I do ………………..

" what is this geet computer so early in the morning ? ………. U gone mad ……… I m gonna tell papa to cut net connection ……………" mom screamed in the background and I chose to ignore as I do always

As soon as windows loading screen disappeared I came running near my computer and switched to Google chrome ………………. India forums site was already in my favorite list so clicked it immediately ……………… very quickly I checked the hot buzz ( nothing interesting ) ……………I logged in using my ID "sweetsong" (cool na)……………. 12 private messages …………..ignoring that I clicked My posts and searched for the title " Love Life " …………..

Do you think its strange ……………half population of young girls won't agree with you ……………. More interesting than watching a daily soap is discussing that and reading fan fictions on that ………………….exactly we do the same in site like Indiaforums ……………….. This site has been my best friend off-late where I could read various things which I love the most ………… people now began to call me " wired " well I don't mind though ……………

Btw did I forget to tell you why I opened the page " Love Life " ……………… well that is the FF that I write on one of the most popular television Jodi Amaan and Reet ………………… I just love them to the core …………….. I m not the only crazy one ……………… there are many FF writers who inspired me to write FF of my own ………………….. Last night I have successfully posted 20 part of my FF and my eyes glow to see 55 likes within 8 hours …………………….

Yipee!!!!! ……………….. I badly wanted to read all the comments but my mom started to shout from the kitchen and I have to shut down ……………….. I m going to go mad without reading the comments till I be back from college ………………..

" why are ur eyes red ……………. Are u not sleeping well " my mom questioned

" don't tell me u were typing some crap again all night " she asked with anger

My mom hates my hobby ……………. I looked at my sweet dad for rescue as always

" rano why are u hyper ………….. u can't stop a upcoming writer " he said

" I m gonna cut net and TV connection trust me …………………. Do u know mohinder what all they show in that serial ………………. Elder brother marries Younger brother's pregnant wife ……………….. omg what impact it will have on young generation " my over dramatic mom said


" mom plzzz amaan loves reet very much …………….. it pure love you won't understand ……………….. Moreover that ved betrayed her ………….." I defended

" Geet stop justifying " she said

" mom if ever I become a famous writer and release a book of my own I will never Thank u in acknowledgement part " I said raising from chair and taking my bag

" lets see what my Mini Jane Austen does in future " she said sarcastically

I rolled my eyes in response and left from there giving my parents each a kiss on cheeks ………………

College was very usual ………………….. I met with my friends and we had all regular classes …………………. Later in after-noon we all sat in the in the stone bench near canteen tree for lunch ………………….. my group consisted of four girls apart from me ………………jaanvi one who is very similar to me cool , confident …………….. Nia , someone every group will have a joker may be ………… Keerti , drama queen and pooja boring geek …………………….

To be frank I don't miss my daily soaps and IF (indiaforums) much in college as all my friends love to watch all shows and we all time gossip about Bollywood and tellywood ( typical girls , I know )………………..

" hey did u see last night episode of reet,hui sabse parayi ? " nia enquired

" of course ………….. how can I miss it Amaan was shirtless practicing kick boxing " jaanvi told with a dreamy expression ………………..

" Do u know that rumours says that amaan and reet in real life have an affair " nia said

" come on yaar its all just for TRP raise ………….. amaan looks too good to cheat on his wife " jaanvi said

" what say geet " they included me in a conversation as I was busy thinking what will I type in my next update

" I don't know yaar …………..i like Karan better " I commented

Nia gave me deadly look as she loves Amaan ………………

" look who is here " pooja who we thought was absent said

All our heads turned to canteen where we saw Maan Singh Khuranna insanely popular , sinfully hot and ridiculously rich guy of our college walk in with his gang …………………. He is in final year yet girls from all around the college even some lecturers have " thing " for him …………………….though I pretend to hate him for his arrogance I think he quiet hot and he mostly reminds me of Amaan Khundra from the show ( whom I m insanely in love with ) ………………….. Maan and I belong to same department , he is my senior but I doubt if he had ever noticed me ………………….Whole college rumors that he is in a relationship with Sameera Roy who again I think is quiet sexy and totally his type ……………….. Btw who cares I m not in list of his admirers ……………….. I m waiting for someone like AK ( amaan khundra ) in my life ………………… in no way maan could match AK other than looks …………….


