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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
me here the same feeling..wer is she gone??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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angelwords pls update the Os's soon...

many are waiitng,,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Big sorry...
now i am back.. Will be posting all OS tomorrow...
i am really really sorry for delay...
exctually my exams started so became invisible...
but now back.. With new ideas to help and entertain you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Monday……Geet comes to KC….

Maan is very busy…..

Geet tries very hard to meet him…..she keeps running after him….

"pehle inkke naam ko badalna padega, Maan Singh? "

KC mein har koi Maan ka naam hi lethe hai….

"Mr.Maan Singh Khurana aagaye hai kya?"

"ye Maan Singh Khurana ka office hai"

"Maan sir aagaye"

"Maan sir meeting mein hai"

Geet ko bhi ye naam sunthe hi dil kush ho jaatha….

"Maan Singh Khurana! Ye bhi achcha hi hai,haina babaji? woh bhi jab Maan kudh kehthe hai, MSK aaisa hai, MSK waisa hai"

Geet ka achcha timepass hotha, she keeps drooling….

Maan ka meeting katam hotha….

Geet waits for him….when Maan comes out of the meeting hall she runs towards him….

She barges into him….loses her balance and falls….

Maan holds her….Maneet eyelock….Maan ka dil goes…

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

Dadi comes…..

"toh Geet, aap aagaye? Very good"

Maan gets back to his senses…

"tum yahan kya kar arhi ho? Ye mera office hai, get out, security"


"Maan bete, Geet ko humne hire kiya hai"
"par ye mera office hai, ye yahan ek pal bhi nahi reh sakthi"

"kya? Aapka office? Maan bete hum abhi bhi zionda hai"

"toh teek hai, mein chaltha hoon"

Adi comes…..

"Maan sir, Mr.Khanna aaj hi aarahe hai"

"kya? Par meeting toh kal haina?"

"kal unnke wife ki b'day hai, unkko abhi abhi yaad aaya hai, toh unhone meeting prepone kardhi"

"ye log shadhi karkke mera dimag karab karthe hai"

Adi laughs…ha ha ha ha ha…..

Maan stares him….

"Adi, presentation tayaar haina? Sasha ko bhulao"

"sir, Sasha is on leave, aaj ussko ladhkewale dekhne aarahe hai"

"toh Tasha ko bhulao"

"sorry sir, aaj usski bhai ki shadhi hai"

"ye KC hai ya koi matrimonial office?"

"kya? Toh aap hummare rival hai? hummare naye program ko copy karna chahthe hai, ye Sharma ji ka exclusive copy right hai"

"tum abhi tak nahi gayi?"

"Maan bete Geet kahin nahi jayenge, aayiye Geet bete hum apne cabin jaathe hai"

Maan looks worried…Geet feels bad…..

"m'am, mein madat karoon?"

"sure, lekhin pehle Maan apne problems katam toh karein"

"woh mein bhi designing kar sakthi hoon"

Maan hears this and his dil goes……….

"Oh Gir! U R mine"

Maan Geet ke haath pakadke andar lekhe jaatha….

"toh shuru karo"

"kya?"

"apna kaam, tummare paas abhi bhi ek ganta hai,Adi"

Adi comes running….

"Adi will help you"

"yes sir"

Geet takes a look at the presentation and makes a few changes…

She is ready…Mr.Khanna comes and Geet does a wonderful job……

Mr.Khanna is very much impressed….

"Mr.Maan, aapke naya partner ne toh kamaal kardhi, thie revised plan is just mind blowing"

Maan is also happy…

He turns back, smikes(?) and congratulates her….

"good job"

"ye toh hasthe bhi hai"

Dadi calls Geet…

"ma'm aapne bhulaya?"

"ab Maan thoda free hai, aap apna kaam shuru kar sakthe hai, all the best"

Geet knocks…

"come in"

"kya aapke paas mere liye 5 min hai?"

Man's heart goes…hmm hmmm..

"Oh Girl! U R mine!!"

"paanch min kya? Meri puri zindagi tummra hi hai"

"sir….siiirrr"

Maan hosh mein aatha…..

"5 min? OK, your time starts now"

Maan looks at his watch….

"kya? Toh mein bhi aapko aapke basha mein hi samjaathi hoon, pehle aap uttiye"

"what?"

Geet drags him off his seat and goes and takes his place….

"ab samjo mein MSK hoon, maano aapko milne ek sundar ladhki aathi hai, samjo aap ek sundar ladhki ho"

"tumne MSK ko ladhki kaha?"

"hare, sundar ladhki toh hi kaha tha, you must be proud"

Maan stares……

"aaise nahi, thoda hasso, aaise"

Geet shows him how to smile….

Geet comes forward to receive him and takes him to the chair…..

She pulls the chair for him…..

"take your seat, young lady"

Maan couldn't tolerate….

"kya dekh rahe ho? beito?"

Maan sits on the chair…..Geet goes to her seat…..

Geet keeps smiling….

"your sweet name please, gorgeous"

"tum samajthe kya apne aapko?"

"MR. Maan singh Khurana"

"kya?"

"mujhe disturb mat karo"

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Posted: 12 years ago
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what? Bhool gayi? Toh yahan kyun aayi ho? Mera waqt barbad karne?"

