Roothe Piya-Manaoo Kaise #5 Link# 6 nd note PG 163 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
awww geet massaging maan n maneet controlling themselves...
wow to stay at home for 10 days...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
glad Maan is making some moves and talks to Geet
slowly he is getting out of his shall
now hope slowly accepts her too
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
brilliant update dear...
shocked seeing maaneet closeness...and maan's teasing, warning...
loved their talks...with ur brilliant writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just finished reading this one...loved.every bit of it..
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awesome mindblowing update dear.
loved it a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
eagerly waiting for next part dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di Sorry for not commenting...
Was and is busy in job training frm morning to night...😭
Read last 3 parts... HayeeeYou are just fabulous...
I m loving the way the story is proceeding...

Kuch kadam mere unki taraf badh rahe hai
Saath dene ki koshish wo bhi kar rahe hai...

Dooriya ab dheere dheere kam ho rahi hai
Zindagi unke sang pyaar bhari lag rahi hai...

Ab to bas uske sang jeena marna hai
Zindagi ka har pal uske naam karna hai...

Waiting for nxt part di...
Continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 38

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That night, Maan was pretty fresh and was looking into work and deciding whom to assign which work while he kept supervision from home. So when Geet entered the room he was dipped in his lappy.

Geet quietly took her night gown, went to washroom for shower and change and then all fresh she entered the room, hitting Maan's nostrils with her fragrance and the she was lost in her own thought while straightening her hair and then tying it into plain low bun for night.

Suddenly Geet's eye went on mirror and she saw the two dark chocolate brown eyes intently stuck on her. Their eyes met thru mirror but Maan did not move his gaze sending chill down her bones. The way he was looking at her, was not at all intended to make her feel comfortable.

Actually since Geet has come out of washroom she has took all Maan's attention.
After his challenge Geet has taken a little backfoot, he looked so dangerous with his "Beware".

On bed too Geet felt Maan's eye digging on her, now what was he upto. Definitly this was some answer to her challenge

"You are lost in thought" She managed to divert the topic

"Yes I am"

"Any office worries? " "No office worries coz I have decided who will handle what and you will look all my projects from top level for this 10 days"

"What? Me? Maan how? Such big responsibility "

"you wanted me to stay at home so being my wife you have to take the responsibility"

Geet felt all her hopes shattering down, he was lost in work and was planning work for her.

"so this is what you were thinking looking at me intently" Geet said frustratingly

"I thought you were thinking.."

"Payback" "What? " "payback, you remember right." Ohh god, he has turned to complete devil, confusing her, frustrating her and then scaring her.

Next morning, Geet was busy with morning chores, but all the while she saw Maan was all lost looking out of window.

Later she came all worried, something was worrying him.

She placed soft hand on his shoulder and Maan turned to her, he looked so serious, what's the matter, she was now really scared.

"What's matter Maan, you are so lost"

"hmmm" he said looking at her seriously "What are you thinking, Maan"

"Payback" "what?" Geet could not believe he will answer this "Yes, I have so many ways, I am confused which is best one" and he gave her a smirk

Geet went from there irritated "Khadoos, Devil, Dushta.. I could not believe he will be his devil, Dushta danav kahin ke"

"Later Maan gave her the project and all works that she has to supervise in his place"

Geet was in office working diligently while Maan was relaxing at home.

Later in afternoon

"he is so confusing, don't know what he wants. Once he talks of payback and on other side he gives me tons of work.. does anyone does like this, staying at home and load your wife with work. If this is his payback, so disappointing"

Geet cribbed whenever she got time from the loaded work but the fact was that two days she did not have time even to breath still she felt she will lag, wondered how Maan managed so much work.

Third day, Geet was yet busy and about to leave for meeting at five when a messenger handed her a not "Important" written on top of it with red

"Its from Maan sir" Geet was confused, why will he send her the note but then these days he is relaxing at home and in mood of playing hide and seek when she have no time to even think of herself.

Geet opned and it read

"Be ready at 7 in the evening, Car will be there to pick you. Time for payback." And a big smile was made

"What 7? " she looked at the clock on wall, it was already 5, then she have to go to meeting, its impt client she can't cancel and then she definitely need to get ready.

Geet was so much in panic that she could not even realize that it was first time Maan was taking her out

"ohh god what kind of payback is this, he loads me with work and when I am surrounded with it, he give me 2 hours to be ready. Maan definitely is not that same old Maan, he has turned devil and from the moment he has thought of accepting me and he has 100 plans to take revenge from me"

Geet quickly tried to finish up the meeting and then rushed to home.

Now she has whole one hour, and now she realized that Maan had actually asked her out, it felt kind of date. Date with her husband for first time, it felt so ticklish and unbelievable. Is it really happening to me. Tears of joy formed her eyes.

