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Posted: 12 years ago
want 2 kill geets family ..
n y geet always hears khuranas talks
which breaks her more..
poor girl..
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Posted: 12 years ago



wow lovely cute emotional update.. te way geet ki parents thinking geet is they unwanted child and te way randeer wants to take care of geet was lovely.. te way geet feeling new to te surrounding and te way she broke down wen she left in te room alone, oh god bechari geet ,, going so much in tis age.. te way my maan speaking abt his geet but they past haunting him but baby geet heard it too , oh god now how my maan face his geet..buddhu maan now u r saying to keep te docs away from ur geet but one day u will write ur property on ur geet, tat day will soon cum.. will geet stay here..i love te update so much

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Posted: 12 years ago






A poem by 9n9i9s9h9u9

thanks dear

geet pov she defined very well

kabhi saamne aa kar

mujhe paas bula kar
woh mujh se milla bhi nahi

mere apno ne diye ,
jo jakham
jo sitam
aur tod diya mera har bharam
saath tha umar bhar ka
par woh saath na chale do kadam
to aise main ,
inka mujhe apnana
mere har zakham(emotional one) ko dekh kar bhi bhul jaana
kasoor inka toh nahi
jab saath mere mera khuda bhi nahi
aur
main unse baat karu
itna mujhme bhi toh hosla nahi

woh maang rahe hai ,
mere sach hone ka saboot
chahte hai mujhse ,
suraj ki roshni
aur dhoop
par yeh unse kaise main kahu
main sach hu din ke ujjale ki tarah
koi raat ka adhuraa khaab nahi
haan ,
yeh aur baat hai
unko dikha saku main yeh ssab
iske liye ,mere paas
suraj ki roshni to kya ,
ik mitti ke diye ki roshni ka saath bhi nahi

CHAPTER 3


Here geet tried to say something to randeep '.

"Vo I want to talk with you uncle jii if you are free" geet said meekly and with downcast eye.

"Vo beta" randeep tried to say something to elaborate his talk with maan.

"Vo bas 5 minute kii baat hai" geet again said and avoid any awkward situation.

"Ok tell me beta you need anything" randeep said affectionately and called her near him.

"jii vo" geet tried to say but see first maan than randeep.

"It's ok beta you can said anything in front of maan" randeep tried to assured her.

"Umm I want to stay in hostel ... you don't have to worry about me ...,,, I will be ok... or phir you all here" geet tried to coated her line in sugar so randeep don't feel bad as he is the first person who is really worried for her.

Randeep and maan sighed as they thought this is because of their conversation... maan tried to say something but randeep cut him and send him to his room and made geet sat near him.

"You felt bad with maan view that's why you want to go" randeep asked to her politely.

Geet shook her head in no...,,, "I come here to say this only" geet voice is heavy which doesn't unnoticed by randeep.

"Than" randeep tried to ask her reason.

"You don't have to do anything for me uncle jii you are good but I want to face reality ...,, I don't want any support any more" geet tried to say her pov in some decent words.

"First of all nobody doing any favour to you... you lightened naa your dad save my sister ..,,,, I am just repaying that.,,,,,... and live here like hostel no one said anything to her but I will not allowed you to live all alone in hostel... now no more questions ... nobody can changed my decision ok so go and sleep" randeep said little attourtiveley.

Geet left from there as her tired mind not allowing her to think anything ... she is just like a statue of other hands... they just ordered her and she has to follow them.,... but this is also true she will mostly in her room so maan jii will not feel uncomfortable she doesn't want to be burden or problem to anyone.

Sleep took over her sense ... at least everything is stop for some hours.

In maan room he felt a pang in his heart ... yes he is concerned for his family but that doesn't meant that he want to insult geet in any way... he never thought geet will listen to him... maan knew that she is in pain her red puffed eye are evident of her pain but for her misery he also became a reason of her pain... he knew she is so young to tolerate this ... but seemed like god wants all hurdle in her way and she is accepting them without a word...,. Yes some where he can see her dead eye... her almond shape eye making him restless...maan finally decide to check her one time as she is new here... so maan slowly open her room door here she is sleeping on her stomach and her face is buried in pillow ,... maan made ger lay on bed properly and covered her with divert... maan once again turned toward her and wiped her dried tears with soft hand and left from there.