"itna gussa? Pleasant nature ? issko toh isska matlab hi maloom nahi hoga! 0/10"

Waiter comes….

"would you like to order something m'am?"

Maan grabs the menu….

"number 30"

Waiter is waiting for further order….do log haina?

Geet aur intrezaar nahi kar sakthi….

Sge snatches the menu card from Maan and orders for herself….

Next qualification……dance…..

"aap salsa toh jaanthe honge? Haina? Hip hop? Belly dance?"

Geet stops for a second and thinks of Maan doing a belly dance…..

She looks at his waist and starts laughing….

"aap belly dance kaise kar sakhte?"

Maan just keeps staring and staring…..

Usska bhi mahadev ki tarah theesra aankh hotha toh Geet jal jaathi….

"no sense of humour? Phir toh koi bhi ladhki inkke paas bhi nahi aayegi, haina babaji….

Sense of humour –ye bhi zero"

:tummare company kitne saal se iss field mein hai?"

Geet blinks….

"experience? Koi toh experience hoga? Aapne ab tak litne projects kiya hai?"

"woh, hoga koi do then saal ki experience "

"kya? Toh aaplog amateurs ho?"

"yahan toh har koi amateur hi hotha hai, koi bhi experienced persons ko pasand nahi karthe"

"toh kitne projects kiya hai?"

" ye toh hummara 100th project hai"

"kya? Then saal mein 100 projects? "

"lagtha hai bahut chote mote kaam karthe hai"

"nahi nahi humne sheher ki bade bade ghar ka projects bhi kiya hai"

"najaane kahan se Dadi ko aaise log milhte?"

"ab aakhri qualification – IQ, ye toh shuru se hi ulta seedha sawaal kartha rehtha, IQ bhi bahut kam? 2/10"

"tum har waqt kya likhthe rehthi ho?"

"woh… aapke ratimgs"

"kya? Teri itni himmat? Maan Singh Khurana ko rate karthi ho?"

"yahi toh mera kaam hai"

Geet looks into his eyes…Maan is mersmerised by her innocent eyes….

Maneet eyelock…..Geet hears the BG…mahiii….

Maan ke dimag mein ganti bhajtha……aur ek Ghana bhi…."Oh Girl! U R Mine!!"…..his dil goes ummm…ummm……"Oh Girl! U R Mine!!"

Maan decides to leave that place immediately…

"ye mujhe kya ho raha hai? ye ladhki toh mujhe pagal kardhegi"

Maan gets angry…….

"tum aur teri bakwaas project, mujhe toh yahan aana hi nahi chahiye tha, Dadimaaa"

Maan ka gussa bahut badh jaatha aur Maan wahan se chale jaatha…..

"hare suno, tera score toh jaankke jao, babaji ab mein kya karoon? Panchi toh haath se udgayi, sharmaji ko kya jawab doon?"

Just then the waiter comes…

"m'am, aapka bill"

"mera bill?"

"haan m'am, 1350 rupees only"

"kya? 1350 rupees only? Oye kuthe kamine, ullu ke patte, sahi waqt pe bhaag gaya sala"

"m'am?"

Dadi comes in to check them….

She just saw Maan getting out…

"ye lo mera paisa, 675, woh 420 toh bhaag gaya"

"bakhi paise diye bina aap nahi jaa sakhte"

"kya?"

"waiter, paise humdedenge"

"ji ma'am?

Waiter leaves….

"m'am, aap?"

"hum toh uss 420 ke Dadima hai"

"kya? Dadi? Mein toh bas aawein kehdhi"

"it's OK Ms……."

"Geet, Geet Handa from "Match makers" "

"toh aaplog maachis banathe hai?"

"nahi nahi, aapne suna nahi Matches made in heaven, woh wala matches, meinne kitne bar Sahrmaji se kaha tha, iss faltu naam ko badalthe hai, par woh maanthe hi nahi"

"toh aap Heaven mein kaam karthe hai?"

Geet laughs at Dadi's joke…..

"aap unkke Dadi kaise?"

"toh aap ko Mr.sharma ne bheja?"

"haan, aap unkko jaanthe hai?"

"hum toh aap ka hi intrezaar kar arhe the"

"aapki shadhi? Koi problem nahi, mere paas dadajis ka profiles bhi hai"

"you naughty girl, I mean Maan ki shadhi"

"par woh toh bhaag gaye, sorry, chale gaye"

"koi baat nahi, woh thoda jaldhi mein hai, hummare Maan ke liye koi achchi ladhki miljaayegi, haina?"

"ussja koi umeed nahi hai"

"kyun bete?"

"aapke pothe ka score card dekhiye, 12/100"

"very good"

"kya?"

"humme laga Maan single digit mein score karenge, toh isska matlab humme bahut jaldh bahu mil jaayegi"

"haan, agar aapke pothe hummare naye crash course join karthe toh"

"kya? "

"ye dekhiye, 'Getting ready for your first date'"

"dating?"

"haan, aajkal ke ladhkiyan shadhi ke pehle kam se kam dus bees ladhkon ko date karthe, they need a lot of variety to choose , sandal ho ya shadhi"

"that's true, ye toh bahut achcha business lagtha?"

