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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti555

lovely update

just loved it



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I love Maan-Geet. So nice to read a fresh perspective on their story :)
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Originally posted by: Anony_mous




I love Maan-Geet. So nice to read a fresh perspective on their story :)


Thank u dr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 4
lovely part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
you are doing some great job with this ss
its really amazing!
the story is awesome and the way the story is progressing am loving it
superb!
keep up the good work
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
lovely part dear...
cont soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross

you are doing some great job with this ss
its really amazing!
the story is awesome and the way the story is progressing am loving it
superb!
keep up the good work

thank u for ur lovely comment dr😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi friends here i am posting my part 5...

thanks for ur lovely likes and comments...

do read this part and give me the review...

critisms are welcomed...





PART V:

At Present,

When he felt the screech of the car Maan came out from the world and opened the door, without wasting any time he just rushed inside the Mansion to meet his life. On entering inside his Mansion he saw a lovely scene which made his heart flutter. Here Geet was seating on the couch and had a frown which clearly indicate that the great MSK is in trouble. Slowly Maan took his steps to reach Geet to here the complain to her invisible belly stating "see Prince your dada is too bad and he does not even call me as he is busy with the function….He is always like this only, when work comes he will forgot me and you know what he did on the first day of my interview in KC. Let him come home today I am not going to leave him, he will have to face my wrath for sure.

On her cursing session she did not the see the figure who is sitting near her on the couch and listening to her bak bak.Here Maan on listening to Geet thought Hogaya Maan you are gone you have to work hard to manify your shona.uff her mood swing is too bad these days what I am going to do with her in the remaining 6 months(yes Geet is pregnant for 3 months).Suddenly Geet came out of her cursing land to see Maan sitting near her and thinking deeply.On seeing Maan she felt the urge to hug him but on remembering that she is angry with him she remained quiet and started seeing with with the dazel large eyes keenly.After a long time Maaneet came out from their dreamland by hearing a throat clearing from the none other than Maan's dadima Savithiri Devi Khuranna.They both were startled by seeing each other and on seeing dadi's teasing smirk their cheeks became cherry in color(wow maan blushing not bad).

Dadi does not want them to feel embarrass so she changed the subject by asking how was the function?? Immediately Maan said about the function that had held few minutes before, failed to see Geet who was fuming at him as he does not speak a word to her after reaching home. Though Maan was talking to dadi he was seeing Geet sideways without knowing to Geet for seeing her reaction. On seeing Geet Fuming he doesnot wanna take risk so he casually asked what happened Geet why are you not talking anything????by this time you would have said thousand words with the killer smirk as he know when dadi is here Geet can do nothing. Here Geet thought wait Mr.MSK let you come inside the room I will show who I am??? You are messing with Mrs.MSK beware bacha.





Maan on seeing her thought I know Geet you are planning some thing for me but don't forget that I am MSK. Do you remember the first day in KC, how we met at the second time where I came to know about your personal information without any detective agency or nothing. I never thought after you come to my life,it will be changed to full of colors rather than black and white.

At Past,

The sun rises and wakes the two people who were in their sleep with their own world, got up with the fresh start ,one with the idea of finding who the girl was??? And another one for cracking the interview. Both had a small smile playing in their lips without knowing by themselves. Maan went to do his morning exercise where Geet jumped from the bed and ran to take her bath as she doesn't want to be late at the first day of KC.

After the exercise , Maan took bath and came to the dinning hall with the gift that he have bought for his little sister Annie. At the dining table Annie was sitting restless has she want Maan to remember her birth day and wish her and dadi watching her silently. At the same time Maan came there and wished Good morning to dadi and Annie and gave the gift in the formal way by wishing her Happy Birthday. Though Annie was happy that Maan remembered her birthday but felt sad that she wants her old brother who can give anything for her happiness. Maan on seeing Annie 's face dull felt bad but don't know what to do to bring back her smile as Maan loves his dadi and his sister a lot but scared to open up in front of them due to his bitter past. After having the breakfast he left to KC leaving Annie worried but dadi noted some glow in Maan's face thought let god brings happiness to my children.

Geet rushed to KC before half an hour as she doesn't want to become late for her first day , by getting a lot of advices and blessings from the elders who were very happy for their princess happiness. At the same time Maan entered the KC with his body gaurds with the powerful attitude. Both Maan and Geet does not see each other but their hearts felt the same restless like yesterday. Pinky on seeing Geet called her and asked her to take the seat at the reception by wishing her the luck because within 20 minutes the interview process will start. Maan went to his cabin and asked Adi about today's meetimg .Adi said there is an interview to be held here were the final personal interview will be done by Maan himself has he want an efficient candidate to be placed.

After some time the interview process started with Adi and Sasha were taking the interview .Geet was first scared but she left a quick prayer to her babajee and left for the interview . When Adi saw Geet who had an innocence in her eyes felt her has his small sister asked few question in which she answered politely and each answer was very unique and even Sasha felt she is the best for this post. After completing her interview she has been asked to wait at the reception so that they can call the selected candidates for their personal interview with the MD the great MSK.

At afternoon Adi and Sasha came out with the big smile said there are 5 candidates been selected for the final interview, we request those people to stay here and others to leave the premises. When they listed out the names Geet name was also there which made Geet and Pinky happy. They said the final interview will be started within 5 minutes and left. When Geet 's turn for attending the interview came she took her belongings and entered the room with the slight knock on the door. Here Maan was turning his back and was analyzing the details of the candidate that Adi gave him. When he heard the knock he turned his head and asked her to get in with the commanding voice which made geet startled and look the person were she got the great shock and she was standing like a statue there as Maan to was baffled on seeing Geet as the candidate was standing as same as Geet .

Precap:

What will their reaction????

Will geet crack her interview???




i have given the longest update...1122 words



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Posted: 12 years ago
yahooo !!!!!!!!!
🥳 ...me first me first...aftr trying out lott ...i am nw here to comment first dear...first thku thku thku sooo muchhh fr giving us such long long update dear...i kno hw diff it wld have been fr u to giv us such a big one...

nw cuming to th update...:-):-):-)...shd i say anything dear...such a cute cute update da...wer geet is pregie...aweee thz sounds tooo gud dear...nd exspecially mrs nd mr msk dialouge u hav done more than wat v expect dear...

in past...eagrly waiting fr their reaction...sure geet wld crack h interview as well as maan s heart...noo doubt...


update sooonnn...next part...ll be waiting :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)...hope hav givn th longest comment ever...sumone is gona kill me...;-);-);-):-\:-\:-\...

KEEP GOING ...dear...

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Edited by satana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: satana

yahooo !!!!!!!!!
🥳 ...me first me first...aftr trying out lott ...i am nw here to comment first dear...first thku thku thku sooo muchhh fr giving us such long long update dear...i kno hw diff it wld have been fr u to giv us such a big one...

nw cuming to th update...:-):-):-)...shd i say anything dear...such a cute cute update da...wer geet is pregie...aweee thz sounds tooo gud dear...nd exspecially mrs nd mr msk dialouge u hav done more than wat v expect dear...

in past...eagrly waiting fr their reaction...sure geet wld crack h interview as well as maan s heart...noo doubt...


update sooonnn...next part...ll be waiting :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)...hope hav givn th longest comment ever...sumone is gona kill me...;-);-);-):-\:-\:-\...

KEEP GOING ...dear...

😊



Thank u honey...
Ur such a sweey heart...
Lov u a lot...

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