Let it be his payback, she is ready for all but she have to give her best for her first date with her hubby.

Geet had her hair done in bun, leaving few tendrils fall here and there. A light but beautiful make up, plain red sari with heavy border and a backless blouse. She had earing with big red pearl in middle surrounded by small white pearls and the plain heavy necklace with matching locket.

Whole drive Geet kept asking the driver, where they were going but she did not get her answer.

They have drove for almost an hour, it was 8:30 now and the place looked isolated and rocky. Geet pouted her face "is this the place I am going to have my much awaited date. All thanks to Maan and his devil ideas."

Car halted and driver said "Mam sir asked me to drop here and leave from here" and he sat on car

"No no don't leave me in this deserted place alone."

It was a rocky place and it was night and it was isolated

"this definitely is not date, it is his payback. Maan is no where seen and I am left all alone in this deserted place. " Keep kept speaking to make sure that she was not scared though it was helping only very little.

She looked up and it looked cloudy and wind was chilly, Geet wrapped herself to feel warm and secure when she felt the warm breath on her bare shoulder and something hard hit her back and she knew he was there.

As if Geet got her life back, she immediately turned, clutched tight on whatever he was wearing and digged her head on his chest. She remained that way for a while when she realized her cheeks were touching his chest directly. She moved a little to check him out and uff, in this chilly weather he was wearing a very thin white shirt on tight jeans and his top three buttons were open giving beautiful view of his toned chest.

So casual yet so so much desirable he looked. Her eyes met his and she found he was looking so intently at her. Geet lowered her eyes, he could easily see her desire for him with his deep intense gaze.

"So ready" his deep, calm voice came out

"ready? " Geet asked confused. Maan came forward and bringing his hand forward, he used his one finger to put her tendrils behind her ears. His one touch and Geet felt heaven. She was in bliss but then Maan's voice came "Payback"

But then suddenly the rain started and Geet was about to panic when she saw Maan approaching her, very camly. He came close to her and turn her making her back face him, no, touch his chest. Thousands ripple ran down Geet's vein.

There was nothing different for Maan, he was making brave face but so many thought and feeling running down him. After so much thought he knew he have to start this relation. Not only for Geet but seeing her day and night and accepting her from heart, it was being unbearable for him too, to stay away from her. So toady he was going to take step from where it was no turning back. For him it was much major step than signing a big deal.

"you look beautiful" he said as is fingers started removing pins from her hair. Geet heart was beating and she was going senseless and had no sense that they were drenching in rain.

"But I like you plain and in open hair" he said removing her last pin and dropping all her hair.

"Am I still alive or has he killed me, it looks more like heaven" Geet was all in Maan's world.

Then the rain's intensity increased and Geet's all upper makeup was washed and Maan turned her and was again looking at her, he kept looking at her

"But you look more beautiful now." He said and Geet knew, he loved his mishty so much that he don't want any superficial things on her other than her regular jwellery, her jhumka, her bangles and her anklet.

Geet smiled and then there was a strong thunder sound and then the lightening sound.

Geet immediately ran and cluched onto Maan tightly. Maan held tight on her by surrounding his hand around her, she felt so much at peace.

After a while "I know I am very bold and smart but even perfectionist can have some imperfection, human you know"

Maan smiled, knowing she was again in her witty self

"I am so scared of this thunder and lightening, it feels it will fall directly on me and burn me that very moment" "Geet!!!" and he clutched her tighter as the rain still kept pouring on them, completely drenching them.

"Aur nahi tou kya" and she pushed him back two steps "I know you like me plain but does it mean you keep drenching me with water. See all my makeup are completely gone, we don't need this rain now. "

It was then Maan realized he had kept drenching her in rain and it was so cold and windy here.

Lets go to the camp tent nearby. But as Geet took step with him, she tripped in high heel and the rocky surface, adding to it there was so little light. She opened her heel but then Maan picked her up in his arms, geet blinked twice thrice

"Its dark and you can get anything stuck in your feet" Maan clarified in serious tone. But Geet was all lost in his arms. His arms were so strong and he held her in a way she felt so safe.

Geet had always been the leader and taken control of situation but here being in his arms, she wanted to be feeble, soft, delicate and be taken control over by him. They soon reached the tent and it was so soothing and dry there.

"You will catch cold" he looked here and there "you should remove your clothes"

Geet's eyes popped out "here in this small tent, only he and me and I have no change of cloth, does he realize."

"Take the dry sheet and wrap around." He was her husband but still they have not been together ever before. Geet was lost in tought when she felt Maan exactly behind her, his arms slid thru her wet arm

Geet was already in vulnerable state and he was not making things easier.

"I think we can start with our payback thing" he said fanning his warm breath on her face.