"haan, ab toh shadhi ka business hi achcha chaltha hai"

" toh ye kaisa course hai?"

"bas ek din ka course hai, ye lijiye details, aap unkko Monday hummare office bhejdijiye"

"no no no, that's not possible"

"kyun? Bahut mehenga lagtha? Hum aapko 12% discount denge, aapke pothe ne 12 marks jo score kiya haina?"

Dadi laughs…

"that's not the problem, problem toh Maan hai"

"mujhe pehle hi patha tha, jahan woh honge problem toh hoga hi"

"hummara matlab hai, Maan wahan nahi aayenge, ek kaam karthe hai, aap Monday hummara office chale aayiye, Khurana Constructions, ye lijiye hummra card"

"lekhin m'am, hum personnel classes nahi karthe"

"I'll pay you double"

"lekhin m'am"

"aap Mr.Sharma ko call kijiye, I'll speak to him"

Dadi convinces Mr.Sharma and asks Geet to come to KC on Monday….

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One night at KM…..

Dadi is waiting for Maan…aaj Maan thoda late ho gaya…..


Maan is surprised to see Dadi still awake….
" Dadi, aap abhi bhi jaag rahe hain?"

" kya karein? Maan Singh Khurana ka darshan milna toh babaji ka darshan se bhi mushkil hotha hai"

Maan smiles and comes and sits near Dadi….

"Dadima, kya baat hai?"

" aapse kya baat kar sakthe hain hum? Aap toh business ke alawa kuch sochthe hi nahi"

"please Dadima, aap phir se shadhi ki baat shuru mat kijiye"

" ab toh hum bhi woh baat ko bhool gaye hai"

Maan is surprised….

Ye laise ho saktha?...ye zaroor Dadi ka agla plan hi lagtha hai, reverse psychology? Who bhi Maan singn Khurana ko?

" kya soch rahe hai bete?"

" kuch nahi Dadi, toh aap kya baat kar rahe the?"

" hum ek naya project ke barein mein soch rahe the"

" kaisa project?"

" ye toh aapke zindagi ka bahut badiya project hoga, it happens once in a lifetime, you know?"

" aaise kaunsa project hai?"

" ye project toh aapki zindagi badal dega"

" hummare " Green Valley" project se bhi badiya?"

Maan is very keen to know about it…..

Waise Dadi bhi kC ki founder members mein ek haina?

She is still active in KC……

" haan bete, ye aapka sabse badiya project hoga"

" then tell me more Dadima"

" ye toh aapko kal iss project ke creative head hi batha sakthe"

" what? Ye hummara project hai toh hummare curatives se discuss karna padega haina? Mein Adi ko inform kartha hoon"

" hare, itne bhi kya jaldhi hai, pehle aap pasand kijiye"

" kya?"

" Maan bete, ye toh joint venture hai"

"lekhin hum joint ventures nahi karthe"

" wahi toh, ab aapko solo projects kea age bhi sochna chahiye"

" kaunse company ke saath joint venture hoga?"

" woh toh hum badh mein bathayenge, pehle aap unnkke representative ko kal milliye, phir hum aage ka plan bathayenge"

" kya?"

" hare, project ka plan"

Maan still has some doubts in his mind….he decides to clear it himself….

He can't trust this old lady, MSK ka Dadi haina?

"toh Dadima, kal mujhe kissi milna hoga?"

"woh toh hum bhi nahi jaathe"

"kya"

"hummra matlab hai, ab woh apne kaunse representative ko bhejenge? Ye toh hum kaise jaan sakthe? Haina? Who aapko kal hotel Le Meridien mein afternoon 1'o clock millenge"

" Hotel mein kyun? Hum ussko KC bhulathe hai"

" par humne toh unko Hotel mein milne ko kehdiya, abs are arrangements ho gaye toh aap unko Hotel mein hi millijiye"

"teek hai Dadi"

" Maan bete, kal, teek ek bajhe, bhooliyega mat"

"ji Dadi, gud night"

Next day….

Geet waits for her client at the Hotel…..


She looks into the details of the client….
" Maan? Ye kaissa naam hai? purane zamaane ka naam lagtha, haina babaji? Toh naaam ko 2/10, ye teek hoga"

Geet ko apne boss ka chehra yaad aatha….

" itna kyun dethi ho? Kam karo"

"lekhin meinne do hi toh diya hai"

"aur kam karo"

"teek hai. 1/10, ye chalega haina?"

Geet turns back and finds him missing…..ye Geet ka vaham tha…..

"babaji, yahan bhi aake mujhe daratha hai, sadoo Sharma"

Maan comes and looks for his table….

Maan is surprised to see some girl waiting for him, this is ridiculous, itna important project ko ye kaise handle karegi? Maan expected some one worthy of KC and its reputation…..what's this silly girl got to do with KC? Dadi ke liye toh isse milna hi padega…..

" Maan Singh Khurana"


"halo"
Geet gets up to greet him and also offers a hand for handshake….

Maan ignores it and sits….

"ye kaisa manners hai? koi bhi ladhki issko bardaast nahi kar sakthi…..0/10"

Sharmaji is happy…

"very good, aaise hi score karna chahiye, jaldhi hi samaj gayi"

Ye Sharma ji bar bar wrong time pe kyun entry dethe?

