THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 60

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape


And Dev-Tara is back,,,...I-star 😆 loved that name Avi 😊 btw Thanx for the PM my dear...
Is Dev a flirt?? Anyways glad to know that they are not negative in this story😊
loved the way he was calling her different names and her mentioning the rules😆

In my most formal tone, I state, "Miss Kapoor, be ready in 45 minutes to go with me. I need you to give me status reports in the car so that we can confidently do the presentation. The meeting is not at the Singhania office. It is at his home which is about an hour away, where I believe, you went last time. I will be expecting you downstairs in the executive parking spots. The blue Lexus is mine."

Her face has a shocked expression on it at my professional voice and she nods and leaves the conference room with a "Yes, Sir".

"Tu tu tu Tara, phas gaya dil bechara..".


😆 i sooo loved this part😆

i was about to ask you why you havent posted any song, maanets wedding song this is, haaye

loved the part Avi...
Cant wait to read maaneets part now...😊

Thank you Purvi!
I am hoping this Devtara go over well with everyone!
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Flawless update
absolutely prompt and precise
😃

Naintara's introspection for various pros and cons
regarding
the zor ke tamaacha😆

Gaal Dev ka laal ho gaya
aur jhatka Tara ko lag raha hai😕

Jokes apart Tara fearing of the worse
her financial position really bad and plus loosing a job
that too such a prestigious one.

Dev teasing her was so cute
Haathi😆
Dev ke chashme change karne ka waqt aa gaya hai
Tara kis angle se elephant dikhi
ya phir thappad ka asar hai

'Taming the shrew'
Ahaa 🤔
I guess who gonna tame whom
only time will say😉

I-star is superb name
absolutely suiting her image
Tu tu tu tutu tara🤣

Avi absolutely amazing chapter yaara
Loved Dev in this chapter
his witty replies, his nicknames to her and the song😆
very well thought of👏

Their scene came out superb
very well penned down
And the song is so amazing
apt for a dreamy wedding😳

Continue soon
Waiting already
😃
Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
NO MAANEET..DEV SO NAUGHTY..TARA SO DIFRENT BT SWT
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh! This Naintara is like a padhaaku ladki with all the rules she had on her fingertips! 😆
I could almost feel the anxiety she felt when thinking about what she's going to do if she's fired. From the little that we know about it, I suppose her Mami is the only person who supports her. I wonder what problem her Mama and her parents have with her. The dress that she's wearing, that pink ruffled shirt with grey slacks, I really admired it.

Dev is such a fun person! I was grinning through and through! He's already ready to become Burton for Taylor. And he also called her 'my' shrew. 😳
Taming Of The Shrew reminded me of a movie I recently saw. The play was an important part of it and imaging these two in places of Kate and Petruchio is sure entertaining! 😆

Naming her I-star and then giving her a theme song cracked me up! 😆
The song that came to his mind, 'Tarey hain baraati', it reminded me of a television show segment I watched when I was in a particularly sour mood. Since then, this song reminds me of that and though the song is nice, I can't help but be a little miffed. I think from now on, I'll remember this song for Dev's epiphany - or his premonition of finding his life partner in her. 😆

So Dev does have a faint memory of this girl with curly hair. It's made me curious to read how, and what connection these two have with each other, since habitats hasn't given any external reaction yet.

Eagerly waiting to read more of these two. Thanks for updating! 🤗
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update love dev tara romance but missing maaneet so much waiting for next part i like the theme song tu tu tara an o mere sathi o mere hatii dev is so naughty like his character well maan seems too serious kind let see how maaneet love story got its peace waiting for next and about the music i never heard the song listen for the first time and like it thanx for the lovely update and pms tc bye love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!! Dev is funny.. He named Naintara with so much names.. Elephant.. Aur kya Elephant ne trunk mar li..🤣 I-Star.. Nice part.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Don't encourage me...😆
Mari maregi ab!!!

You think so... 😆 Mayyo is very non-violent... 😊
Edited by Onir - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Drama+Noodles..
Dramatic Noodles... humara naya naam...😳

Is pyaar se couple ko kisi ki nazar na lage... *Putting kala tikka behind Avi's ears & black masala ka paste on Maggie... * 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing dear
noodles part is fabulous
thanx for the pm

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