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He showed Sameera and Sasha the tape where Maan told the interviewer he hadn't done anything wrong, and both the grils where lying.

''What is your take on this''
''Of course no-one will admitt that they commited a crime, but we will get justice''

The interview got cut off when, breaking news flashed on the screen. Maan Singh Khurana is a free man again. Maan Singh Khurna got bail.Simi again apeared on the screen.

'' We just heard Ms. Sharma saying she and Ms.Kapoor will get justice. But will they, really? Mr.Khurna just got bailed

Geet turned off the TV. She called up Aadi.

''Aadi I am taking the this case, I will get those girls their justice''
''Prefect''

When geet hung up her mind went to what Sameera said. (ST) Hmmm so he dates his heriones and then he abuses them. The best way to meet him would probably be on a movieset. But for that I will have to wait.

Months went by after Maan's controversy. Geet was still waiting for the right moment to strike. By now she had meet up with Sasha and Sameera and promised then to get them justice. The girls had warned Geet that it wouldn't be easy as Maan would be really carefull this time. But Geet had assured them that she will get them justice. She had also find out that his Dadima had support him saying Sameera and Sasha where lying, Sameera had come over to KM but she left while she was still there. Geet thought it was wrong of Maan's dadi to lie for her grandson even if she loved him with all her heart. She also was a women she should have supported the truth. Geet was lying in her bed thinking what to so next. She switced on her TV, she turned to Channel 3. She saw the reporter Simi again covering up a story about Maan. Geet sat up as the news got her attention. Because of the controversy no herione was ready to work with Maan on his new movie Pyaar huwa, the producers where freaking out. Geet smiled and plan strike her mind. She stood up to grab her laptop, she googled information about the movie. She smirked.

''Time to audtion Geet Handa''

She told herself.Geet wore a simple salwaar kameez made her hair lose. She went on the sets of Pyaar huwa. She saw the producer Romeo talking on the phone trying to convince Naintara a big herione to work with Maan. But it seemed like she kept refusing, Romeo slammed his mobile off in anger.

''Sir''

Romeo turned around.

''Yes how can I help you''
''Sir I came to audition for the movie Pyaar huwa''
''What, idar koi auditions nahi chal reh, you can leave''

Just them Maan arrived he was awe struck by her beauty, she look so simply yet so beautifull.

''Please sir koi be chota roll chale ga. I really need some work''
''Listen, that's

Maan cut Romeo off.

''Madame you wait here, Romeo you come with me''

Romeo and Maan are childhood friends, there the best buddy's and are always their for each other.

''Kya hai Maan''
''Look Romeo after what happened no-one will want to work for me for a while. I will have to start from the beginning, again to build up my career. So the best thing now is to let this new girl become the herione of the movie''
''But what if she can't act''
''We have no choice and more important then her acting will be my perfomance. I will have to win not only the audince back but also the producers and actress. Once this movie becomes a hit everyone will again want to work with me''
''Hmmm you do have a point there, but we have to make sure this movie becomes a huge hit then''
''It will the scrip is amazing and we needed a simple girl, a girl next door for this movie, right''
''Right''

Maan pointed at Geet.

''And look there she is standing''
''Hmmm I guess''
''Well let's tell her the good news then''

Maan and Romeo walked over to Geet.

''Young lady why don't you do a screentest with Maan, after that I will decide''

Maan gave a Romeo a what the hell look, which Romeo srugged away.(ST)Why does Romeo always try to play hard, anyway who cares so long I can start shooting the movie as soon as possible.BTW what's the name of this new girl.

Maan forwarded his hand.

''Hi Maan Singh Khurana''
''Hi Geet Handa''
''Nice to meet you Geet''

Geet gave him a sweet smile.After the screen test Geet was had got the roll she was trilled, she could finally put her plan into action. Geet went to her caravan, opened her bag and grabbed her flower hairband out of it. In the flower there was a miny camera which would record Maan's every move. She quikly wore it and left her caravan. When she came out she saw Maan packing his stuff.She walked over to him.

''Mr.Khurana''

Maan turned around.

