Os Competition- (Os 3,4,5-pg 7&8

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Two os updated...rest is tomorrow...
Os 1,2-pg2
os 3,4,5- pg 7&8
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Soon will be puting it up...
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you are already 4 days late...
we are waiting dear...
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Originally posted by: angelwords

Sorry. Buddies

i am not well...
that's why delay...
will be puting up os soon...
sorry for delay and thanks for support...

dear try putting up in installments...
anyways it takes long time for reading 20 OS
Get well soon
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Maan Singh Khurana big business man in the field of Construction hot & dashing bachelor in town till he met his love of his life & got married to Geet Khurana 6 months back. He who rules the whole world is ruled by his Geet. He could manage n number of projects at once without any pressure but today he is really frustrated and making everything difficult for his staff too, reason being his Geet not picking his calls from morning. After it seems like eternity he gets call from Geet to the relief of his or should I say all his staff but who knew that it would turn into worst.

MSK: Hello Geet where are you?? I have been calling you from long time

Chindi Don: MSK

MSK: Who is this...How did you get this phone...

CD: aap ke liye ek ChiDi (CD-ROM) beji hai ... dekhlena

MSK: Who are you

CD: what's so hurry... Jaldi ka kaam shaitaan ka hota hai

MSK: No... The sooner the better.

Same time there is a knock on the door

Adi: Sir Sir ... we have a received a CD.

MSK: ok play it

And in the wide screen video starts & in the phone CD repeats the same lines

Duniya mein logo ne Phir apne dil thaame

Aaya hoon lekar main Phir kitne hungaame

Phir maine socha hai Main jeetu sab haare

Darwaaje khul jaaye Gir jaaye deewarein

Mujhse takra paaya hai Mujhko pehchan lo

Main Hoon Don

Adi : he he he he he yeh tho SRK hai in DON...Sir aapne yeh movie nahi dehki thi isliye CD mangavi hai par abhi tho meeting hai... aap please baad mein dekhlena

MSK: stop it...what's this non sense...Is this a joke...

CD: Yeh wait wait ... haar ache kaam shuru karte waqt hum Don Sir ko yaad karte hai jaise aap logo Ganeshji ki puja karte ho vaise hi...2 min aur hai phir bata tha hoon

Duniya mujhe jo bhi kahe Iski mujhe parwah kya

Mujhe toh ye dekhna Jeetnay ki hai raah kya

Jo mujhe rokna chahe Unko hai kya yeh pata

Don ko pakadna mushqil hi nahi

Namumkin hai


Duniya phir jeetne aaya kaun

Mujhko pehchan lo

Main hoon Don

MSK: Hogaya drama...ab jaldi batha Yeh phone kaise aya tumare paas

CD: Sirf phone nahi uski malkin bhi hai mere paas...

MSK: What...

Same time in the screen Geet is shown lying unconscious

MSK: Geeet ... What do you need?

CD: badi jaldi hai apne biwi se milne ke... Sabar ka fal meetha hota hai...itni hi jaldi hai tho 500 cr dedo hume aur ise lejaov

MSK: 500 cr... kab aur kaha deni hai...

CD: kya yeh itni jaldi mangaya...socha tha yeh abhi bolega ... thoda kaam nahi ho saktha ... yeh bina bargain kiye hi mangaya... 500 cr itni choti rahkam hai kya...I thought of getting 5 crs... par mera tho lottery lagayi

MSK: Hello ... kab aur kaha deni hai batha do ...

CD: haan hello ...aap paise tayar rahko ... hum address bolte hai...aur kabhar dar jo police ko phone kiya tho...

Thud goes the line...

*****

CD: Ladki pe nazar rahkna...aur woh hosh mein aye tho muhje bathana...

Chela 1: Yes Boss...

C1 to C2: Go to that room & keep a watch on her...

C2 to C3: ja us kamre main aur gadi rahkna uspar

C3 to C2: kaunsa room hai...

C2 to C3: hare wali mein hai

C3 turns to pass the message to next chella but not finding any hits his head ... uff Why should I be the last one here... ab muhje hi karni padegi... Mehnat hum kare aur yeh unke mazze lute...

After a while

C3 to C2: waha pe woh nahi hai

C2 to C1: waha pe nahi hai

C1: What...

C2: aapne kaam diya na abhi woh waha nahi hai

C1: How did she escape from here? Follow me... let's see how she escaped

C1, 2 & 3 goes to room

C1: She is still lying here unconscious ... you all scared me

C3: par maine puri karma search kiya par woh nahi mili thi

C1: Don't you see she is lying on this bed...

C2 & C3: kaha kaha kaha

C1: wait ...what are you both searching

C2 & C3: Gadi

C1: what ...why are you searching a watch

C2: aapne kahana gadi uspar rahkne ke liye

C1: not that watch... I was saying ...tries to remember the right word...boss did mention ... yes nazar

C2 & C3: wooo... teek hai

C1: One of you wait here till she wakes up

C2 stays there ... while C1 & 3 leaves... after sometime...

GK: ouch ...my head ...why is it so heavy ...she looks around...but there are only walls and before she could figure out someone just runs outside seeing her.

GK: where am I? ... Who was that? ... Why did he run away seeing me? Am i looking like ghost... where is my mirror? ...Looks around to find her favourite pink bag... not finding it around her anger rouse in her veins ...She marched out of the room and banged the door, gaining everyone's attention.

Only to find mens dressed in design lungi with purple coat unbuttoned to show their green inners with purple shoes. They were all standing with a gun in their hand at every pillar seeing them GK burst into laugh. In between her laugh fits...she asked

GK: Are you all here for my today's entertainment? What to do of my MSK, how many times I have said not to make these arrangements I just wanted to spend a day all alone with my friend in the city ... But no he would do one or the other bookings for me... Where am I now tell me? Who are you all? Give me proper introduction... you all are dressed like this for any show or what? I always wanted to watch serials & films shooting... but I never got a chance ...Koi tho jawab do... chodo... First tell me how did I come here? Arey I have seen you... you were the one na who gave me that tissue paper? And you ...why did you run away seeing me? And where is my bag?? I have to set my face.

CD: shut your mouth girl... I will become deaf with your nonstop laugh & questionnaire...Kis tote ko pakad laye ullu ka patto. Aur Ladki tu chup chap beti reh ...ek aur shabd nikla na tho teri moo mein pura ka pura is banduk ki goliya teri through & through nikal jayega...

GK: Oye chup kar chidiya ka gonsnla ... seede seede aapna entertainment shuru karo...mera dimag karab mat kar...

CD: Chup ... hum sab ne tuhje kidnap kiya hai kidnap

GK: (shocked)... tum log aur ... Kidnappers...shakal se tho kisi sade huve comedy show ke actors lagte ho...

CD: Tum ... tum... tum humare mazak uda rahe ho.. yeh hamara uniform hai

GK: Kidnappers ke bhi uniform hoti hai

CD: Haan...in an authoritive voice

GK: Kisne banayi ... head mistress ne kya

CD: nahi...humari CCC ki guidleines hai

*****

MSK: GK maine araha hoon ... tum daro mat...speaks to the screen...

Adi: Siiir... Siiir...

Coming out of his revive MSK: Yes Adi

Adi: mein cheque bandu 500 cr ke liye...

MSK: You can make it but if I sign then Police will put us behind bars for fraud case

Adi: frrraud case

MSK: Mere paas itne paise kaha hai... Sare tho geet ke naam pe hai...woh sign nahi karegi tho bank se paise kaise nikalo ge...

Adi: ohhh... tho phir hum kya kare siiirr ... police ko phone karte hai...

Adi picks his phone & calls 100...

MSK: Nahi ruhko ... marvaoge kya muhje... we can't inform police... they may hurt my GK

Adi : phir kya kare... Sir Idea...I had seen a ad in the newspaper of Akhri Pasta's New High Tech Detective Agency ... they take case through calls & solve it

MSK: You have their number...