Maan had been thinking since they have entered the tent. Her wetness was not helping him either, urge to send warmth in her body thru him was getting stronger and his steps had led him to her.

"wha-at what do you mean" she said

"I mean exactly as you had said and done, it was day that day, its night today. You had to behave as man to open my shirt and I was so shy' that's what you said, right"

"ohh god does he really meaning what he is saying"

but soon she felt his fingers on her back near her dori and that moment she dropped all her thought and surrendered herself to let him do what he wants and just feel the moment. She did not had guts to deny the enjoyment of this closeness.

Maan kept playing with her dori for a while, testing his own patience and the snap he pulled the dori to open in one pull. Both's heart were beating fast and were talking in its own language, words had no place that moment.

Maan's finger kept making patterns on her bare back, doing what not to Geet. Geet was still trying to grasp the new feel when she felt his warm lip rubbing on her wet bare back.

At this speed Geet will definitely get cold by the time all clothes come out but none were in sense to realize it.

Maan closed his eyes as his lips touched her skin, everything burned within him.

At that moment his burning desire rose up and burnt all ego and hesitation that he had kept pampering. And from there, there was no stopping back.
By the time Geet's blouse came off and she only had bra on her upper to she had got uncountable burning kisses on her back. Maan;s hand slided on her waist as he collided on her back, his bare top made contact with her bare top.
They were burning and their heart were racing was very less to say.

As Maan's hand mercilessly roamed around her waist, Geet turned and hid her face in his bare chest, not able to take more.

"are you'" Maan confirmed one last time. Geet just nodded her head in yes.

Rain had already stopped outside as their heart started raining with desire and each piece of clothes were dropped preceded and followed by innumerable burning kisses from Maan. But in process he had also kept wrapping her with the dry sheet.

Geet wrapped in sheet, sitting on bed looked at Maan sittig beside her. He was looking on ground and his heart beating was still ragged. Geet came closer to him and wrapped her arm around him "don't stop yourself today.Yor each kisses was forgiveness for me"

He looked at her "Don't be so seren, my thought are not so pure at this moment." And he pulled her closer in jerk and threw her on bed and bent over her

"if you don't stop provoking me then you will have your first night here in this tent. You must have dreamt something else."

Geet smiled, he thought her dream of first night should be something fancy and richy rich type setting but has he not yet realized that she has drowned herself so much in his love that all that matter for her was he near her, everything else were now meaningless for her.

She pulled him closer encircling her hand around his neck "If you stop at this point then I will really believe you don't know how to get your payback"

she provoked him and Maan without second thought crushed his lips on her, it was first kiss for both of them, such veterans in all field experiencing their first kiss now.

They went and went inside until they got breathless. Later they were rolling an rolling on that small bed and in between Geet's wrapped sheet unwrapped. They were kissing , nibbling each other and trying to believe was this really happening to them. Had their day really come, but the thought did not stop the intensity.

In tent Maan had really turned a cave man Geet's whole body was marked with his bites and when he had reached her curves, his heart beat had risen 10 folds more and Geet's even more by the way he was looking at her hidden treasure' But every time she only felt proud that she had won this battle of winning back her husband whom she had almost lost from her life.

Maan had been all insane, after looking at her treasure he licked it once and then as if he got addicted , he could not move beyond it. When he moved from there it was all sore. Rolling with each other tasting each other, all old differences were forgotten at that moment, all Maan's old pain burned and the ecstasy of being together took them. It had been long and Maan kisses now had made Geet loose her patience and She was shouting

"Maan please, Maan please"

Maan could hold no more himself and he went inside her with jerk

"Ahh" Geet closed her eyes, Maan got out.

He gave naughty smile to her "you are Geet and you are bold you are not supposed to be like teenager" he said while rubbing her thighs near her core

"What? I am a not a teenager but its my fisrt time, and it hurt in same way to everyone in their first time" she said

Maan gave a look at her na**d self and said ""I like bold Geet" and he mercilessly went inside her hard , hard and hard.. It hurted Geet at start but then she was completely overtaken by the world of pleasure he was taking her to.

Girls,
This is very very long update. So even if you got tired after reading it, come back and comment but please do comment. I will really be discouraged if I do not get long and more comments at least on this update.
Do not forget to press like button.
But I also want to thank you all for your support on this FF.
I will send PM for this and Saathiya Part 8 together.
-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...😳

Finally

Roothe Piya Maan gaye...I m feeling so shy to comment.😳


Anu di such awesome part...Love Love Love start...to show both of them together...just loving ...it...


truly love it...Maan ko Geet pe daya to ayeee

& love the waye Maan rempve makup form geet through Rain natural gift😉

& carry Geet to tent...& geet bold answer
Everything so perfect...


Love u di
& thanks a lot...for such superb update 😊
Edited by Mayamaan - 12 years ago

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