''Call me Maan''
''Alright, Maan I was hoping or you could help me with my dialogus for tomorrow. I am really nervous and I don't wanna mess up on my first day''

(ST) I don't mind helping her but been seen with her will only led up to more rumours and I really need a break from all this.

''Sorry Geet I have to go now''
''Theek hai''

Maan saw the dissapoinment in her eyes, for some reason he didn't like that.

(ST)Maan since when do you think what other people saw or think.Just help that poor girl.Haan but to be sure you don't seek to much attention it might be better to go to her place instead of mine. In from of my house there will be probably a lot of journalists.

''You now what let's go to your place and rehearsal there''
''Okay''

They arrived at Geet's place.Geet knew she had to get friendly with him. He had to fall for her and that to quik. She wanted to end this case as soon as possible, cause she wasn't planning to acteully shoot the movie. She and acting no way.Everyday they would rehearsal together.They had become pretty good friends, by now. It had been a month now and this news had spread around like fire. Geet woke up to find a text from Aadi saying to switch on the TV. When Geet opened her TV she saw that every channel was talking about the same. Was Geet Handa, Maan's next victum. Just then her mobile ringed.

''Hi Maan''
''Geet I need to talk to you, right now. Can I come to your place?''
''Haan Maan I will be waiting for you''

Geet hung up. She smirked to herself she knew what was coming. She quikly got ready. She made Maan's favorite pasta. She had just set the table when the bell rang. She opened the door a disturbed Maan walked in. He was shocked when he saw the table set up.

''Maan sit done I will serve you pasta''
''Geet why did you make this for me?''

Geet walked over to him grabbed his arm and him sit.

''Maan I knew you would be disturbed, and must have skipped breakfast.''

Maan looked at her with questions in his eyes.

''I saw the news''

Maan sighed.

''Geet I don't now what you already now about me and this case, but let me tell you

Geet interupted Maan.

''You don't have to tell me anything. I don't wanna now anything about all that, because I know all I need to now about you. And that is that you are a great guy, really humble and down to earth. Ever since I know you I never felt out of place. You always made me feel comfortable and special''

Geet looked straight in Maan's eyes and said.

''All I know is that I trust you and I don't like to see you tensed face''

Maan was overwhelmed by her words. (ST) Is she feeling the same I am feeling since the first time I saw her. Does she also love me?.

''Why Geet why do you trust me so much. Why do you care so much about me, Why??''

Geet looked down at her hands.

''I don't know''

Maan lifted her chin so that she was looking at him.

''I think you do''

Geet didn't reply she tried looking down again. Maan smiled and carresed her face.He came close to her and whispered in her ear.

''I think you love me Misty''

Geet blushed.Maan smiled and whispered in ear.

''I love you too''

Geet looked up now, she stood up from her place and hugged Maan tight. Maan felt all his tension slip away. After the Sameera & Sasha controversy this is the first time he felt so relaxed.Geet was sitting now in his lap, with her head on his chest. Maan was carressing her hair,but that annoying hairband was working on his nerves. He was about to take it off, when Geet stopped him.

''Maan please, woh my mom gift me this and ever since she left me.I never took it off''

Maan hugged her tighter.(ST) Sorry mom, that I have to lie but you understand na, I have no choice''

''I am sorry baby I didn't now''
''It's okay Maan, please tum sorry mat bholo''

Maan smiled her loved the way she loved and cared for him. He kissed her cheek.

''Geet won't you tell me that you love me, Misty''

Geet shook her head saying no.

''Acha''

Maan started tickling her.

''Tell me you love me''
''Maan please, stop''

Geet said between her laughter.

''No not untill you tell me you love me''
''Acha baba I love you''
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Will update tomorrow... Sry got to go
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Posted: 12 years ago
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another 3...
how many more remains...
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OS 3
nice one dear...
but dear the parts are all mixed up...
check them and also its incomplete...
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OS 4
nice...
poor Geet...
but she got Maan;s support and now his mom's too...
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OS 5
nice one...
is Maan really the culprit?
cont soon...
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Hey, when will we get the remaining OS's ❓
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this is NOT my work...and this is the right OS i mean the right order...OS 3 is so jumbled and also incomplete...so reader plz do read it again...