"aap pehle jaayiye"

"what? Tumne kuch kaha?"

"nahi, aapko nahi"

Geet takes a look at him…..from top to bottom….

"kya dekh rahi ho?"

"handsome and good looking toh hai, 10/10"

Geet smiles at him….

Maan responds with his trademark angry look….

"ye kaisa look hai? 10-5"

Agla kya? Geet looks into the list….haan dressing sense…ye bahut important hai….

Maan has come in his office attire…..

" ye bhi koi dress hotha hai kya? ladhki ke saath bahar jaane ka hai toh wear something cool, haina babaji? Toh 2/10….nahi 1/10"

"kade kade aaise kya dekh rahi ho? Pehle kissi mard ko dekha nahi hai kya? Beito"

Geet sits and continues her work….

"toh kaam ki baat karein"

"hare naam bhi nahi poocha? Drinks bhi nahi order kiya? Aur seedha kaam? Kaisa kaam?"

Social ethics – 0/10

"ye kaisa project hai? tummare paas koi plan hai?"

Geet looks into her bag…….

"hare ye pamphlet kahan hai?"

"kya doondh rahi ho?"

"sorry, lagtha hai mein pamphlet ko ghar pe choadke aagayi"

Maan gets angry….how irresponsible? Najaane kaise namoonon ko kaam pe rakthe hai ye log? Inkke saath mein kabhi kaam nahi kar saktha, kaas kar iss bewakoof ladhki ke saath toh kbhi nahi….

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Posted: 12 years ago
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"tu kulkakshani hai'apni maa ke jaise'teri maa ne me
tu kulkakshani hai…apni maa ke jaise…teri maa ne mere bete ki zindagi barbaad kar di..aab tu bhi yehi kar rahi hai…"(u are a badluck. like your mother. ur mom had spoiled my son's life. now u are also doing the same.)said an enraged lady.
"yeh aap kya bol rahi ho dadi ji..mere aur meri maa ke bare mein…mein maa ne aise kya kiya hai jo aap unhe aur mujhe har waqt jali katti suna thhi rehthi ho???"(what are u saying about me and my mom grandmother? what did my mom do that u are always after her?) replied a girl in tears…
"yeh tu mujhse nahi apni maa se jakar puch kulakshani"(u ask this to ur mother.)said the lady.
while this argument a man entered the home to witness this.
"papa dekho dadi maa ke bare mein kya keh rahi hai….aab tho mere bare mein bhi keh rahi hai…app unse kuch kehthe kyun nahi???"(dad see what grandmother is saying. why don't u say anything?)said the girl to that man.
"maa aapko kya problem hai muskaan aur geet se…(mom what is ur problem with geet and muskaan)"said that man.
"problem mujhe nahi tujhe hone wali hai???"(problem will be for u.not me.)said that lady.
"aap kehena kya chathi hai??"(what do u want to say?)asked the man.
"jaise tu geet ka bhoj sari zindagi uttha raha hai waise hi iss ladki ka bhi bhoj saari zindagi utthana ke liye taiyaar ho jaa."(like u are having geet's burden on ur head get ready to have her burden too.)said that lady.
"matlab"(means?)said that man.
"isse puch itni raat ko kahan se muh kala kar ke aayi hai??"(ask her. where was she the whole night?)said the lady
"papa maine kuch galat nahi kiya. mein tho bas abhisek ki birthday party pe gayi thi..aur papa aap tho usse janthe hi ho."(I didn't do anything wrong. I had gone to abhisek's BD party. u know about him.)..said the girl.
"usse kolakshani ne bhi aise hi kiya tha…"(that irrespectable girl too did the same thing.)said that lady…
"maa bas kijiye…meine aap se kitne baar kaha hai ki aap aise mat bolna…"(mom enough. how many times had I told u don't say like this.)said man.
"tu mujhe nahi isse chup kara…kyunki tu mujhe chup karakar saari duniya ko chup nahi kara saktha….pehle bhi is ke maa ke karan bohut badmani she chuke hai…aab aur nahi."(by shutting me u can't shut the whole world. already because of her mother we have faced a lot of humilation.)
"thik hai agar aapko mujhse aur meri maa se itni hi problem hai tho hum dono iss ghar ko chood kar chale jaathe hai. bachpan se dekh rahi hun aapko maa ke sang ka baartav"(ok. if u have problem with me and my mom will leave this place and go.)
"haan haan hume bhi aab iss badnami se mukht karo…waise bhi yahan tho naa koi tumahari dadi hai aur naa koi tumhara baap"(yes yes. now release us also from this humliation. also no one is ur grandmother and no one is ur dad here.)
"maa bas karo…"(mom enough.)
"kyun bas karu MAAN????mein tho isse saachai bata rahi hun.."(why should I stop maan? I am telling her the truth.)
"muskaan tum aandar jao…"(u go inside.)
"mein kyun aandar jao papa????mujhe aaj saachai jaanani hai…ki dadi aise kyun bol rahi hai…aap mere papa ho…"(y sholud I go inside dad? I want to know the truth that y is she saying this. u are my dad.)
"tu isse kya puch rahi hai..jaakar tu apni maa se puch ki who aapna muh kahan kala kar ke aayi thi???puch usse ki tera baap koun hai???"(what are u asking him? go and ask ur mom where did she go to spoil her name? ask he who is ur dad?)
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crying muskan go to her mother's room to see her sitting in the corner and crying…maan and dadi followed her…
"muskaan ruko…"shouted maan…(wait.)
she slowly goes to her dreading the worst answer….

