THE LOCKET (1) - Page 64

Originally posted by: Onir

Hi Avi ... 😃

You're OL now???

Good morning Onir

Since my other acct was closed i had to spend a lot of time making a buddy list for this story

You just missed Krishna

Originally posted by: dqno1

Good morning Onir

Since my other acct was closed i had to spend a lot of time making a buddy list for this story

You just missed Krishna

Gn Angel... 🤗

Krishna se toh kitne din hue baat kiye ...

🤣 NT 🤣 . Avi that was awesome ⭐️.

I can see why Dev fell in love with her.

Uski tappad iske gaal
Hue hue sab laal pe laal 😆


When that lady was being manhandled in the bus my brain was going like 'If it had been me there...'
But the sad truth when it would come to the moment I would probably be too shocked to do anything. . So because NT successful caused that man to bleed 👏.

Awesome update like button not working 😡

awesome update
great!
i love the way the story is progressing!
waiting for more

Originally posted by: glassdoor

🤣 NT 🤣 . Avi that was awesome ⭐️.

I can see why Dev fell in love with her.

Uski tappad iske gaal
Hue hue sab laal pe laal 😆


When that lady was being manhandled in the bus my brain was going like 'If it had been me there...'
But the sad truth when it would come to the moment I would probably be too shocked to do anything. . So because NT successful caused that man to bleed 👏.

Glad you enjoyed NT. i liked writing her.

Originally posted by: punam2712

<font color="#ff00ff">I am still confused who is with who and between past and present</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">dev is engaged with a girl who slaped him when he proposed</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">and this is naintara and dev's first meeting and she slapped him - is this present or past</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">naintara was thinking about some other man earlier whom she blamed for making her late</font>

A/N: This is a story of two brothers Maan and Dev and their journey from teens to men. There are two girls who fall in love with them in the process Geet and Naintara, while one love story is sweet and gentle, the other is no less than fireworks. There will be confusions, misunderstandings, growing up, breaking up, making up, standing up and lots of love along the way. Hope you enjoy it.

Edited my comment on Pg. 88 😊

Originally posted by: Onir

😊I loved it ... I know I always say this but can't help it, that's what I feel after reading the part. All the revealations in this part was so great. Finally the suspense is over. Its Naintara... 😃 *Yes me grinning form ear-ear* I always knew That you would never Let M-G be with someone else, You're an optimist & believe in happy endings, just like me... 😉

Anyways before I waver again, let me talk about the update. - firstly it was such a traet with the part starting with HR... , he is my first crush... Hayee. Loved the whole dream sequence, & the song was just like cherry on the cake. 'Tere ore chale' is so soothing & romantic. Why don't i get such dreams, I most of the times don't even remember my dreams... 😔.

Naintara... After redaing it I was like Haila... nice one. Her personality description in Chapter 1 has made me a admirer of hers. Then this part I was like I am likng this girl too much. Who the hell is that person who treated her in the past this badly. And what is her past that haunts her, & has made her leave behind all her family & just be on her own. I think she loves Dev, but she feels she isn't worthy of him. Also I'm guessing when he proposes her she does back out but Dev will win her over eventually. Now this is all my assumptions but will leave it to you to reveal it all...

The whole bus ride & the whole bashing scene was so great & well executed. 👏 Woman power. I love Naintara's guts & courage here. Very few of them can carry out the things she did in the bus to that pervert, jerk, shame on mankind person. It usually is that we girls just keep shut & keep boiling within ourselves & never give it back deservingly. Her answer to That aunty hit the nail. I admire her power & nature here... 👏 I could have never have done it, thpough I have answered them back in my very own style, but not this way which will shut them off as well as teh others are awakened. The guts of the man to complain against her. I love her. Kudos to her & to you too for presenting her so well... 👏

Dev ko slap ke saath welcome kiya... interesting... Waiting for more... 😃