OS - 3

One night at KM'..

Dadi is waiting for Maan'aaj Maan thoda late ho gaya'..

Maan is surprised to see Dadi still awake'.

" Dadi, aap abhi bhi jaag rahe hain?"

" kya karein? Maan Singh Khurana ka darshan milna toh babaji ka darshan se bhi mushkil hotha hai"

Maan smiles and comes and sits near Dadi'.

"Dadima, kya baat hai?"

" aapse kya baat kar sakthe hain hum? Aap toh business ke alawa kuch sochthe hi nahi"

"please Dadima, aap phir se shadhi ki baat shuru mat kijiye"

" ab toh hum bhi woh baat ko bhool gaye hai"

Maan is surprised'.

Ye laise ho saktha?...ye zaroor Dadi ka agla plan hi lagtha hai, reverse psychology? Who bhi Maan singn Khurana ko?

" kya soch rahe hai bete?"

" kuch nahi Dadi, toh aap kya baat kar rahe the?"

" hum ek naya project ke barein mein soch rahe the"

" kaisa project?"

" ye toh aapke zindagi ka bahut badiya project hoga, it happens once in a lifetime, you know?"

" aaise kaunsa project hai?"

" ye project toh aapki zindagi badal dega"

" hummare " Green Valley" project se bhi badiya?"

Maan is very keen to know about it'..

Waise Dadi bhi kC ki founder members mein ek haina?

She is still active in KC''

" haan bete, ye aapka sabse badiya project hoga"

" then tell me more Dadima"

" ye toh aapko kal iss project ke creative head hi batha sakthe"

" what? Ye hummara project hai toh hummare curatives se discuss karna padega haina? Mein Adi ko inform kartha hoon"

" hare, itne bhi kya jaldhi hai, pehle aap pasand kijiye"

" kya?"

" Maan bete, ye toh joint venture hai"

"lekhin hum joint ventures nahi karthe"

" wahi toh, ab aapko solo projects kea age bhi sochna chahiye"

" kaunse company ke saath joint venture hoga?"

" woh toh hum badh mein bathayenge, pehle aap unnkke representative ko kal milliye, phir hum aage ka plan bathayenge"

" kya?"

" hare, project ka plan"

Maan still has some doubts in his mind'.he decides to clear it himself'.

He can't trust this old lady, MSK ka Dadi haina?

"toh Dadima, kal mujhe kissi milna hoga?"

"woh toh hum bhi nahi jaathe"

"kya"

"hummra matlab hai, ab woh apne kaunse representative ko bhejenge? Ye toh hum kaise jaan

sakthe? Haina? Who aapko kal hotel Le Meridien mein afternoon 1'o clock millenge"

" Hotel mein kyun? Hum ussko KC bhulathe hai"

" par humne toh unko Hotel mein milne ko kehdiya, abs are arrangements ho gaye toh aap unko Hotel mein hi millijiye"

"teek hai Dadi"

" Maan bete, kal, teek ek bajhe, bhooliyega mat"

"ji Dadi, gud night"

Next day'.

Geet waits for her client at the Hotel'..

She looks into the details of the client'.

" Maan? Ye kaissa naam hai? purane zamaane ka naam lagtha, haina babaji? Toh naaam ko 2/10, ye teek hoga"

Geet ko apne boss ka chehra yaad aatha'.

" itna kyun dethi ho? Kam karo"

"lekhin meinne do hi toh diya hai"

"aur kam karo"

"teek hai. 1/10, ye chalega haina?"

Geet turns back and finds him missing'..ye Geet ka vaham tha'..

"babaji, yahan bhi aake mujhe daratha hai, sadoo Sharma"

Maan comes and looks for his table'.

Maan is surprised to see some girl waiting for him, this is ridiculous, itna important project ko ye kaise handle karegi? Maan expected some one worthy of KC and its reputation'..what's this silly girl got to do with KC? Dadi ke liye toh isse milna hi padega'..

