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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Congrats for new story

Lovely start

cont soon

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#142

hey dear...repost all ur works from this id...saw ur signature...only 2 works are there...

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#143

How come I am so late to reach here???😕 anyways..pahuch toh gayi finally...😃

First of all "Interesting title".."The Locket"..Don't know why as i read the title,"The famous "Tabij" flashed infront of my eyes...I fondly call it "Maan's mangalsutra"...😛😉😆..Sadly it did not make its appearance in the prologue..😕

Coming to characters,only two names have been revealed yet,"Dev" and "Dadimaa"..I am pretty sure,this guy in immense pain is "Maan" but I am not able to guess the"girl" who has entered the mansion as his bhabhi ji..She could or could not be geet..

As bratty said,you are able to make your characters attach to readers in their first appearances only...I totally agree with her..

I was pained as I read Maan's{supposedly,as you haven't told his name yet} pain..😭

Very beautiful and captivating start,avi...

Waiting for more and more asap...

Oh i forgot..congrats for new story...🤗

Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#144

na hum is story main INTERESTED nahi hain

sahi kaha na mainay SOL GANG

Avihope tujhay AQAL agayai hogi abb

lovely start

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Zariya

@zariya123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#145

so geet is married to his brother n that 2 happily

why maan is always late in ffs

poor guy

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: sona-rai
na hum is story main INTERESTED nahi hain
sahi kaha na mainay SOL GANG
Avihope tujhay AQAL agayai hogi abb
lovely start

Aqal ayi ya nahi 🤣

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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

vry intriguing eager to read more😛

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: mayyo13
First of all, congratulations for the new story! I'm glad to have something from you to read. 😊

My stomach dropped like a pinball when I read the prologue. I already felt for him when he tried to act normal for the sake of his family and covered the anguish he was going through.

I'm curious about his case though. Was his love unrequited? Did he never confess or did she not accept him?

I'm not going to say either way if the girl in his twin brother's arms is the lead or not. But personally, I wouldn't want her to be the one he'll end up with. Creates a lot of family mess!

And, you didn't mention his name anywhere. Any special reason ya aise hi? I guess, aise hi since Dadi is happy to have 'both' her grandsons back, and one is Dev so the other one is Maan. Yes yes, ignore my blabber! 😆

Thanks Avi! 🤗
(Maine kaha tha na 'thank you' ke baghair main nahin reh sakti! 😆)

😊 You wanted a story from me? Maang nahi sakti thi kya? Kabhi kuch keh ke toh dekhti...

You liked the excitement of the prologue and felt for him already... chalo shukar hai...😊

This story has been in my head for months ever since you started "if only" and I wrote a part for that. I am just hoping that mere head mein joh hai I can translate into an entertaining story...

There are quite a few parts to this one and they will be short. I am trying a new style of presenting so hope I can live up to it.

I just want to warn you ahead of time that Dr. Khurana has my heart so maybe this one may or may not live upto everyone's expectations from me. I am nervous about that. 😕

Thanks for being here...🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#149

hey Avi...where is thhe other story which u promised to give us?? dr khurana's 1st parts...

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HeytzMaaneet

@HeytzMaaneet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: dqno1

Heytz!🤗

It felt so good to post and see you there...

Koi toh bulane pe bhi nahi aaya...

Rest assured it is a Maaneet FF, happy ending wala...

thoda toh drama karna padega na!

after all I am dqno1

Thanks for being there for me dear...

Stay tuned for more..

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