I heard sound of maan and gang again fighting with canteen head for some silly reason ……………….. everyday's drama ………………..after threatening canteen head maan took a Pepsi can and sat in the chair with style ……………….

" show off " I commented

" u know what when people are very scared to express themselves they do things like this showing authority on others ……….. I read in a book " Pooja said ……………… DUH!!!!

The day somehow got over and I m very excited to go and read all updates that are waiting for me in IF ………….

" geet I and ur papa are going to temple …………. Take care of the house and eat fruits in the evening " I read my mom's note near my computer

Parents are out ………….. this means I can have my computer all for myself and peacefully type the update …………..yah!!!!!!!

I logged in IF and checked the comments on my FF ……………….. they were encouraging except few who had commented single words ( grrr I hate that )………………..i then read all new updates of FF ………………

When I was about to start typing update something stuck me …………………..it has been 2 months since I started " love life " its going in a good pace ……………… I think its high time I start a new SS………………..

I looked around myself to find a book or a DVD that could give me new concept for my new SS ……………….. I also read some old FFs for inspiration ………….

Oh god why the hell I m getting no concept ……………….

" relax geet ………….. u r super cool …………. U ll get a concept for sure " I told myself

What did I do from the morning I started to recollect so that I can get some real life inspiration ……………

" I had breakfast then mom's scolding ………………. Then college , chemistry lecture ………….. then maan's gang ………… then watching old episodes of RHSP …………….'" I was recollecting loudly

God knows what occurred in me that I took maan as my inspiration …………………

" popular and hot guy in love with Simple girl " universal super hit concept

I decided that my new SS will have this concept ……………….. I should get good likes and comments so I ll make this quiet mysterious and passionate ……………………..

Within 15 minutes I typed CS and prologue and posted it ………………. 30 likes in 5 minutes ……………. Yipeee way to go …………

With very happy mood I began to type the 1 part …………………….

Amaan's eyes were so much captivating that reet forgot that she was sandwiched between his chest and his arms …………….. she looked at him without blinking …………she wanted to push him and release herself but never did that ……………… she was staring at him as if he was some candy and she a baby ………………

" reet " she heard him say

Before she could make sure that he actually called her name his lips were gently placed on her soft cheeks and the very moment she forgot even her own name …………..

" be mine " he whispered in her ears before freeing her and disappearing into the class from the empty corridor .."


I completed typing the last paragraph and read all together once again to check if there was any grammar mistake …………….

I m just awesome ………………. I posted the first part ……………………… with happy smile I went to sleep ………………..

Next day in college I was very happy for no reason ……………….. I convinced myself saying that it was because I came up with amazing concept for my SS …………………..

The corridor to library was unusually empty ……………….. Giving wings to my happiness I began to half walk while jumping ………………….. Spinning round and jumping I missed my balance and I was about to fall ……………………

I m dead I thought I fell on something strong not floor for sure ………………… I opened my eyes to see two Grey eyes of maan ……………… really ………………..

He was staring at me as if I had pink hair and blue skin …………………. The scene was similar to the one which you see in movies ………………… but unlike those heroines I wasn't lost in his eyes ……………… for god sake I felt very uncomfortable and need fresh air if not I ll puke ……………………


But maan seemed to be possessed by AK's ghost …………………….. He gave the same look that amaan would give reet …………………. I poked his shoulders to get his attention but he was lost somewhere ………..

If he had made a minute before straightening I would have screamed in his ears ……………………

"thanks bud……….." my words weren't complete as he pulled him between his body and arms

W*F ….!!!!!!!