" Maan Singh Khurana"

"halo"

Geet gets up to greet him and also offers a hand for handshake'.

Maan ignores it and sits'.

"ye kaisa manners hai? koi bhi ladhki issko bardaast nahi kar sakthi'..0/10"

Sharmaji is happy'

"very good, aaise hi score karna chahiye, jaldhi hi samaj gayi"

Ye Sharma ji bar bar wrong time pe kyun entry dethe?

"aap pehle jaayiye"

"what? Tumne kuch kaha?"

"nahi, aapko nahi"

Geet takes a look at him'..from top to bottom'.

"kya dekh rahi ho?"

"handsome and good looking toh hai, 10/10"

Geet smiles at him'.

Maan responds with his trademark angry look'.

"ye kaisa look hai? 10-5"

Agla kya? Geet looks into the list'.haan dressing sense'ye bahut important hai'.

Maan has come in his office attire'..

" ye bhi koi dress hotha hai kya? ladhki ke saath bahar jaane ka hai toh wear something cool, haina babaji? Toh 2/10'.nahi 1/10"

"kade kade aaise kya dekh rahi ho? Pehle kissi mard ko dekha nahi hai kya? Beito"

Geet sits and continues her work'.

"toh kaam ki baat karein"

"hare naam bhi nahi poocha? Drinks bhi nahi order kiya? Aur seedha kaam? Kaisa kaam?"

Social ethics ' 0/10

"ye kaisa project hai? tummare paas koi plan hai?"

Geet looks into her bag''.

"hare ye pamphlet kahan hai?"

"kya doondh rahi ho?"

"sorry, lagtha hai mein pamphlet ko ghar pe choadke aagayi"

Maan gets angry'.how irresponsible? Najaane kaise namoonon ko kaam pe rakthe hai ye log? Inkke saath mein kabhi kaam nahi kar saktha, kaas kar iss bewakoof ladhki ke saath toh kbhi nahi'.

"what? Bhool gayi? Toh yahan kyun aayi ho? Mera waqt barbad karne?"

"itna gussa? Pleasant nature ? issko toh isska matlab hi maloom nahi hoga! 0/10"

Waiter comes'.

"would you like to order something m'am?"

Maan grabs the menu'.

"number 30"

Waiter is waiting for further order'.do log haina?

Geet aur intrezaar nahi kar sakthi'.

Sge snatches the menu card from Maan and orders for herself'.

Next qualification''dance'..

"aap salsa toh jaanthe honge? Haina? Hip hop? Belly dance?"

Geet stops for a second and thinks of Maan doing a belly dance'..

She looks at his waist and starts laughing'.

"aap belly dance kaise kar sakhte?"

Maan just keeps staring and staring'..

Usska bhi mahadev ki tarah theesra aankh hotha toh Geet jal jaathi'.

"no sense of humour? Phir toh koi bhi ladhki inkke paas bhi nahi aayegi, haina babaji'.

Sense of humour 'ye bhi zero"

:tummare company kitne saal se iss field mein hai?"

Geet blinks'.

"experience? Koi toh experience hoga? Aapne ab tak litne projects kiya hai?"

"woh, hoga koi do then saal ki experience "

"kya? Toh aaplog amateurs ho?"

"yahan toh har koi amateur hi hotha hai, koi bhi experienced persons ko pasand nahi karthe"

"toh kitne projects kiya hai?"

" ye toh hummara 100th project hai"

"kya? Then saal mein 100 projects? "

"lagtha hai bahut chote mote kaam karthe hai"

"nahi nahi humne sheher ki bade bade ghar ka projects bhi kiya hai"

"najaane kahan se Dadi ko aaise log milhte?"

"ab aakhri qualification ' IQ, ye toh shuru se hi ulta seedha sawaal kartha rehtha, IQ bhi bahut kam? 2/10"

"tum har waqt kya likhthe rehthi ho?"

"woh' aapke ratimgs"

"kya? Teri itni himmat? Maan Singh Khurana ko rate karthi ho?"

