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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

So my favorite girl turned out to be "Naintara"..

You and Bratty,both are on mission to making me love "Vamp" of "GHSP"..Her naina and your naintara both are revolving in my mind right now as I read the latest update of "Torn pages of diary" before reading chapter 3 of "The locket"..
If Maya can be understood so should NT. I wanted to explore what made her the way she was in GHSP. There is always a reason behind the person you become and so its my attempt to unravel her. Have to say I was sad that LP ended, can I persuade you to write an epilogue, for me please...would love to see Geet with a newborn. That Laddu and Hemamalini just made me fall in love with them.
The best thing about this "naintara" is that despite having a troubled "past",she dreams of "Hritik Roshan" which soon gets replaced by her crush{which she is not ready to accept😉}..
She is but a girl and HR has to make an appearance in my stories for all the fans he has here esp Sweety, Aashu, Shika and Onir. Did you like the song? I adore that scene on the boat in Kites, reminds me of a vacation in Aruba and though the movie was not a hit, the music was wonderful. Believe it or not I found a pic of Abhinav Shukla with the said "abs" and so although I wanted the song for Maan, it fit Dev better...
In her first appearance,Avi,you showed us her "soft side" which is hidden beneath the tough exterior..Usually It takes some chapters to understand a particular character in a story but your "magical writing" did this task in one chapter itself...
I don't think it is magical, in fact I go through so much anxiety putting it out and drive my friends crazy with it... you can ask Mari and Shika and the mafia people how many times I have wanted to stop. I think I am going to have to pull some of this NT in me so that I can stick it out through this story.
Kudos dear...👏You are one of the finest and bestest writers on the IF who are experts in presentation..!!!😊
Palin when you say such things I want to hide. I am but trying to entertain my friends. I have no talent nor imagination but I have some things that I like and value, bas wohi batane ki koshish kar rahi hoo...
Thanks Palin for taking the time to communicate your thoughts of the update. I know you are not well still you did this. Your words mean so much to me, I wish I could express.
Ha, ha my reply just exceeded your comment... hanging around Onir and Mari has rubbed off on me, I think...😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It feels like,we have played Holi...
Itne sare colors...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: palindrome

It feels like,we have played Holi...

Itne sare colors...😆

😆
Thanks for considering the epilogue request... Geet's unique style of thinking has me wondering about how she would be experiencing things further in her life...
🤗Palin...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tyro

better late than never...


loved the three chapters...n the intro of the four members...

things are just shaping up for the story...glad to catch it at the right time...

Thanks Jyoti... I have a new acct so I had to recreate the buddy list... that was the reason for the delay... glad you are here..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ddgcmgfan

Hey Avi:

Sorry for the extremely delayed comment...I see I missed three chapters already!!!... First of all I am sooo glad you decided to continue writing. Characters unfolding slowly...I am liking it. I seem to favor stories with strong female leads for some reason. Seems like Naintara in this one is just that...I guess its way to early to comment on others so will wait to read more. You are doing an excellent job with this story and excited to read more. Keep up the great work👏👏👏.

Hi Phoram... khusbhu se bhar gayi thread meri...😊
Sorry not needed... it took me a long time to recreate the buddy list so there was the delay in PM'ing...
I am glad you liked it so far... since the updates are shorter there will be more than one per wk so do check back and let me know what you like and dislike...
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Posted: 12 years ago
GM Sheen! Kaise haal chaal?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


GM Sheen! Kaise haal chaal?



GoOd Evening Avi 😆
Theek u tell? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetkj

ohhkay.!!!

someone just made me realise that mene bakbak uurfff comment as known by all yahan nahi kiya hai.!!

and for that me khud chullu maang rahi hu.!!

No chullu for you... tu aa gayi bas yehi kafi hai...🤗
but still chullu me jaane se pehle comment toh kar du. :P



well isme meri koi galti nahi hai, avi.!!

but this all happened because of HR and Maan.!! and these two together.. ufff.!!


Tere liye HR ko story mein dalna padta hai na...

*comes back from lala land. though i dont know how?? xD*



i dont know but this story is turning as suspense thriller kind of for me.!! as i am still trying to understand who is where.. and what is happening..

but what i am loving above all is the strong characterization of each and every person.!! be it geet or maan or naintara or dev or dadi.!!

Character sketch nahi likhna tha so I thought I would start like this with each character that will give hints on the story.. glad you liked it...

i loved that slap scene.!! it was 'hillarious' and made me shake my head for naintara as well as dev.!! :P

Me too... I was giggling while typing it... NT will rock I am hoping...and Dev will make u melt,... again hoping...

i loved that maan and his parents and his piano.. though i know it was in last update but still.!! and that dance of a son and mother..!! ohhh i was like grinning and had an awe expression on my face.!!

Me too... this is inspired from my jaan who was here last week. he plays the piano and I sing with him while hubby watches...

and as always waiting for more of it to come.

THAP THAP THAP. :D

*hugs avi*

*kaan bhi pakading*
no kaan pakding for Sweety... hugging kheech ke...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi



GoOd Evening Avi 😆
Theek u tell? 😉

Better but still hurting a lot...
Am going to lie down all day and just catch up on all the updates...
Good Evening, Sowie...😊

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