GEET SS **A LIFE** part 8:pg 40(30/5) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi buddies ,

Thank u for ur wonderful comments and likes….

Love U a lot….

Here I am posting my 4th part…

Do read and reply….




PART IV

When he was inside the lift a girl of 20's entered inside and were talking sum thing by seeing upward or cribbling sum thing according to Maan but for Geet she was busy cursing her mom as she asked Geet to get a gift for her mom's friends'daughter's b'day.(When she was talking wid her friends she got a cal from her mom stating that she hav to get a b'day gift for her friend's daughter.After her friends left she came to the lift to go the shop.)In the haste she does not look the figure who is standing and drooling at her feature.Here Maan was busy drooling at the girl who was looking so cute with a little pout on her lips.At first Maan saw Geet his heart felt an unknown peace which made his face glow and on seeing her doing all sought of childish things he forgot the outside world and started drooling at her.

Both were busy on their own world does not see the lift came to the hault at their destined floor.Suddenly Maan's trance were broken on hearing a sweet voice asking sir which is floor were antique shop is der???Here Geet after her cursing session looked at the stranger who is watching her very keenly but cannot understand wat is it as she felt a 1000 watts currents flowing through her body.She wanted to talk to him so without knowing wat to do she asked him the question which broke his trance.When Maan came out of his lala land said huh…and then by scolding himself through his mind said Wat did u asked??On hearing his husky voice Geet felt her heart throbbing violently and in the dazzed voice she asked the same question which she asked before which is floor were antique shop is there??

Before Maan on calming his fluttering heart,a random person said this is the floor were the antique shop is present.Wen Geet heard this without replying she just left the lift and went to shop to buy the gift.Here Geet too felt some unknown happiness on seeing him but she just left that aside and continued with her shopping.Maan after cooling his heart came to the same shop for getting gift for his sister's b'day and he was scolding himself for drooling the girl without knowing what is stored in his future.After they completed their purchase they both left to their own destination.




After reaching their mansion, though they both were physically present with their family members but their heart were longing to be together. At the same time Geet friends came to Handa Haveli for their biggest Mission of manifying Geet's parents.When Mr and Mrs Handa saw them they heartly welcomed the children inside the Haveli but all were busy seeing everyone's face how to start the convo.On seeing their confusion Mohinder asked what happened dr's do u wanna say something to me, u r almost welcome don't hesitate to ask from ur father.After some time Meera started by saying him about geet's interview tomorrow on KC.At first Mr and Mrs Handa was not happy with it but atlast on every bodies persistent and on the thing that Pinky will be there with Geet he agreed. Our Geet got happy on the news of her parents permission and started jumping and twirling on the whole Haveli by making others happy with it as they don't want their Princess to feel sad. One reason Mr.Handa agreed is because he already heard a lot about MSK and his hard work through his friends.

At night when Geet retired to her bed she was again thinking about the same eyes which showed some different thing to her that is completely alien. After so many confusions she hugged her dido and said the whole thing that happened today as if he can understand what she is saying and soon slept for the next new morning. Similarly at KM our Maan was disturbed completely on thinking her hazel eyes but he felt to drown into the eyes fully.Then with the hope of finding the girl tomorrow who is it who made the MSK flattered at the first sight he went to the sleep.

At Present,

When he felt the screech of the car Maan came out from the world and opened the door, without wasting any time he just rushed inside the Mansion to meet his life.On entering inside his Mansion he saw a lovely scene which made his heart flutter. Here Geet was seating on the couch and had a frown which clearly indicate that the great MSK is in trouble. Slowly Maan took his steps to reach Geet to here the complain……………….

Precap:

Present: Who is Geet complaining??

Past: Geet in KC…


sry for spelling mistakes...

for pm's buddy me...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss

unresss
Well am first again..
dear its such a cute update
jus luvd it...😃 😃 😃👏
Past:well meeting in KC..i think maan willl go fida over Geet...😕
Present:Poor Maan Ur in trouble?? what sort of trouble...😃
Edited by Rami92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
wonder what wil happen to both when they will see each other in KC
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part love at first sight
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
wonder what wil happen to both when they will see each other in KC


Thank u...
Wait and see...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u dr...
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Originally posted by: valli22

nice part love at first sight


Thank u di...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rami92

resss


unresss
Well am first again..
dear its such a cute update
jus luvd it...👏
Past:well meeting in KC..i think maan willl go fida over Geet...😕
Present:Poor Maan Ur in trouble?? what sort of trouble...😃


Ofcourse dr maan is totally gone on seeing geet...both in past and future...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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maan toh gaye kam se...

beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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