"yahi toh mera kaam hai"

Geet looks into his eyes'Maan is mersmerised by her innocent eyes'.

Maneet eyelock'..Geet hears the BG'mahiii'.

Maan ke dimag mein ganti bhajtha''aur ek Ghana bhi'."Oh Girl! U R Mine!!"'..his dil goes ummm'ummm''"Oh Girl! U R Mine!!"

Maan decides to leave that place immediately'

"ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardhegi"

Maan gets angry''.

"tum aur teri bakwaas project, mujhe toh yahan aana hi nahi chahiye tha, Dadimaaa"

Maan ka gussa bahut badh jaatha aur Maan wahan se chale jaatha'..

"hare suno, tera score toh jaankke jao, babaji ab mein kya karoon? Panchi toh haath se udgayi, sharmaji ko kya jawab doon?"

Just then the waiter comes'

"m'am, aapka bill"

"mera bill?"

"haan m'am, 1350 rupees only"

"kya? 1350 rupees only? Oye kuthe kamine, ullu ke patte, sahi waqt pe bhaag gaya sala"

"m'am?"

Dadi comes in to check them'.

She just saw Maan getting out'

"ye lo mera paisa, 675, woh 420 toh bhaag gaya"

"bakhi paise diye bina aap nahi jaa sakhte"

"kya?"

"waiter, paise humdedenge"

"ji ma'am?

Waiter leaves'.

"m'am, aap?"

"hum toh uss 420 ke Dadima hai"

"kya? Dadi? Mein toh bas aawein kehdhi"

"it's OK Ms''."

"Geet, Geet Handa from "Match makers" "

"toh aaplog maachis banathe hai?"

"nahi nahi, aapne suna nahi Matches made in heaven, woh wala matches, meinne kitne bar Sahrmaji se kaha tha, iss faltu naam ko badalthe hai, par woh maanthe hi nahi"

"toh aap Heaven mein kaam karthe hai?"

Geet laughs at Dadi's joke'..

"aap unkke Dadi kaise?"

"toh aap ko Mr.sharma ne bheja?"

"haan, aap unkko jaanthe hai?"

"hum toh aap ka hi intrezaar kar arhe the"

"aapki shadhi? Koi problem nahi, mere paas dadajis ka profiles bhi hai"

"you naughty girl, I mean Maan ki shadhi"

"par woh toh bhaag gaye, sorry, chale gaye"

"koi baat nahi, woh thoda jaldhi mein hai, hummare Maan ke liye koi achchi ladhki miljaayegi, haina?"

"ussja koi umeed nahi hai"

"kyun bete?"

"aapke pothe ka score card dekhiye, 12/100"

"very good"

"kya?"

"humme laga Maan single digit mein score karenge, toh isska matlab humme bahut jaldh bahu mil jaayegi"

"haan, agar aapke pothe hummare naye crash course join karthe toh"

"kya? "

"ye dekhiye, 'Getting ready for your first date'"

"dating?"

"haan, aajkal ke ladhkiyan shadhi ke pehle kam se kam dus bees ladhkon ko date karthe, they need a lot of variety to choose , sandal ho ya shadhi"

"that's true, ye toh bahut achcha business lagtha?"

"haan, ab toh shadhi ka business hi achcha chaltha hai"

" toh ye kaisa course hai?"

"bas ek din ka course hai, ye lijiye details, aap unkko Monday hummare office bhejdijiye"

"no no no, that's not possible"

"kyun? Bahut mehenga lagtha? Hum aapko 12% discount denge, aapke pothe ne 12 marks jo score kiya haina?"

Dadi laughs'

"that's not the problem, problem toh Maan hai"

"mujhe pehle hi patha tha, jahan woh honge problem toh hoga hi"

"hummara matlab hai, Maan wahan nahi aayenge, ek kaam karthe hai, aap Monday hummara office chale aayiye, Khurana Constructions, ye lijiye hummra card"

"lekhin m'am, hum personnel classes nahi karthe"

"I'll pay you double"

"lekhin m'am"

"aap Mr.Sharma ko call kijiye, I'll speak to him"

Dadi convinces Mr.Sharma and asks Geet to come to KC on Monday'.

