Roothe Piya-Manaoo Kaise #5 Link# 6 nd note PG 163

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*******ROOTHE PIYA***** 😕 manaoon kaise
Geet a very rich Girl was married to Maan a middle class man. she could not digest the fact and declared Maan as culprit of all.
Maan had dreamt of a simple girl as his wife and all he got was Geet's arrogance.
She started insuting Maan from very first day of marraige.
Present: its 5 yrs after their marraige and they meet after 3 yrs. Maan is a big bussiness tycoon now , he has returned from London recently and Geet is a changed girl. She had fallen in love with Maan.
Now Maan doesn't beleive her. Geet has joined office as Maan's peronal secratory to win his heart and trust back.
So it is Geet's journey of winning her husband back...
Geet struggle is going on to win Maan back where as Maan is all bent to not let him fall back to her. But her charming look as Mishti sometimes makes him loose himself and thus he has shifter her to different floor.
There is project party where Maan creat such situation that Geet Khurana is exposed as Geet Handa.
Something happens in Party and news of Geet Handa Dancing with someone goes in media and news spreaded.
Maan's mother bring Geet to house after getting fedup with their ego game and family name coming in public. maan has no option.
Geet does room for Maan and in return Maan gets all angry and emotional and explains her what Misty is for him... Geet is heart broken at first but the gains all courage to win back Maan.
She becomes Misty and is all time teasing Maan and doesnot leave him in peace thus slowly melting Man slowly. Maan wants to bring her back in his lfe but is scared of being broken again.
Geet gets sick and Maan takes care of her but still keep distance.
There is party for Geet's project success and Geet asks Maan to dance with her as her gift of hard work.
Maan dances with her taking out all that was enclosed in his heart.
Events happen and Maan has forgiven Geet
Abb Aage
-Anu


Character Sketch
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Maan ' 5 yrs Back 25yrs

He was a very simple Maan with sharp brain, but cared less about his caliber. He believed in enjoying life in simple things.

Did not believe in running after money, name and fame. Loved Football as passion and adore his parents.

Very much a Mumma's darling son. ' Dulara Beta

Loved his village Hoshiyarpur .

Maan ' The Maan Singh Khurana ' Present

Owns and MD of Khurana enterprise, enterprise which has made its mark globally in just few years due to MSK's hard work A shrewd business tycoon, a workaholic. Have just come back from London to India. Still his parents his first priority.

Very well knows how the world runs and thus makes the world run according to him.

Very well aware of his effect on people and girls and use it well.

Geet handa ' 5 yrs Back ' 22yrs

A very modern Girl. Only daughter of Mohinder Handa, a big business Man and thus the heiress of Handa construction.

Very well aware of what she is. Have been learning businesses with her Dad since very young age and now that she has joined the HC she knows her position.

A very arrogant and high headed girl who very well knows her class and knows the class of people she should be.

Geet Handa/Khurana ' Present

Love has changed her. All she wants now is to live a life of a girl with small dreams. She has changed to Mishty .

She have tasted many achievements, name and fame in life and currently she has only one mission in life ' Get her husband back, win his trust and trust of his family.

Other Characters ' without pics

Savitri Khurana ' Maan's mother. A very simple lady with a big heart full of love. He family is her world. Her son will always be a kid for her. She is an adorable mother

Rajendra Khurana ' Maan's Father. Himself a very simple man. But has learnt a lot from world and always wanted Maan to go according to world. He wanted Maan to achieve what he could not and knowing Maan's calibler could not digest him wasting his life.

Mohinder Handa ' Geet's father. Owner of Handa Construction. But a very practical man with down to earth nature. Sees things with different angle than normal people and thus is always able to find Gem in the heard of coals.

And his this long sightedness saw the caliber hidden behind a very simple, easy to go MAAN.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX

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Balle, balle...new thread!

Is it time for an update yet???


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Congrats on new thread...

waiting for the update!!
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congrats for the new thread
waiting for the update
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congrats for the new thread👏
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Part 37

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Thanks again to Shruthe for this awesome banner

Khurana Group has grabbed few very major and big projects and Maan was actively busy in proper initiation of those projects. Market was cometetive, though he was leader in the market yet a loose string and others could grab the opportunity.

This has taken day and night of Maan. The big London project was now completely handled by Geet as Maan was more than 100% extracted in new big projects.

It had been whole one month and Maan had no idea of when he ate , came home or slept. He was busy coordinating the things at top level. He was in business he has to be on top.

It was Sunday after whole one month and things had just tiny been relaxed and Maan took a day break for Sunday. Actually he was having severe headache due to his continuous ignorance of his health in all ways.

After that day, Geet had wanted and expected things to go ahead between them but Maan had been so hooked up that they didn't even get time to see each other.

Geet came out of wash room and was surprised to see Maan home. An unknown happiness ran thru her but the she saw him holding his head.

"what happened, are you OK" she said sitting beside him, feeling his body for temperature check

"I am fine, just little headache, taking a day's break today" Geet knew unless it was extreme he would not have stayed home.

She went and brough a cup of coffe and some warm oil "take this coffee and I will Massage you."

Taking coffe from her "No I am fine, don't trouble urself" "Maan please, can't I do this much, it's a request , let me please"

She sat down and signaled him to lay his head on her lap. Maan thought for a while but when she made a face saying please he smile and placed his head on her lap.

It felt so good to both of them in their own way. Geet started applying oil in his hair and started massaging his head with all her dedication and concentration. It was really so soothing to Maan. Her fingers felt so good as if it was perfect thing to feel when he was so stressed out and she was doing it so peacefully as it was most priority job for her.

