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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: Onir
@ Sweety: Hi... 😊 *hugs*

@ Avi : Mujhe pataa chala tumahare baare mein... please take care... 🤗

hi onir.!!

aur esa kya ho gaya avi ko?? 😕

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kareena32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

very nice part

cont soon

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: sweetkj

hi onir.!!

aur esa kya ho gaya avi ko?? 😕

🤗

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi
😃

RES!!!

EDITED...

Ufff I know Me too late
But was tooo Busy today IF pe aane ka tym nahi mila 😭

Now coming to Update 😊
First scene of Part 😉
Superb Song + Dream 😳 😉 😆
Firstly Hrithik is Luking Hott in dis Song 😳
Secondly Its one of My Fav song 😛
For a sec I thought it is Geet dreaming of Maan 😆 😳
Bus wala Part was a harsh Reality of Our Society 😡
These badmaash 😡
Stiletto uske mou pe maarni chahiye thi 😡
Now coming to Lift Scene 😆
I think it was Dev..😕
Poor Dev 😆
Pehle din hi Chapait par gai 😆 😆 😆
Me so excited for Further Updates Jani 😃

Kaisa laga comment hope yehi acha ho 😆
Is se acha meko nhi aata 😆

Thank u Sheen...

I think this is the biggest comment you ever wrote...😆

Woh bhi mere liye...🤗

Lub u Behna...

Aage aage dekho aayega mazaa...😉

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thank u Sheen...
I think this is the biggest comment you ever wrote...😆
Woh bhi mere liye...🤗
Lub u Behna...
Aage aage dekho aayega mazaa...😉

Ur absolutely Rite 😆
Lub you too 🤗
Waiting for More Mazaa 😆

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

@Sheen: hum Mari ki thread pe chatting kar rahe hai sab... aaja..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: Onir
@ Sweety: Hi... 😊 *hugs*

@ Avi : Mujhe pataa chala tumahare baare mein... please take care... 🤗

Thanks Onir...Happy Easter!

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Onir...Happy Easter!

Thanks so much Angel... 🤗

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dreamy4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

😊 lovely update.
I thought tis intro part was of geet's but it turned out to be naintara 😆

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palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

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So my favorite girl turned out to be "Naintara"..

You and Bratty,both are on mission to making me love "Vamp" of "GHSP"..Her naina and your naintara both are revolving in my mind right now as I read the latest update of "Torn pages of diary" before reading chapter 3 of "The locket"..

The best thing about this "naintara" is that despite having a troubled "past",she dreams of "Hritik Roshan" which soon gets replaced by her crush{which she is not ready to accept😉}..In her first appearance,Avi,you showed us her "soft side" which is hidden beneath the tough exterior..Usually It takes some chapters to understand a particular character in a story but your "magical writing" did this task in one chapter itself...

Kudos dear...👏You are one of the finest and bestest writers on the IF who are experts in presentation..!!!😊

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