I was about to shout when his face neared mine ……………….. I looked at him confused ……………..i felt something on my cheeks which I realized was his lips ………………. Damn ……………

" Be mine " he whispered in my ears

Are u crazy……………. Before I could give him a piece of mind he ran into the library …………….

" B****y A****e " I swore behind him not loud enough for him to hear

I began to walk back to class as my mood was spoiled and I was more confused than I feel when I see my exam papers …………………. I replayed the whole scene in my mind ………………… wait a minute it all seems familiar ………………………

Oh f*** those are the very scenes I typed last night for the update …………………….. What the hell!!!!!!!!!


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CHAPTER 2

My life changed to total 360 degree in last 15 days ... i still remembered when i fell in maan's arms in the corridor and the scene in my story went in reality ... i was so much confused ... i first thought it was all just a co-incidence and so i decided to ignore ... its not that maan would read my stories and act like AK ... for god sake he would not even know AK ... why would he watch daily soaps ...

That day i would have dropped all confusions if i hadn't went to the canteen and find maan staring at me all the 60 minutes i was sitting there ... Nia even asked me if there anything between me and " the arrogant senior" in her language as he was unusually staring at me giving lovely looks ... i turned to see him only to gain a smile which actually scared me ... later the day my professor announced that we all are going on a two day field trip to nearby village and seniors will not be able to attend as they have project to submit later the week ... for some reason i felt like trying my luck with this topic ...

I know I m crazy ... but what if my story is actually happening in real life ... may be like Spiderman I began to posses some super power all of a sudden ... i immediately went home and typed part 2 of my story...

" reet walked in the collage lost in thoughts as this year seniors and juniors are going on a trip together which means she has to bear Amaan's eyes following her 24*7... With a sudden pull she was pinned to the wall and she needn't doubt it was amaan ...

"Leave me "her meek voice said

"I m so happy mishty ... i can spend two whole days with you " he said

reet looked at him confused ...all this never made sense to her "

After typing the update i sat staring at the computer ... i m behaving foolish ... how can my story happen in real life ... Even if its some kind of prank no way the collage authority is goona postpond project submission of seniors and they can never come with us ...

To give a break to myself i went and switched on the Tv to watch RHSP ... the scene was soothing ... since when the show started it has been medicine to my bad mood ... whenever i feel frustrated or low i would just you tube the videos of RHSP and i ll be fine very soon ...After watching the show i went to bed expecting a easy day...



Maybe when i was praying god was busy elsewhere so he didn't listen to my prayers and that is why something strange got into my HOD's head and he had postponed project and now seniors are going to trip with us ...

" isn't great geet ... seniors will be with us ... and senior boys are amazing " kirti said

Amazing my foot...

Now i m very scared to even think that he would come to meet me again ... pretending a head ache i thought of going home ... i was walking in the parking area when suddenly i was pushed into a car ... and what i never wanted to happen was taking place ...Surprise it was maan ...

He again had AK look ... i stared at him as if he was a ghost ... i know whats coming next i closed my eyes expecting a hug and yes it did happen ...

" i m so happy mishty "

mishty how the hell does he know this name ...

" i can spend the whole two days with you "

i can't take it anymore ... this can never happen ... i pushed him with all force ...

" what do you think u are doing " i maintained angry face

" chup bilkul chup " he said placing his finger on my lips

OMG its so much like Amaan ... i think i m in a dream world ...

" i m excited for the trip ... we ll talk everything there "


His hands slowly moved the strand behind my ear ... i looked at him wondering if he was for real or i m hallucinating ...

Not able to speak anything i ran from there ...

Why me ... everything was so smooth then why this sudden complications ... i did't know if it was all really happening in my life ... all answers i could find out only in this trip so i must be ready to expect the unexpected ...

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Sitting in the bus travelling to trip i took my i-pad to read the update that i have typed last night to post ...