Adi: Yes Sir...here it is...

Adi dial's it & handover it to MSK...

MSK opens his mouth to speak but he is stopped by the wacky voice of a man at the other end...

Welcome

To

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

Kiski janam kundli nikal ne ho

Ya kiski gair samband ki shak ho

Koi gayab hogaye hai ya gayab hona ho

kiska piche karna ho ya chudana ho

Chori, jalasaji, gabana, ya katl ho

Sab mushkil ka ek uttar

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

*

Trust us & you will forget to trust others

I am a joking...

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Maan trying to be patient for his Jaan... As it is the matter of life & death for him

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Age ki jankari Hindi maine jane keliye: 1 dabaye

To continue in English: Press 2

=>2


To know more about us: Press 1

Corporate services: Press 2

Personal Services: Press 3

To repeat the menu: press 9

=>3


Civil crime service: Press 1

Criminal crime service: Press 2

For help in selecting the before menus: Press 3

To repeat the menu: press 9

=>2


In case of theft/burglary/break-in: Press 1

In case of Murder: Press 2

In case of Kidnapping: Press 3

For any other issues: Press 4

To repeat the menu: press 9

=>3


You have selected Kidnapping

Choose the person who has been kidnapped

Self: Press 1

Spouse: Press 2

Sibbli...

=>2

Invalid selection

Free advice: Never select your choice before given a chance..

Thank you for availing the services of

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

Trust us & you will forget to trust others

I am a joking...

***

Maan gets irritated...& instructs

MSK: Adi... get this basic intro done... then I will take it forward...

Adi: Yeees siiir & takes up the phone & puts on the speaker & the same records starts again to boil Maan's anger...

Welcome

To

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||


... Blah...


You have selected Kidnapping

Choose the person who has been kidnapped

Self: Press 1

Spouse: Press 2

Sibblings: Press 3

Friends: Press 4

Others: Press 5

=>2

And then suddenly Adi is shocked & the next moment scared with the glares he was getting from MSK

Adi: Siiirrr Maine galt press nahi kiya...yeh aapne aap start huvi hai...

Aao na gale lagalo na lagi bujha do na O Jaane Ja

Dekho Seene mein kaisi hulchul machi hai O Saajna

pa pa pa..


MSK mock: Thoo kya humare liye free add-on FM service hai ...jo mil rahi hai

Adi: Siiir maine phele try thodi kiya tha...


Dekho Seene mein kaisi hulchul machi hai O Saajna

Maana ki Life bohat busy hai parkabhi kabhi break lo

kitkat kaov kya patha aagle pal tumare liye kya leaye

Kitkat break bantha hai

Adi: Siiir yeh tho commercial break tha ... maine tho darr gaya kahi maine sach mein FM ka button tho press nahi kiya tha...

MSK: Shut up & continue with it Adi...

Adi: Yes Siiirrr..

Thank you for your patience

Precap of your selection:

English=> personal Services =>Criminal=>Kidnapping=>Spouse

And now select the detective category for your case

Local: Press 1

National: Press 2

International: Press 3

Adi: Siiirr Kaunsa choose karunu...

MSK starts thinking...well National & International ke liye paise bhi zyaada lagenge aur advance mange tho nahi de saktha main ab ... waqt bhi lagega une yaha tak ane mein...

Adi: Siiirrr kaha ko gaye...jaldi boliye ...warna yeh call bhi cut ho jayega...

MSK: Local ... press 1

Adi: Please Please please call cut mat hona please please please

=>1

Currently all the local detectives are busy please try after some days

Free Advice: Try calling us again ... you may get a detective available next second...

We solve cases in seconds

Thank you for availing the services of

||| Akhri Pasta's Hightech Detective Agency |||

Trust us & you will forget to trust others

I am a joking...

****

Adi: Siiirrr Meri galti nahi hai...phir se ek baar try karoon

But MSK was lost in his own misery... Seeing him so lost Adi starts to give another try...

<><><> Flashback <><><>

Today Morning

MSK: No means no GK...you are not going alone...

GK: Mr. MSK... If I have decided once means I won't hear mine too... understood or should I make you understand.

MSK: GK pls yaar kuch tho samaj neki koshi karo... you are Mrs. MSK & you want to explore the city all alone in that metro.

GK: Yes Yes ... jane dona jaanu...I am really tired of going with all this security... nothing will happen to me aur waise bhi you very well know how to track my whereabouts too na...

MSK: But...

GK: Chup bilkul chup!!! And & don't act smart ...you are not sending my security behind me without my knowledge like last time ... agar kuch aisa huva na ... aapki kehar nahi.

MSK: Jo hukkum mere akka... par Jaan be careful & yes I know how to keep track of you.

GK: Chalo bye me leaving...sham ko milte hai... till then be busy with your clients... metro here I come.

MSK: Give me a call anytime... I will be at your service.

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Adi: Siirrr Siirrr...

MSK coming out of his thoughts: Yes Adi... what happened to the call?

Adi: Siiir... woh… no detective was available

MSK: What… we wasted so much time on this record…

Adi: Nahi Siir… I tried again … and found one of them is available & he will be here in a while ... you can brief him everything.

MSK: Is that detective good... how is his track record...

Adi: 100% hai sir...ek bhi case hare nahi hai...sab solve karde the hai...

S: Heeelllooo...

Both turn to the new intruder ... both are shocked to see the person in the cabin who was trying to stabilise himself from falling as his head was spinning... MSK gets some water for him and helps him sit on the couch... Thud...Adi fell with the shock.

M: How can I help you Sir...

S: well ...coughs in between ...I am here to help you son

M: Me...

S: Yes son ... I am the detective you called for

M: But...

S: yes yes I know what will be your next Q... Why am I working in this age... But after my Geeta left me my bad luck started... and even my health started to deteriorate ... I put on weight...I lost my speed with that... and the production house who use to follow all my adventures left me saying the TRP's are less... & my commission which I use to get from the telecast band hogayi ... ab pura din main sirf criminals ko pakadtha rahonga tho ... aapne pet ke liye kya karonga... So had to stop my free service to the people & joined this detective agency for my earnings.

By that time Adi wakes up

Adi: Siiir sir... yeh tho tho tho tho woh woh woh... Adddbhut... Adddhamya Saaahas Ki Paaribhasha Hai...Yee Mit Ti Maaanavta Ki Ek Aaasha Hai ...Ye Srrrushti ki Shhakti ka Waardaan Hain...Ye Avvvtaar Naahin Hai ...Ye Innnsaan Hai ... Yeh ... Yeh... SSShaakktimmmaaan

Yee Attmashhakti Haai ...Duuuniya Baddal Sakkti Haai ...Phhhoolon Mein Dhhhal Saaakti Hai ...Shhholon Si Jjjal Sssakti Hai ...Hooota Hai Jaaab Aaadmi Ko Apppna Gyaaan ...Keeehlaye wo...Shhhaktttimaannn

S: Teek se bolna tho seeklo beta... is tara bolege tho kya samaj ayega sab ko... Yese bolte hai use...

Adbhut, Adhamya Saahas Ki Paribhasha Hai Ye Mit Ti Manavta Ki Ek Aasha Hai

Ye Srushti ki Shakti ka Wardaan Hain Ye Avtaar Nahin Hai Ye Insaan Hai

Shaktimaan Shaktimaan Shaktimaan

Ye Atmashakti Hai Duniya Badal Sakti Hai Phoolon Mein Dhal Sakti Hai

Sholon Si Jal Sakti Hai Hota Hai Jab Aadmi Ko Apna Gyaan Kehlaye wo...Shaktimaan

Shaktimaan ...Shaktimaan ...Shaktimaan ...Shaktimaan

S starts coughing by the time he ends this: Kitne din ho gaye the yeh sun kar... kabhi kabhi muhje youtube mein browse kar ke suna padega ise phele ki mein ise bhool javooo...I feel so energetic after hearing this theme of mine.

