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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Chalo me off for now

raat ko aaungi

Bye

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Aqal ayi ya nahi 🤣

oye MUN khool apna Avi

we all r waitingAQAL ayai ya nahi

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: dqno1

Onir🤗

Thanks for being here...

The girl in question is the lead😊

Restrictions will be lifted hopefully in the next 24 hrs... I hope...

Did you like the song?

My hubby is a Kishore Kumar buff so everytime he sings anything it is Kishore's... and this is a nice kitchen dance number 😆

Avi... 🤗

I will always be there ... even if it isgoing to be the second spot... 🤔.

Oh okay then I suppose she sin't married yet... it is some early presumption that is leading to misunderstanding.

Yup I liked the song. Infact I like to hear kIshore Kumar songs. Kitchen dance number... ???

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: sona-rai

oye MUN khool apna Avi
we all r waitingAQAL ayai ya nahi

😊 Maine kitne PM kiye ki I am starting something... na Mari aayi, na Aashu, na Nauri, aur Sheen ne to mujhe keh bhi diya ke main kal aaungi Uske aage kisi ko bolne ki himmat hi nahi rahi😭

Tum sab so rahe the so I did not bug you...

Shukar hai Heytal, Onir aur Shika aa gaye...😊

Warna koi Avi ko kuch samajhta nahi hai yaha...😭

Sobbing hysterically on Sona's shoulders...

Ab mein aisa comment na doon toh kya karooo? Dil tod ke rakh diya tha💔

🤗 Sona...

Itna zor se mat maar story bheje mein se bahar chali jaayegi...😆

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: dqno1

😊 Maine kitne PM kiye ki I am starting something... na Mari aayi, na Aashu, na Nauri, aur Sheen ne to mujhe keh bhi diya ke main kal aaungi Uske aage kisi ko bolne ki himmat hi nahi rahi😭

Tum sab so rahe the so I did not bug you...

Shukar hai Heytal, Onir aur Shika aa gaye...😊

Warna koi Avi ko kuch samajhta nahi hai yaha...😭

Sobbing hysterically on Sona's shoulders...

Ab mein aisa comment na doon toh kya karooo? Dil tod ke rakh diya tha💔

🤗 Sona...

Itna zor se mat maar story bheje mein se bahar chali jaayegi...😆

awww tujhay mujhay PM kerna chahiye tha na

fikar not Story bahar nahi janay dongi teray Bhejay main se

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Okay... so I have this habit of following saving the best for the last quote, and I thought to read this prologue in a fresh mood hence and I have read it now and damn it to hell, I want to catch your shoulders and shake you violently until your teeth chatter. How can anyone make us feel for characters in such less lines. How? HAUU?
Needless to say I am hooked and I am going to stalk this thread big time. Hmph.

Experimenting with a new idea (for me) in writing. Smaller updates one per character and then it will come together... one event per update... hope it goes over well...

I am terrified of presenting this one as it is very different from Dr. K. I am not going to live upto expectations, I feel.. still going to try my best...

Thanks for the support Shika.. I am not into the "ji" part... so just Shika.. 🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

He he I use Ji when I am in DQ mode, you see. In reality I don't have tameez so I don't use Ji at all😆
I love stories where scenes are revealed individually with each update. If the updates are frequent then that makes a complete satisfied course of meal.😆 I can burp happily🤣
And don't worry by what I have read of yours, I would say more than expectations, I have faith in your writing so bring it on Avi