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Next morning in km

All are wake up as their routine... but geet is still sleeping because of tiredness no one disturb her also just meera went in her room and left her suitcase which came in the morning... but on other side maan is little worried because of last night and want to see geet to make sure ... that she is ok and happy.

Maan had two surgery today so he has to left earlier ... but his eye is roaming near staircase ... he is not a man who hurt someone.

At breakfast time

At last geet come downstairs in her baby pink suit her face is pale... and eye are looking so dead but to see other specially meera and randeep ..., she smiled little and greet them in very meek voice ... but she didn't greet with maan as she wants to distance herself from all of them who hates her... maan felt little annoyed to see this.

"Here I were worried for her and she not even have manner to greet with me when she greeted all on the table... self headed girl... attitude tu dekho" maan thought angrily.

He mistook geet sacredness of feel rejected to attitude ... geet is not understanding what to do here between bunch of strangers... she just watching phone in hope her mom dad call her and take her with them ... her thought is broke by meera who placed jam bread in geet plate and her to eat this..., geet is now so worried to see jam... she had breathing problem and jam is allergic for her if she eat... it will take her whole two hour to be normal but she don't know how to say them... what if they thought bad about her so she decided to eat quietly as what right she has to say her problem to them when her own mom dad disowned her ... she quietly start eat her bread and she coughed little all thought this is normal coughing... but after sometime her breath go unsteady more and more her forehead filled fill sweat drop and she start coughing too much ... she even don't had power to go in her room... first all are shocked then maan took charged in his hand ... he checked geet chest with stethoscope but he need suggestions as he is not chest specialist ... so he called his one friend amy who is chest specialist in his hospital... maan told her about her status ... on a instant note amy prescribed her a medicine so she can get instant relief... maan send nakul with prescription... here geet face turned into red color she is trying to breath but she choking badly ... maan rubbed her back to some relief but no use... she placed her head on his shoulder and tried hard for even for one breath but to their rescue nakul came with medicine which maan gave her and in 10 sec she got her breath back but now also her breath is heavy it will take 15 minute to be completely normal..., meera made her drink water little ... she is still resting on maan shoulder with her eyes closed and taking long breath.

"Are you ok now" maan asked when he saw she is breathing in normal pace.

"Jii" geet answered maan and hurriedly left his shoulders and murmured a meek sorry.

"Could you explain what is this and if you have some breathing problem than where is you medicine" maan asked in little hard tone ... he don't like it when people ignored their health.

"Oo I have food allergic ... with some specific items ... so I always avoid them" geet told meekly.

"Did you consulted with doctor or not or which food you took which left you like maan" maan is trying best to control his anger and not burst on her.

"Vo nahi I never went to doctor this is small thing aur vo I have allergie from jam" she said last stance inaudible sound and hang her head down.

"THIS IS SMALL THING HAA ... DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA ... YOUR BREATH CAN STUCK ALSO... AND IF YOU KNEW THAT JAM IS ALLERGIC TO YOU THAN WHY THE HELL YOU EAT THAT DAM THING ... WHY DONT YOU TELL US" maan shouted on geet top of his lungs out he is fuming in anger and no one have guts to interfere in between.

Geet just hang her head down and tears rolled down on her cheek ... yes she is in fault but no one means no one understanding from what she is going though ... all just thinking with their pov.

How can she say that she can't eat this and that... how.

"Will you take some pain and speak up" maan said sarcastically.

But geet keep her mouth shut and head hang down ... in age she is very young from maan so ... maan thought to ignore it as her childishness..., and randeep also signaled him to ignored all thing and talk about further... somewhere randeep is understanding her pain.

"Ok meera come with geet at 1 pm to hospital... amy will check her... what is the main problem as this type allergies hold a basic reason..., or haa don't be late as I have surgery at 2 pm" maan said and see time ..., ohh shit he is 15 minute late today ... he just said good bye to all and left in hurry.