MSK: What's going on... are you telling me that you will help us in getting my Geet

S: I am here for that itself son... now let's make a plan & solve it... Now tell me how everything happened ... who has been kidnapped ... from where?

Adi:Uff... mera kya hoga ... ab shuru hoga meri geet ...meri geet ka jap

MSK: Meri Geet ... She wanted to go out alone in metro without guards so morning we had a discussion about the same but as always she won & Meri Geet went all alone after that I came to Office... & when I tried calling her after my first meeting but her mobile was switched off

S: Don't worry when I am here... I will search her soon

MSK: how sir...

S: I have my own communication lines, but don't tell anyone about this if the government gets to know they will encroach my space & will ended with another scam of 5G

MSK: how much time will it take...

S: I take 5-10 mins...

MSK: That will be great

After 10 mins

MSK: Sir...

S: Don't disturb me in between, once my connection breaks I will have to start it from the beginning

MSK: ok but your 10 mins are over...

S: Yes but now with so many other networks obstructing my flow 5 will become 15 sometimes

MSK: where are you GK

MSK: Adi ... you take care of the meetings ... and postpone which ever needs my attention

Adi: Yes Sir...

****

GK: Yeh CCC kya hai

CD: Central Criminals Council

GK: kyaaa yesi bhi hoti hai kya

CD: hume yeh regulations sab follow karna padtha hai..aap log ko kabar nahi kitni mushkil hoti hai hume unki requirements puri karna...humari license cancel ho sakthi hai... har saal hume report deni padthi hai humane kithna kaam kiya hai...humare performance ko dekh kar humare territory expand karte hai ... aur tho aur achi locations bhi allot hoti hai...tak ki maal dara party mile...

GK: Par aapko yeh rules aur regulations samjatha kaun hai... aapko dehke kar lagtha nahi ki aap pade like ho

CD: Is liye tho yeh angrez jadne wale rahka hai

GK: Mera bag kaha hai... muhje apni mobile chaiye

CD: Nahi milegi

GK: Kyuuu meri mobile nahi dogi tho maine kise baath karungi...

CD: tum kise se bhi baath nahi karo gi

GK: Maine GK ... kise se bhi baath kiye bagair kaise rehsahkthi hoon.. aur waha MSK bhi tho pareshan ho raha hoga...

CD: hone de ... hume use kya... hume tho sirf paisa chaiye paisa... woh bhi tumare MSK ke se...

GK: kyu loan baki rehgaya tha kya

CD: loan nahi lodging charges ... thuje yaha rahkne ki...

GK: Yeh le muhje yaha rehne ki kya zarrorat hai ... aur maine thodi apne marzi se ayi hoon ... muhje tho aap log ne yaha leke aye ho ... ohh teri ...maine yaha kaise ayi

*****

<><><> Flashback <><><>

In the Metro

GK: Uff... finally I could grab a seat... babaji kitni beed hai yaha... sans lena muskil kardiya hai... how am I supposed to spend some quality time with my friend...

Metro stops at a station & when the door was about to close a guy enters in & bump into GK spilling water on her.

Guy: Sorry ...I am so sorry... Take this tissue...

GK: It's ok...

Guy: let's use the washroom

GK: Uff... washroom aur yaha ...we are in ...a...mee...ttrooo naa.a...& she falls uncousious

<><><>Flashback ends

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C1: I suggest you reduce your weight... It was quite a difficult job to get you here...

GK mouth opens as big O...: You are not fit enough... You know my MSK carried me all along the camp site last time...

C1: Shhh... Don't talk... my boss will get angry

GK: par mein bore ho rahi hoon... mera bag tho dona

C2: tho teri bag mein entertainment hai kya

GK: time pass karne ka samgri tho hai

C2: par mobile...

GK: haan haan... mallom hai nahi dogi

C2 => C3: bag de iska par mobile nikal de

C3: maine phele he nikal diya hai guru.. boss ne mangi thi na to call MSK

GK: Aap ko sharma nahi athi ladies bag ko haath lagte huve... chi ... kaisa rules aur regulations banathe ho aap log...

C1: There is no rule in our Guidlines that we can't touch any ladies bag

GK: but why isn't there, added it in this time budget...

C1: What budget we don't have anything like that. This is in't the Government where we increase the value by 4 bucks all of a sudden & then decrease it by 1 cent to eyewash the people. Once a rule is made there can't be any deviation or reservation.

GK: Ok... give me your group kya naam tha... haan CCC ka address I will personally sit & draft all my suggestions & complaints in it.

C1: Get this thing straight lady... It isn't any movie where the hero writes letter after letter to get an approval from the government to build a post office in his village. These are top secret councils we can't be just letting everyone know about these things.

GK: uff ek cheez keliye itni mehnat... mera sar chakara raha hai... uff mera bag tho do phele...

C3 gets GK's bag

Everyone looks into that to know what is there in it to time pass... GK takes out her mirror n starts setting her hair then takes out all her makeup accessories to correct herself as she had woken up just now... ie after her sedition sleep... while everyone around her presume her to be another mad of the makeup and leaves from there.

Once she gets ready... she takes out the camera and starts clicking the pictures and uploads it in Facebook and with the default setting of tagging all her friends in the pictures.

****

In the Front Office of KC:

Pinky, receptionist as usual munching her chips & replying to the calls with the same as per MSK orders that MSK is not available & would revert back to you at the earliest... Tired she opens the facebook

Pinky: which place is this... It has such a beautiful backdrop.

P to Adi: this weekend yaha chalte haina

Adi: phirse karcha ... kaha...

P: yeh dekho na GK ma'am ne pictures add kiya hai FB Maine...woh bhi abhi

A: really ... dekhavo muhje... oh yes ... I have to inform Sir... aur late hogaye tho woh devdas banjayenge..

P: kyu undono ka mein fight huvi hai kya

A: bad mein bolunga... bye

****

Adi comes running into the MSK cabin (i.e. without knocking) making a huge sound & breaking the revive of Shaktimaan & thereby receiving a deadly glare from MSK

MSK: Adi why are running around like this can't you see he is trying to locate GK... ab inka dyaan bang kar diya...

Adi: Siiir ... aap tho yese keh rahe hai ki Menak ne Vishwamitr ki tapasya bang kardiya waise mein Shaktimaan ka kar diya he he he he he he

MSK: shut up Adi... Sir aap ko kuch pata chala kaha hai meri GK

S: Son I was so close to...

MSK: to find my GK location...

S: Let me complete it son ... I was so close to get a glimpse of my Geeta

MSK: What... you are searching your Geeta

S: Relax son I was searching everywhere but when I reached the place where Geeta is living I couldnot stop my heart to have atleast a look at her

MSK: Sir just find my GK's location...

Adi: Siiir you have to see this first...

MSK: Adi I am busy ... come afterwards

Adi: This is also important just open your facebook.

MSK: Adi have you gone mad... here I am going mad for not able to find my GK & you want me to login into FB & what should I do there ... update my status... Meri Biwi... Kho Gayi...

Adi: sir please check it once ... you will be proud of me

MSK: Ok get my laptop

After waiting for some seconds... which felt like decades to MSK, his wall opened to be greeted by security question update... after skipping it... he could see lovely wife's pictures in different angles... uploaded just 30 mins before...

MSK: she must have escaped from kidnappers...he picks up his phone and tries GK's number but it came as switched off

Adi: Sir... It seems like a jungle... Do you know which one this is

MSK: No Adi... I have no idea about this place

Adi: how come you don't know this... you are supposed to be well versed in all jungles...