There was still little hesitance in Maan "woo you should have said mom"

"don't you like the way I am doing" he didn't say anything and she kept doing it.

"Maan, please there is one request" Maan was almost sleepy, he had been working so hard. "hmm"

"Please take a break of four five days, you are stretching your self" this woke Maan up a little

"you know how the work is going on right?"

"Maan I know and I also know, you have biggest employee group and so many top level loyal people, you can leave things on them, and just keep check on things with phone and lappy. Please take some rest Maan. I can also help if you need but don't stretch yourself like this"

"Geet I don't want any argument on this. When I was relaxed person everyone wanted me to work hard and now when I am working all want me to take rest. Things can't be reversed at peron's with, got that."

Geet didn't say a word on it. "Family needs you too" she said in chocked voice, after listening to what he said, she couldn't gather guts to say how badly she needed him.

"Again the same thing" Geet said nothing and kept on with her massage work but Maan soon realized what he had said directly hit her, though he had not meant only her.

"I mean, I didn't mean what you are thinking" "its Ok, you just take rest."

Later Maan's mom and dad came and saw Maan's condition.

They got angry on Maan and declared him complete rest at home for total 10 days. He can manage things from home and geet was there for help. Maan could say nothing, he had to agree.

After they left, Geet quietly lifted his head and placed on pillow "You should take some sleep now" and she was moving away when Maan held her hand…

She turned and he could see her hiding her tears "I need some massage in body too, you said you will give me" he said with smile.

Geet sat down yet quiet "Woo, Geet all I said was nothing directed to you. I have nothing against you now. It was just fact of my life I poured to you, can't I share that much with you"

"I understand" Geet nodded

Maan sat down, he knew he needed to make things clear to her "Listen Geet, we are starting our life again after such sour start. It will take me time to completely absorb that you are there with me always, no matter what. I am not denying your love or questioning it anymore only that I even after winning this whole world I have lost self confidence regarding you"

Geet felt his pain, she kept her hand on his cheeks "take as much time as you want, I am there with you"

And then she pointed finger at him "aur haan, ek din aisa bhi ayega jab main apne haq se apko ghar per rookongee"

Maan smiled and nodded in yes. He has started loving this bold self of hers.

Then again something naughty came to Geet's mind, she wanted to realx his day rest in all ways.

Geet placed her hands on hi shirt and started playing with his button

"Gee-eet whaa-at what are you doing"

Geet placed her hands on her thigh "Maan I have to give you massage, so how can I do it from top of your shirt"

Maan got all confused "why why, its just aching" "yes I know, let me do it my way"

And she started opening his buttons, smiling within while Maan's stiffened not knowing what she was doing….

While opening his buttons "Maan you know , you know marriage first night where a man unveils his bride and bride stiffens due to shyness and nervousness"

"What do you mean" asked already confused Maan, getting more confused

"here its exactly same, only its day instead of night and I am girl instead of boy and you are man instead on bride." She placed hand on her lips trying to hide her laugh which were ready to burst after her teasing.

But next Maan held both her hands tight into his hands in real tight grip, shocking Geet and he looked directly into her eyes

"Just wait and watch, let the right time come and be ready for payback for your words"

Geet gulped her saliva, knowing what his single touch does to her when he comes on his Lion avatar and here he was warning.

Maan then very smoothly threw his shirt on ground, signaled her and said coolly

"Massage" he almost ordered and he laid on the pillow. Geet's hands were now shaking looking at his strong muscled top body served in front of her hungry eyes. How her lips were shaking to get the feel of them….

Her hands touched his skin making burning contacts for them. Maan had naughty grin on his face hidden between pillow while Geet felt 100s butterflies in her belly…

"Geet control" she mentally scolded herself and started with the task of massage placing oil on his back and then rubbing it up and down at her own speed, lost in him completely.

Her hands went smoothly to each part of his back, feeling his muscles, desiring them in so many different ways while while Maan cluthed his fist in pillow tight with the feel on her hand on his skin all over. But soon sleep took over him and as Geet realized it she gave him massage at her own pleasure.

Maan has deprived him so much of sleep that he slept till evening. He woke up with the sound of Geet's anklet and bangles as she entered the room.

Geet went near him with his shirt and sitting "how are you feeling now" she said sensouly rolling her hand on his bare chest.

"Good" he looked at her hand moving on his chest "really good" "what do you want, coffee or tea" she asked in soft wishpery voice still mercilessly feeling his chest giving him open invitation of trouble.

"Tea"

She then moved giving him his shirt. Maan stopped her, holding her hand and pulled her to sit beside him and she landed on his chest "do you have any idea who are you challenging"

"When did I challenge? " she said placing her open palm on his chest "Beware" and he left her to get tea for him"

Next : 10 days at home: Geets payback?
Please girls really I need more like and good comments for encouragement.
-Anu
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HEY,

Thank you for the update.
Loved it. It was short but it was ok. I loved this light and fluffiness of the update.
It felt good because there was no heavy stuff. I love Geet n her bold advances.
Poor Maan so stressed n tired. I like his openness in terms of the relationship.
M waiting for time to heal them both and see how it progresses further.


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In regard to your comment about encouragement.
You have it from all of us.
U r an amazing writer. U have the ability to let the emotions flow through flesh of humans. Please do not doubt yourself at all. I love all ur FF's n writings.

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Awesome Update

Geet massaging Maan body n both are controlling themselves

waiting for the payback
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