It's Monday''Geet comes to KC'.

Maan is very busy'..

Geet tries very hard to meet him'..she keeps running after him'.

"pehle inkke naam ko badalna padega, Maan Singh? "

KC mein har koi Maan ka naam hi lethe hai'.

"Mr.Maan Singh Khurana aagaye hai kya?"

"ye Maan Singh Khurana ka office hai"

"Maan sir aagaye"

"Maan sir meeting mein hai"

Geet ko bhi ye naam sunthe hi dil kush ho jaatha'.

"Maan Singh Khurana! Ye bhi achcha hi hai,haina babaji? woh bhi jab Maan kudh kehthe hai, MSK aaisa hai, MSK waisa hai"

Geet ka achcha timepass hotha, she keeps drooling'.

Maan ka meeting katam hotha'.

Geet waits for him'.when Maan comes out of the meeting hall she runs towards him'.

She barges into him'.loses her balance and falls'.

Maan holds her'.Maneet eyelock'.Maan ka dil goes'

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

Dadi comes'..

"toh Geet, aap aagaye? Very good"

Maan gets back to his senses'

"tum yahan kya kar arhi ho? Ye mera office hai, get out, security"

"Maan bete, Geet ko humne hire kiya hai"

"par ye mera office hai, ye yahan ek pal bhi nahi reh sakthi"

"kya? Aapka office? Maan bete hum abhi bhi zionda hai"

"toh teek hai, mein chaltha hoon"

Adi comes'..

"Maan sir, Mr.Khanna aaj hi aarahe hai"

"kya? Par meeting toh kal haina?"

"kal unnke wife ki b'day hai, unkko abhi abhi yaad aaya hai, toh unhone meeting prepone kardhi"

"ye log shadhi karkke mera dimag karab karthe hai"

Adi laughs'ha ha ha ha ha'..

Maan stares him'.

"Adi, presentation tayaar haina? Sasha ko bhulao"

"sir, Sasha is on leave, aaj ussko ladhkewale dekhne aarahe hai"

"toh Tasha ko bhulao"

"sorry sir, aaj usski bhai ki shadhi hai"

"ye KC hai ya koi matrimonial office?"

"kya? Toh aap hummare rival hai? hummare naye program ko copy karna chahthe hai, ye Sharma ji ka exclusive copy right hai"

"tum abhi tak nahi gayi?"

"Maan bete Geet kahin nahi jayenge, aayiye Geet bete hum apne cabin jaathe hai"

Maan looks worried'Geet feels bad'..

"m'am, mein madat karoon?"

"sure, lekhin pehle Maan apne problems katam toh karein"

"woh mein bhi designing kar sakthi hoon"

Maan hears this and his dil goes'''.

"Oh Gir! U R mine"

Maan Geet ke haath pakadke andar lekhe jaatha'.

"toh shuru karo"

"kya?"

"apna kaam, tummare paas abhi bhi ek ganta hai,Adi"

Adi comes running'.

"Adi will help you"

"yes sir"

Geet takes a look at the presentation and makes a few changes'

She is ready'Mr.Khanna comes and Geet does a wonderful job''

Mr.Khanna is very much impressed'.

"Mr.Maan, aapke naya partner ne toh kamaal kardhi, thie revised plan is just mind blowing"

Maan is also happy'

He turns back, smikes(?) and congratulates her'.

"good job"

"ye toh hasthe bhi hai"

Dadi calls Geet'

"ma'm aapne bhulaya?"

"ab Maan thoda free hai, aap apna kaam shuru kar sakthe hai, all the best"

Geet knocks'

"come in"

"kya aapke paas mere liye 5 min hai?"

Man's heart goes'hmm hmmm..

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

"paanch min kya? Meri puri zindagi tummra hi hai"

"sir'.siiirrr"

Maan hosh mein aatha'..

"5 min? OK, your time starts now"

Maan looks at his watch'.

"kya? Toh mein bhi aapko aapke basha mein hi samjaathi hoon, pehle aap uttiye"

"what?"