" Reet didn't know what to do ... she has hurt him in front of others ... he must be sad but that wasn't only her mistake ... all of this was new to her and it felt strange ... she can't just like this fall for him ... she can't afford a heartbreak "

i have decided to bring a fight between reet and amaan ... it's kind of public humiliation for amaan coz of reet ... i m keen on trying all possible ways to know what is happening around me ... this time the whole update is on reet i.e is me ... i ll make sure that i don't even go near maan ...

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I was very good in executing plans and i never knew that till now ... from morning i m staying away from Maan isn't cool ?...

" geet wats up? " i heard jhanvi ask breaking my thoughts ...

" super boring " i told

" btw what are u wearing " nia commented

i looked at myself i was wearing a pink top with blue short cargo...

" why ? " i asked

" oh yaar u look so girly " she said

i don't understand whats bad in a girl looking girly ... i mean its not that i like being so girly but wearing pink doesn't make me one of those looser girls ...

" so lets go ?" kirti who came from nowhere asked

" where ? "

"Some bon fire crap " jhanvi said

Whats fun in sitting surrounding fire and singing and saying tacky things ... i prefer the cozy of the bed and gossip with my frds ... jees!! i forgot to tell them the new gossip about a TV star i read in net ...

Most of the students were near bon fire and i sat with some known faces ... my eyes fell on maan who was sitting at a safe distance from me... guess wat ! he wasn't looking at me ... yippee!!!!!!!! ... i m happy but wait a minute no no i feel sad ...Really !!!!!!!... damn why am i having wired emotions ?,... i was so much lost in my thoughts when kirti poked my shoulder knowing that irritates me ...

" wat " i asked irritated

" why is that " arrogant senior " staring at u AGAIN " she emphasized the word Again gaining a glare from me

I looked at maan who was indeed looking at me ...grrr i hate him ...i m feeling angry / happy i know mixed emotions again ... The seniors were playing some game and i didn't concentrate much as i was busy gossiping with few gals until my name was called out ... i gave a look to that senior (whose name I guess is Vikrant ) as if he told me the place is in fire ...

" aren't u G-E-E-T " he spelled my name ... i nodded confused

" come on its ur turn to play the game " he said ... are we playing i wanted to ask

" pick a game " he forwarded a bowl of papers

i picked a random paper ... it read " Romantic dance for fast beat song " ... DUH !!!

" so u want to do with a girl or a boy ... ur partner ? " he asked

Are we supposed to do with a partner...? Of course its romantic number ... Girl?!!! Yuck now way i m straight for god sake ... I ll do with a boy ... anyways chances for the boy not to be maan is more so i ll get to see his expression ...

" boy " i said and my eyes immediately went to maan who i guess was smirking

i picked a paper from another bowl which the senior guy snatched unlike last time ...

"it's Maan "he announced

What the F**** !!! i wanted to scream ... i saw maan smirrking while walking towards me ... why this has to happen to me ... why??!!

maan came and stood beside me ... his eyes fixed on me ... i felt as if i was standing in the middle of a island and no one existed around ... god damn i must stop reading stuffs in IF its making my romantic part of brain work too much ... how can this man make me feel things that is supposedly meant for amaan and reet ...

"Song selection " the senior guy asked

maan nodded a no still looking at me ... why is he giving " Amaan " kind of looks ... plzzz don't do this to me i m bound to answer the teasing of my frds tmr ...


maan took my hand in his and placed it on his shoulder... all the time his eyes was fixed on mine not allowing me to look anywhere ... his hands slowly slipped in my waist ... freaking no touching ...my mind shouted ...

" Munni badnam hogayi..."

the song played in the background that made me take hold of the situation and push him away ...I pushed him away ... god damn ... i didn't dare to look at his face fearing something ... i just ran from there...

