THE LOCKET (1) - Page 17

Originally posted by: palindrome

How come I am so late to reach here???😕 anyways..pahuch toh gayi finally...😃

First of all "Interesting title".."The Locket"..Don't know why as i read the title,"The famous "Tabij" flashed infront of my eyes...I fondly call it "Maan's mangalsutra"...😛😉😆..Sadly it did not make its appearance in the prologue..😕

Coming to characters,only two names have been revealed yet,"Dev" and "Dadimaa"..I am pretty sure,this guy in immense pain is "Maan" but I am not able to guess the"girl" who has entered the mansion as his bhabhi ji..She could or could not be geet..

As bratty said,you are able to make your characters attach to readers in their first appearances only...I totally agree with her..

I was pained as I read Maan's{supposedly,as you haven't told his name yet} pain..😭

Very beautiful and captivating start,avi...

Waiting for more and more asap...

Oh i forgot..congrats for new story...🤗

interesting
is geet married to someone other than maan
but you said they shall be together in the end
so i guess we wont be too sad if that isnt the case
cheers for pm
shall look forward for more dear

Interesting!!! Will wait for the story to unfold!!!!!

I'm curious would love to read this.

Originally posted by: april12

I'm curious would love to read this.

Is this an FF?

Are they identical twins?

Seems very Interestg. Eagerly waitg for d story to unfold 😃

seems like the person is maan
lets see what is in future

loved it please continue soon please ..

Amazingly written
first I was scared...
afta readin ur note m not. .
ll be waiting