Geet drags him off his seat and goes and takes his place'.

"ab samjo mein MSK hoon, maano aapko milne ek sundar ladhki aathi hai, samjo aap ek sundar ladhki ho"

"tumne MSK ko ladhki kaha?"

"hare, sundar ladhki toh hi kaha tha, you must be proud"

Maan stares''

"aaise nahi, thoda hasso, aaise"

Geet shows him how to smile'.

Geet comes forward to receive him and takes him to the chair'..

She pulls the chair for him'..

"take your seat, young lady"

Maan couldn't tolerate'.

"kya dekh rahe ho? beito?"

Maan sits on the chair'..Geet goes to her seat'..

Geet keeps smiling'.

"your sweet name please, gorgeous"

"tum samajthe kya apne aapko?"

"MR. Maan singh Khurana"

"kya?"

"mujhe disturb mat karo"

"mein distub kartha hoon?"

"would you like some coffee?"

Geet calls the boy and orders coffee'.

"tummare paanch min katam ho gaye"

"aap kabhi nahi sudhrenge"

Geet tries to leave '.

Maan catches hold of her hand'

"kahan jaa rahi ho? ab MSK ka style bhi dekhkke jao"

He pulls her closer, hold her against the wall and locks her in his arms'.

Maneet eyeloch'.

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

Maan ka dil phir ghane laga''.

Maan is puzzled'' why the hell he is hearing such nonsense?'..

He loosens his hold and releases her'.Geet runs away'.

Mr.Khanna ka deal pakki ho gayi'..Maan arranges a party for Mr.Khanna that evening'..

Dadi invites Geet to the party'.

At the party''

Maan keeps gazing Geet'she couldn't escape his killer looks'..

Mr.Khanna's CEO Rahul asks Geet for a dance'..

Geet accepts'..

Maan couldn't bear the sight of Geet holding someone else''

Maan snatches her hand from Rahul'..

"Geet, tum meri ho, sirf meri"

Maan starts singing'."Oh Girl! U R Mine"

Maneet passionate dance''

Dadi is very happy that finally she succeeded in her mission'..

"toh Geet, Ab Maan ka score kya hai?"

"200/100"

"toh deal pakki"

"haan pakki"

Geet sharmathi'..

Maan is still mesmerized''

"Oh Girl! U R mine"''''''.

"would you like some coffee?"

Geet calls the boy and orders coffee'.

"tummare paanch min katam ho gaye"

"aap kabhi nahi sudhrenge"

Geet tries to leave '.

Maan catches hold of her hand'

"kahan jaa rahi ho? ab MSK ka style bhi dekhkke jao"

He pulls her closer, hold her against the wall and locks her in his arms'.

Maneet eyeloch'.

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

Maan ka dil phir ghane laga''.

Maan is puzzled'' why the hell he is hearing such nonsense?'..

He loosens his hold and releases her'.Geet runs away'.

Mr.Khanna ka deal pakki ho gayi'..Maan arranges a party for Mr.Khanna that evening'..

Dadi invites Geet to the party'.

At the party''

Maan keeps gazing Geet'she couldn't escape his killer looks'..

Mr.Khanna's CEO Rahul asks Geet for a dance'..

Geet accepts'..

Maan couldn't bear the sight of Geet holding someone else''

Maan snatches her hand from Rahul'..

"Geet, tum meri ho, sirf meri"

Maan starts singing'."Oh Girl! U R Mine"

Maneet passionate dance''

Dadi is very happy that finally she succeeded in her mission'..

"toh Geet, Ab Maan ka score kya hai?"

"200/100"

"toh deal pakki"

"haan pakki"

Geet sharmathi'..

Maan is still mesmerized''

"Oh Girl! U R mine"''''''.




PS - Isha dear plz correct them all...and sorry for intervening like this...
Edited by spvd - 12 years ago
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thanks depa di fr crct order i was confused wen i read before now its ek thum perfect
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Originally posted by: Rami92

thanks depa di fr crct order i was confused wen i read before now its ek thum perfect



no prob dear...😉

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