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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

i know you write based on music... see if this gets you typing... it certainly has me in trance. this song is in tamil also but i think the telugu lyrics justifies the amazing ragam of the song... lalitha 😃

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1-bbrv2jErM[/YOUTUBE]

PS: forgive my constant rain of songs :D

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Oh man, Onir doc, You are commenting for separate chapters, that's difficult na. Onir doc take it easy, don't stress yourself. 😲
And that too such beautiful words which makes me read each comment thrice?😆

Avi ji, kaisa gaya aapka day? 🤗
Oh I did close my eyes hmph. You are getting to know me more well than I had anticipated. Oh by the way Avi ji aaj midnight tak update aayega😆

Arey nahi re I had thought of commenting on all 5 parts together but when I started putting words to it it went on & on so I thought of seperately commenting... 😆

No stress baba... I have a holiday on the Holi day... so time at leisure, I had to start so better today.. 😉

Further ones will be shorter ... 😛

Avi even I had my eyes closed... 😳 😆😆

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Change in Plans: What has happened that she's feeling so guilty & has led her to take such a step of going all out on a public forum and confessing it, though in the guise of anonymity yet wanting to unburden it through replies of some others viewing it through a third neutral perspective.

Maan too is equally distressed & engulfef within his own pain & hurt. So wounded that he requires support of intoxication to face it all & when introduced to source of light it makes him aware of the reality he needs to face. His first ray of haapiness being the warmth radiating form the Hug of a loved one, the love he felt on being engulfed by his little brother.

the description of her ID on the forum as the shooting star and the writing hand was good one, & are you hinting to someone or something???

So indeed change of plans for all... Maan - Vicky. Geet- Tweety. All of them heading towards Delhi for some or the other reason... interesting... 😊

Home Coming: Is it coincidence or Maggie's shatir dimaag that all are going to be coming back to KM to stay for a few days. Laasya, Maan, Vicky, Geet, Tweety. The use of home - means so much. not a mansion/house/ residence... but a home. Who is Ronan & Tanvi???

Letter # 2 --- Love so aptly & beautifully put in few words. Love is so much more, It encompases bonding, companionship & friendship. Not just between lovers but everyone you feel the bond with & can trust as a friend & bank upon as a true companion.

"... Love is watching them every moment & silently wishing them to stay by my side forever. Because Mom I can't lose them. Rather I can't bear to lose them..." ❤️

What transpired between these three N-T-G... So closely bonded yet now so much of distances crept in between that N is disappeared with no traces, T stuck between the pain of loss of bonds & now how to restore them form the awkwardness & have better comapnionship. G weighed down By guilt & pain alongwith longing for all those momensts to be relived & cherished.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Update is delayed, shoot me! Update tomorrow pakka and if I don't update, you can throw a bomb on my head.

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Update is delayed, shoot me! Update tomorrow pakka and if I don't update, you can throw a bomb on my head.

Arrey... no tension re... will wait

your reply...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79223860

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
Update is delayed, shoot me! Update tomorrow pakka and if I don't update, you can throw a bomb on my head.

Uske liye, bohot saare channe khake tere sar pe baithna padega.🤣

Read all the chapters. Will comment aram se, though.

Kitne saare FF's hain padhne ke, which I am loving, but as far commenting is concerned, I just want to say, awesome and be done with it, instead of trying to give any analytical comments.😆

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Thnx for continuing this again on IF

I read all parts on your blog...actually i started reading on If from old account but then I could not read it

Loved your style of writing, emoting expression was awesome..

Still maaneet to come but I fell in love with vicky & tweety..they are cute couple

cont soon

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Reunion: The whole dream sequence was so scary & seemd to be real. Some inner demons are not letting Geet to let go of it all, causing much deeper scars & wounds that need tending to give her solace, even much more than that offered by her venting it out in anonymity.

The bond between Laasya- Vivaan is so adorable & friendly. Yet is contrasting to that between Laasya- Maan. She yearns for love & companinship yet is everything a mother should be, though not able to figure out what happened to detach her elder son away from her.