MSK: oh really... but these are trees not buildings with signboards so that I can identify that easily

Adi: But putting signboards are compulsory

MSK: I wish there was a law for putting up the signboards in jungles too... neither I would get lost nor it would be difficult to track GK

S: I may be able to help you in this... it looks like the G1A forest ... I can locate the exact location too...

MSK: that's great... then what are we waiting for ... let's get her

Adi: Sir... She isn't lost in a trip that you can just go and pick her up. We need a plan

MSK: don't tell me you have one brilliant plan

Adi: actually I do Sir... we can all go there in disguise ... just like in Amar Akbar Anthony film climax... & can rescue Ma'am

MSK: let me get this straight... you think we three will go there in disguise and dance in front of those bandars ... and we will sing Maan Shakthimaan Adi the superman...

Adi: he he he he sir main superman...

MSK: shut up Adi...

S: why are you guys even thinking... we can just go & nab them... then hand them over to Police... let's move in our own transportation and meet at G1A forest... Saying so he zooms out...

MSK: Adi where are you going

Adi: to catch metro whose last stop is near our destination?

MSK: why are you going to catch a metro ... you can accompany me in car

Adi: but S told to use own transportation

MSK: shut up and come with me.

G1A forest

Adi: Sir how are we going to find where is there hideout

MSK: Let's check with the forest inspector here

Adi: Why haven't you been here before Sir

MSK: I always thought I should but never got a chance to... you find where the inspector is

Adi: Yes sir... but don't you think we should wait till the kidnappers call back

MSK: I have forwarded all my calls to Office landline so if he tries again then Pinky will just ask them to give their number & tell them that I will call back ... so in no situation we can get there call connected to me.

Adi: But why you don't want to talk to them

MSK: To buy some more time... they will do some or the other mistake

Adi: Yes Sir ... It has to work... Kidnap film mein yesa hi huva tha

MSK: what... ok forget it... but they have not called back yet as I had specifically instructed Pinky to tell me if she gets a call from GK's mobile

***

Shrill shrill...

C1: run run run police police... we have 10 mins by that time we need to escape

GK: woh phoh phoh ... yeh tho meri MSK ki siren hai...

Hearing her words everyone stopped...

CD: police lekhe agaya kya... C1 check cameras...

GK: arey nahi ... meri MSK ke gadi mein siren lagi hai... to make everyone alert

C1: No only cars are there...

GK: nothing is mission impossible for my MSK... show her thumb like a kid who won the toffee from her elder sibling. He found me...

Outside:

3 Mercedes black car comes to a halt... making everyone know of their presence... the left door opens... a man in formals with black glasses comes out of the middle car while his security guards from the other cars cover him and after a while right door flung open.

MSK: oye gadho... you are guards of me not of Adi...you were supposed to open the door for me...now wait for me here itself...

MSK makes an entry in full attitude oozing out in his walk... Here GK sensing MSK's presence runs towards a direction like iron pulled towards the magnet.

C2: C1 rok ise kahi baag rahi hai... par ise darwaza kis taraf hai kaise pata chala

But before anyone could react GK was in her MSK's arms

GK: what took you so much time... missed you

MSK: sorry... I was so lost in your pics ki I forgot what was happening around.

GK: oh... you forgot to check my pics and were lost ki you didn't know what's happening around.

MSK bites his tongue getting caught in his lie...

GK: enough of your lies...

MSK: ok ab bache ki jaan loge kya ...chalo chalte hai

CD: Rukho... yaha atho gaye aapne marzi se par humare ijazat ke bina bhaar nahi ja pavoge

GK: aapke bodyguard's kaha hai

MSK: woh car ke pass

GK: kyu

MSK: agar koi phirse tyre chori ke legaye tho hum wapis kaise jayenge... yahi reh jani hai Adam aur Eve banke

GK: tho ab aapko fight karke mujhe lejana padega

MSK: mujhe fight karna nahi atha

GK: tho yeh dole shole aur yeh tai chai kisske liye hai

MSK: woh tho anger management ke liye hai... ab mein insaano pe aapna gussa nahi nikal saktha na...

GK: ab humara kya hoga ... ok main bolti hoon kaise karthey hai

MSK: meri hote huve tum fight karo acha nahi lagega

GK: woh ho ... main sirf bolungi karna tho aapko hi padega... sab log meri baath teek se suno ... MSK ke saath sab one on one fight karenge... no guns no other weapons... jab tak yeh bandar log katam nahi hote tab tak yeh fight chaltha rahega...

CD: par yeh tho nainsaafi huvi na... hum char aur yeh 1 ... waise hum tumare baath kyu manye

GK: paise chaiye... tho meri kehna mana padega...

CD: na tumara na humara... hum in 2 loandonko haraenge aur yeh hum 4 ko

MSK: par mein akhela in 4 ko marunga... tum meri biwi ho

Adi: sir sir main bhi fight karunga ... GK meri...

MSK gives his famous angry glare

Adi: Bbbehan sir

MSK: nahi sirf main

GK: teek hai... aapaas mein nahi ladthe... phele MSK fight karenge uske baad Adi...

MSK & Adi: done

MSK: Maine insab ko hara dunga tho... tho Adi ka number hi nahi ayega

GK: 30 mins hai fight ke liye ready hojavo

MSK: GK ab bolo kaise fight karni hai

GK: aapne dono hatho se ek saath kan ke neech marna aur uske baad sar pe marna jaise nailing on their head...ise 3 baar repeat karna ok ...

MSK: teek hai... par kuch familer lagthi hai

GK: haan na woh Rowdy Rathore mein haina chintha tha chitha chitha chintha tha ... bus vahi karni hai bus un bandaro ka sar hai bech mein... waise saath mein aapna sar bhi hilana tab perfect hoga...

Adi: itna sab kuch main nahi kar saktha par end mein fullstop tho dal saktha hoon na...

Adi: sir aap yeh sab karna uske baad meri pass bejna mein unke pichwade pe lat marunga

MSK: Done...

Round 1: MSK vs C3

Both step inside the ring... and start circling analysing how to begin... finally C3 raise to punch MSK but when he was about a mere an inch away... he freezes there and taking advantage of this MSK starts beat him exactly how GK had mentioned before and after 3 times C1 just crumbles down...

Round 2 & 3 went the same way but one thing none understood is after some time how did the Chela's have freezed to their place.

CD: Is he playing statue statue with my chela's... I should be careful... before he say's it I will freeze him...

thinking so he enters the ring...

CD: Freeze... Statue...

MSK: What... what did you say?

CD: This is cheating... you made my chela's freeze but now you are not following that...

Before he could think what was happening MSK beats him up & falls down...

Adi: Sir this is cheating... you didn't let me beat anyone... they all have fallen down before I could kick them...

GK: Kyu tension le rahe ho Adi sir... jab yeh log utt jayenge na tab mar lena...chalo phele hum yaha se bhaag chalet hai...

MSK: par phele ek insaan ka shukriya karni hogi... unone hi tho in logo ko freeze kar diya tak ki main mar sakhu aur fight jeet javu

GK & Adi: Kisne...

MSK points out to an old person sitting on a chair, who was not noticed by anyone till now. GK rubs her eyes twice to believe who was there infront of her was real or a dream... then screams

GK: Shaktimaan... mera phela superhero... MSK yeh kaha mile aapko... Mein aapki bohat badi fan hoo... mein na humesha school se bhaag kar athi thi to watch the episodes... mein ne na ek bhi episode nahi miss kiya... aur tho aur repeat telecast bhi miss nahi karti thi... MSK meri friend kho lo aur yeh moments ko golden moments bana do...

MSK: tumari friend... tum hi samalo... baad mein tum complain karogi... isme light nahi hai... isme shake huva hai... isme angle sahi nahi hai... in sab se tho acha hai tum hi setup karo aur photo shoot karlo...

GK: aap mere saath photo shoot karoge na

S: Mera photo shoot... kyu nahi aapne purane fans ke saath tho offcourse yes... avo beta... tume yaha koi taklef tho nahi huvi haina...

