THE LOCKET (1) - Page 15

Originally posted by: sona-rai

na hum is story main INTERESTED nahi hain

sahi kaha na mainay SOL GANG

Avihope tujhay AQAL agayai hogi abb

lovely start

Originally posted by: mayyo13

First of all, congratulations for the new story! I'm glad to have something from you to read. 😊

My stomach dropped like a pinball when I read the prologue. I already felt for him when he tried to act normal for the sake of his family and covered the anguish he was going through.

I'm curious about his case though. Was his love unrequited? Did he never confess or did she not accept him?

I'm not going to say either way if the girl in his twin brother's arms is the lead or not. But personally, I wouldn't want her to be the one he'll end up with. Creates a lot of family mess!

And, you didn't mention his name anywhere. Any special reason ya aise hi? I guess, aise hi since Dadi is happy to have 'both' her grandsons back, and one is Dev so the other one is Maan. Yes yes, ignore my blabber! 😆

Thanks Avi! 🤗
(Maine kaha tha na 'thank you' ke baghair main nahin reh sakti! 😆)

Originally posted by: dqno1

Heytz!🤗

It felt so good to post and see you there...

Koi toh bulane pe bhi nahi aaya...

Rest assured it is a Maaneet FF, happy ending wala...

thoda toh drama karna padega na!

after all I am dqno1

Thanks for being there for me dear...

Stay tuned for more..

😊