Geet Story Series Surprises-Index PG 1 All Stories - Page 18

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

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Its a treat to have something from yew to read Heytu, n wid HPK, Saajhi is absolutely loved, though I've read first part till now, but em right away reading the rest of the story 😃
Its a perfecto start of the story wid making us all go down the beautiful memory lane in our minds where Maaneet reside...I loved each n every scene , n dialogues by yew r always having a power to effect n hook the reader for long 👏
Saajhi k lye 🤗

heytal...Whoa!!!!! Awesome dear
Loved it very much

@shoba di ...Amazing OS ...Loved It alot

Saajhi
She sounded so innocent when she said to him that she wanna go home, to her parents, n Maan being an angry young man, couldn't resist the innocence n consoled her 😊
R yew serious ? 😲 Shahrukh Khan se milne 😲 🤣 Maan , she's all urs to vent ur anger out on her stupidity 😆
Yeh log jo talwar leke humaare peeche pade hein woh koi bhaade ke actors nahi hein, jise ek filmy hero ki tarah main akela maar ke bhaga doonga. This is reality!!!!" 🤣
Waise on a serious note, Maan's right ! She's not a child to not think before taking such a step *sigh* thank God she got a nyc person, who'll defo save her n not tarnish 😳
She's so darn cute 😆
His Child woman 😳
Their convo is getting cuter coz of Geet replies 😆 n interesting for Maan s he recently fell... in the mud of love 😆
I agree k ye sab jo Geet ne kaha, movies me hota hai,but I guess, every other girl thinks the same 😳
Maan's also correct, no such things matter when yew have loadz of love showering on yew 😳
Jiss din tum MAIN ke badle HUM ke maayne samajhogi uss din tumhe pyaar ho jaayega..." sachhi Heytal ?
Realization of lubbb 😃
Rajji said it right about stubble 😉
A hollow place to hide made me remember that epi 😳
Yew have woven the story so beautifully Heytu, that I never realixed when they started to trust each other wid so much intensity, strangely , it never felt strange ! 👏
The strangers met, fought, lived in a room, shared their thoughts, took care of each other, got worried for each other, n gave one another 1 of the most precious things in human lyf, Trust !
Hats off buddy ! Yew rocked 👏
Haaye that confession in HP
Pics toh bas ❤️
She confessed so innocently tht didnt even realixe it herself 😳
I fell in love wid ur writing once again Heytu 👏 Itni khushi... 😭 Hug de yar 🤗

Heytu yew amaxingly handled the whole scene of Maan convincing that girl's father 👏
So happies the endings 😆
Wedding 😳
Awwwi Ham date pe ja rhe hain ? cutie pie 😆
Hmmm Mr Perfect Singh Khurana is nervous about his lady love's 'date' expectations 😆
Itni tareef, khurana sahab, khush rakhiye Jhalli ko 😆
Tumhare saath xindagi bari dilchasp hogi Geet
"Ab se zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi aur har raat tumpe khatam."
N then the promise sealed wid a divine hug 😳

Em glad yew took out tym n effort to write this Heytu 👏
n Indeed , widout pics it wud b missing a special input 😳

Write more OSs pwease 😳

Nice thread

beautifully written os akku
love it

@sdlife .. the proposal was classy as always !!!

awesome lovely os hetyal di

Rakhi that was an awesome ff iska part 2 bhi hon chahiye