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Next two days i didn't see maan but i wanted to see ... pushing him like that must have been humiliating ... should probably apologize ... damn i hate complicated life ... I have only one way to make my mind cool ... i switched on the PC

" reet wasn't sure if whatever she is doing is right or not... but now she is getting herself ready to go on a date with amaan ... after that not so good experience she felt guilty and wanted to apologise to him ... she kept giving him those puppy looks but he wasn't buying it ... she finally gained courage and went to him ...

" i m sorry amaan "she told

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CHAPTER 3

I looked at myself in the mirror …………….. Hair tied in high pony ……………. Cream Knee length top with boat cut ……………… slender faded blue jeans ………………… perfect ……………..its strange to say that this is my first date in this whole 19 years but trust me I ve never went out with any guy ……………….I was surprised when maan asked me out though I m the one who wrote it in the story ………………..i took two whole days before telling a yes to him …………….. he looked genuinely happy and I loved to see that smile in his face ………………

My phone flashed a msg from maan saying that he was waiting for me in the cafe where we have decided to meet ……………….All excited I went to meet him ……………..Parking my scooty in the entrance I went inside

"Hey "I said flashing a nervous smile before sitting in front of him ……………… this all very new to me

What should I talk …………….. Should I start the conversation ?... why is he not talking I wondered ………………… for some reason he was lost in thoughts and disturbed ……………….

"Are you ok? " I asked

"Yeah …. Why ? "he asked

" u sounded good in phone morning but now you seem dull " I was concerned

" so u care " he said with teasing tone

"I would have asked this to any friend if he or she was dull " I answered as a matter of fact

His expression changed to disappointment for a bit before the very expression that I used to see in usual maan returned ……………..

" so u accept me as your friend and I can today officially declare our friendship " he asked

" huh!! " I gave a dumb expression

He laughed …………… I bet it was at my foolishness ………………

" so what shall we do today " he asked changing the topic

" are we together the whole day ? " I asked innocently ……………… I was worried I told mom that I would be back soon

" are u already bored ? " he asked shocked

" no ……… I just …….."

he began to laugh again…………. Why does this guy always laugh ……………… is there something funny written in my face ?...

We both went to **** lake it was the most famous place in our city …………….. the best thing was it is always free in the afternoon as crowd start only late evening ………………

" you have been here before ? " he asked

" of course " come on half the population would have been here

We decided to go boating ………………… though I don't fancy maan was interested to do so I didn't deny ……basically I have this phobia for water and boat ride makes me dizzy ……………….. I didn't want to tell all this to maan and make an image of wining baby …………….. its jus that there is a small island after 20 minutes from here …………………… There is small restaurant there so maan wanted to treat me there ……………..

We got in the stream boat ……………… I thought it wasn't that bad as I expected ……………… I keep testing myself to make sure if I still am hydrophobic or not ……………….. I kept staring at the water ………………….. a strange feel built in my stomach and I suddenly felt like puking ……………… maan's words no more entered my ears ………………. With mild dizziness promptly my head spun and I was about to fall ……………..

" geet " I heard maan's voice

He held me in his arms and immediately gave me some water …………………… for the first time I looked in his eyes ……………….. it felt strange ……………….

" don't worry I m with you" I heard him say last

" Amaan and Reet were walking side by side ……………. Reet was in a confused state since amaan filled her forehead with sacred sindoor in front of everyone in the party ……………… thousand questions ran in her mind …………….. she looked at amaan before she fainted in his arms ………………… all she remember was him saying ……………..

" reet don't worry I m with u " "

(Relate the scene from original GHSP I have changed to suit the update)


A scene from RHSP played in my mind …………… wait a minute am I watching TV?... I remember being with maan ……………… why the I m dreaming about amaan and reet ………….

