Roothe Piya-Manaoo Kaise #5 Link# 6 nd note PG 163

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

OMG!!!this is really shocking and unexpected update...😲
and i loved it a lot...
and its as usual has different flavor in the this twist...
its like unfolding a suspense ...
actually i thought maan is seriously thinking about something,
but hey tho ulta hogaya...

this is really a surprise update from u

and so much loved maan's teasing...

and i really want to mention about geet's boldness...
i think she was never bold or hard...it was the circumstances and the lack of love in her life made her look like what she had been before...
n now she acts like bold to cure the wound in maan's heart...and i think she is still the innocent ,which is hidden...and i really really want maan to see her inner self...and love her like that..pamper her...and she like his mishty order him...and get back her real maan...
..and same with geet...maan too craved for love and now he got her love but he is still masking ...want to see innocent maaneet ...i mean not the masked maaneet...their orginal self...

i loved the update...and u have written it so so well...

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 12 years ago

Quote

Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

loved d update

finally dey r one

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

fabulous and romantic update☺️

waiting for next part

Quote

Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

part 38
awesome...
wow finally they consummated their marriage...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

Quote

prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Yupiee... Finaly maan ne geet ko maaf kr diya & dey moved ahead 4rm deir past... Loved maan's paybck... Aise paybck ke liye toh geet roz gustaki kregi... Bt it was simply superub, lovely & romantic... Nw waiting 4 nxt prt...

Quote

Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

superbly hot update!!too much hot to handle!!atlast maan has decided to accept her wholeheartedly and they proceeded with their relation!!it was kinda surprise as there was no prior notice before th udate,nonetheless loved it soo much.
can't wait for the next part.