"maa jo dadi jo keh rahi hai who sach hai????"(mom what ever dadi is saying is it correct?)

geet slowly sees her..she is so shameful that she cant see in her eyes…

"aapki jukhi hyi nazroo ne sab bata diya…koun hai mera baap????aapki aayishiyaan ka harzana mujhe bhukat na padh raha hai….mein aaj najaaiyaz ban ke reh gayi hun….aap muhje mujhe paide karne se pehle mar kyun nahi gayi???(ur lowered eyes tell everything. who is my dad? I have to pay for ur pleasures. I have become nazayiz today. y didn't u die before I came into this world?)
she received a slap from maan…

"aapne maa par ungli utthana se pehli puri saachai jaan lo…"(before raising a finger know the full truth.)
"mujhe yeh jaana hai ki mujhe iss duniya mein laana wala koun hai???koun mera baap hai??kya naam hai uska??"(I want to know who is my father.?)
"tho suno…tumhare baap ka naam DEV hai..mein, tumhari maa aur dev ek hi college mein padh the the. mein geet se bohut pyaar kartha tha par who sirf dev se pyaar karthi thi...lekin geet ke liye mein sirf ek aacha dost tha. mein aapne pyaar ko dosti ka naam nahi de saktha tha aur aapni feeing se haar kar mein AMERICA chala gaya…par mein aur geet humesha phone par baat karthe the…uske baate dev se suru ho kar ussi pe khatam hoti thi…par mujhe think insaan nahi laga…maine usse kahi baar usse samjha ne ki koshish kari par who uss insaan ke pyaar mein pagal thi….(then listen. ur dad's name is DEV. we three studied in same college. I loved geet and she loved only dev.i was only a friend for her.i couldn't put the faade so losing from my feeling I went away to AMERICA.but we werealways in contact through phone.she would always talk about dev.but I always didn't like him.i made her understand many times.but she was blinded in his love.)

6 mahine baad geet ko phone aana band ho gaya…mujhe laga ki kuch bohut badi gadbad hai…meine turant INDIA wapas aane ka faisla kiya…mein airport se ghar aa hi raha thi hi ek ladki meri car se takrayi…maine dekha ki who koi aur nahi tumari maa thi…jab tak mein usse kuch puchtha who behosh ho chuki thi… hospital lekar gaya..wahan mujhe pata chala ki who maa baane wali hai…(after 6 months she stopped calling.i thought that something is very wrong.i immediately planned to return to india.while returning from the airport a girl dashed my car and she was none other that ur mother. before I could ask anything she fainted.i took her to hospital.there I came to know that she was expecting.)

tabhi mujhe laga ki mein jo soch raha tha who sahi hai… uske hosh mein aathe hi who mujhe maarna lagi yeh kehkar ki 'tumne mujhe kyu bachaya???mujhe marne diya hota…'mere se yeh dekha nahi gaya aur meine usse hosh mein laane ke liye ek thappad maare…maine usse pucha ki yeh sab sab kya hai???woh rone lagi aur boli ki 'tum bhi mujhe sab ki tarah galat samaj rahe ho par isme meri koi galti nahi hai. maine tho sirf saacha pyaar kiya tha….dhoka ussne mujhe diya'.mein bola…'yeh sab kaise hua??' (at that time all my doubts came true.as soon as she came to consciousness she started beating me telling 'why did u save me?u could have let me died.'I was not able to bear it so inslapped her.i asked her that what was going on?she started crying saying'u too misunderstand me like all.what ever happened is not my mistake.i only loved he only cheated me'.i asked how did it all happen.)

who boli 'uss din dev ka birthday tha aur ussne late night party di thi…uske kafi force karne par aur aapne pyaar ka vasta dene par mein wahan ruk gayi..uska ek dost mere liye soft drink lekar aaya…uss pine ke baad mujhe chakkar sa aane laga…mujhe behoshi se chane lagi…dev aakar mere se bola ki tumhari tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai aao tumne ghar chood do…yeh keh kar usse mujhe godh mein uttha liya….uske baad mujhe hosh nahi raha…(she said 'that day was dev's BDay and it was a late night party.on his much forcing I stayed only after him giving promise on our love.his friend brought softdrink for me after dringing it I started to feel giddy.he came and said that as I am not feeling well he would leave me home.after saying that he lifted me.after that I was unconscious.')