"aaa…….maaann " I blabbered

" geet look I m here " I heard maan speak

I opened my eyes to see pair of concerned eyes ……………….he was panicking ………… for me ? …….. really !!!!... cool ………

" are u fine " he asked once I stood

I looked around to see myself in the island ………………

" how did we come here ? " I asked rubbing my head

" well in boat till island and in my arms in island " he said

" you carried me ? " I asked shocked ………………. For a second the scene where Amaan carry Reet crossed my mind ……………

" what happened to you ?" he asked

" its just water makes me dizzy ………… I m hydrophobic ……… I m sorry "

I was genuinely sorry for ruining everything for him ………………. Probably he should be thinking that I m fool ………….. Maybe I scared poor guy with this whole fainting stuff ………………

" oh you don't have to be sorry mishty ………….. You could have told me we would have gone somewhere else ………." He said as if he really meant it

Mishty , this word caught my entire attention …………… why is he calling me that …………… this is the second time …………… its not that I complain I like the feel of it ………………. I still remember the time when Amaan called reet Mishty for the first time a chill ran through me and I prayed that I get a guy as romantic as AK ……………

"We can go back if u insist " maan said

"no its ohk I m fine" I said

We both walked into the restaurant …………….. I didn't mind him holding my hands as I badly needed the support to walk properly ………….. we sat in corner table beside each other ……………..

I ordered for some spicy schezwan noodle while he preferred mild mushroom pasta.…………. I ve heard generally guys don't eat as much spice as girls …………….i saw a couple with two kids came and sat in nearby table ………………. The kids were running all around and not once but thrice dashed maan and he gave an angry look to them ………………

I couldn't stop myself but think the dhabba scene from RHSP ……………….

" Amaan felt as if he was in circus surrounded by jokers ……………..he cursed himself for accepting reet's challenge and agree to eat in dhabba …………….. to add to his misery the lady in the adjacent table was telling reet that he is strong enough to eat chilies for her but reet was disagreeing …………… how dare she ……….. he can do anything for her …………….Though the chilly eating part was awful he felt her touch in his lips for the first time that left him speechless and he can eat many chilies just to make her touch him ………….."

" I love chilies "

" are you sure " I heard maan ask and looked at him who was adding chili flakes in my noodle

" no that's fine " I gave a silly smile

" you want to taste mine " I asked to start a conversation

" no no I can't handle chilies " he said

The kids who were probably listening to us talk began to laugh …………….

"This uncle is scared of chilies " one of the kids said

Maan gave them a angry glare before grabbing my noodle adding more chilies to it showed in his mouth ignoring my pleadings …………………..

I felt really bad seeing maan coughing like hell and his eyes were bright red in color ……………….. as soon as maan began to cough after a couple of spoons we came out from there ………………. From then I have been giving him juice, water and sugar …………..

" u r ok ? ' I asked him

" noo " he half shouted but I didn't mind

" oh look poor girl is suffering with sick boyfriend " I heard a comment and didn't bother to turn back but I could see man giving a deadly look probably to the guys who stood behind me commenting ………..

" do you want us to accompany baby if he so sick " someone said

I saw maan clenching his fist ……………….. I held his hands ……………

" lets go " I said …………….. I m sacred of this local fights and I don't want maan to indulge in all this for me

" arre where are u going baby ………….. what use is your coughing bf I can be better "

Maan stopped walking …………he released his hands from mine ……………

" you go to the boat I ll be there soon " he said

" you are not gonna fight " I warned

" just 5 minutes trust me " he said

Maan stood face to face with those guys ……………. They were three and looked like rouges ……………… they surrounded him …………..

" geet I said go to the boat " maan shouted

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" reet go with ved and nano " amaan shouted

He was confident that he could handle the goons yet he didn't want his reet to face all this …………….. he wants her to be safe ……………..she can't handle seeing him fighting and her tears will become his weekness …………. He forced her to go away from him …………… but she refused ………… how can she leave her amaan alone to face all this ……………….. its not that she doubted his capability but she wants him safe ………….. she want him in front of her eyes to make her believe that he is safe ………………. She wanted him to take her in his arms and coon her to peace ……….."