GK: kiski majal hai GK ko taklef de...

MSK: tab tak mein in Bandar ko unki jaga puchatha hoon... par sabut doond na padega...

GK: arey koi CCC naam ka council hai waha se inka hi nahi sab criminals ka record milega... the end of all the criminals.

MSK: wah meri GK...

Outside...

MSK: Police kab tak yaha honge...

Guard: 5 mins sir...

MSK: ok.

G: Siir ek problem hogayi hai

MSK: what now...

G: All tyres of the cars have flattened... they had put nails on the way...

MSK: but that one tyre looks fine... use the Stepney from all the cars to fix one car & get the remaining tyres fixed.

G: yes sir...

Guards leave to fix the tyres, after photo shoot GK comes out searching MSK, who will be looking around the place...

GK: Oh teri ... phir se chori hogayi kya sab tyres

MSK: no just puncture... where is Shaktimaan Sir & Adi..

GK: both left... I thanked Shaktimaan again and Adi wished for a ride with him.

MSK: hope Adi survives the ride...

GK: why did you say that...

MSK: I meant he might become ill after super speed ride.

GK: Ok... I got so many pictures... can we stay here for more time... I want to capture more moments in my Friend aka Camera

MSK: yes we have time till our cars are back... let's go for a walk around...If you want we can put up a tent too & stay for the night...

GK: really... I can get night pictures of this place too... she pecks him

MSK: Raho aapni pictures ki duniya mein... sare romance ka kachra kar diya...

GK: oh... Poor baby...gussa hogaye... chalo aaj aapki sunti hoon...

MSK: tumara ya mera... woh farak nahi padtha... bus Meri Biwi mil gayi bus...

MSK: And from now on you are not allowed go alone anywhere...

GK: tho aap meri hutch dog banogi...

MSK: nahi tum

GK: aap

MSK: tum...

& there tu tu mein mein continues

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loud alarm sound alerted everyone.Suddenly the entire environment went quiet.Need to say that their angry young hot boss is entering the premises of their office.The last thing they would do on the very morning is to mess with their boss.One mistake and the fellow is fired.They are all scared for his temper.


There came the loud thudding sound indicating their boss is coming surrounded by the bodyguards.The entire team of body guards stopped at the entrance making way for their boss.The black shinig shoes,the three piece suit and the eyes with no emotion is all the trademark of their boss.


There was entire silence on the entry of their boss every one stood up and greeted him.He just gave them a curt nod and entered his cabin .He is the only heir of 300 crore property ,the number one business man,Girl's DD(Dhak DhakEmbarrassed) and he is none other than MSK.


Soon the entire office resumed their work.Maan came to his cabin took his seat and called Adi his chief accountant cum Right hand .


Adi barged into the room fearing not to rise his boss's temper.


"Good morning Sir."


"Morning Adi.Where is the files I have asked for?Have you checked it?"


"Wo Wo yess sir" Adi stammered.Usually he will not stammer in front of anyone but who could talk properly in front of this volcano.


"Stop stammering Aadi.Don't irritate me in the very morning"


"Yes sir"


"Now go and get the file after 15 mins till then ill check my mails."


"Yes sir" with that Adi escaped from their.


Maan started checking his mails.. While going through the unread mail his eyes caught a name and unknowingly his lips raised into a smile suddenly the smile turned into frown.


"What's the need for her to mail me?She can call me always .Anyways who can predict Geet handa.Confused" He was eager to raed the mail from her.
He opened it.

From: DrGeetHanda@gmail.com
To: MaanSinghKhurana@gmail.com
Bcc: Adithyachopra@gmail.com
Dear Sir,
I would like to bring to your kind notice that we both are involved in a business deal.The way your company shows negligence in this deal disheartens me.As far as I have heard Khurana's never been negligible in any of the work they take.But to mention in a sad note that i have a doubt whether the deal we have involved seems not to be satisfactory for you …I am bringing this to your notice since you have already missed two of our meetings.So this mail is to remaind you that today we have a meeting by 5 "o" clock.If in case you could not able to make up for this then am sorry in advance that this deal will hold no value to me or my concern.


Regards,
Geet Handa.


His face hold no emotions.The nerve of the girl what does she think of herself?
Adi barged into his room.Maan was really in a bad mood seeing the mail was about to erupt on him when the name he uttered stopped him.


"Sir I received an mail from Miss.Geet Handa"


"What??"Shocked


"Yes sir she has sent a copy of that mail to me also.Sir,but as fair as I know we have no project at present involving Miss.Geet or her Hospital Sanjeevani."


"Ya Adi I know.Just ignore it.Now go and get me the project report."


As soon as Adi went out Maan took his mobile and dialed the number Jaan.
He was desperately wating for her to pick up the call.He just wanted to scream at her for this stupidity .She has sent a copy of this mail to Adi.That too she mentioned their love as Business deal!Angry


"Good morning Maanu dearie sweetie"ROFL


As soon hearing her voice he forgot everything else.He forgot the reason for the call also.


"Honey how many times do I need to say don't call me with these names.Am not a baby oki?"


"But what to do Maanu?Am most times spending my time with Kiddo's.And you also look like a chubby honey sweet baby"


Aww the way she admires and describes me Guyz will also loose the competition of describing girls such way.Hearing her voice and the way my name roll in her togue I just loose my senses.Maan get a grip on yourself.He mentally thought.


"Honey what have you done?"


"Maanu I just came back from rounds.I did nothing else from the morning.I wonder how you called me up suddenly.Do you even realize how happy am to just get a call from you.I just want to pull those cheeks of yours and eat it raw."


"Oh ho hold on Geet.Why did you sent such a mail and you have even sent that too Adi?"


"Oh ho buddu Geet you were over reacting.Dekhana Babji I thought my lover boy called me to wish me gud morning.Me and my crazy thoughts.How does great MSK will have time to wish me a good morning." She was going on cribbing to her babaji.


"Yes Geet your absolutely correct.I don't have time to speak with you.Just say what the mail is all about."


Geet's face has suddenly became paleSleepy.She nevr thought he will abruptly say that he don't have time for her.She curtly replied "You said we will go on for a romantic evening .You miseed last two date of ours and I called you to remind that I will be waiting for you.So to avoid the embarrassment am going to face today I mailed you.Mailing Adi would make my job easy.He will remind you about the date.."


He recognized her voice has become a murmur.He was about to manofy her when Adi entered his cabin saying some clients had come to meet him up.So he just hung the call.


Geet never expected this behavior from him.After all she knows she cannot expect Maan to do all romantic stuffs but expecting him to turn up on date is not a offence.


She just does not want to think wrong on Maan so she clarified her thoughts saying "Buddu Geet what he will do.He will be held up by the meetings.This time he will come on time.Now don worry and carry on with your duty."


Though she was trying to come out of Maan's thought the only thing her mind was gazing is their first meet.


Before 6 months.


Maan was asked by Daadima to meet the owner of Sanjeevani hospital .Daddima's friend who was the chief doctor by herself in Sanjeevani has asked Daadima whether they could take up a project for their hospital to build a children block sepreatly.


Daadima agreed readily.Since Maan was asked by Daadima he was not able to deny it.


Sanjeevani was owned by Geet Handa.She became a orphan when her parents passed away in a car accident..She was bought up by a maid.As soon as she turned 18 she was to take up her parents property that is Sanjeevani hospital.Her aim is to become a paediatrician.She balanced both her studies and hospital.Now she wanted to extend this hospital and build a Children block so that the children will not feel that they are in a hospital.


Maan entered the hospital and asked the way to Chief doctor room.When he entered her room he was greeted well .


"So Madam Daadi said you want KC to help you in your project.May I know the details of it."


"Oh ho Maan stop being formal.You can call me Aunty.Now I don't have any idea .I'll ask someone to take you to Madam Geet Handa she is the owner of Sanjeevani she will explain you all."