jab subha meri aakh khuli tho meine aapna aap ko anjaane kamre mein aakala paaya…aur mujhe laga ki kuch galat hua par mein samaj nahi paayi ki kya hua….mein wapas ghar chali gayi….agle din se mujhe yeh laga ki dev ka behaviour change ho gaya….na tho who mere se thik se baat kartha aur na who mera phone uttha…mein samaj nahi paayi ki dev aisa kyun kar raha tha…phir kuch dino mein mujhe pata chala ki mein maa baane wali hun…mein shock hogi….mein ne bohut soocha aur phir muhje dev ki party ki yaad aayi….mujhe yeh yaad aaya ki usse raat ko humare beech who hua jo nahi hona chaiye tha…yeh pata chathe hi mein uske ghar gayi….uska ghar dulhan ki tarah saja hua tha…andar jaathe hi pata chala ki dev ki shaadi ho rahi hai…(when I opened my eyes the next day I found myself is a strange room.i was feeling that something bad had happened but couldn't find what.i returned home.from next day I found difference is dev's behaviour.he would not pick my phone and would not talk to me properly.after some days I came to know that I am pregnant.i was shocked.after thinkign a lot I remembered that night.that night all that happened between us that should not have happened.i rushed to his home to see that his home was decorated.going in I came to know that he is marriying.)
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mein dev se baat karne pahunci…ussne mujhe pehcaan ne se hi inkaar kar diya aur kaha ki who mujhe jaantha tak nahi aur pyaar karna tho dur ki baat hai…jab maine usse kaha ki mein uske baache ki maa baan ne wali hun tho usse iss baat se saaf inkaar kar diya aur usse aapne hi baache ko najaaiyz kaha…aur kaha ki uska aur mera koi rishta nahi hai…aur meri aakhon ke saamne uski shaadi ho gayi aur mein kuch nahi kar saki….(when I went to talk to dev he refused to recoginse me and said that that loving a far away. when I told him about the kid he completely refused it and called his own blood as illegal…and said that I have no relation with him…infront of my eyes he married and I couldn't do anything.)

aab mere paas ek hi raasta tha khud ko khatam karne ka…yehi soochte mein road par chali jaa rahi thi aur meina achanak tumhari gaadi se takra gayi..kismat ne bhi dev ki tarah dhoke diya dekho maut bhi naseeb nahi hua…'(then I had only one way and that was to kill myself…thinking the same thing I was walking and suddenly I dashed your car…fate too cheated like dev..see death was also not fortunate.)


mujhe yeh sab sun kar bohut gussa aaya….mein pehle geet se wada liya ki who aisa kadam kabhi nahi utthayigi aur iss bache ko janam degi aur mein isse baap pyaar dunga…mere kehne par hi ussne tume janam diya….par iss hadse ne geet ko bilkul badal diya…jo ladki dusroon ke chere par muskaan lane mein bilkul samay nahi lagtha tha ussi ke chere se muskaan kooso duur thi…tumari maa ki jitni taari ki jaaye kam hai…tumari maa jaise shayeed hi koi aur hoga….kuch mahino baad jab tumara janm hua tab maine tumari maa ke chere par halki si muskaan dekhi…issiliye maine tumhara naam muskaan rakha….(hearing all this I got very angry…first I got promise from geet to not do anything like this again and will give birth to this child and I will give father's love…due to this only she gave u birth..but this incident entirely changed geet..the girl who would bring smile to other's face now smile was miles away from her face..she would bring smile to face in seconds..now much ever we praise will be less..no one is like ur mother..after somemonths when u were born I saw a smile on ur mother's face..so I named u muskaan.)

meri maa ke marzi ke khilaaf tumhare janm ke baad mein tum dono ko aapne ghar le aaya kyunki geet ka mere alawa iss duniya mein aur koi nahi tha…"(against my mother's wish I brought u two here because geet had no one except me.)

"par iss sab se yeh thodi na sabit ho jatha hai ki yeh bekasoor thi…"(but with this u cant prove that this girl is innocent..")said maan's mom..

"mein dev ko aise hi thodi na chood ne wala tha…geet se baath katne ke baad mein dev se milne gaya…uski shaadi ho chuki thi aur woh aapne honeymoon simla gaya hua tha….mujhe gussa aa gaya…phir mein uske dostoon ke paas gaya…maine unse pucha 'jab tumhe pata tha ki dev geet se pyaar kartha hai tho tum logo ne dev ki shaadi kisi aur se kaise hone de??' uske doston ke javab ne mujhe hairan kar diya 'dev ne kabhi geet se pyaar nahi kiya….' tho maine kaha 'agar usne geet se pyaar nahi kiya tho geet dev ke baache ki maa kaise ban gayi???' yeh sun kar uske dost hairaan ho gaye…(how would I leave dev like this??after talking to geet I went to meet him..but he was married and had gone to his honeymoon to shimla…I was angry..i went to meet his friends..i asked them 'when u know that dev lovedd geet then how could u let dev marry??'his friend s answer maddened me 'he never loved geet'I asked..'when he never loved geet then how could she become his child's mother??'hearing this his friends were shocked.)

who bole 'hume tho zara sa bhi andaaz nahi tha ki chota sa mazaak itna bada roop le lega…' mein ne unse kaha 'mazaak???kaisa mazaak???' tho dostoon ne kaha 'jab hum clg mein padh the tab geet kisi bhi ladke ko bhaav nahi daalthi thi….tab dev ne humse kaha ki who usse aapne issarron par nacha ke dikhaeyga woh usse apni GF bana kar dikhayaga…tak humne usse sharth lagayi thi geet ko GF bana ke dikhane ki…par hume nahi pata tha ki woh uski zindagi barbaad kar dega….usne aapne BD party wale din geet ko zabardasti raat ko rooka aur humse kaha ki usse geet ke sang dance karna tha isliye ussne humse uske drink mein nashili dava milyi…thodi deer baad ussne hum sab se ghar jaane ko kaha aur usse yeh bhi kaha ki who geet ko ghar chood dega….phir hum sab chale gaye…uske baad unn dono ke beech kya hua hume nahi pata…(they replied'we never had any idea that a small joke would become so big.' 'joke??what joke??' 'in clg geet would never give importance to any boy..at that dev said that he would make her dance on her tunes..he would make her his GF..but we never knew that he would spoil her..on his BD party he forcefully stopped her and told us that he wanted to dance with her and asked us to mix drugs to her drink..after sometime we returned to our homes and after that what happened between them we don't know.)