The nok-jhok & not so friendly relationship shared by Tweesha - Vivaan was so entertaining & full of popcorn type of drama.

The interaction & warmth that is seemingly developing right from the start between Laasya- Geet is too good & feels like it will pave the way for many new things & bonds to be formed & carried ahead in life forever.

Maan seems to be very deatched form everyone, yet somewhere wanting to have someone whom he can show his vulnerable side without having the fear of being judged as weak & to seek solace & comfort. So that he can come off the clutches of pain he has self imposed himself in.

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Midnight Vigils: Ha ah!! The secret of the locket is out. I was wondering while reading the parts that why is Geet so attached with the locket? Now I understand that she draws strength form the locket when nervous as she feels embraced by her mother's love. It truly is significant & symbolic of the purest form of love- Mom's love. A bond so beautiful & sacred that is explained, expressed or understood only witnessing it through a Mom- Child, even before the child is born in the world, a bond that begins with the conception. That's the reason why it is truly said that a child gives birth to a mother.

Tweesha though apperas all rough tough & jolly good yet has masked her pain very well within her. She is now wanting to know all the missing libnks between her friends. And who is this new Id "Dreamer"???

I liked the way each of the Khurana children's name was given to them. The meaning & their characteristics. So Tanvi is Laasya's daughter. One thing solved here... 😆

Geet's thought of not living upto the name her Mom gave her, & then Laasya's interpretation of her being the song of someone's life was so nicely put together. And I guess Geet had Good relation with her Brother then what is this pain & hatred she is expressing here??

The dance & the song used was so mesmerising. I strongly believe that dance is one form that helps you emote everything within you so beautifully without need for words, it can be the best source of outlet & comfort. You can express your weaknesses through dancing & yet feel strong within yourself as the grace, poise & calmness it brings within you to deal with it all at least till you're in that trance. Then she feel in his arms... Hayee what a scene I can imagine here...

Beginnings: The whole scene of her being mesmerised by the sight that beholds her vision after the emoting dance was so apt to what she must be feeling ---- a sense of freedom from the clutches of all that has been eating her within, & all that she is trying to deal with.

Then she falls in the arms of the man, both are strangers to each other yet there's a connect be it even of a knight & damsel in distress (supposed) . Then the whole slow sequence of revealing the two leads to each one of them was so beautifully put forward.

But I guess these two can never start on good terms. They started on the wrong footing of misjudgement. miscommunication, fear of lossing something you are not aware means so much to you, or will in the long run...

I loved it when she finally named him as BRAT... ( Maggie were you somewhere trying to connect your name with Maan??? 😆)

Also loved the new dimension of depth you showed in Vicky... one who is deeply smitten & awed by His childhood friend who has transformed into a beauty in his own vision & liking...

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Tabula Rasa: I didn't understand why this title???

Is it any way related to the sound that the wind chimes made to bring in new tidings, with new hope???

So Tweety held a flame of love for Vicky. But I guess she experienced something that broke her & made her fearful of admitting it & now she masks it with indifference.

The Way Geet discovered that Vivaan indeed was Tweesha's Vicky was so weel written. Also how this realisation let her make peace with her demons & fear of tainting others happiness by her shadows & presence, that she in a way became a channel for the new hope to be welcomed in the three lives of V-T-G, Through opening up the windows & letting the breeze of hope swoosh in to let sounds of wind chimes ring in happiness in the lives of all those who are touched by it... 😊

Waltz with love: I love this song here. "Na maangu sona chandi... " It really sat well with the whole context , the beautiful & touching moment between a mother- son. Geet being privy to it all was so nice, the eavesdropping was so cute.

Maan is so arrogant, bechari Geet was trying to break the ice & extend a friendly hand & that dumbo sab pe paani pher diya...

Letter # 3 ---- so true. I can relate with her here as I too have experienced such situations. Tolerance is a virtue to be cherished yet you need to sometimes stand up to it all.

The line... "... no one should point fingers at her upbringing..." Was so touching & spoke of the pain Geet is going through.

Finally Tweety is upto some mischief but for the good of her friend...