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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#641

Hello who is thinking of wrapping up here? 😡

3 parts 3 parts ... Don't even think on those lines. You can't wrap it up. That too when I'm hooked onto it and just startedgetting the whole feel of it... Nah no thinking on wrapping up. You have to continue now.
I can't even imagine how much effort you must be putting to give us such good parts. But I can assure you that there are few of us who will be waiting for more and will always be there. 😃

Anyways just hang in there you will find me waiting always... 🤗

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#642

better late than never...

loved the three chapters...n the intro of the four members...

things are just shaping up for the story...glad to catch it at the right time...

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Dev got a tight slap on his cheek...🤣 God.. He got a slap & i m laughing... Nice update.. But when Maneet gonna meet.??😕

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#644

So it was NT & dev whom she slapped on her first day

I thought it was geet...lol..

Lovely part

cont soon

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
<font color="#660066">Dev got a tight slap on his cheek...🤣 God.. He got a slap & i m laughing... Nice update.. But when Maneet gonna meet.??😕</font>

When the character sketches are done more of the story will begin.

Thanks

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ddgcmgfan

@ddgcmgfan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#646

Hey Avi:

Sorry for the extremely delayed comment...I see I missed three chapters already!!!... First of all I am sooo glad you decided to continue writing. Characters unfolding slowly...I am liking it. I seem to favor stories with strong female leads for some reason. Seems like Naintara in this one is just that...I guess its way to early to comment on others so will wait to read more. You are doing an excellent job with this story and excited to read more. Keep up the great work👏👏👏.

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sweetkj

@sweetkj

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#647

ohhkay.!!!

someone just made me realise that mene bakbak uurfff comment as known by all yahan nahi kiya hai.!!

and for that me khud chullu maang rahi hu.!!

but still chullu me jaane se pehle comment toh kar du. :P

well isme meri koi galti nahi hai, avi.!!

but this all happened because of HR and Maan.!! and these two together.. ufff.!!

*comes back from lala land. though i dont know how?? xD*

i dont know but this story is turning as suspense thriller kind of for me.!! as i am still trying to understand who is where.. and what is happening..

but what i am loving above all is the strong characterization of each and every person.!! be it geet or maan or naintara or dev or dadi.!!

i loved that slap scene.!! it was 'hillarious' and made me shake my head for naintara as well as dev.!! :P

i loved that maan and his parents and his piano.. though i know it was in last update but still.!! and that dance of a son and mother..!! ohhh i was like grinning and had an awe expression on my face.!!

and as always waiting for more of it to come.

THAP THAP THAP. :D

*hugs avi*

*kaan bhi pakading*