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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
.lovely title.poor geet.her parents r getting divorced.hop Maan wil giv her solace.tho it reminded me of good girl bad boy im sure that its diff from that.ur ss is very emotional.plz update soon
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
she is going to all alone...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

.lovely title.poor geet.her parents r getting divorced.hop Maan wil giv her solace.tho itreminded me of good girlbad boy im sure that its diff from that.ur ss is very emotional.plz update soon



Yes dear its different if u have doubt read pg 1 note as nandy and me talked about this her ff is happy one any my ss is small and sad one with happy ending
Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
really loved it dear...

poor geet...why don't the people undearstand tht childrens are never interested in materialistic things but in love and affection...

interesting plot dear...

plzz continue soon...
thnks for the PM...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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feeling so sad for geet...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome one dear
geet parents r very mean
i hate them
poor geet
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting start
is geet really their daughter
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CHAPTER 2


After all this raj can't able to stop himself and said….

"Can we have a talk randeep in private" raj said impatiently.

"K come with me in my study" randeep said and rose from his sit and headed toward his study.

Geet is watching them with moist eye ... she knew now the time come and for her bad luck this is not nightmare but a brutal reality which made her heart bleed.

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"So tell me now what you want" randeep asked in professional way.

"In simple word me and my wife want divorce there is no back step from this decision" raj said adamantly.

"Ok if this is mutual decision then who will take geet custody" randeep asked in doubt as raj didn't mention about geet.

"Yaar me and deepali want a free life so we leave her in hostel here in india and shqre her expense" raj said shamelessly like this is most normal thing in the world.

Randeep is so shocked to say anything ...is he really his childhood friend who are now like heartless stone in the form of human... how can some stoop so low for their pleasure... how can they leave that innocent girl all alone in a stranger country.

"Are you in your sense raj ... how can you leave your own daughter to die here ... no I will not going to support you in this" randeep said in anger and gave a threatening look to raj.

"Well we wasted enough year on all this now we are not going to compromise with our life any cost... if you will not do it some other do it... but geet has to live in hostel now that it" raj also said in same tone.

Randeep is a lawyer and very well understand people mentality so he knew now that raj is not going to change his decision at any cost as he don't has any attachment with geet so for geet he has to think wisely.

"Ok cool down tell me first why you don't have any feeling for geet" randeep asked with curiosity.

"Actually we never wanted a child but because of deepali health we can't able to abortion and geet came in our life ... we trio are living a hell in all these year now we want to separate ... I am wishing geet also will get her true life partner" raj said like businessman.

"I am really thinking you are really my friend raj or someone else" randeep said disappointed.

"Time is very powerful randeep" raj said withabsent mind.

"Hmm well as your pov geet is nothing to you so can I take her responsibilities ... she will stay here in km and study with vicky and annie" randeep asked suddenly... this is shocking randeep also thinking from where this thought come to his mind.

"But there is no need yaar I will make arrangement for her in college" raj said little amused as why randeep asked such thing.

"Hmm but I understand her situation so want her here in km and I don't why but she made a place in my heart in first meeting only" randeep said.

"Well as you wished I have no problem with anything from now onward she is your daughter" raj said with no emotion.

"Ok than we will discuss with deepali also and make agreement outside the court so our work will be easy" randeep said and took out one divorce form for his friend.

Both men concentration is broke by one knock on the study door and there geet is standing with ... both dont from how much time ... but with her expression randeep can say ... she listened every single word... which make her situation worst.

Now she understood one thing she is an unwanted child in her parent's life. She quietly come in and placed coffee tray on the table and went out without a word.

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Here IN HALL

Geet is sitting quietly not interested in anyone one talk where deepali is talking with maan mother ... who is also a little materialistic but in front of randeep and maan ... no on listen to her ...her name is madhu.

Here dev wife meera tried to offer geet some snacks but she denied it politely ... all thought she is in pain because of her toe so she is looking gloomy... but is something else.

After settling everything both men come downstairs and talked with deepali also where on the other side geet is helping meera little but her eye are on the paper which deepali is signing.

Now her faith is decided and nobody asked her wish just give her orders now she will live here with all stangers ... this thought making her crying within but she kept her quite expression on her face.

