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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: spvd
teaser
nice...
cont soon dear...

will update today for sure

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: preeti.1
awesome teaser ...but last wala scary he i hope maan geet ko carry kar raha ho ..aur agar ye sameera bitch he to jarur dadi aur krrish esa hone na de jisse maan lifelong regret kare

will see who is with maan😉

dont worry maan ko guilt trip par bhejne ka irada nahi hai mera😆

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

UPDATING

anyone waiting...😛

will update around 12😉

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lizzy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

👏ishu what is this mujhe tune cry karwaya

not fair maan lost his memory and geet is in so much pain ye tune kya kiya 😆

they were so happy god accident happened and their world turned upside down😡

ishu yaahan bhi witch aa gayi 😡😡😡😡

arghhh I hate her😡😡😡

I just want to bang her head 😡😡😡

usko bhi abhi hi aana tha idiot kahi ki😡😡😡😡

aagayi bolte huye me maan ki patni hoon huh gaadhi😡😡😡

awww ishu geet bhi cry kar rahi hai😭

awww krish is sooo cute😃

maan geet ko hi bhulta hai mene to phele hi kaha that he is a tubelight 😆😆😆

thank u sooo much for writing 😃

one down two more to go😉

love aanya 😃

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lizzy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: IshitaIrani
UPDATING
anyone waiting...😛

will update around 12😉

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: aanya84
👏ishu what is this mujhe tune cry karwaya
not fair maan lost his memory and geet is in so much pain ye tune kya kiya 😆

they were so happy god accident happened and their world turned upside down😡

ishu yaahan bhi witch aa gayi 😡😡😡😡

arghhh I hate her😡😡😡

I just want to bang her head 😡😡😡

usko bhi abhi hi aana tha idiot kahi ki😡😡😡😡

aagayi bolte huye me maan ki patni hoon huh gaadhi😡😡😡

awww ishu geet bhi cry kar rahi hai😭

awww krish is sooo cute😃

maan geet ko hi bhulta hai mene to phele hi kaha that he is a tubelight 😆😆😆

thank u sooo much for writing 😃

one down two more to go😉

love aanya 😃

aww let me get u a tissue paper😉

i made u cry😆😆😆

ye witch usse bhi dangerous nikli to😉😆

ya do anything with her after i will finish the os😉

dont worry jaanu geet uska kaam khud finish kar degi😉

u like krish i too love him yaar he is very sweet in this os u will love him for sure😛

maan tubelight🤣offer him a mentos anu and tell him mentos kao dimag ki batti jalao😆😆😆😉

luv u yaar ki u read my os

i really love ur comment

2 more comments is waiting for me

jaldi do😉

waiting...⭐️

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

OK anu u read and comment i am going warna aaj bhi update nahi milega😆😆😆

will come at around 11 or 12 maybe when the update will be ready😉

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: tamanna1391
waiting

will update at 12😉😛

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lizzy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Awesome update 👏

Ishu ye maan NA pura gone case hai yaar pure world me srif geet ko bhula idiot😡

Awww Krish is sooo cute so will he play Cupid between maaneet😉

Haha nurse ki to batti off Kardi Krish ne well the name is KSK😉

Hmmm GMSK Bhi kam nahi hi she is ready to get back on that witch 😡

Arghhh that Sam is doing such cheap stunts for money that sooo gross yaar😡

Loved dadi character hope geet's plan doesn't fail and Sam never gets close to the tube light😡

Ohhh Maan and Krish comfy with each other that's good😃

Hhmmm so Maan babu finally DiMag ki batti jali and he is asking for geet 😆

Well sticky situation 😆

Want to see how maaneet cross all this hurdles and make new memories of their own😳

Waiting waiting for part 4 😃😉

Love aanya😃

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Geet got panicked to see the caller id.She moved to her room's balcony.Geet stay in guestroom as in their room Maan & Sammera stay.

"Hello"Geet said as she picked the call hestitantely.

"Geet,how r u my bachha"asked Geet dad Mr.Samrath Rathode.

Geet lost her control and started to cry after listening to her Dad's voice after a long time.She is very close to her Dad and she is the favourite child of Samrath.Samrath got panicked listening to her cries and ask her why is she crying.Geet told everything to her father how Maan had an accident and how he lost his memories and Sameera stay in their house.Samrath ask her calm down and ask her why she didn't inform them earlier.To which Geet replied that she don't want to trouble them.Samrath give a nice scolding to her for hiding important things from him.After some talks about Maan's health Geet ask about her Mom,Mrs.Radha Samrath Rathode and about her younger sister,Meera Rathode.

"Dad,main ye to puchna hi bhool gayi why u called me is there something important?"asked Geet in a meek voice.

"Haan bachha maine tumhe ye bataane ke liye call kiya tha ki u have to attend a Press Conference in Delhi itself regarding the new project"informed Samrath.

"Par Dad u know ki main media attention nahi chahti fir kyun,aur waise bhi no one know me as GEET RATHODE fir"

"Main to chahta tha ki u go there as GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA but sayad Kismat bhi yahi chahti hai ki tum Duniya ke saamne pehli baar GEET RATHODE ban kar jaayo"

"Par Dad aap mujhe kyun kah rahe hai aap bhi to attain kar sakte hain na?"