My mind wandered to the time when amaan and reet faced the same situation ……………… " go from here " these are the same words amaan shouted ……………. The fight wasn't a tragic end but reet never left amaan's side so I can't leave maan ……………….. he might need me something inside told me ………….

I stood there seeing maan fight ………………. He was amazing …………….. I bet he was trained …………….i was lost in her perfect skill in karate ………………….. This all felt so filmy ... but i could bet on RHSP that this is happening in my life ... in real ...

Nothing much happened after that though as maan was bleeding in hand and we needed to rush to hospital and back to house...


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CHAPTER 4

My phone buzzed and I checked it was a msg from geet ''''''.. its been a week since we both went on a date and since then phone call and msg at unusual time become usual for us ''''''.As I have project to submit I hardly visit college so we used to chat in FB or in phone '''''' twice we both went on lunch date when she was free ''''''.

" are u busy " the text said

" nope " I replied

" oh project done ? "

" nay more works pending ''''life is getting hell "

"Don't stress much "

" I know its just few trivial things ''''' are u free? "

"umm no next seminar class by mrs.chatterji "

" sob sob ''''.. I thought we can go out '''. It would be a relief "

" so sorry "

" that's ok '''.. Carry on wid ur work catch u later "

I looked at the phone and didn't receive reply so I assumed she was busy ''''''.. I closed my eyes and leaned on the chair '''''

" whats up " I heard my friend Vikrant's voice

Oh damn '''''I turned to see not alone him but whole gang standing there'''''.

" wats cooking in devil's mind ?" I asked suspicious

" aren't we allowed to meet our friend " sameera ( sam ) commented

'" wow so much concerned ? " I said sarcastically

" seriously maan why are u so much engrossed in the project ''''' anyways u r gonna score better mark " ricky said

" ric if I remember correctly some certain person didn't attend my call last night " I said

" oh maan how do u expect me to attend calls at night ''. Grow up man " ric told with a dramatic expression

"Whatever" we heard Sana who is believed to have crush on ricky comment

"forget it guys lets go out " vikrant said

" u have a plan " I asked

" I don't believe in planning before we get in the car " vik said

That's true ''''' we suck in planning and executing ''''


We all sat in one of our favorite hangout spot '''''..unlike other times I was busy in phone as geet has texted me ''''''

" still in boring lecture ? " I asked

" yup ''. So where are you ? "

" with frds in Barista"

" enjoy ''. Bye "

"one more minute with phone then u ll find it in dust bin " ric warned

Group rules no phone when we all are together '''''.. I put my phone back in pocket and joined the convo ''''.

" so maan wats the treat " sana asked

" I don't remember promising anything " I said

" oh yeah did u forget the dare task "

DARE TASK??? The two words took me back in time a month ago ''''.

FLASH BACK

" what the hell is this " I asked ric showing my phone to him

That a****e has distributed my number all bimbo friends of him and I m receiving all sorts of messages and MMS ''''''

" enjoy dude " ric said with a slight smirk seeing my phone

" oh yeah do u think I m a despo like u to try every girl " I said

" seriously dude how can u be like this without gf '''. I m ashamed of calling u my frd " ric said

" I m not interested in these things " I said

" maan " I heard vikrant's shocked voice

" what " I asked frustrated

" are u a gay?... is that y u are here away from family ?. " vikrant' asked

" oh yes so u wanna try " I added sarcastically

" I don't mind though " vik said and both my devil friends began to laugh

" stop it guys its no more funny " I said

" u cut the crap and tell us what is ur problem " ric said seriously

My problem?!!! should I tell them ?... I wondered '''''. But then they are my friends and no one can help me but them '''''. So I decided to speak my heart '''''.

