my IF love story-MG-last part pg 15

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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

superb story with very unique concept yaar...

thanx for restarting it...

hope to get more updates...

it was all Maan's friend's plan...to get idea from Geet's story and apply on Geet only to instill confidence in Maan...

Maan did same with Geet what that girl did on which he had crush...she made him laughing stock between her friends and all and Maan also made laughing stock of Geet in front of his friends...it is really very insulting...

good Geet gave him slap...he deserve this...

but yaar Maan-Geet ka separation nahin dekha jaata mujhse...

thanx for pm...

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Kitne crucial moment pe pause mara h. Nandu dear plz update soon.

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

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take_a_hint

@take_a_hint

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

PART 5

TRUST... the word mocked at Amaan today.She didn't trust him.Everytime he thinks that he was hurt but he couldn't stop thinking about the one look of hurt that crossed her face when she looked at him.The look in her eyes was like stabbing hundred knives in his heart but he wanted to feel the pain.The pain that tells him that he was her culprit, he betrayed her, he played with her trust , he doesn't deserve her.

" you shouldn't have done this to me amaan " reet cried making his heart bleed.

He wasn't the one who will blame the fate for wrong happenings in his life.He believes in making things right and that is what exactly he will do now.He will make it up to her.he will prove his love.

" i will come for you reet " he said to himself.

I sat staring at the screen even after the video ended and the small semi circular replay button appeared in the place where video was playing previously. "i will come for you" i left out a chuckle. The hero will realize his mistakes, repent and try to woo the heroine again that is what happens in movies and shows. But this is LIFE to shout it out loud nothing of that sort will happen here. It has been ten days since i faced the reality of life , reality of Maan. Nothing much changed except the fact that i am in so much pain that i stop crying only when i sleep or times like this when i watch Reet-episodes.I should have lost interest in the word Romance but it didn't happen and i don't know if i should be happy about it. Still when i see Amaan giving Reet those looks i feel butterflies in my stomach but a voice deep inside me reminds me that i can never experience that not after what happened with Maan. Next time when i guy goes all cheesy with me i will be reminded of Maan and i now know he has become an indispensible black mark in the chapter of my romantic book.

Talking about redemption if he ever comes back will i accept him? I haven't seen him since that day. Seniors were having special extended holidays to complete their project. May be he is busy with it or gaining confidence about himself around girls he might be trying his luck with ladies. I know the latter on is most unlike to happen but i wanted to believe its true and that very well helps me to hate him. I m glad that i have told to no one about me and Maan else that sympathetic look will be more destroying than the pain he caused.

" Geet aren't you ready yet? " my mom called out

Ohk i forgot that i have to attend my cousin's engagement party today. We are quiet close and she probably is expecting me. I decided to throw Maan out of my thoughts and give me time to enjoy. His one act is not going to ruin my life. I m hurt it doesn't mean that i m doomed. I have better life and i can't sulk. Its i high time i did unleash the old Geet. I got dressed in white anarkali suit with blue border which is my personal favorite. Little make up and minimal jewelry.

I always wonder why my dad don't allow me to drive come on i know to drive you are the one who got me license. The hall was decorated well over decorated too bright do you want astronauts in space to know that you are getting engaged.

" hey Geet " maya screamed she is same age as mine but i hate her. She is loud and acts very girly.

" hey " i faked excitement.

" you must see the groom he is hot " she whispered when we both were walking towards sreeja's room.She is your brother in law despo i wanted to say.

" heloo.." i smiled looking at sreeja.and this time it was real.

" hey Geet god i was waiting for you " sreeja said

" finally getting married god you are getting older everyday " i complained looking at her.

" shut up and sit near me " she pulled me near her.

We were sitting there having those typical bride-room conversation about marriage stuffs and after about fifteen minutes sreeja's mom took her away to tie the saree. It will take another thirty minutes i guessed to decided to check IF from phone. I had received two private messages of course i checked only like an hour before. One was some random post message and other read update. I checked the name and it was " yourcharmer" have i read any story of this writer? In fact this was the first time i m seeing this ID. Out of curiosity i clicked the link. The FF was on Amaan and Reet and the title was " Back to me". I began to read the first chapter.

" Reet was looking around trying to find something to amuse her in the well decorated hall sitting amidst of her annoying cousins. When she was scnning the art works in the ceiling her eyes suddenly fell on the boy who was staring at her. She didn't realize that even she was looking at him without blinking unless he began to walk near her.Sudden panick created in her when she was him nearing her.

" hey amman " her cousin chipped.

" hello " he said but his eyes were fixed on her

i wasn't sure if i know this writer because the story and writing style seemed different and moreover i noticed that i was the only one to who the PM was sent probably the writer was trying to promote the story. I always believed in encouraging new writers and ideas. So i began to read further.

"Reet was walking to the bride's room carrying a flower basket when she tripped and was about to hit the ground when a strong pair of arms held her strong and next moment she was crushed between his chest and his arms.The flowers she was carrying was thrown up only to flow down as rain"

That is much clich. Why can't anyone think of new ideas. I agree things like this work among girls or they are always hit but come on get a life. I logged out of IF not wanting to drain my battery as i have to go with it the whole night.

Soon the ceremony started and I was amidst gang of my cousin's and other from groom's side.

" i can't believe sissy opts arranged marriage. I would always go for love marriage" i heard maya say

Yeah i rolled my eyes. If its as easy as it seems. There will always be a point when everyone of us may realize that whatever the movie crap shows us is lame.

" Geet why is that guy staring at you? " i heard maya ask and my head snapped up suddenly. Well i m not desperate but curious.

Maya didn't bother to answer as she became busy looking at someone's new phone. I looked around and i didn't find anyone not being engaged in any work in far distance. There was some guy standing about ten feet away from us but his back was facing me and i assumed he was busy. Maya is a kind of teenager who suffers hallucination. Even if a guy looks at pillar opposite them they think the guy is drooling her reflection. Pathetic much.

" Geeet " i heard my aunt's intimidating voice did i mention that i hate her?

" yes aunty " i rushed to her stading in the other side of the hall

" go give this to your uncle " she gave me a box filled with glitter papers

My eyes were searching my uncle around the hall why can't she just tell where he was. I suddenly bumped into an old lady.

" sorry " i said

The lady went giving me an accusing glare. Come on its not that you are ranbir kapoor that i would love to bump. Thank god the papers didn't scatter. On that note i was suddenly reminded about the story that i read only minutes before. Something similar happened. But lets face it it is not that all stories i read possibly happen in my life. Now Maan gone out of the picture i shouldn't worry and its not my story anyways. Thankfully i didn't fall or something like that. i halted when i saw few kids playing. That is exactly " accident prone zone". I was carefully trying to pass them when most unexpected happened that is a kid pushed me and i was going to fall. I m gonna get hurt and probably spend a couple of days in hospital now how am i supposed to attend my cousin's marriage. My mind was pre-occupied when i landed. Well the ground is not as hard as i thought. It was smooth and moreover it moved. Wait ... what?!! How can ground move?.

I opened my eyes to meet a pair of eyes looking at me intently. What the heck?! ?! ?!

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so the updates of this story will be small and irregular so please bare with me...

share your opinions and if you have any suggestions don't hesitate to tell me ...

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

wow dear..

your charmer..must be maan..lolz

he took the same way to reach her thru if..

i love it..

now geet is in maans arms..

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SweetestPari

@SweetestPari

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wonderful update yar..
I think that id was of maan
N the guy who held geet was also maan ???
Curious to know m i rite or wrong...
Next part jaldi dena ... ;-)