agle din dev ka phone aaya aur usne kaha ki who sharth jeet chuka hun…ussne kaha ki hum ne kaha ki geet kisi ko chune bhi nahi dethi…ussne kaha ki who puri raat uske sang bith chuka hai usse apni bahoon mein le chuka hai….tab hume usse kaha ki ussne galat kiya…kyunki sharth sirf GF banane tak ki thi…tho dev ne kaha ki who itni sexy thi ki mere se control nahi hua…humne usse geet se shaadi karne ko kaha…tho uska javab aaya ki who usse pyaar nahi tha…aur shaadi to who uss ladki se hi karega jise who pasand katha hai…aur ussne yeh bhi kaha ki agar hum uss ke bare mein baat karnege tho humari dosti khatam…'uske dostoon se yeh sab jaankar mein seedhe shimla pahuch gaya….meine dev se pucha ke geet ke saat yeh sab karke who shaadi kaise kar sakthe hai….tho pata hai uska kya javab tha????(next day dev called and said that he had won the bet..he said that we told that geet would not let anyone touch her but he had spent the whole night with her..had her in his arms..we told him that this was all wrong because the bet was only for making GF..he said that she was so SEXY that I couldn't control we said him to marry geet..he replied that he doesn't love geet and he will marry the person whom he likes..and he also said us that again if we talk about this then our friendship will be over…'after knowing all this from his friends I directly reached shimla..i asked dev that after doing like this with geet how could he marry someone else..then u know what answer he gave??)


usne kaha 'ussme bohut akkad thi…maine bas uske akkad tho thikane lagaya….uski himmat kaise hui ki usse mujhe pure college ke samne thappad maara….us thappad ke badle mein maine uske sang jo kiya who kam tha…. aab who zindagi mein kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak nahi rahegi...koi usse shaadi nahi karega…usse wapas mere paas hi aana hoga...'maine usse kaha ki who yeh samaj ne ki galathi na kare ki geet iss duniya mein aleki hai geet jaise ladki ko thukra kar uss se jyada bad naseeb insaan koi nahi hoga…aur who bhi tab jab who uske bacche ki maa banane wali thi…mahine usse geet ko humesha ke liye geet ko bhul jane ko kaha…isske baad mein waha se lout aaya par mein usse kabhi keh nahi paya ki main usse bohut pyaar kartha hun…aur naa hi mein usse kabhi shaadi kar paaye kyunki agar mein usse kehtha ki mein usse shadi karna chatha hun tho woh mujhe galat samajthi ki mein uss par raham kha raha hun….par maine ek kaam zarur kiya uski beti ko ek baap ka pyaar dekar…mujhe jo sahi laga who hi maine kiya…"(he said'she had too much arrogance..i only broke it..how dare she slapped me in front of the whole college??for that whatever I did with her was less..she would never be able to show her face to anyone..no one would marry her...she will come back to me only...'I told he not to misunderstand that she doesn't have anyone beside her..rejecting a girl like geet is ur biggest mistake..and at that tme when she is pregnant…u forget geet forever..after that I returned from there..but I couldn't evpress myself in the fear that she might misunderstand that I am feeling pity on her..but I surely did one work that is giving a fatherly love to her daughter..what ever I thought was right I did it..)

"papa I am sorry…mujhe maaf kar do…aap se aache papa is duniya mein koi ho hi nahi saktha.."(I am sorry dad..no dad is good like my dad..)
"I am sorry geet beta maine tumhe itna saalo se galat samjha…"(I am soory geet bete I thought u wrong this many years.)
"aap maafi kyun maang rahi hai…maafi tho mujhe maangni chaiya…meri wajha se aapke bete ne kabhi shaadi nahi kari….aur aap baho ke sukh se wanchit rahi…mujhe maaf kar dejiye…(why are u asking sorry..this should be asked by me because of me ur son never married and u never had the benefits of DIL..)"said a teary eyed geet who was speechless hearing all this…she always respected maan..but now her respect for him increased ten folds….
"mein tumhe ek hi sharth par maaf karungi….jab tum sach mein meri bahu banogi..mere bete ko har khusi dogi jiska who haqdaar hai….(I will forgive u when u will really become my DIL..give my son all the happiness he deserves..)"