" well its quiet funny as u might think but I m telling u guys trusting u " I said

" are u really a gay ? " ric asked seriously

" shut up ric " I glared at him

" cont maan " vik said

" ohk I was 17 when I first liked a girl who was 19 then '''''' she was pretty and she had a bf who was a year older than her '''''' she was the prettiest girl in our whole locality ''''''..i very much loved her well I thought so ''''''' My father was her father's friend '''''.. she was very kind to me than she used to talk with me ''''''''' I went to her b'day party with dad ''''''.. I was planning to ask her out on a date '''''.. I bought most expensive things for her that I could afford ''''''.once when I saw her alone in the garden I even went there ''''..i wanted to tell many things to her ''''.. but alas everything was in vain ''''. I fell on the cake , dropped down the gifts , spoiled the curtains and what not '''''. It was then all her frds came out from their hiding spot and they all killed me teasing '''''.. I was made a big fool and to add to that the scene was shot in a video and spread everywhere ''''''.. that was then I knew it was all a prank ''''''.. since then I have this BIG confidence problem before talking with a girl for this date and crap things like that " I ended my story

" is that u are not taking me out " I heard sam's voice from behind

" sam u are my frd I can never think about u in that way" I said as a matter of fact

" so ur problem is that u think u ll fail " vik asked

I nodded sadly '''''. My whole gan busted into laughter '''''.. I was angry and was about to walk out when ric stopped me ''''.

" dude sorry ''''. We all will help u to gain 'confidence' " vik said

Exactly a couple of days later sam asked all of us to meet her in her place ''''' I thought it was regarding some picnic plan but it was for my date ''''''.

" listen guys I ve found amazing idea " sam said

" tell us the idea we ll tell if its amazing " rick said

" u know this geet our junior ? "

Geet ? I haven't even heard the name '''''

" we have a junior with that name ? " vik asked

" yeah ''' she recently became my frd in facebook '''''.. she writes some fiction stories online '''''' its all romantic "

" so ? '"

" so we can use her stories '''''.. we can take clues from that and make maan talk with her ''''.." sam said

" whats the point ? " sana asked

" listen maan 's problem is that he is scared of the reaction he ll get from a girl right?... so if we are very well aware of the reaction of the girl then he ll not hesitate right? "

" I don't understand " rick said

" ric for instance if u ask a gal out there are two possible answers one she ll accept , two she ll reject ''''''. Many boys are afraid of rejection so they don't talk to girls'''''''. If u are very sure that the girl will say yes then why will anyone be worried " sam said

I vaguely understood the logic ''''''' all I could say was sam is brilliant and I can trust my frds '''''.

FLASH BACK ENDS

"so maan are u gonna give us treat ? " sana asked

" our experiment is successful and u r more confident now '''''''. It call for celebration"

" but yaar poor girl geet I still remember her expression when maan held her in his arms and told that dialogues from her story '''''' she would have thought she must have been experiencing her M&B type dreams " vick said

" come on she was just a mere girl she should be happy that someone like maan would even look at her " sam said

I was silent listener of all these '''''' I didn't know why I neither wanted to stop them nor wanted to hear anything bad '''''''''.a strange fear that engulf me every time I think about the day I decided to play with geet's emotions with her story re appeared '''''..

I didn't know what to do '''''.. Pretending to have a call I excused myself ''''''' I was walking out of the place to get fresh air when I saw geet's scooty ''''''.. is it possible that she is here ? '''''..i immediately called her ''''''. Surprisingly her ringtone that is from her fav serial was heard from behind''''''.. I turned to see geet with tear filled eyes '''''

" geet ''.." before I could complete my sentence her soft hands placed a strong slap on my face

I looked shocked and surprised

" why do u look surprised " she asked

I was blankly looking at her

" oh I forgot I had never written about this slap in my story so u must haven't expected this right " she said

That is when I realized she had actually heard my frd's convo ''''''..

" geet " I called her name

I wanted to explain to her I don't know what I would say but I wanted to talk to her ''''''.but she was long gone




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i really love this story..
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Amazing updates :) :)
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Awesome updates
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Waiting eagerly ...
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thanks for reposting waiting for next parts
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