"ok Aunty"


"Nurse take him to paediatric ward .Madam Geet will be there."


"Sir this way please"


He was astonished to hear this big hiospital is being owned and managed by a woman.


As they were to enter the ward the nurse was called on emergency so she asked him to go inside where he can find madam geet.


Maan was not at ease because he has to search for some unknown person and that to a lady.Without any choice of escape he went inside the ward.They were many children in the ward.He mentally whacked himself if it's a pediatric ward then children will be there.But what amused him was that no child is there in their bed they were all gathered around a girl.He was not able to see that girl face because she was facing his back towards him.


He went near her and was amused to see her talking animatedly to the children and everyone were looking at her keenly as if she is explaining the newton's law of gravity.


He was about to ask her for the way to Mrs.Geet Handa.He thought she must be 70 years lady because organinsing such a big hospital only experienced and aged people could do.


When he was about to open his mouth a child near him poked him ,gave him a deathly glare and gestured him to shut his mouth .Maan was angered with the audacity of that small child but was mesmerized by a sweet voice who was explain the story.He too started to listen to her.


"There the baby lion was throwing tantrum to drink medicine.But mother lion was saying the baby lion to drink medicine but baby lion was too stubborn.Seeing the stubbornness Mother lion said baby lion if you are not going to take medicine then the big dinosaur will come from the Jurassic park and will eat you alive.Then I will not have my baby lion na?


Hearing this baby lion gulped the medicine.Mother lion was happy.Now my chubby honey sweey little kidoo if you also throw tantrums then Dinosaur will come and eat you alive then who will play hide and seek with di.?Then I will be alone na?" she faked a sobCry


The whole gang of children promised her that they will take medicine without any tantrums.


Suddenly one kid asked "Di if baby dinosaur did not eat medcine then who will eat it?"Ouch


That made Geet to turn back.Maan was mesmerized by her look.She was in a simple salwar suit hair left open and a little of lip stick..That made her look like a fairy from sky.Maan control yar first her voice now her face.She must be sure an angel.See her silky smooth skin and hazel eyes.Ufff Maan stop your drooling session and now come back here and carry out your work.


He looked at her eagerly.The look of shock in her face amused him.Now she is caught with this little devil.He was expectantly looking for an answer.She kept her finger in her chin and did a action as if she is thinking and said "King Kong will come and eat dinosaur"


"Di what if King kong did not eat medicine.?" OuchThe same little brat asked.


Now she dono what to answer.She searched way to escape and by that time Maan caught her sight.


"Wo see honey bunch Someone is here now you all go to your bed and have medicine I'll ask nurse aunty to check if you didn't take your medicine I will not play hide and seek with you."


"Par Di answer my question"


"Chalo mera Einstein Di will answer your question tomorrow some uncle is here .Theko na!!Maan looked at the little boy it was the same one who gave him the killer look when he was about to disturb his Di's story."


"Par Di you should surely answer."


"Sure Einstein I'll answer you now chalo."


"Sachi"


"Muchi"


The guy ran to his bed.


Maan was about to get the direction from her to Mrs.Handa room .


"Dekhona Babaji this little devils throw this much amount of tantrums everyday.And that little Einstein is too too much.I have to read extra to answer him.Thank god you sent this fellow then I would have answered this chotte einstein"


Her cribbing was disturebed by his call.


"Excuse me"


She turned suddenly and looked at his face.She suddenly felt some unknown pull to wards him.She gave him a smile and asked "Any help mister"


He came out of trance "Ya.Can you guide me to Mrs.Handa room"


She was surprised and asked him "May I know who you are."


"I wish I could explain who am I to Mrs.Handa." He said with an attitude.


"Oh fine then follow me."She was cool and composed.


He took him to the room where a name plate Geet Handa was hanged.Geet motioned him to sit and went inside a small room.


He was waiting for some hefty lady to walk with,steth and white coat but he was again greeted by the Angel's smiling face the only thing which is added to her beauty is that Her white coat and Steth.


Maan hurriedly spoke. "Where is mrs.Handa?"


"Here is Miss.Geet Handa.Now care to explain me who you are?"


He was dumbfounded .The look on his face made Geet to laugh out loud.
"Wo am sry.I thought someone of age in 70's would be the owner of Sanjeevani and moreover aunty was addressing you as madam so I was confused Miss.Handa.I am Maan Singh Khurana from Kc"


"Oh no problem ..Anyways did doc aunty said me as madam then I need to talk about it to her.Am I looking like a lady in 70's she calling me mada?Now you can call me Geet.Nice to meet you Maan."


"So Geet aunty said you need to construct some extension to Sanjeevani."
She came out of her thoughts when a nurse tapped her in shoulders.This is how she met Maan.Though the building work was completed for Sanjeevani within 4 months the contact between Maan and Geet continued and that bloomed into love.


She wonders how could such a person can fall for her.She eagerly awaited for a evening outing with maan.Everytime he would promise to spend time with her but he would fail miserably either forgetting that or not being there on time.That's why she mailed him today givng him a remainder.


As soon as Maan met with the clients he totally forget about Geet being upset and also the evening meeting with Geet.


It was 5.35 when Adi entered his cabin.


"What Adi?"


"Sir Geet madam had called me asking your whereabouts?"


That's when it striked him that he had to meet up with her."Ya I'll see to that."
"But sir she asked me to inform you that the deal is over and she doesnot wish to continue anything with Kc or you. Sensing his raising temper Adi thought of cooling him saying I even tried to make her accept for the deal you were discussing sir but she seems to be too upset with the turn outs and sensing her voice I felt that she has been deeply depressed."


Adi though being a employer has understood that both Geet and Maan are not discussing business and more than that.He so wanted to convince Geet but he failed miserably.


Maan's anger rose to the peak..Each and every time he will be late she use to brush it aside then whats up this time?The fact is that he was not able to accept that it was his fault due to which she is upset.


"You can go now".He screamed at him.


The guts of her.Why is she bringing Adi in everything?What is she thinking?Why can't she call me.He thought to give her a peace of mind and took his mobile that's when he saw it.There were nearly 35 missed calls and 20 messages from her within 15 mins interval.He kept his mobile in silent and forgot to release it.


He was restless seeing this much number of calls and mssages .Even though he is late she will never disturb him with these much calls.But whats up with her today?


He called her .The call was attended on the next ring.


"Geet"


"Chup .Not a word until I complete.Do you get me?"AngryAngry


He nodded his head fearing his love's anger.She is always a soft girl but when her anger reaches the peak even he cannot stand in front of her.


"As if she has seen his nod she continued screaming.Mr.Khurana what do you think of yourself?Am I sitting here jobless?Only you have work to do?This is the third time.I am fed up with you.Even after giving you a remainder.You are hopeless!Have you seen your mobile.What was it doing?sleeping in your packet?"


" Geet"


"I said to shut your stupid mouth.You really dono what is love?Am being the fool who is head over heels on you.Why am screaming to such a person who have no time for me?"Broken Heart


It pained him to hear her saying such thing.Of course he needs to admit that he was the one who said he was busy in the moning and not even tried to convince her when she was angry.


"Man the guts of you..Your such a A*******Censored.I say you mark it in your dairy am not gonna even make a single call to you here after.If you wish to continue this relation you make some effort Mr.khurana."


She never calls him that way.It will always be Maanu.And he did a grave mistake by getting into her bad books.It will be hard for him to woo her back.


"I have sent you the bills for brokage you are going to pay it."


"Baby what do you say?"


"Oh ya cant you even pay for the breakage??????"


"No honey I was asking about you.Nothing happened to you na?What happened ?Which breakage?"


"Oh ya I was waiting for you and 4 rogues started teasing so I was left with no option to beat them black and blue which lead to the damage of restarunt.You made mistake of not coming so its you who is responsible to pay that."


