MG SS:Yaadein Part 6 Page 46

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A girl of age 23 was sitting on the bench lost in the thoughts of someone rather say lost in him,MAAN her husband.Her surrounding seems to vanish for her she didn't care was other r thinking of her.Everybody pass thought her as some "bechari" who lost some treasure of her.This girl is GEET,GEET KHURANA wife of the multimillionre MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

Geet Pov:

Why Maan,why u did this to me u went that far from me that i couldn't even reach u why?What was my fault that u give me such a hard punishment to live without you.U know na I will be a dead soul without you so WHY?WHY?WHY MAAN?WHY?Did our togetherness means nothing to u that u forget eveything our love,our dreams,our vows to live and die together.I ask u to return back to me fast but u went that far away from me that now it seems impossible for me to reach u?

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Maan was getting ready to leave for London to sign a deal.Geet was helping him with his tie and was pouting.Maan was lost in her and want to eat her just right now.

Maan-Geet,stop making those faces jaan it will make difficult for me to go.

Geet-To mat jao even i don't want u to go.

Maan-Geet,you know na jaan this deal is very important even i don't want to go without u but Daadi is not well and u don't want to leave her alone so i have no option pls try to understand jaan.

Geet-I understand Maan,par aap jaldi wapas aana ok u know na i can't live without u for a sec.

Maan-I know,now give me a good bye journey gift.

To which geet rose her eyebrow like asking what is he talking about.Maan saw her in confusion and smirks.Maan brought her close by pulling her from her waist while staring at her lips.Geet saw him looking at her lips and blush hard.

Maan-Geet stop doing that u r looking adorable i just want to eat u now but...

Geet smacks his arm.Maan just hug her close to her heart.

Geet-Maan,pata nahi kyun i am not feeling good today like something is going to happen Maan.I am afraid i don't want to loose you Maan.

Maan places his finger on her lips-Shhh Geet nothing will happen trust me.

Geet-Wahi to nahi hain.

Maan-Kya?

Maan stares at her angrily.Geet just ran for her life life shouting-Maan i was just joking pls i am sorry.

Maan ran behind her.
Maan-Sorry,tumhe to main abhi dekhta hoon.
Both r running around the bed and finally Maan hold her but Geet was willing in to free herself and both lost their balance and fall on the bed.(BG-Mahi Mahi).Both r staring at each other lovingly when someone knock the door which brought them out of their reverie.Both stands up from the bed and Maan ask the owner to come in.

Driver-Sir,Car ready hain hum late ho rahe hai airport ke liye.

Maan-Haan tum chalo main aata hoon.

Driver-Ok Sir.

Maan pecks Geet lips and left for the Airport.

Flashback ends

Geet was thinking of their sweet moments when someone place a hand on her shoulder.She turn to see the owner and was shocked.

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Thats for now will update next part soon.
Pls tell me how is it as it is my first os so i am feeling nervous.
Pls do tell me do u me to cont or not.
Pls do like and drop a comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue (Page 1)
Part 1 (Page 6)
Part 2 (Page 9)
Part 3 (Page 13)

Part 4 (Page 23)

Part 5 (Page 43)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum banner...waiting! update soon n do pm! Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Vry intrsting.

Jus hope n wish its nt having sad ending coz i hate maaneet ffs havng sad endings

if so,plz tell me in advance,i won't read it then

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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz no sad story on maaneet...plz...

nice prologue...

loved it very much...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting. . .
pls maan ko maar na Nahi...
ll be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful proloogue...
Wat happened to maan'????
Why is geet shocked????
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet


Vry intrsting.

Jus hope n wish its nt having sad ending coz i hate maaneet ffs havng sad endings

if so,plz tell me in advance,i won't read it then

dear this is not a sad os it will have a happy ending but some parts will me sad so till then bear me pls
pls read next part i am sure u will like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

plz no sad story on maaneet...plz...

nice prologue...

loved it very much...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

this is not a sad os dear pls to know the story wait for 2nd part i m sure u will like it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful start buddy.

You have kept a mystery in d part.Is Maan dead?????
I hope not coz that wud be drastic.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

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