*********

Geet also left to her room as randeep said to her for taking rest ... but she sat on her room window and watch far away to see the end of her all miseries but they are not seemed to end ... but they are taking geet with them in scary darkness.

After sometime meera come and said geet to be ready as because of Delhi traffic they have to left one hour aho at least so now start to get ready.

"But dii I am ok naa ... there is no need to go hospital" geet passed her thought meekly.

"Do you want more scolding from veer jiii... geet nahi naa than go and get ready ... I am waiting for you in hall" meera said her with little anger that she is taking her problem like nothing happened she angry on her because of morning also... she didn't even say once and all that happened.

Randeep was just passing from there do he listened their conversation and come in the room.

"Meera you go downstairs ..., she will come in a while ok" randeep said to meera first.

When meera left he called geet and said her to take sit.

"Now tell why don't you want to go hospital" randeep asked sweetly.

"I am ok uncle jii... please let me go in hostel I will be happy there" geet said with teary eye.

"We talked about that yesterday ... didn't we... now you are my daughter ... I don't know what happened to raj ... he never be like this but we shared a bond of brothers and with that relation if my brother is doing a mistake then I have to rectify it naa so I am only doing my duty ok... this is all talks is not for kid ok so just think your maa papa leave you here for study ok now go and get ready warn rakash bhadak jaye gaa" randeep said and patted her head affectionately.

***********

After sometime geet and meera left for hospital and reached to khurana hospital... geet is in amazed to see royal hospital like they come into the hotel not some hospital... geet is more shocked after reading one word as this hospital is free for all who is not able to pay their treatment expenses.

One nurse come and escort them to maan personal cabin where he was waiting for them with dr amy a chest specialist ... they both listened knock on the door and maan call them inside.

Meera and geet come inside ... geet is scared there as she us not used to meet people much she only went to her school and directly come bake to home... she is scared from love friendship and any other bond.

Maan is amazed to see her in yellow color suit which is complementary her in every way she is hiding behind meera as she scared that maan will give her other injection.

some of you have doubt that ranbeer going to adopt geet officially ... no there is nothing like that just randeep stop her for staying as he dont want her to stay in hostel all alone and dadimaa entry will clear your confusion in upcoming update.


PRECAP: MAJOR CHANGE IN GEET MENTALITY


WAITING FOR LIKE AND COMMENT

Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first😃
geet wants to stay in hostel
but randeep told her to stay with them.
geet is so scared of maan and don't want to talk to him
maan shouted at geet poor girl
continue soon
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
not fare yaar...
i res there and you posted here... but ok... i managed to check it out again...
very nice upadate
so here Maan Mr kadus Kurrana is shouting at her without knowing how she is mentally... what yaar... bacchi hai... aram se...
now we have to see how Maan's mom and other people are gonna react to her... now dadi will also be coming no.. so i think lots will be cleared...
Geet is so scared of Maan hopefully he understands and mellows down a bit... yaar i miss tammy thought... wo iss kadus ko teek kar degi...
any way... here Geetu baby is all scardy cat and i dont blame her... i just hope everyone here at least help her out of her shell and make her enjoy her teen...
lovely update yaar...
Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bichari geet ko maan ne daat diya really sad for geet ...
Hope she will come out from all her misseries
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor girl.. hope Dadi becomes her friend..
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update dr

geet is really affected by all wat has happened in her life

maan is feeling guilt he think bcoz of wat he has said geet wanted to leave

poor geet she has to heard maan scold but she also is not at fall

if she refused to eat the bread and jam, the people there will think that is is a spoilbrat

even earlier maan has think that her sacreness to be attitude

hope geet will be able to open up a bit and shee that around her not everyone is bad

love the update dr

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was again emotional update
maan shouted on geet which made her more scared
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet 😭😭wasie geet ke place koi bhi hota ye karta
i love maan gesture❤️❤️.wo bhi apni jagah thik hay phir bhi he have some soft corner of geet😛😛.awee maan come to see geet😳😳. oh noo dat pari maan.wasie doctor hay na health ke sath ignorence pasad nahi karega😕.raj understand geet very well😛.
geet in maan hospital.poor geet maan se kinta darti hay 😆.

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