"Ya dear sure." He was trying to make her normal but nothing is working.


"Yup forgot to mention one more thing Mr.Khurana don't ever try to enter Sanjevani regarding our love matter.As I have mentioned in the mail now our deal is over."


"Baby you can't be serious"Broken Heart but what he heard in the other end was a beep.He was now continuously trying her but nothing worked.She is not pickng up the call.


He dono what to do with a long face he went home not having heart to look up into office issues.


"Mammu you came back so soon.Take me to ice cream parlour na?" screamed Ansh and hugged Maan.


"Next time baby.Now Mamu is tired"


Ansh was Annie's 3 year son.Maan's favourite person ofcourse after his Geet.He gave Ansh a squeeze and went to his room.


Daadi and Annie witnessed the frown in Maan's face.This is not the way he behaves with Ansh.Whomever he may avoid but not Ansh.They both felt it strange.


Sometime later Maan being fed up with Geet avoiding his calls came down to relax.He cannot believe that she simply said that there is nothing more.Of course he knew nothing was from her heart but this felt different.She may get angry on anyone but not her Maannu.It was always Maan being stubborn in their relation and she being adjusting.Now this change of she becoming stubborn is hard for him.


Daadi and Annie was being the mute spectator.Ansh suddenly choked the water due to hiccups .Maan grinned eviliy and rushed to Ansh and patted his back.


"Ansh careful baby."


"Nothing mamu its just hiccups."


"No No Annie get him we will take him to hospital.See he is choking then it will lead to breathing trouble.Come come fast take him.Ansh come lets go to doctr."


"Par Bhai.Its just hiccups."


"Annie am saying na.Get him"


Daadi eyed his grandson curiously and motioned Annie to do what he was saying.He just wanted to find his grandson's strage actions a meaning.
Annie took ansh with her and they started to hospital.


"Bhai this is too much.He ws just choking dueto hiccups."


"Phir be he is my prince.Haina Ansh?"


"Yes mamu."


The car stopped in Sanjeevani and Maan rushed Annie to Paediatric ward.The receptionist seeing Maan allowed inside Geet's room without any queries.
Geet with the opening of door was jerked back from her thoughts.Seeing Maan her anger shoot up and she was about to throw paper weight on him but froze in track seeing Annie behind.


"Wo hai Annie.What brings you here?"


Annie knew Geet well because she was the one who treats Ansh from his birth.


"Nothing much Geet.Its Bhai.Ansh just choked water and he bought us here.Arrey Bhai how come you know Geet?"


Noe Geet understood that Annie is Maan's sis and created a scene just to meet her.Her Anger vanished but this time she is not going to make easy for Maan.He has to learn the basics of love.


"Ya Annie I know him professionally..Haina Mr.Khurana?"


"Yes Miss.Hnada"


Annie sensed something is going on between these two.


"Mera sweetu Ansh come here baby"


"Hai Didi.See am good your not going to give me any medicines na?"


"No sweetu chubby pie.I will just check u up.Your stupid Mamu bought you here for no matter."


She just checked him up and said Annie that he is fine and asked her to take Ansh to next room and check the weight of him.


Maan was boiling in anger.How dare she calls some one else by those sweet names Eventhough Ansh being kid he cannot tolerate it.And Ansh is calling her Di that means she will become her niece.yuck..ROFL


He said


"Ansh she is too big na so call her mammi wo sorry call her as madam not as didi"


"Par mamu She is my friend so lemme call her as my friend"


Annie confirmed what is going on.And thought of giving both sometime and took Ansh with her.


"Who asked you to come here.?She kept on throwing things at him"


He stood up and neared her she started to run around the room.He cornred her against the wall.


"Baby accept you cannot be without me.Don't give me your attitude.You know you cannot resist MSK"


"Back off Mr.Khurana.You don't threaten me.I can very well be without you.I can say the same thing Don't give me your Attitude.You know something you are such a jerk,duffer"AngryAngryAngry


"Geet mind your words baby. I could make the same mouth to do others things to me"Blushing


"You could not do that to me"


"Don't use that tone of yours Geet.I Hate it"


"Am challenging you Maan.Ask sorry to me or your next 48 hours will be hell missing me."


"Do it if you can.Am not going to miss you.It will be you who will miss me"


"Don't dream Mr.Khurana"Day Dreaming


"Lets see who is gonna miss whom.By the end of 48 hours you will be standing in front of me with your big eyes asking sorry to me"


"Lets see who is gonna ask sry"


They were disturbed by the knock in the door.Annie and Ansh came back.Maan sat in his chair.


After Geet saying Ansh is perfectly well they exited the room.Once they entered the car Annie said Maan she has missed her mobile in Geet's cabin and came back.


"Oh ho Geet mera Bahabi" Anie screamed and hugged her.


Geet was surprised."Annie."


"Wo Bhabhi maaf kardo na.i eves dropped your convo .Sachi I'll not do this again."


"But Annie.Your calling me."


Before she could complete Annie said in a go "My Bhai is never a person to express love but now since you have entered his life he has no other way than to change so now I'll be there with you for the challenge and we are going to win.I'll call you in the night Bahbi Bhai will get suspicious if I did not return now."


After placing a kiss in the cheks of Geet she flew away.Geet couldnot believe Maan's sis could be this sweet.


At night after Maan retired to the room Anie explained everything to Daadi .She was adamant to speak to Geet by that time itself.Without no option left Annie called Geet.


"Bahbhi its annie here."


Geet was blushing hard whenever Annie called her bhabhi.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


"Bolo Annie.You said you need to speak with me"


"Before that Daadi is wishing to speak with you."


"Par Annie"


"No par war Jansi ki rani.Big smileI never thought someone could challenge Maan and that and that too a girl."Daddi spoke


"Namaste Dadima.Am sorry Daadi that I spoke such way to your pote.But you know he is such a jerk at times.I feel like hitting his head against the wall"Clap


"I Know beta he is tough at times.Now am there with you "


"Love you Daadi.Thanks a lot.'


The three muskeeters then formulated a plan Evil Smileand went to sleep.


The morning dawned.Maan as usual took his mobile to check the message from his pyaar.But no messages was there then it struck him that they had an argument .He sadly sighed and went to take bath.


When he came out from his bath.He saw Geet lying in his bed.He was not able to believ himself that she has loosen that easily.not able to believe the fact that she is there he closed his eyes and opened it expecting her to be there.But she was not there.Then it struck him that he was imagining.He got ready and went down.Again he saw her standing in the stairs .Before he could reach she has disappeared.


He blamed himself for missing her so soon.He came and sat in the dinning but he was constantly checking his mobile for a call or a message.There has not been a day he would start his routines without her sweeyt good morning.Maan control yourself.He screamed at his heart.


"Anything important Beta you are constantly checking the phone"


"No Daadi just like that checking.He gave a sheepish smile and entered the car."


Annie ,Daadi hifived thinking their plan is working.Star


Howmuch ever he is trying to shoo her thought away he was not able to do it.Now he understood how much she would have ached for his attention.He Is missing her terribly.Somehow he entered his cabin.Again he saw her there sitting in the couch giving him her adorable smile.With in the wink of his eye she is gone.


Half the day in office was like a hell to him.Many people were fired without reasons.By now atleast by 15 times he has imagined her everywhere.This is not helping him. He wondered if whether she will also feel the same restlessness or she will not miss him.Then he decided may be she will not because never once he called her or bothered her with the sweet talks .In ths relation it was always her who did for both.


He decided even if he is going to loose the challenge he is not going to give a shit all he now is to take her in his arms and say him he was sorry for his carelessness.


He entered Sanjeevani pediatric ward and stromed to Geet's room it was locked.He wonderd where she must be.Thinking to check her in her home he came out only to be greeted by receptionist who gave him a letter saying Geet has left it for him.