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Geet Handa had just joined a job as a crime reporter. She was sitting in her bed reading a crime novel, when her mobile ringed.
''Hello Geet Handa speaking''
''Geet, it's me Aadi''
''Good Morning Aadi sir''
''Geet open you TV on channel 3''
''Why sir?''
''Because that will be your first case.After watching the cover call me, back''
''Ji Sir''
Geet switched on her television on channel 3. Superstar Maan Singh Khurana arrested for psychically abusing his co-stars Sasha Kapoor and Sameera Sharma, flashed on the TV screen.The Aaj Tak reporter Simi Seghal appeared on the screen.
''When superstar Maan Singh Khurana was arrested he walked into the police station, like he was attending one of his movie premiere's. There was no shame in his eyes. And when one of our reporters asked if he felt guilty of the way he threated his heriones this is what he had to say''
The showed Maan walking inside the police station,with his head held high. He looked calm but there was a hidden anger and rage in his eyes, which Geet noticed. A reporter walked over to Maan.
''Mr Khurana, don't you feel a litle bit bad about the way you behaved''
Maan looked directly into the reporter's eyes.
''Why should I, when I have done absolutely nothing to be ashamed of''
''So Mr.Khurana are you stating that both the girls lied''
''Yes''
''Why would both of them lie, wha

Before the reporter could continue, the policemen asked them to back off. They took Maan inside. The channel switched back to Simi.

''So you can see how easliy Maan said that both the girls where lying. When we asked Sasha and Sameera what they have to say about Maan's statement, this is what they had to say''

The same reporter that had interviewd Maan was now sitting with in Sameera's home. Sasha was also there present.


''Ms. Sharma can you tell us what happened between you and Mr.Khurana''

Sameera who was crying wiped her tears, she tried to make her voice steady so she could talk normally.

''Well me and Maan meet on the sets of Tum hi ho. He was really friendly and caring at the beginning. I started to like his company a lot. I didn't realise when I fell in love with him and I thought he loved me too.At the last day of the shooting I decided to tell Maan about my feelings''
''Then what happened''
''When I told him I loved him, he smiled and said he also loved me. We started dating. The first two months everything was fine, my life seemed like a fairytail. But one day I started hearing rumours about him and Sasha. I asked Maan about that''
''What was Maan's reaction to that''
''He got angry he told me how I dared asking him what was going on between him and Sasha. I told him I trust him and he doesn't need to get upset. He told me if I better trust him and he stormed out of my apartment. Latter on the day I called him but he didn't pick up. I thought I must have really upset him, so I decided to go to his house. When I rang the bell Maan opened the door, he wasn't to happy to see me. He asked me to leave. I begged him to let me in so that we could talk, but he didn't budge. I thought it might be better if I leave. I was about to leave when I heard a female voice. I heard he asking who it was at the door. Maan replied no-one. Before Maan could close the door the women who is his dadima was already standing behind Maan. She sweetly greeted me, she asked me who I was. Before I could answer Maan said I was his co-star in the movie Tum hi ho. Dadima asked me in, but before I could reply Maan again answered for me and said that I had to go. But I really wanted Maan to talk to me and I thought saying yes to dadima was a way. So I told dadi I would love to come in. Maan shot me a angry glare. Me and dadi talked for a while, after a while dadi left.

Sameera's started crying by now.

''Calm down Ms. Sharma''

Sameera wiped her tears away.

''Sorry''
''It's okay Mr.Sharma, what happened when dadi ,left''
''When dadi left Maan grabbed my arm and took me to his room. He trew me on the floor and closed to door behind him. When I asked him to calm down. He walked over to me and slapped me right in my face. This was the first time that he had hit me. I cried and asked what my fault was that he was treating me like that. He told me I deserved to be threaten like that after I disobeyed his orders, when he made it clear that he wanted me to leave. I told him I came here to talk to him, he slapped me again and told me don't I understand that he isn't interested in talking to me. He told me to leave before he would hit me again. I was really scared I left from there. After that day I hadn't spoken or heard anything from him for two weeks. And everyone around me kept telling me he and sasha where seen going out. I didn't know what to do, then one night the bell rang. I was shocked to see Maan at the door. He told me he was sorry for the way he behaved and he didn't come before cause he didn't know how to face me, but he couldn't stay away from me any longer. I was the entire night in his arms. The next day when I wanted to go out he didn't let me he told me he missed me too much. We stayed a week in my apartment. I was really happy after a week when I talked to my friends they told me I was a moron. Maan was just using me. they told me Sasha had gone abroad for a week that's why he was with me and now that Sasha was back he was again all over her. I ignored that because I wanted to trust Maan. But after that week he started abusing me again. He used to get angry on litle things, my life had become a living hell. I was so scared of him. One day when I couldn't handle it anymore I tried breaking up with him but when I uttered the words of our break up to him he started abusing me again. I didn't know what to do and how to come out of this hell, untill one day I saw him with Sasha. Now I knew my friends where right he was two timing me. I decided to meet up with Sasha I realised he wasn't only two timing me but also her. She told me Maan and she meet on the film sets. They where dating for a couple of months by now. He used to be really nice but he started abusing her two. He abused her for the first time a week ago, before we meet up. He did that when some of her friends told her that he was dating me and she asked him about it. We realised he just used girls and trew them away and if we wouldn't speak up now, a lot of girls would go through the hell we went.

'' Oh my you went through a lot''
''Yes I did''
''And so did you Ms.kapoor, do you have something to say''
''No Sameera told you everything''
''Alright before leaving I want to show you something''

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