Maan also come back after completing his one international call ... as this is dinner time and khurana not even had slight idea ... what is the real goal of raj to be here... he just come here for divorce..., and khurana family thinking they come to meet randeep ,...,, where only randeep know ... why they are here... geet just took very little quantity at name of food because of khurana sake.

All khurana is wondering to see her there annien who is 18 yr old a talking machine and here geet seems like silent movie... there is nothing in her like a 16 yr old teenager's.

So this is time that sighania took their leave from khurana but randeep stopped them... geet will live here from now onward... randeep said but all khurana are in shocked... only one question in their mind why.

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"Will tell you all later" randeep said to his family after seeing their confused and shocked expression.

All nodded their head in encouragement.

"Ok as you wish now she is your daughter" raj said disinterestedly but deepali seem confused but raj assured her... they will talk latter.

So at last sighania leave geet here all alone... to think about situation and to face it is two different things now geet understand ...,, she is feeling something died in her heart... but her thought broke by randeep.

"Beta now we are your family ok and don't feel awkward here ... and I am like your father ok" randeep said to geet affectionately but geet is not in this world her soul is crying ... she just want a lonely corner for crying but whom to say here all are mere strangers here ... she can't even has guts to ask them a room for some time.

But understand her need what her eye asking to all...

"Meera vo first floor per princess wala theme ka room hai ...,. From now on that is geet room so her room and make her comfortable here" randeep said and rescue her form bursting her in front of all.

Meera took geet to his room and promised her to show km in morning this is only one side talk only meera is talking with geet but geet is like dead soul who lost her everything just a moment ago.

Meera showed her room wished her good night and left her alone... she just fall on bed and cried and cried till her breath left her and her throat choking... this room is eating her... she want to run away from here just far away from everything don't want to be burden on any one ... her painful feeling room with a painful energy... she just want death engulfed her on her lap... no she will leave from here ... geet thought and wiped her tears and left to randeep study room to talk with him but there maan and randeep is talking about which left her more shattered one more increased to hate her.

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In study room

"Dad how can you took all responsibilities of geet... I means we don't know who are they and by their ignorance on this made me shocked and above all that we didnt meet them ftom ages so how can we believe them... whose knows what intention they had and may be this is also there plan to leave geet here" maan is so worried for his family they are world no one rich family so with fame enemies are always free... so maan is getting suspicious with the geet parent's behavior... how can he believe someone who they not meet from 20 years but sometime his dad talk with them on phone so they are in contact.

"Maan can't you see her innocent eye which are telling her pain and I did this because in past raj save my sister I mean your bua at the cost of his life... I am wondering how can he tunred out to be a stone hearted person for his own daughter" randeep said with sighed.

"Ok dad but be careful we can't believe anyone with close eye so stay away geet from our personal study were we kept all docs …. I think you don't forget what Naina did with us I don't want again someone hurt in this family" maan said as he knew his dad is so soft but this is his responsibility to take care of his family present and future.

"Ok maan now dont think much as you will also start to believe her ... I didn't white my hair in sunlight ok" randeep said with a smile as if maan is with him ... who he can make understand anyone.

But randeep saw some shadow on the door and see geet standing there with shocked and painful expression.

"Why this girl always took a wrong time entry" randeep thought and cribbed.

Maan also turned after watching his dad expression and se geet there... he is little startled as he never want geet will listened him...this is only his concern for his family and a black doubt on geet nothing else… now they both are going to stay on same roof ... and main reason he didnt want geet felt insulted here because of his assumptions which had no proof... but now damaged is done ... now the time of consequences.

i know you all are angry on maan right now but who will trust on a stranger in first meeting and khurana face something in past also and for maan ... geet is unknown person and his family is his first priority

PRECAP: geet is now so worried to see jam... she had breathing problem and jam is allergic for her if she eat



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Runres
what a heartless family !
and yes you are totally correct in your thinking that rich people are soft targets especially from their family and friends
waiting for more!!
Edited by vandana73 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update. .its awesome. .feeling disgusting listening to geet parents not even once thought about geet ...want their life feeling bad for geet...but maan father is soo nice but maan behavior is also right at his place..precap seems nice ab geet kya karegi...update nect soon.
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