He opened it to read.


Ey Maan,


I Know you would come for me before 48 hours.You loose the challenge (Don't give me your MSK look) anyways this is to inform you that am going to one of my friend's house for a stay.I dono when will I turn up.(Now don't frown.)


I'll not disturb you from now on.Take care.Ya I didn't called you because you will have no time for me.Dead


Take careSmile


He chuckled at how well she knows him.But the last sentence pricked him.Of course it was him who said that.He felt like banging his head in the near by wall.
He called her up .She received the call.


"Geet"


"Ya Maan why did you call me missing me already" She asked in a chirpy tone.
He was at peace after he heard her voice "No no I called you to speak about the building that KC has constructed for you.I need it for some reference."


"Ufff Buddu Maan now am out with my friend I'll call you back after 3 days."


"But its imp.." his words froze in his mouth hearing a guys voice on the other end."One mocha choco will do.We will share it.Geetu is it oki for you we can share it na?"


"Sure sweety pie we can share it.Aww the smile of yours I just want to kiss those cheeks of yours baby."Embarrassed


Maan was boiling in rage hearing a guys voice sharing a ice cream with Geeet and she wants to kiss his cheeks."Who is it Geet?Why do you call him with such names?And what is about you kissing him?"Angry


Geet then replied "Maan I said you ryt?He is my friend.Am quite busy now.Willl call later and answer ur questions."And she hung up the call.


The rest of the day was horrible for him.He went to KM soon said Daadi he is not feeling well and retired to bed .But sleep was far away from him..He was continuously gazing at her photo which was in his mobile.The convo with Geet made his heart restless.Who that guy must be.He is calling my geet as geetu.


The next morning was also the same he seeing her everywhere.He thought of calling her but decided not to.He entered his cabin and asked Adi not to disturb anyone.He was deeply in thought about his sweetie.The work which he use to place before her now never bothered him.He Slept off due to tiredness .He woke up suddenly when he heard a sound of some one closing the door.There was a note lying in his desk.He took the note it read


"Sorry Baby for making you wait.Love you .will wait for you in terrace.Come soon.Yours and only yours."


He was grinning like a madman and dashed to terrace of KC.

In Km Daadi called Nakul and asked him to go to KC and give him a file and that too only in his hands.Nakul came to KC and went to Maan's cabin when he found none he asked Adi who said he saw Maan going to Terrace so he followed Maan to terrace.


IN TERRACE:


There was a person standing fully covered by a red dupatta.The person's back was shown to maan.


Maan was happy to see her finally .He neared her and said "Baby am really really sorry for making you wait this much time.I should not have done this to you.But you know me na how busy I get once I enter my cabin.I promise you that I will not repeat it.Promise honey.Wll you not forgive your Maan"


"Oh baby don't ask sorry and all."


"Honey why is your voice thick"


"Must be due to cold"


"You even became fat?Where is the perfect structure of my Baby.You know after marriage I love to always carry u in my arms so please reduce your weight.With in a day you gained weght sweetie"


"Oh Baby you are making me blush harder."


"Can I have the pleasure of taking your honey lips in mine.Show me your face baby."


Maan was startled by a loud shriek he looked ahead to see Nakul standing there shocked and moving out like a zombie.Maan was confused by his reactions .He thought may be seeing Geet with me he was worried.


When Maan turned the person he was more than shocked and stepped three steps back.ROFL


"Honey give me kiss na?" pleaded Manisha.ROFLROFL


Maan gave a loud shriek."Who asked you to come here?Where is my Geet?She placed the letter in my cabin na?"


"Hottie who is Geet your only mine.I only placed that letter as a reply for your letter.Manish was coming close.Maan steeped back and composed himself and asked in a msk tone "Stop there.Where is the letter?And don't even try to open your mouth about this to any of staff members otherwise your dismissed"


Manish gave the letter and gone down with tears in his eyes longingly looking at his hottie.


The letter read


Hi my baby,
Sry for ignoring u all these days its all because of these stupid staffs of kc.But you know I love you a lotHeart.Please I want to talk to you.Come to terrace before that cover up yourself well.


Love
Maan.


He was shocked who dared to write such a letter.He was already worried to top it all now this.The shrill call of his mobile made him come back to Earth .He noticed Daddi ma calling.


"Yes Daadi ma."


"Come to home now and within 10 mins"


"Daddi office?"


"I said now Maan and no excuse."Angry


He was worried with Daadi's stubborn voice.He drove to mansion.When he entered Daadi was looking angrily at him.


"What happened Daadi ?" he sat beside her.


"What is all this Maan I never expected this cheap behavior from you.How could you do this?"


"But what did I do?"


"Don't act as if you dono.Am ashamed to say you're my grandson.You never said that to me and here am sitting like a fool and seeing girl photos for you.Are you a GAY Maan?"OuchOuch


"Gay and me?who said you Daadi?"Angry


Daadi looked at Nakul and maan's gaze followed her .Then it struck him.Nakul had seen him with Manish.


"Daddi its all a mistake .Am in love Daadi!"


"Ya madam sir loves Manish"Embarrassed Nakul interrupted and shut his mouth with Maan's gaze.


"I love Geet not any one else. And now I miss her terribly"He shouted at Nakul.


"Jeeth gayi mei heath gayi.48 hours over" came a familiar voice .


He turned back to see Annie,Geet and Ansh laughing at him.Daadi is also smiling.He was confused.


"Can anyone care to explain whats happening?"


"My sweetu cherrypie, Daddi and my Sil helped me to win this challenge and thus I stayed here in my future sasural ,made you hallucinate me everywhere ,gave letter to Manish ji and made you a gayu.Poor NAkul BHAi was really scared you to see in such a situation"


"This is cheating Geetu."


"But all is fair in love and war."Clap


He hugged her and said "Though this time you won by cheating I missed you terribly.Sorry I took you for granted.i'll be a proper lover and hubby hereafter.Don't leave me ever"


Geet's world stood at a place she never imagined Maan being this emotional
"Cry baby stop it.Am all yours."


"And by the way who is that boy friend whom do you wanna kiss"


"Its me Mamu" screamed Ansh.Clap


"Maanu are your jealous?"Star


"No I was not..Who said I was jealous" He was embarrsed by the teasing giggles of 3 ladies and ran to his room .


3 months later:


Km was dressed like a bride for the grand wedding of MSK.Maan was sitting in the mandap waiting for his JaanHeart


And there she is.He forgot to breath.She is indeed an angel from heaven came down for him.This is the day he was waiting for .To calim her as his.


Maan ki Geet.


The marriage was over and he was waiting for the night so that they could be alone.All he needed now was to drag her to his room and kiss her endless for teasing him for the past months with Daadi and Annie.


Atlast he was about to enter the room and he was stopped by a gang of children at his doorstep.


"Who are you all?"


"We are di's patients oops friends?" said little Einstein who gave him a death glare on his 1st meet with Geet


"What are you doing in My room"


"Came to warn you.Remember Jiju don't think she has no one we are there.One tear from her eye and you need to answer our fists." Said the little brat.Angry


"Take care of Girlfriend mamu"Embarrassed said Ansh


Maan was highly irritated Angry before he could blast annie dragged everyone out.


He went inside neared Geet and said "Baby get ready for 48 hours of heaven.You are not moving out for 48 hrs from my room.This is your punishment for teasing me"Embarrassed


Before she could utter a word he closed her lips with his.Embarrassed



Thats it.sry for spelling and grammar mistakes.Big smile

JeevanaP thumbnail
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yaar OS ke naam nahi hai kya??
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Both OS are awesome

Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls give names to the os...

the first one is so hilarious..
made my day with ear to ear smile..
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2nd one..
business tycoon maan n dr.geet in love...loved the mail ...
n their challenge..making maan imagine n feel j..then manisha part..
all 3 girls made a team defeating msk..

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