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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Trying my hand at four chapters at once, of four different stories each, so can't say which would come first 😆

hmm naku edaina okay. 😆

hmm nenu malli chadutuna...no disturbance!! leave vachinapude chadavali...so im utilizing my time efficiently!!! 😳

btw...next part lo meeru em song selct chesataro teledu...but on my behalf...nenu oka song dedicate chesta...

bahusaa oo chanchalaa egiree raayanchalaa

tagilee lee manchulaaa chupulooo chupugaa

paina kavachu le okatai povachu le ila pai aakasame ikapai vaalochu le

ee doramaina cheruvai

bahusaa oo chanchalaa egiree raayanchalaa

tagilee lee manchulaaa chupulooo chupugaa

kanupaapallo nidurinchi kaladatindi toli prema

toli chupullo chigurinchi manasimmandi mana prema

kalagannanu kavinainaanu ninu chusi

ninu chusaake nijamainanu tere teesi

bahusaa ee aamani pilichinda rammani

okatiate kammani pallave paataga

alalai reege anuraagam adigindemo todi chaatu

epudu eedo anubhandham telisindemo okamaatu

madhumaasale mana kosalai itu raani

mana praanale shatamanalai jatakaani

toliga chusanu le cheli ga maaranu le

kalale kannu le kalise unnanu le

na nee vu lo nee neenu ga

bahusaa oo chanchalaa egiree raayanchalaa

tagilee lee manchulaaa chupulooo chupugaa

hmm song chala bavuntundi. 😳

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Haha Varudu right? Good song😊
Right now I jumped into WOL mode. Yay! Expect an update by tonight😆
And next music selection from Rhythm movie starring Arjun and Meena

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Haha Varudu right? Good song😊
Right now I jumped into WOL mode. Yay! Expect an update by tonight😆
And next music selection from Rhythm movie starring Arjun and Meena

@bold 😕 no idea!!!

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Haha Varudu right? Good song😊
Right now I jumped into WOL mode. Yay! Expect an update by tonight😆
And next music selection from Rhythm movie starring Arjun and Meena

oh mi god!! loved all songs in that movie... please tell me its kaatre en vaasal vanthal *looking eagerly*

PS: going to start this tonight... you know the warning 😆

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Ohh okay...i dint know that "gaale na vatikochi naa talupe tathite" is from Rhythm movie .nice one!! if not all the songs are good. will w8.

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Just read first 5 PARTS... and I am loving it so much. 😊 I must say madam you have such great writing skills that one is compelled to be pulled into the world you create around the characters. It feels like I too am flowing with the story & feeling closely the emotions of each person here. It keeps me so hooked onto it & crave for more. I don't know how to put into words to appreciate your beautiful use of words through your writing talent. I feel that nothing could do much justice. I'm glad that I could read this here or I would always regret not being a part fo this beautiful story... Time machine: The descriptions were so real & each event had a meaning to it. The environment surrounding the individual was observed & witten form the point of view of what the said person was feeling & going through form within. How the noise & commotion going around the canteen didn't do anything to waver or distarct Geet's thoughts from the reliving of the pain & agony of the date that she realised the day to be a reminder of. How all changed with respect to her inner demons that everything around which few moments ago were normal & not endagering were turned to something suffocating that escaping form it become the only survival. Need for fresh air that is light & soothing to leave behind the burdens caused by the realisation of the day was so beautifully put together.

Laasya is a lady so beautiful at heart but yet pained from within due to the different losses she's gone through in her life's journey. She is one who for the world has it all, yet she alone knows she lacks something that the whole world can't ever give her. She misses the presence of a life partner whom she has given a part of her so greatly that now the space left behind is so much that ecah thing causes her to relive the moments spend together & imagine what it would be if situations were not so. Inspite of this she isn't one who is just surrounded & kept herself occupied with the pain & loneliness & loss she has experienced, but one who has learned to live with it yet bring happiness & joy to other's life wishing that someday somethings if not all would help her unburden herself & embrace her true world completely.

Lovely ... I have a long way to go this is just part 1 & I being a blabber mouth through my words I'm going on & on. This way to I will never end up being on par with the recent parts...

I better cut short & move onto others... 😊

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Escapades: I know I'm stating this time & again but can't help it but say it again... that I love your writing. You weave a different world around the reader with your writing so much so that I can't help it but stop & just recollect it all & treasure it all.

I love to see how you use nature so majorly to so beautifully describe the mood. It shows how observant you are towards the small changes one is surrounded with & how we need to just wait & notice it all in the form of nature which teaches us so many things that whole life time experiences can be related with it.

The way you used the petals of the flower to describe the feel Geet was going through & how it led to description of how lost she feels without the presence of a mother in her life & the pain that cuts through her each time she lives through this knowledge was so touching.

The lines - ..."Mother is the teacher. She loves you regardless of what you are..." This is so true. she loves you so much as a part of her own self. One can never have anybody else who can ever love you or guide you as a mother does. And Geet is very well aware of it, yet she knows this one thing she will always find amiss in her life & something she can't help feeling. The whole description of it all was so good that I could actually feel her pain.

The series of events that led her to start writing letters addressed to her Mom just to feel connected with her & to unburden the pain she lives through by using God as a means of being the connecting link was so divine yet human. At seven years of age a child thinking so & living through the whole realisation just shows that the purity & innocence of child is something that is God's gift & is a close bond a child shares either with God or his/her own mother.

Her agony of the pain this day has brought to her, that she has enclosed & is living through the guilt since last 4 years was all reflected through the erupting scream form her being that echoed all around her. Showing that she is finally crumbling in the face of her weakness from the bearing of the weight she has been carrying solely since years. Yet she is wanting to face it alone & something to be closed within the confines of her self.

Correspondingly Maan too is burdened with some deep wounds that is causing hurt & pain so much so that even the achievement of his dreams doesn't seem to compensate for all the loneliness & darkness within himself. His scream relating himself to a wounded beast just led to realistion that something did take palce that has caused him to Hate this feeling within him especially this day.

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

@Onir: you finally started it...Can I also jump in and say that I am so glad...It feels good to be reading along with you...🤗

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: dqno1
@Onir: you finally started it...Can I also jump in and say that I am so glad...It feels good to be reading along with you...🤗

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Yup I finally did start somewhere at least.. 😆

I wanted to be done with few parts before she updates another part which will add to the long list of number of parts I need to read to be on par with everyone else... 😉

But she writes so amazingly beautifully that I justr can't seem to come out of it & then form coherent words to justly appreciate it all...

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Onir
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Yup I finally did start somewhere at least.. 😆

I wanted to be done with few parts before she updates another part which will add to the long list of number of parts I need to read to be on par with everyone else... 😉

But she writes so amazingly beautifully that I justr can't seem to come out of it & then form coherent words to justly appreciate it all...

You are right about her writing... that's why I kheeched her back to post it here..

I get shell shocked so I can't comment...

Now I can just say... yeah, whatever Onir or Mari said...😆