"Geet i am going to London for a meeting meri 5 pm ki flight hain"

"What,aap London jaa rahe ho aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi"

"Bachha,sorry par abhi phone kiya na ok lets forget this tum mujhe Maan ki reports mail kar do"

"Maan ki reports...kyun Dad"

"Bas isi tarah main...jo main soch raha hun wo confirm ho jaayega to fir bata dunga OK for now office jaayo and check the files,OK BYE"

"BYE DAD,take care"

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Geet went to office and meet Rohan CEO of Delhi branch of RATHODE GROUP OF COMPANIES and discuss about the project.He informed her about the joint project with Handas with other company which is yet to be final in the party itself.

Geet informed Rohan that she will reach in the party on time and went to KM to inform Dadimaa about the party.

~~~~~*~~~~~~

Party Venue

A lot of hustle-bustle was there as for the first time GEET RATHODE is coming infront of the World's eye.Three cars stopped infront of the venue where the party is going on for the upcoming joint project with the Rathodes.Bodyguards stepped out from their cars and rushed to open the car.Geet stepped out from her black BMW in her simple pink gown.

(This is my 1st edit😊Plz guys dont use it without my permission)(Plz do tell me how is my 1st edit)

All the present faces were shocked or say numb just with her aroma which she carried with her.All were gaping with their open mouths to she the 2nd owner of the RATHODE GROUP OF COMPANIES.Media rushed to her with their series of questions to which she ignored all of them and intered inside the venue with rohan by her side.All heads turns to her once she reached inside the hall.Unknown to her one pair of eyes r continuously watching her every movements and he is none other than MAAN SINGH KHURANA.He is also present in the party to grab the joint project with the RATHODES.Geet started to meet everyone one by one and then meet the questioning eyes of Maan.She cant answer him anyhing right now so she just greeted him like she meet him for the first time and left from there to the presentation hall.The presentation went well and the KHURANAS joint the hands with the RATHODES.Then all moved to the dance area and start enjoying.

Geet felt a tap on her shoulder and she turned.She beamed in happiness to see that person.She jumped in joy and immediately hugged him.

He is Karan Malhotra.Geet Best friend.He loves Geet very much and wanted to marry her but when Geet chooses Maan he left his feeling for her as for him their friendship matter him most.He was always their for her whenever she need him but he left INDIA 3yrs ago to broad his business and has come back today only.

"Oh Karan I missed u too much"said Geet hugging him.

"I missed u too Sweety"said Karan hugging her.

"How many times i have to told u dont call me Sweety,I hate that name"said Geet angrily coming out from the hug.

"Sorry baba dont show me ur big eyes u look like a maindhak(frog)"said Karan teasing her.

"Awww I look like a maindak u bandar"said Geet putting her hands on her waist.

"Stop calling me with those names"

"Acha when u said,it was ok aur main bolu to galat"

"Ok sorry baba as I didnt call u from months i know u r angry from me for not calling u"

"U better be"

"Ok ab to maaf kar do"said Karan holding his ears.

"Ok,thik hai"

"Lets have a dance,May I"ask Karan extending his hands.

"Sure"said Geet placing her hands on his.

They both moved to the dance floor,swinging along with the music they start talking about each other life.Here Maan was burning in rage to see her with Karan like he will burn the whole world with his eyes.He himself was not getting ki why he is feeling so attracted or protective towars her.He is very much frustated with the turn of events.

Firstly,he feel very sniffed in Sam presence and prefer to be with Krish to avoid any aloofness.he is not able to even touch Sam whenever she comes to him he would withdraw himself and will left from there.In night Krish is always present in there room as instructed by Geet not to leave Maan and Sam alone. Secondly,he always feel attracted towards Geet like there is a magnetic pull which is pulling him towards her.Surprisely,he didnt feel Sam absenence in his life as his life revolve around Geet and Krish.Many times he try to stop thinking about Geet its not possible for him to forget to think about her when they live in same house.

Maan went to the bar to cool down his anger which only increase to see them together.He almost gulp 10-15 glasses now.When the people stop dissapearing he also start to go from there when Adi support him and take him to his car as he was highly drunk.Once Adi seetled him in the car,he called Geet and inform her about Maan condition.Geet bid bye Karan and went to see Maan.She was shocked to see Maan condition as he never drink.She asked Adi to leave,she will take care of him.Geet start to drive the car.On the whole way Maan kept disturbing her b kissing her hands or asking silly questions as why she dont live with him and why she was with Karan.Geet kept quiet as she was not sure what to answer Maan.She stopped the car infront of the outhouse cause she dont want Dadimaa or Krish to see Maan like this.She support him keeping his hands on her shoulder and take him to the outhouse.

Geet placed him on the bed and take out her shoes.She turneds to go when she saw Maan holding her hands.He came upto her and cupped her face in between her palms.

"Geet look at me"demanded Maan.

"Look at me dammit"Maan shouted at her when she kept looking at the ground.Hearing his shout she looked up into his eyes.Both go lost in each other eyes.The world got stpped for them.Maan picked her up in his arms and carried her to the bed all the while admiring her.His eyes r dark with the passion to have her near him.Geet just close her eyes feeling him near her after so many days.She submited herself to her husband without much thinking about the concequences.

Precap-A slap(think who will get😉and who will give😆)

Note:Next update will be after 100+ likes and 10 page of proper comments(spamming of me and aanya is not included in this😉)

Guys i have my studies so i am not able to update regularly as i didnt want to write silly just for the sake of giving updates.I wrote my heart in updates as from childhood i am fond of stories whether it is any novel,comic or maaneet ff.So i want to give my best to in my ffs hope u all will understand. Pls do comment too as it take a lot of time of me to update and if get less response i dont want to continue it.I will try to finish this os soon.This os will have 3-4 more parts.

Edited by IshitaIrani - 12 years ago

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